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Miley Cyrus - Can't Be Tamed

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bearing019
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
bearing019
General;

Please use grid snap 3 from now on; bigger grid squares lead to horrible spacing.
Kiai time should be uniform across all diffs.

Easy;

00:06:593 (4,5) - 1/1 backwards, respace accordingly?
00:18:901 (7,1) - Spacing.
00:27:619 (4) - New combo.
00:37:362 (break) - Make this break longer by deleting the orange and green combos either side of it.
00:45:567 (2) - This is a horrible overlap.
00:46:080 (1) - 1 less repeat.
00:48:644 (1) - Extend by 1/1.
01:10:696 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This would be tough in an easy.
01:22:490 (4,1) - Spacing.

Normal;

You need to find room for a break here.
00:05:567 (1) - No new combo.
00:07:619 (1) - ^
00:13:773 (break) - Fill in this break.
00:18:901 (3,1) - New combo on the three, not on the 1.
00:33:260 (4,5) - Spacing.
00:36:337 (4,5) - ^
01:05:055 (break) - Fill it in.
01:29:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - SPACING.
01:38:388 (1,1,1) - ^
01:48:986 (1) - Delete.
01:49:157 (x) - Circle here.

Hard;

This really isn't terribly hard, I would suggest you try mapping it to the lyrics.
00:18:901 (1,2) - Spacing.
00:20:952 (1,2) - ^
00:31:721 (1,2,3) - ^
00:34:798 (7,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
Stopped there, this diff is a mess.

Call me back once you have that done, still not worthy of a star.
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
Thanks for all the mods! :D

DiamondCrash wrote:

00:33:260 (4,5) - Spacing.
00:36:337 (4,5) - ^
It's distance snapped.
bearing019
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
bearing019
SPOILER
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old

DiamondCrash wrote:

SPOILER
o.o I did it with distance snap :S
Shelita19
2 posts
Joined May 2010
Shelita19
Esta genial x3 me ha gustado mucho ;)
Neethime
205 posts
Joined May 2010
Neethime
[General]
Well, at first I suggest that you'd better use grid level 2 or 3 since 1 may cause many small spacing mistakes.(But all the modding below is according to level 1)

[Easy]
00:06:593 (4,5) - why not move them 00:06:080?
00:09:670 (3) - 1 grid left.
00:17:362 (6) - try to move this lower, it's half in the HP bar
00:29:157 (5) - ^
00:58:901 (3,4) - hidden notes in easy may make beginners confused.
01:08:132 (5) - new combo.
01:15:311 (10) - ^

[Normal]
00:19:926 (3) - 1 grid down
00:27:106 (1) - try to divide this slider into two or more
00:44:542 (6) - new combo
01:43:516 (5) - new combo

[Hard]
HP and OD -1
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
Must
Should
Suggestion

[Easy]
01:23:003 - distance
00:16:849 - ^
00:18:901 - new combo
00:19:414 - remove new combo
00:54:798 - ^

[Normal]
00:20:439 - remove new combo
01:38:388 - ^
01:40:439 - ^

[Hard]
00:46:080 - remove new combo
00:51:208 -This notes are too close. Make please more distance between circles
01:08:132 - add streams
01:30:525 - remove new combo
01:41:978 - ^
01:56:849 - remove spinners and add notes
Don't be lazy map whole the map. this is hard man :: )

Star~
Last edited by Louis Cyphre , edited 1 time in total.
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
Thanks to everybody for the mod, I'm trying to do all :)

Louis Cyphre wrote:

01:08:132 - add streams
I don't know what do you want to say with "streams".

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[01:56:849 - remove spinners and add notes
I thinks is very difficult to put some notes here... I'll try it, but i think that i will put the spinners... Thanks :3
hyperluigi
69 posts
Joined October 2008
hyperluigi
En general está bastante bien.

[Easy]: En general los espacios no me acaban de convencer. El ritmo está bien
00:16:337 (4) - Mover 2 grids (cuadraditos) a la derecha y 1 arriba
00:16:849 (5) - Ponerlo simetrico a 4 (la discancia es la justa)
00:17:362 (6) - Si haces lo anterior, yo pondria el 6 justo encima del 3
00:17:875 (7) - Encima de 6 (si no te gusta como quedan estos 4 circulos, no los cambies si no quieres)
00:18:901 (1) - Un cuadradito arriba
00:58:901 (3,4) - Un cuadradito a la izquierda

Uf, esq es dificil, el spacing está a veces a 0,7; otra a 0,8 y otras a 0,9 y no sé como lo has ordenado...
Es mas o menos lo que puedo decirte. Es easy, por tanto la distancia deberia ser regular, o algo menos pero mas simétrico.
Si quieres probar, te recomiendo poner todo a una misma distancia (pulsas alt y con la ruleta del raton ajustas la distancia y luego activas el distance snap) 0,7 o 0,8 está bien, aunq si quieres una el 1,0% para que coincida con la distancia de los sliders.

