1. Easy - 4Key (1.59 stars, 306 notes)
2. Hard - 4Key (2.87 stars, 714 notes)
3. Normal - 4Key (2.12 stars, 431 notes)

OwenF04 wrote:

hello! from my modding queue

General

-Get rid of breaktimes. they aren't used in mania maps, so just have the big gap

-i recommend getting rid of the first kiai time, and keeping the second, as it's more of a build up than a climax

Easy

00:14:454 - add two notes here. no,in ez diff ,form00:14:654 - 00:38:454 - i don't catch them.

00:14:654 (14654|3,15454|0,16254|3,17054|0,17854|3,18654|0,19454|3,21054|1,21854|2,22654|1,23454|2,24254|1,25054|2,25854|1,27454|1,28254|3,29054|1,29854|3,30654|1,31454|3,32254|1,33054|3,33854|0,34654|2,35454|0,36254|2,37054|0,37854|1) - make these all LN'sno,this my ez diff style

00:38:854 - add notes like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8726825good idea,consider

00:40:054 - add oneno, maybe this FX too soft

01:10:454 - you can add notes for the chime herei think double are enough

00:59:254 (59254|0,59654|0,60054|0) - i understand your logic behind these being in the same row, but it's really weird. i recommend spreading them out. i won't mention them alli want to make jack to mapping durm,well follow pitch

01:24:854 (84854|3,84854|2,85254|3,85254|2,85654|3,85654|2) - ^^ (for this section as well)stronger

01:37:054 - add one

01:37:454 - add two to keep your chartno.01:37:654 - like this

01:48:854 (108854|1,108854|0,109054|3,109054|0,109254|2,109254|3,109454|1,109454|0) - a bit hard for Easy. make them into a recurring pattern, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8726870 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8726880 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8726881consider,will add

01:55:254 (115254|1,115254|0,115454|3,115454|0,115654|3,115654|2) - ^^same NM diff catch

02:01:654 (121654|3,121654|2,121854|2,121854|1,122054|1,122054|0) - make these singles as it's representing the synth, not the bass thingsame reason

02:03:054 (123054|2,123154|1,123254|0,123254|3) - 1/4 in an easy? too hard. nerf itnap,PR

Normal

00:19:654 (19654|0,19854|0,20054|0,20054|1) - if this is representing the 1/8, use a LN insteadno,this pattern same to 00:20:454 (20454|3,20654|3,20854|2,20854|3) - ,and same col should have same hit durm.

00:14:654 (14654|2,14854|3) - all these patterns need to be extended to the white tick aboveno,for string

00:33:154 (33154|2,33254|2) - avoid this jackno,00:33:054 (33054|3,33154|2,33254|1) - this pattern same00:27:054 (27054|3,27154|2,27254|1) - to mapping same sound,i want keep this jack.

00:43:254 to 00:56:054 - why didn't you map the drum? please do soi don't think so,i want to keep my mind

01:18:654 (78654|2,78754|2) - just, no. 1/4 jacks in a NM? way, way too much. please change thisconsider

overall, solid map. good luck!

Knif3rism wrote:

So sorry about being super duper late with this mod, I was busy with other stuff and may or may not of forgotten about this again sorry but here some mods,

General

Break time shouldn't be used!!!

Hard

00:14:654 (14654|1) - As you are mapping to the synth sound, this should be an ln that lasts for 1/2 snap, this is to make your map more consistent which will make it feel better.
00:15:454 (15454|1) - ^
00:16:254 (16254|1) - ^
00:17:054 (17054|1) - ^
00:17:854 (17854|2) - ^
00:18:654 (18654|2) - ^ I'm not going to highlight the rest, it should be pretty obvious what i mean xd
00:38:654 (38654|1) - because you are mapping to the synth add an 1/2 ln here to improve consistency
00:38:854 (38854|2) - add a 1/4 ln here
00:42:854 (42854|1) - I suggest adding lns here for the synth
00:43:254 (43254|3,43254|0,43254|1,43454|2,43654|1,43854|3,44054|1,44454|1,44654|0,44854|1,45254|1,45454|2,45654|1,46054|1,46254|3,46454|1,46854|1,47054|2,47254|1,47654|1,47854|0,48054|1,48454|1,48654|3,48854|1,49054|2,49254|3,49454|2,49654|0,49654|1,50054|0,50254|1,50454|0,50854|0,51054|2,51254|1,51254|0,51654|0,51854|3,52054|0,52254|2,52454|0,52654|3,52854|0,52854|1,53254|2,53254|0,53654|3,53654|0,54054|0,54054|2,54454|1,54454|0,54654|2,54854|3,54854|2,55054|1,55254|1,55254|0,55454|0,55454|2,55654|1,55654|3,55654|2,55854|1,56054|3,56054|2,56054|0) - I highly suggest in this section to map the synth with short ln however it's fine how you mapped it if you keep it consistent like this
01:11:654 (71654|0,71854|1) - unnecessary notes
01:12:654 (72654|3,73454|0,74254|1,75054|2,75854|3,76654|0) - unnecessary notes as synth is note present

Normal

01:20:254 (80254|1,80354|1) - minijacks aren't really recommended though there's nothing wrong with it

Easy

00:14:654 (14654|3,15454|0,16254|3,17054|0,17854|3,18654|0,19454|3,21054|1,21854|2,22654|1,23454|2,24254|1,25054|2,25854|1,27454|1,28254|3,29054|1,29854|3,30654|1,31454|3,32254|1,33054|3,33854|0,34654|2,35454|0,36254|2,37054|0,37854|1) - Should probably make that an 1/2 ln as it's the same synth sound as the long ln after it