rEdo wrote:

[Hawrd]
00:21:445 (4,5,6,7,1) - the only stream on that diff, yay. how about removing it, to keep the same difficulty all around the map?

Mr Color wrote:

Taikore
00:42:022 (314,315,316,317,318,319,320) - This pattern is pretty crappy to hear and play
00:44:307 (336,337,338,339,340,341,342) - ^
00:46:593 (358,359,360,361,362,363,364) - ^
01:15:879 (579,580,581,582,583,584,585,586,587,588,589,590,591) - What the hell is this don/kat placement?
01:21:308 (622,623,624,625,626,627,628) - Please, taiko players aren't machines.
All and all this feels overmapped and does not feel good at all. Sorry Zelos, but I really think that Taiko should be radically changed.

I'll make a Taiko of my own, not because I don't like Zelos's one but out of personal amusement so when I'm done I shall post it here, feel free to deny it. It's going to be sensibly easier than the Taikore but is still not going to qualify as a Muzukashii.

EDIT: Wait, what the shit am I saying it is finished already

1. I'm a big fan of HQ wallpapers. Yours is 640x480 and has pretty bad quality. Is there any chance you can get a higher quality version of the same background?
2. Your approved version of the map has Remix with capital R. Perhaps you should capitalize it here as well.
3. In [Reconnected], the Zelos in the tags is written with lowercase z, differing from the other difficulties. Capitalize that too, please.

1. This could perfectly have AR 2, to make this as Easy as possible.
2. 00:02:623 (2) - This is the only clap you used in this part of the song, so it's seems kind of isolated. I suggest removing it, or in any case, replacing it with a whistle.
3. 00:21:798 (1) - Hello symmetry :3 Can you make it symmetrical and fix the DS a little?
4. 00:27:308 (2,3) - Would be awesome if these were symmetrical, too. You might have to move the next two circles.
5. 00:29:594 (4) - Shouldn't a clap follow the hitsound pattern here? Can you add one?
6. Where are the hitsounds in the section from 00:31:308 to 00:58:165? It would feel sooo much better if you could try adding some hitsounds.
7. 00:38:165 (3) - There's kind of an ugly overlap with the previous (1) there. And also...I'm a little nazi when it comes to slider composition~ This could be smoother, so I suggest beziering it this way:
   
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   140,112,38165,2,0,B|207:139|198:215|198:215|191:279|210:341|273:368|325:356,1,351.999961853028

   Or something similar
8. 00:45:594 (4) - This combo seems too long in comparison with the others, so why don't you add a new combo here to make it shorter?
9. 00:54:165 (1,2) - Personally, I didn't like these sliders too much. I can't tell you to change them, but I'm stating this in case you can think of something better, or in case somebody else can~
10. 01:06:165 (3) - I totally expected a clap here, it totally follows the previous hitsound patterns. Can you add one?
11. If you aren't gonna map this until the end (which I actually think is a good idea, because of the high BPM in the end), you should delete the last kiai since it's unused.

1. AR 3 feels great here, imo.
2. Hitsounds seem a bit poor in comparison with [Easy] - for example, in the first part. I think you should do a hitsounds check and try to hitsound it better~
3. 00:06:940 (1) - Why is there such a big jump here? Can you conserve normal spacing? Or at least, make it smaller.
4. 00:21:798 (1,2) - It seems you had the intention to make these symmetrical You should know how to do this, but in the case you don't:
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   Copy (1) and paste it where (2) is, then remove the new combo and give it an horizontal flip (Ctrl + H) and then an inversion (Ctrl + R). You'll have to reposition (1) so that the spacing after the flip is consistent.
5. 00:48:451 (3) - This slider is slightly uneven on the left:
   
   You should fix that~
   
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   I don't really like this wiggle here, I would change it for a simple curved slider, but oh well.