[Normal]
00:15:824 (3) - nuevo combo

En está puedes tener un poco mas de libertad con el espacio, pero no mucho, porq todavia es una dificultad bastante facil o por lo menos debería.

[Hard]
01:30:183 (2) - yo la pondria en 01:30:354
01:56:849 (1) - Son muy cansados los 4 spins al final, mira a ver si puedes sustituir almenos 2 de ellos (puedes usar sliders, por ejemplo) y si no, lo dejas así, (este es mas opinion mia, porque no me gustan mucho los spins. xDDD)

La Hard me gusta mas, pero un poco facil para mi gusto. Hay algun saltito pero si no los tuviera dejaria de ser hard.

Star ;)
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
I don't know what do you want to say with "streams".
Well ok.

I suggest to replace sliders to streams:

http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/4656 ... ot107z.png
Gonzvlo
osu! Alumni
2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo
Re-Check~

[General]
  1. - I see that u added something to the OSB file , but those scripts are not working , I suggest you to delete OSB file and full submit, or catch me in-game chat I'll help u with the storyboard.
  2. Remove letterboxing in breaks
  3. I'm not sure if Hollywood Records should be used in the Tag Box

[Easy]
  1. 00:20:439 (3) - This note overlaps with the HP Bar , move it pls.
  2. 00:21:465 (4) - Suggestion: Move it
  3. 00:29:157 (6) - ^
  4. 00:48:644 (1) - Finish it in 1/1
[Normal]
  1. 00:34:285 (X) - Suggetion: Add a note
  2. 00:43:516 (5) - Suggestion: Delete Clap and add Finish
  3. 00:45:567 (3) - ^
  4. 00:47:619 (3) - ^
  5. 00:51:721 (3) - ^
  6. 00:53:773 (X) - Add a note and ^
    (Suggestion: Use finish in the notes where the voice says: "tame" in the next chorus too)
  7. 01:04:713 - The break is too short ,Suggestion: add a spinner from 01:05:055 to 01:06:080
  8. 01:28:132 (5,6) - Suggestion: Move them.
  9. 01:32:234 (1) - Spacing
[Hard]

  1. Watch the Combos
Star**
kaouji
92 posts
Joined February 2009
kaouji
i guess you need to use more sound effect.

easy
00:17:875 (7) too cliose to the hp bar

normal:
01:28:132 (5.6):almost touch the hp bar

hard:
00:51:208 (1) too close to the edge
00:59:926 (1,2) ↑
01:30:525(3,1) too far
Clare
530 posts
Joined October 2009
Clare
hihi~~

[Easy]
00:27:619 (4) - new combo
00:54:798 (4) - ^

[Normal]
fine :D

[Hard]
01:39:414 (X) - add note?

hmm..i thinl you'd make all :P

good
star!
ChristosGalatsi
3 posts
Joined April 2010
ChristosGalatsi
Perfect :D
Must be ranked :)
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
Thanks to everybody for modding :D
ChristosGalatsi
3 posts
Joined April 2010
ChristosGalatsi
Here , i made changes on your map .. :)

Download: Miley Cyrus - Can't Be Tamed (ChristosGalatsi) [Normal].osu
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old

ChristosGalatsi wrote:

Here , i made changes on your map .. :)
A lot of thanks for make a difficult for my map :3

EDIT: Sorry, but i won't add it because it's not distance snapped.
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache
I love this beatmap! 8-)
Last edited by ZekeyHache , edited 3 times in total.
lzy
183 posts
Joined July 2009
lzy
go rank it:33
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache
Aqui esta el video se mira algo feo pero es por que tiene que medir menos de 5 mb[attachment=0:690fc]VIDEO.rar[/attachment:690fc]
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old

ezek wrote:

Aqui esta el video se mira algo feo pero es por que tiene que medir menos de 5 mb[attachment=0:82387]VIDEO.rar[/attachment:82387]

Muchas gracias por hacerme el video, no tenias porque hacerlo :D
mekadon_old
mekadon_old
[Easy]
00:28:644 (2,3,4) - Make a better triangle
00:37:106 - Why the hell you would even put break time here?
00:46:080 (1) - Split the sliders into two
00:59:414 (4,1) - Nice jump, bro
01:11:721 (3,4,5,6) - ^
Btw, too many hit circles =[ Change some to sliders

[Normal]
Some spacing problems

[Hard]
Doesn't even seem like hard =[
Also some spacing tbe
AllyGORE_old
1 post
Joined March 2009
AllyGORE_old
Well, I don't really know anything about making maps.
But you asked for my feedback, and I will give it from my point of view.


