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fhana - RHAPSODY OF BLUE SKY(TV size) [Taiko]

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Skylish
1,070 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Skylish
Mapset is updated, with name tags added and title changed.

I will find mods for you guys, no worry :>

舅舅爺開車喇 beep beep~
JessiChan
488 posts
Joined January 2012
JessiChan
Hi, M4M req from your queue. :>

Kantan

  1. 00:14:209 (19,22) - Maybe you can delete these two, just for more space.
  2. 00:43:320 (18) - Delete, same reason^
  3. 00:46:209 (23,26) - ^
  4. 00:53:097 (4,5) - ctrl + g 00:54:875 (7) - Delete 01:01:986 (7) - Delete 01:04:653 (12) - Delete 01:14:431 (5) - Delete.

KwaN's Futsuu

  1. 00:07:764 (17,18) - ctrl + g sounds better
  2. 00:55:764 (108,109) - ctrl + g too
  3. 01:09:986 (141,142) - ^

Chaoz's Oni

  1. 00:07:764 (35,36) - ctrl + g or kkd
  2. 00:11:653 (54) - Move to: 00:11:542 - and change the pattern as kkd
  3. 00:22:764 (117) - Move to: 00:22:986 - and change this: 00:23:431 (121) - to k
  4. 00:31:542 (166) - Maybe k

    Cute diff

Raphsody Inner Oni

  1. 00:02:209 (7,8) - ctrl + g and 00:02:653 (9,10,11) - kkd I think sound better. :>

    Woow! amazing diff :)

That's All, ily and Nardo diff it's okay for me. GL! ;)
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,393 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
SR system is garbage.

[Inner Oni]
00:20:320 (18) - flow of 00:20:097 (17,18,19) - feels odd to me, it plays better to me with kd k instead of k dk.
00:27:431 (18) - ^
00:37:431 (5,6,7) - instead of dk d I would try k dk instead. The standalone k note goes with the holding voice, dk suits better to the vocals.

[Muzukashii]
Jumping directly to this difficulty because that is by far more significant. So for now the mapset looks like this: You have a slightly harder Kantan (which is still in the range of acceptance), a Futsuu which uses 1/4 a lot (I haven't checked the difficulty in this time so I don't know if it really needs them so much), a Muzukashii which plays like a nerfed Oni (like one you could easily buff a bit to have a decent Oni Difficulty), two Inner Oni Level difficulties and an Ura Oni Level difficulty - aside of the fact Ura and Inner doesn't matter in their names, the current Inner Oni is harder so I differ them.

The gap between Futsuu~Muzukashii is insanely wide, also Kantan~Futsuu and Muzukashii~both Oni is questionable too but by far not so crucial like the first case (and also that can be easily modded out over time).

[Futsuu]
00:17:097 - 00:50:875 - Although it does follow what the song provides it still feels very hard for a Futsuu level difficulty since nothing constant can be build with the huge usage of 1/4 rhythm. 00:17:097 (37,38,39) - for example could be changed to d d dk, using 1/1 and 1/2, 00:18:875 (40,41,42,43) - for another example d kd dk: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/pdXAlLwZ.png 1/4 isn't necessarily bad for the Futsuu on that BPM but the whole structure makes it not suitable for the level it's supposed to be.

00:56:653 (110,111) - Kiai lacks of proper rest times, it is the Kiai time but that doesn't mean you can ignore that element. Removing these notes suits well to the song and gives an acceptable long time to be considered as break/rest time.

01:03:986 (127) - ^
01:10:875 (143,144) - ^

[]
Ideally, the best thing to do is:
- to buff Muzukashii slightly so it can be considered as the Oni difficulty of the set. Basically the part between 00:17:097 - 00:50:653 - is necessary to buff, by giving longer combos (not necessarily harder pattern).

- create a difficulty between Futsuu and current Muzukashii which can work on the idea of Futsuu to use a lot of single 1/4 notes and many combinations between 1/2~1/4.

- rename current Oni Difficulties to Inner Oni and current Inner Oni to Ura Oni.

For now it's really hard to give a proper mod to your mapset since it literally miss an entire difficulty section imo. Both Oni difficulties are okay as difficulties theirself but not what you can call as "Oni difficulties", they're way too hard than the average, spread-wise.