1. 00:02:084 (3) - I don't think this is needed. I mean, I think it would be fine with just two beats and would make the start a bit easier for a hard.
2. 00:04:134 (2,1) - I would remove two repetitions from each slider, as (5) gets a liiittle hard and annoying to sight-read. After doing that, you could add two circles at 00:04:566 and 00:05:213. Looks good and works even better:
   
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   Also, I removed the new combo from 00:04:782 (1) and added it to the circle I added right after it.
3. 00:08:235 (5,1) - I was hoping to see the start of (5) more on the right bottom corner on the screen - t would flow muuch better. Try flipping these two vertically and moving them to that position. Hope you notice the difference~
4. 00:12:444 (2) - I don't think this works so well, perhaps if the pattern was a little simpler... Try deleting this and adding a circle at 00:12:551, and tell me what you think.
5. 00:21:445 (4,1) - I recommend placing this in some other way. The reason is that this is the first kick slider in the map with 2 repetitions, so it can be difficulty (if not impossible on first try) to UNDERSTAND it has 2 repetitions. I would suggest removing one repetition, making it hit 3 times, and then placing it so that (1) is stacked under (4)'s new end (or it's original starting point).
6. 01:22:951 (1) - New combo, please (to make it easier to sight-read).
7. 01:25:165 (1) - (^)
8. 01:50:297 (1,2) - Some whistles here sound good, too!

1. 00:50:879 (4) - No you don't stack this like this ever again ò.ó the slider never disappears and reappears, so you actually can't tell pretty well if there is another slider or not. Place it somewhere else! Like here:
   
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   In case you do it like this, you should move (5) around to improve flow~
2. 00:56:022 (1) - This new combo seems pretty pointless, can you remove it? And also... The pattern doesn't flow so well. If I was you, I would redesign it ^^
3. 00:57:308 (3) - Instead of placing this here, you could make it follow (2)'s direction:
   
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   Looks and flows much better!
4. 00:59:736 (1) - It's nearly impossible to tell if there is a repetition in the end here. You know that's not good. Please move it more to the left.
5. 01:04:308 (1) - (^) (but to the right)
6. 01:09:879 (3,4) - Try inverting this circle's order - the mouse movement there is confusing, but if you invert them, it becomes more natural, as it is more, like, round.
7. 01:50:541 (2) - Can you make this jump a liiiittle smaller? It's just about personal likes here, so you don't really have to do it if you don't want to

1. Most of the elements that finish/are on a yellow tick (1/8ths) could and should end in blue ticks (1/4ths). As it is right now, I found this way too confusing to understand, and it is mostly due to so many 1/8ths. Mostly in the first part of the song.
   Hope you don't mind fixing this stuff~
2. 00:03:271 (6) - A hitsound like a clap here would feel great to mark the beat, as all of this is quite confusing to play.
3. 00:09:962 (9,10) - I don't think this is needed, (9) could be a longer slider that ends where (10) actually is, and it would follow the music better and all~
4. 00:16:537 (5) - It feels as if you're missing a hit at 00:16:644, so I'd suggest moving this there and adding a circle where this currently starts.
5. 00:18:487 (6) - It could be cool if you made this a slider that ended on the red tick, not leaving such a blank space to the next slider.
6. 00:56:022 (1) - This slow down... I can't really say it in another way, it's pretty ugly AND doesn't play well. x0,75 should be just enough to create a good easing here (and by just enough I mean that even that is too damn slow).
7. 01:39:276 (1,2,3) - Try soemthing like this, I don't think having (2) stacked is a good idea with such a speed up:
   
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8. 01:48:215 (3) - It's pretty difficulty to see this particular circle, and I can't say if it's intuitive or not cause I can't play it so well. Better ask a pro player about this, but in the meanwhile, you could try some other pattern.
9. Is a human really capable of playing those streams? O.O

narakucrimson wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:02:084 (3) - I don't think this is needed. I mean, I think it would be fine with just two beats and would make the start a bit easier for a hard. There are other ways that I decreased the overall difficulty (lenient drain and low OD), and since all 3 notes follow the same musical line (or should I say rhythmical line), I feel that removing this note would do more harm than good. Also, this is 139 bpm, I don't think players will have issues clicking this properly.
2. 00:04:134 (2,1) - I would remove two repetitions from each slider, as (5) gets a liiittle hard and annoying to sight-read. After doing that, you could add two circles at 00:04:566 and 00:05:213. Looks good and works even better:
   