Easy: This map was good. It'll really let beginners have a chance at playing the map, but still be challenging for them. Approved (By Ally)
Normal: Good for when you are done with Easy. I can't really give too much feedback though, cause I found it too easy for me personally. But Normal isn't my level. But it was good. The timing was good from what I could tell, and switched it up well from Easy. Approved (By Ally)
Hard: Hard was good, it was challenging, and switched it up. But I felt it could be switched up more. I was bored at a few parts. But timing was good. The speed was good too, and I like the placement of the circles. I hate with some maps where it's fast but the circles are spaced out too far everywhere even though the beats are close together. You don't need to fix this though.I feel the map is fine now. Approved (By Ally)

To maybe help with the Hard map (I don't want to put more work on you though) is maybe create a fourth map for the song. Switched up a lot, and such. An insane of sorts? That's all I really have to say. Except for a job well done. :) And for your 3rd map, good job! I've only TRIED making a map once, and even with the tutorials got frustrated and quit. :D
For this, I give an overall Approval from Ally.
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Jesss
Hola...moddearé en inglés...

uuhmm...well...Overall Timing: Fine!

i modded sounds, cuz you requested it...now it sounds fine, according to the rhythm, and you were abussing from Claps Hitsounds...now with this file, now will be better...Also i made really few fixes in some parts (i shouldn't did that), because there was parts that make the song loses its rhythm and makes harder to reorganize sounds and in the end, i added some items because spinners were too Long (and still there are long spinners but i'll mod it later, when i'm not that busy).

P.S: i'll mod the song later (overall, spacing, combos, etc...). Star~~ and Good luck!!

Here's the file...

Download: Miley Cyrus - Can't Be Tamed (choche) [Hard].osu
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
Allygore: A lot of thanks, I tried to make an insane, but it was impossible for me :S. Thanks for your mod :). If you see my first and my second beatmaps, you will see that they're on the graveyard, They were very bad. So you have to try to make a beatmap again :)

j35u5891221: ^^ Ya que haces el mod en ingles te contestare en ingles xD. A lot of thanks, I work a lot in this beatmap, but i'm very very bad with hitsounds xD :)
mxobetis14
2 posts
Joined February 2010
mxobetis14
Oh! I love this song, and the beatmap it's perfect!!
I hope this will be ranked ;)
luck!
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
Here's your star :3
Bittersweet
2,031 posts
Joined February 2010
Bittersweet
Easy:
00:32:234 (2) - 00:32:234 (3) - two notes in the same place. uhn. remove one of then (obvious)
good diff, anyway.

Normal: no problems :3

Hard: no problems. maybe decrease the drain rate by 1? just a suggestion, but minimal, since it's not too hard~~


good enough for me, anyway. Star :3
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
Thanks to everybody for modding and for the stars :)

Bittersweet wrote:

Easy:
00:32:234 (2) - 00:32:234 (3) - two notes in the same place.
-I didn't see it! o.o Thanks! ^^
hyperluigi
69 posts
Joined October 2008
hyperluigi
Normal
00:37:020 (6) - Está bien ese circle? (por si no lo has visto o por si desde el principio pensabas dejarlo así) ^^
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
borra el archivo .osb de la carpeta del beatmap

Hard
00:25:909 (7,8,9,10) - esta un poco confuso esto, podrías stack 7 y 8, y no 8 y 9 ^^
01:30:525 (3) - elimina esta nota
la dificultad esta técnicamente bien, pero creo que podrías seguir un poco mas el ritmo de la canción, coloca mas notas de 1/3, porque esta un poco monótono en algunas partes, como por ejemplo de aquí 00:43:516 hasta aquí 00:57:875 >< escucha mejor la canción, creo que podrías hacer un buen ritmo en esta parte aparte de colocar notas en cada un beat ^^

Normal
muy alto el HP drain y el overall difficulty
01:49:670 (1) - como que el spinner no pega en esta parte, mi humilde opinión @.@

Easy
00:31:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no saltos en easy ><
00:39:414 (1,2,3) - trata de que el espacio entre notas sea igual
01:16:593 (1) - empieza el spinner en el tick blanco

Star
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
General
  • - Your BG size is 1024x640 now, you must resize it to 1024x768 or 800x600
    - Disable countdown on all diffs
    - Move preview point to 42149 will be better

Easy
[list:a72f9]00:04:029 (2,3,4,5) - Place them like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17066
00:29:157 (3) - spacing
00:45:567 (2) - use finish instead
00:47:619 (2) - move it like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17068
00:58:901 (1) - new combo?
01:08:644 (2) - use same distance as 01:09:157 (3,4)


Normal

00:53:602 (4) - weird
01:49:157 (1) - place it on centre?


Hard

01:22:832 (6) - spacing
01:47:106 (1,2) - use 1/2 beat slider instead?




Not much to say, ummm...try to map full version next time :D

....and have your resized BG :3
http://puu.sh/36G
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
[osz File Scan!]
Background name very long.
Incoherent difficulty lengths

[Easy]
This diff is too short, map it to the end, make it as long as [Hard]
00:17:362 (6,7) - Spacing
00:28:644 (2,3) - Try to avoid changing the spacing distance on an Easy diff (and try to avoid it overall)
01:05:567 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing
01:10:696 (1,2,3) - Spacing, Another obvious one, im amazed that its at 25 SP and still has theese errors.
01:12:747 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:21:978 (3,4,1,2) - Uneven spacing, dont go switching spacing on Easy diffs

[Normal]
Diff is too short, make it as long as [Hard]
01:16:337 (5) - Out of bounds.
01:27:619 (4,5) - Spacing
01:33:260 (3,1) - Mini Jump? i think it's not good to put "mini" jumps
01:36:849 (3,4) - Spacing
01:38:388 (1,1) - No new combo
01:49:157 (1) - Anti-Jump? please avoid theese.

[Hard]
I expected this one to be at least till the end of the song, but if this is your longest diff, there's not much i can ask you for here.
00:27:448 (1) - I'd understand if this was an Easy, but what's the point of a spinner like this when lyrics and instruments still have a steady rythm?
00:39:414 (1) - This spinner can be split as well.
01:32:234 (2,3) - Spacing

Ok i dont wanna add another star to a map with this many errors, speacially the obvious spacing errors, decide what you wanna do, but this map is at an unrankable state right now, if you want a star, you can PM me for a remod after you fix the issues
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
A lot of thanks for modding, I'm going to start to make all the things you have said :D

-Specially thanks to pokie for the BG <3
braian5234
230 posts
Joined April 2010
braian5234
I Love Miley :D
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
Hmm Let's see
[osz File Scan!]
Fine
Your mp3 is longer than the part you have mapped, consider cropping the mp3

[Hard]
00:10:696 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - All theese notes are all 1/1 the singer's not singing on 1/1 so why have 1/1s on a Hard? (Yes i know your probably following the main beat but that can be done on easier diffs)
00:29:670 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Theese also are a bit boring for a Hard.
00:39:414 (1) - I notice this spinner is still here. Feels awkward as there's still steady rythm going so i dont see the point of a spinner.
01:11:550 (3,4,5,6) - Avoid uneven stacks like this
01:16:337 (1) - Another awkward spinner, there's nothing in the song that hints me to a spinner here.
00:18:901 (1,2,1) - You could try smaller repeat sliders.
02:09:670 (2) - Theese could be split into 2 spinners

[Normal]
01:15:824 (4,5) - Spacing error
01:34:285 (2,3) - Spacing error
01:48:644 (3,4) - Spacing error
The last sections could be split into many spinners

[Easy]
00:06:080 (4,5) - Spacing error
00:17:362 (6,7) - Spacing error

You sill have spacing issues, please remember the golden rule: "For equal spacing on the timeline, the distance between notes must be the same" Once again, i cant give star, please work on it more and PM me again when you have fixed it
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
Ok, i'll make all the things you said except this:

Sakura301 wrote:

01:16:337 (1) - Another awkward spinner, there's nothing in the song that hints me to a spinner here.
I like this spinner >.<

A lot of thanks for modding :D I'll call you when I do that :)
aabc271
osu! Alumni
1,334 posts
Joined August 2009
aabc271
Hi :)
Here is my random mod~
I am a taiko player so my mod may not be good, sorry~ :(

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[General]
The song was cut at 02:19:902 suddenly. Consider fading out the song instead of suddenly cut it? I don't know anything cropping song so i can't help you, sorry~
The quality of the video is quite low, maybe find a better one?
Consider using more sliders in all diffs?
By using playback rate of 25%, i can hear that the offset is a bit early. May be try offset of around 2510? Remember to resnap all notes after changing offset~

[Easy]
00:09:670 (3) 1 or 2 grids down?
00:11:208 (2,3,4,5,6) Maybe make the angle become bigger so that 3 will not overlap with 5?
00:38:901 (4,1) Spacing?
01:56:849 (1) I think this is a critical issue since it is a Easy diff. The distance between the spinner and the slider is too little. Players ( esp. beginners ) will not have time to react after the spinner. I think ending the spinner at 01:55:824 is the best~