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   Also, I removed the new combo from 00:04:782 (1) and added it to the circle I added right after it. I see what you're getting on here, but I prefer my way. Here's why: When I map, I try to follow a single musical line (element) as much as possible, if I have to skip parts of it, then I rather not map it. Seeing as this would create 2 holes at 00:04:458 and 00:05:105, where the jamming sound is played, I would rather not do this. The combo on the slider is because I feel that the 2nd jamming sounds is a part of the next section.
3. 00:08:235 (5,1) - I was hoping to see the start of (5) more on the right bottom corner on the screen - t would flow muuch better. Try flipping these two vertically and moving them to that position. Hope you notice the difference~ I handled it in a different way, but yeah it's far lower now.
4. 00:12:444 (2) - I don't think this works so well, perhaps if the pattern was a little simpler... Try deleting this and adding a circle at 00:12:551, and tell me what you think. Originally it was like this and I didn't like it because every time I heard this I felt that I am missing something. Sorry. :3
5. 00:21:445 (4,1) - I recommend placing this in some other way. The reason is that this is the first kick slider in the map with 2 repetitions, so it can be difficulty (if not impossible on first try) to UNDERSTAND it has 2 repetitions. I would suggest removing one repetition, making it hit 3 times, and then placing it so that (1) is stacked under (4)'s new end (or it's original starting point). Well I don't think I can do better. Originally there were 4 circles stacked on the slider start but everyone was telling me it's kinda hard. This way it's easier, and considering the placement logic I think it's safe to assume it's a double repeater. It's a hard diff after all, and nothing is hidden, so I think this works good enough.
6. 01:22:951 (1) - New combo, please (to make it easier to sight-read). Hmm, sorry but no, the notes are distance snapped and I don't really see the combos help in this situation. In any case, the combos are placed here in a way to split the 2 different musical sections, which is a good thing in my opinion.
7. 01:25:165 (1) - (^)
8. 01:50:297 (1,2) - Some whistles here sound good, too! Alright.

1. To match the other ranked versions, you should change the artist to Inspector K and the title to Disconnected Hardkore (CanBlaster Remix)
2. The image displayed on the web for this map is the Taiko background. I don't think that's intentional. You might have not noticed because your the old image is still in your cache. Try deleting it and you'll see.

1. 00:08:667 (4) - I think the new combo should be here and not in the next slider.
2. 00:12:120 (3) - And following what I said on the last point, new combo here.
3. 01:05:594 (3) - I don't like too much how the clap at the beginning of this sounds. Consider removing it and placing a whistle instead. Also, a clap in the repetition could fit pretty well the music.

1. 00:22:697 - 01:07:594 - Still no hitsounds in this section? There are hitsounds in Easy, that's enough to leave a feeling of inconsistency.
2. 01:10:165 (5) - I think the new combo should be here and not in the next slider. This is because of how you placed the previous new combo.
3. 01:12:451 (1) - Kind of the same as above but I don't know if you should remove the new combo. It's up to you I guess.
4. 01:33:644 (1) - This spinner may be too harsh... The autoplay only gets 4000 bonus and we're taling about people that might still spin pretty slowly. Consider removing it, or changing it for something else.
5. 01:50:297 (3) - New combo here, and remove it from the next circle.

1. 00:35:808 (5) - There isn't really anything in the music to follow here. Care to remove this?

1. 00:34:379 (5) - This, too, hasn't got anything to do with the music. There are no sounds there. Please remove it.
2. 00:35:808 (5) - I can hear a veeery low hit there, but I still think you should rmove this for similar reasons to the previous point.
3. 00:51:094 (6) - (^)
4. 01:00:522 (5) - (^)
5. I still think that the 1/8s are weird, but oh well, your choice I guess...
   And I agree a bit with Sushi on the slider velocities too

Philippines wrote:

Before anything else. Artist should be DM Ashura feat. Inspector K

EDIT: Or maybe just add to Tags?

Philippines wrote:

Before anything else. Artist should be DM Ashura feat. Inspector K

EDIT: Or maybe just add to Tags?

1. 00:59:736 (1) -
2. 01:04:308 (1) -

Wishy22 wrote:

Is it allowed to like... add a new diff to a mapset that's already ranked? Plus this has 7 diffs, wasn't 6 the max?

Zelos wrote:

Zelos and lolcubes tags are missing from Scores and Beatmap information page.