[Normal]
00:37:362 (x) Add a note?
00:53:602 (4) This slider's staring time is a bit too sudden since it is different from the previous beats. Consider changing the starting point of this slider to 00:53:773?
01:16:337 (5,1) Spacing. I think you should fix this~
02:13:602 (4) The timing of this note is a bit sudden, but it is fine if you don't change it~

[Hard]
00:39:072 (1) I think this note is quite strange. Consider delecting it?
00:53:602 (11,12) Spacing?
00:56:166 (7,8) Spacing?
01:11:208 (1,2,3,4) Since it is a group of 1/6, i think stacking all of them is the best~
01:13:773 (3) Move to the right instead of stacking it? ( Just like what you did at 01:14:114 (1,2) )
01:37:362 (6,1,2) Spacing. I think you should fix this~
01:56:849 (4) Move it to the place of 01:55:824 (2) so this can creat an back-and-forth effect? ( Just like what you did at 01:53:260 (1,2,3,4) )
02:01:465 (3) Divide this super-long slider into 2?

That's all for the mod~ :)
The map is OK, but i think you should put more effort on spacing issues. ;)
Star and good luck~ :)
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old

aabc271 wrote:

Hi :)
Here is my random mod~
I am a taiko player so my mod may not be good, sorry~ :(

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[General]
The song was cut at 02:19:902 suddenly. Consider fading out the song instead of suddenly cut it? I don't know anything cropping song so i can't help you, sorry~ Fixed
The quality of the video is quite low, maybe find a better one? If i put other video with better quality, it'll be too longer (10mb or more)
Consider using more sliders in all diffs?
By using playback rate of 25%, i can hear that the offset is a bit early. May be try offset of around 2510? Remember to resnap all notes after changing offset~ Fixed

[Easy]
00:09:670 (3) 1 or 2 grids down? i think it's good
00:11:208 (2,3,4,5,6) Maybe make the angle become bigger so that 3 will not overlap with 5? Fixed
00:38:901 (4,1) Spacing? Fixed
01:56:849 (1) I think this is a critical issue since it is a Easy diff. The distance between the spinner and the slider is too little. Players ( esp. beginners ) will not have time to react after the spinner. I think ending the spinner at 01:55:824 is the best~ Fixed

[Normal]
00:37:362 (x) Add a note? Fixed
00:53:602 (4) This slider's staring time is a bit too sudden since it is different from the previous beats. Consider changing the starting point of this slider to 00:53:773? Fixed
01:16:337 (5,1) Spacing. I think you should fix this~ It's distance snapped
02:13:602 (4) The timing of this note is a bit sudden, but it is fine if you don't change it~
Fixed
[Hard]
00:39:072 (1) I think this note is quite strange. Consider delecting it? Fixed
00:53:602 (11,12) Spacing? I put it more far for make it more hard :P
00:56:166 (7,8) Spacing? The same
01:11:208 (1,2,3,4) Since it is a group of 1/6, i think stacking all of them is the best~ Fixed
01:13:773 (3) Move to the right instead of stacking it? ( Just like what you did at 01:14:114 (1,2) ) Fixed
01:37:362 (6,1,2) Spacing. I think you should fix this~ Fixed
01:56:849 (4) Move it to the place of 01:55:824 (2) so this can creat an back-and-forth effect? ( Just like what you did at 01:53:260 (1,2,3,4) ) Fixed
02:01:465 (3) Divide this super-long slider into 2? I like it >.<

That's all for the mod~ :)
The map is OK, but i think you should put more effort on spacing issues. ;)
Star and good luck~ :)
A lot of thanks for mod my map :D
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
JhnySmthApl
[General]

Find a better video. This one looks kinda blocky and pixelated
I really don't think the song just ENDS like that. Maybe find the whole thing or edit it to fade out

[Easy]

Increase OD by 1

00:29:478 - get rid of the break
00:39:478 (1,2,3) - seems a bit weird to me... Try curving your notes into an oval or circular shape
01:49:221 (Multiple Choice)
  • A:(1,1) Delete circle pull back spinner and extend till 01:56:401
    B:(1) Delete spinner and map through it
    C:(1,1) Keep both circle and spinner but make the circle continue combo
01:56:913 (1,2) - Shorten both back to red tick

[Normal]

Increase the Circle Size by 1

00:13:580 - Map this? It's just a random stoppage of notes
01:16:401 (5,1) - Too close
01:49:221 (4,1) - Delete the (4) and start spinner there

[Hard]

00:51:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Is this a random spammage of notes? or not?
00:58:196 - Map through or delete it. It's to short
01:13:666 (2,3) - to close to the (1)
01:15:375 (1) - continue combo
02:11:272 (3) - What is this going to? Delete it or change it.

The random nature of the notes fits with the song so I don't think it's nazi-able~

Other than that good job. For a non-miley fan like myself this is a good map and hope you can get it ranked
choche_old
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choche_old

johnsage92 wrote:

[General]

Find a better video. This one looks kinda blocky and pixelated Fixed
I really don't think the song just ENDS like that. Maybe find the whole thing or edit it to fade out Now I've cut it with fade out

[Easy]

Increase OD by 1 Fixed

00:29:478 - get rid of the break Fixed
00:39:478 (1,2,3) - seems a bit weird to me... Try curving your notes into an oval or circular shape Fixed
01:49:221 (Multiple Choice)
  • A:(1,1) Delete circle pull back spinner and extend till 01:56:401 Fixed
    B:(1) Delete spinner and map through it
    C:(1,1) Keep both circle and spinner but make the circle continue combo
01:56:913 (1,2) - Shorten both back to red tick Fixed

[Normal]

Increase the Circle Size by 1 Fixed

00:13:580 - Map this? It's just a random stoppage of notes Fixed
01:16:401 (5,1) - Too close Fixed
01:49:221 (4,1) - Delete the (4) and start spinner there Fixed

[Hard]

00:51:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Is this a random spammage of notes? or not? I tried to follow the rhythm o.O is it bad? It sounds good for me :S
00:58:196 - Map through or delete it. It's to short Fixed
01:13:666 (2,3) - to close to the (1) Fixed
01:15:375 (1) - continue combo Fixed
02:11:272 (3) - What is this going to? Delete it or change it. Fixed
The random nature of the notes fits with the song so I don't think it's nazi-able~

Other than that good job. For a non-miley fan like myself this is a good map and hope you can get it ranked
Shiro
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Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

General:
Offset feels wrong... But I couldn't come up with a statisfactory offset.

Easy:
00:16:401 (4,5) - Move them both two grid (lvl 3) up, then move (4) one grid left and (5) one grid right, then move (6) right where (3) is. This will make the spacing more consistent and the patter nicer to the eye.
00:17:939 (7) - Inconsistent spacing: move it two grids right (five right and one up if you did ^).
00:18:965 (1) - You changed the distance snapping value at this note... I think you shouldn't in a Easy diff unless there's a break.
00:35:888 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same here, the distance snapping for the red (1,2,3) is about 0,7x, and suddenly between 00:36:913 (3,1) - The distance snapping switches to 0,8x... I'll make that a major issue because it makes your spacing inconsistent and confusing. Re-check all the map using a chosen distance snapping value that you WON'T CHANGE through the song.
00:41:529 (3,1) - Ugly and unnecessary overlap.
00:43:580 (1,2) - ^
00:51:785 (1) - Remove this note and make the spinner end where it was, with a Finish hitsound.
01:56:913 (1) - The circle is hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed... But it's a slider, so I guess it's not a problem.
02:01:016 (1) - Overlapped. Flip it horizontally.
02:13:324 (2) - Hidden by the slider.

Normal:
Work with grid lvl 3.
01:44:093 (2,3,4) - Jumps ?
01:56:913 (1) - I think that's too far from the center of the screen, drag it closer (but NOT at the center).

Hard:
Now there's clearly something wrong with the offset...
HP drain rate -1.
00:12:469 (10,1) - Stack correctly.
00:22:042 (5,6,1) - Inconsistent spacing !
00:43:751 (2,3,4) - ^
00:45:119 (1,2) - Stack properly.
00:46:144 (2,1) - ^
00:55:888 (5,6,7,8) - Inconsistent spacing !
Kurai
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Kurai
Use 2538 for the offset, that sound better.
choche_old
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choche_old
A lot of thanks! :D

Odaril: I didn't change the distance snapping, I had it always in 0,8x (How is possible that it was changed? O.o)
Kurai: Thanks for the new offset, it sounds great!
Beuchi
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#spanish mod~

~All Diffs~
- Elimina el espacio en blanco innecesario de "beatmap by choche.png"
- Acerca de los hitsounds... No tienes por qué usar un hitsound en cada nota, usalos solo en los momentos en los que suenan bien.
- Ya que has cambiado el offset, arregla las timing sections del kiai time y haz que coincidan con los ticks.
Storyboard:
- Para serte sincera el efecto del negativo no me gusta xD Queda un poco raro en mi opinion, pero si quieres dejarlo no hay problema xP

2ms: Mueve el "Beatmap by choche" un poco más a la izquierda, casi se corta con el borde de la pantalla xD

~Easy~
00:17:409 (6) - Colocalo debajo de (3).
00:32:794 (3,4,5) - Nazi!! Súbelos una cuadricula arriba.
00:39:461 (1,2) - Quedan muy amontonados entre los circulos, intenta separarlos un poco.
00:43:563 (1) - Queda feo con el otro slider encima D:
01:25:102 (1) - Arregla el spacing. Estaria incluso mejor si lo movieras a otro lado xD
01:42:025 (1) - Copypasteeee~ Al menos hazle un flip horizontal o vertical a toda esta seccion para que no se note tanto ;w;
01:49:204 (1) - El spinner es en mi opinión demasiado largo xD
02:06:640 (1,2) - Resultan un poco monótonos con tanta repeticion, aunque tampoco es nada malo...

~Normal~
00:53:649 (4) - Teniendo todas las notas en ticks blancos, el slider hace un cambio de ritmo muy raro (no he visto mas sliders como este asi que es aun mas raro).
00:54:845 (1) - Arregla el spacing D:
01:03:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Por qué hay solo uno de estos en toda la cancion? ;_;
01:12:281 (1) - Quita el New Combo.
01:14:332 (1) - ^
01:24:076 (1) - Arregla el spacing.
01:49:204 (1,1) - Aunque aqui sean dos spinners, sigue siendo demasiado largo...
01:49:204 (1,1) - Arregla el spacing.
02:04:076 (1,1) - Igual que antes, resultan monotonos con tantas repeticiones.

~Hard~
00:23:050 (1) - Arregla el spacing.
00:41:512 (7) - Termina el slider en el tick blanco.
00:48:179 (1,2) - Muevelo un poco hacia arriba? El salto es un poco raro o.o
00:53:820 (12) - Arregla el spacing.
01:28:691 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - Arregla el spacing y quita los New Combo en 01:30:059 (1) y 01:30:743 (1).
01:44:076 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Por que este cambio de spacing tan repentino?
01:48:179 (1) - Otro salto raro >:
02:12:794 (4,5,6) - New Combo en (4). Reduce un poco el spacing, es un poco grande en mi opinion.

Hmm... Aun necesita trabajo, el map es muy muy lineal, la mayor parte del map son solo notas en 1/1 y eso acaba resultando bastante monotono, mirate más maps y coge ideas de formas que puedas hacer, echale imaginacion a la cosa =3

Mucha suerte!! ;)
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~Easy~
01:16:640 (1) - use 1/3 snapped, start on 01:16:726
01:37:922 (1) - end on 01:40:999, add hitfinish, remove clap
01:49:204 (1) - too long imo
01:56:896 (1) - use 1/3 snapped
02:00:999 (1) - ^

~Normal~
01:52:965 (1) - start on next purple tick
02:12:623 (1,2,3,4) - place around above of screen looks better imo

~Hard~
00:41:512 (7) - end on next purple tick sounds better
00:44:076 (4,5) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
00:47:153 (1) - remove new combo
00:53:307 (9) - new combo
00:53:649 (11,12) - too far
01:15:358 (1) - use 1/4 snap, end on 01:15:743 and make it repeat
01:16:213 (2) - delete
01:21:683 (1) - move down 1 grid (Lv2)
01:21:683 (1) - remove new combo
01:22:538 (4) - new combo
01:30:059 (1) - remove new combo
02:12:794 (4) - new combo


+Star
choche_old
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choche_old
Thanks to Beuchi-chan and DJPop for modding :P
gyt
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gyt
[Easy]
00:30:230 (5,6) - add whistle?
00:39:461 (1,2) - add whistle at the end of slider?
01:02:025 (1) - delete clap at the end
01:49:204 (1) - maybe place break time instead spinner?
02:05:614 (4) - add whistle?
02:06:640 (1) - add whistle at the middle (02:07:666)?
02:09:204 (2) - add whistle at the upper repeat?

[Normal]
00:12:794 (5) - delete clap (double hitsound is bad)
00:13:820 (7) - add whistle?
00:53:820 (4,5,1,2,3) - strange hitsounds for me - make it like 00:51:768 (3,1,2,3)
01:53:136 (1) - end spinner at 01:56:384

[Hard]
00:21:512 (4,6) - add whistle?
00:40:828 (5,6,8) - add whistle?
00:44:589 (5) - one grid up
00:51:426 (2) - delete circle

Storyboard is scary :o star!
Anto
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Anto
:D

Download: Miley Cyrus - Can't Be Tamed (choche) [Anto's Insane].osu
Axey
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Axey
:oops: can i do a guest diff?

i love this song so much~~ :oops:
ayey
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ayey
Hi

Easy
02:20:461 (1) - align it with 02:19:436 (5) ?

Normal
00:50:220 (x) - add a note

Hard
00:47:656 (x) - add a note?
00:48:169 (x) - ^
01:36:707 (x) - ^
02:34:134 (x) - ^

Anto's Insane
More hitsounds maybe

Starred~
BreakHeart_old
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i hope that this will be ranked

so,choche good luck :)
_Chie_
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_Chie_
Choche D;

esta bueno el mapa :D

has mas D;
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • Add 1 second of Audio Lead In
    Video Offset: -340
- Easy:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Almost all beats are 1/1, it gets kinda boring.
  2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    You should re-work all the general difficulty settings, they're all really high for an Easy difficulty.
    00:57:408 (1) - the finish hitsound here sounds weird; add it at 00:55:870 (3) instead
    01:32:280 (1) - remove new combo; 01:31:767 (6) - add new combo
  3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    Please Resnap All Notes
    02:46:439 (1) - really too short for a Easy.
- Hard:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Overall Difficulty -1
    00:52:271 (8) - 01:41:493 (8) - kinda ugly slider D:
  2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    02:09:693 (2) - just make it like this:
    SPOILER
  3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    02:46:439 (1) - i guess it "can" stay, but still not cool for me :<
    Please Resnap All Notes
    00:39:110 (1) - Move 1/6 later
- Anto's Insane:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Wow, nice improvements from you, Anto :O
  2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    About hitsounds: claps (or whistles? :) ) and finishes (yeah i said nothing useful here, i know)
Find someone to take care of Hitsounds if Anto is not available.
choche_old
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Topic Starter
choche_old
Thanks to everyone for the stars, and for Card N'Force for the mod :) I've fixed all the thinks you said except the "kinda ugly slider" on 00:52:271 .
I'll look for help with hitsounds on Anto's insane :)
Anto
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Anto
i added hitsound

Download: Miley Cyrus - Can't Be Tamed (choche) [Anto's Insane].osu
Card N'FoRcE
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Sorry, but last time i forgot to check timing ;~;
BMP: 117,00; Offset: 2531.

Lol maybe you have Easy Difficulty settings too low now xD
Apporoach rate +1 please, they're really slow and sometimes the playfield gets cramped.

- Anto's Insane:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Awww all claps ;~;
  2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    Slidertickrate 1 or 3.
    0.5, 2 and 4 are a no go since the song is mapped at 1/3.
Fix and this time i'll bubble xD
choche_old
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choche_old
Fixed ^^

Thank youuuu <3
Card N'FoRcE
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Everything is unsnapped in Anto's difficulty ;~;
choche_old
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choche_old

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Everything is unsnapped in Anto's difficulty ;~;
OMG, I didn't notice that D:

-Fixed-
Card N'FoRcE
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Have a (fragile) bubble then.

(Saying "fragile" because you may get some more strict mods for this, but i can't find any issues ruining gameplay at the moment)
Shohei Ohtani
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Insane is like wth.

Also, sadface, because I wanted to map this too D:.
Xgor
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Xgor
[General]
Add Anto into tags in all difficulties.

[Easy]
01:49:197 (1,1) - A bug caused these spinners not to have like new combos should. Add new combo to them and they will work properly again.


Somewhat small things but I say that they are justified enough for a pop. :| Sorry.
Xgor
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Xgor
Oh yeah, Forgot to mention this one.
Wouldn't call it as serious as the other ones but it's stupid

[Hard]
00:04:583 (3,4) - Please make this as far apart as the slider before it. It's not hard to mistake this to be 1/3 or 1/2 closer than what it is right now.

(No kd for this post please, I should have mentioned this eariler)
choche_old
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choche_old

Xgor wrote:

[Hard]
00:04:583 (3,4) - Please make this as far apart as the slider before it. It's not hard to mistake this to be 1/3 or 1/2 closer than what it is right now.
I don't understand what do you want to say :S
Xgor
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Xgor

choche wrote:

I don't understand what do you want to say :S
The spacing is way too low compared to the rest of the combo and it's not too hard to see it being 1/3 apart, please move this further apart from the rest (Might want to move the other sliders in the start a bit to the right.)
choche_old
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choche_old
I like it now >.<
Thank you :)
Xgor
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Xgor

choche wrote:

I like it now >.<
Thank you :)
The spacing is still the same though... Did you forgot to update?
choche_old
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choche_old

Xgor wrote:

choche wrote:

I like it now >.<
Thank you :)
The spacing is still the same though... Did you forgot to update?
No i didn't fix anythings because the distance snap "says" that is good :S
Xgor
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Xgor

choche wrote:

No i didn't fix anythings because the distance snap "says" that is good :S
That's because it's too far to the left for the distance snap to be proper. See that little thing of the left, It shows how much beat spacing it is and while (1) to (3) is spaced 0,90x while (3) to (4) is spaced 0,30x.
One easy way is to move (1,2,3) a lot to the right and (4) a bit down or up.
Mitatsu
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It's a very good map;)
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