I can offer you to check the mapset later again when these issues are clearer and you took care for that. Because it'd be wasted time (without intending to sound offensive) to point out every little thing between Futsuu~Oni what needs to be changed/solved/whatever. You're also free to skip my request in your queue, just if you don't think that I don't deserve it till I've give a real mod.
zigizigiefe
952 posts
Joined March 2013
zigizigiefe
Hey IamKwaN,iloveyou4ever,Nardo,Chaoslitz and Sky o/ M4M from Sky's queue as promised ^^

[ General]
  1. I think mappers' name should be capitalized on guest diff names.It looks really weird.
[ KANTAN]
  1. 00:01:098 (1) - Finisher to be consistent to last part.
  2. 00:23:320 (10) - Drum sound is at 00:23:209 - .But if you think it is too hard,you may keep that.Apply at 00:32:209 (12) - and 00:30:431 (10) - for consistency.
    Nothing to say,looks pretty solid lol
[ KwaN's FUTSUU]
  1. 00:02:653 (5,6) - How about CTRL+G?It'll more fit to the song I believe.
  2. 00:13:097 (28) - Kat due to high pitch sound.
  3. 00:22:431 (47,48) - All mappers used finisher?It emphasizes strong sounds and keep the consistency.Apply 00:29:542 (59,60) - for consistency
  4. 00:25:320 (51) - If you followed drum,keep it but if you followed vocal,it is wrong snapped and should be at 00:25:209 -
  5. 01:24:209 (169,170,171) - You used 1/1 pattern to represent "chu chu sound",why is it 1/2?
  6. 01:24:653 (171) - You used normal note for first part,why is it finisher?

[ ily4's MUZUKASHII]
  1. In general,the gap between Muzu and Oni is too low.Your diff should be nerfed.
  2. 00:02:764 - Delete this note,doublets don't seem like it is good idea for Muzukashii density.Delete 00:06:320 (20) - as well for consistency.
  3. 00:07:764 (25,26) - You emphasized "chu chu" with kat kat but 00:00:653 (1,2) - why is it don kat?It is inconsistent.I suggest you to keep where you used kat kat and change to kat kat where you used don kat.
  4. 00:09:875 (33) - 00:11:431 (39) - Doublet issues
  5. 00:18:097 (62) - Actually doublets on this diff are the reason of high SR.Review some doublets,they're too hard for Muzukashii.It's not your fault,blame song lol
  6. 00:34:653 (130,131) - CTRL+G so weak vocal will match with don and strong vocal will match with kat.
    Doublets everywhere,so nothing to say.
[ Chaoz's ONI]
  1. Firstly,I need some "siktir" to be motivated,you know xD
  2. 00:00:653 (1,2) - "chu chu sound" is too strong and they have same pitches.So I suggest kat kat as I pointed out on Nardo's diff.
  3. 00:07:764 (35,36) - Same above
  4. 00:21:097 (106) - Nardo and Sky emphasized here with kat.I heard weird sound here.So I suggest kat.
  5. 00:21:653 (110,111) - CTRL+G,it will fit to the vocal and ddkd dk is more common than ddkd kd.
  6. 00:36:207 (195) - Unsnapped note
  7. 00:24:764 - Why didn't you emphasize vocal?
  8. 00:28:764 (151,152) - CTRL+G,same reason.
  9. 00:33:764 (180) - Move to 00:33:653 - to highlight vocal
  10. 00:35:319 (190,191) - CTRL+G,ddd represents calm vocal,k represents high pitch vocal
  11. 01:24:653 (482) - You used finisher at 00:01:098 (3) -,why is it just kat?
  12. 01:23:986 (479,480,481) - I suggest d k k,d for weak beat,k k for "chu chu" as I explained.


[ Nardo's ONI]
  • I will mod your maps 'till you apply at least one xD
  1. 00:00:653 (1,2) - This "chu chu sound" is strong and pitch goes same.I couldn't get what you followed.k k will be better emphasis for strong and high pitch sound.
  2. 00:01:098 (1) - Inner Oni has a finisher here,I don't know if it is inconsistent between diffs but I think so.
  3. 00:07:764 (33,34) - Same suggestion about "chu chu sound".Also it makes the flow better.
  4. 01:11:986 (378,379,380) - It is not bad idea but vocal sound is too strong,although vocal pitch goes mid-high-high.So i suggest you to highlight strong vocal sounds with kkk. ddkdkkk is more common than ddkddkk and when pattern that you used appears suddenly,players might be confused.
    Little note for Nardo:Modding your maps is the best way to improve my modding skills.I hope it helps to you :3 no more thanks for your mod though please :"U

[ RHAPSODY INNER ONI]
  1. 00:05:431 (5) - I heard something like "ring sound".You emphasized it with kat at 00:02:764 (10) -.So I suggest dkk for variety or dkd for consistency.
  2. 00:11:431 (19) - Vocal sound?That's low pitch imo.Also since kd dk flow is more common than kk dk,it would be better.If you apply that,apply other parts where there's that flow and you think the sound is similar to that.
  3. 00:15:653 - This part isn't same as 00:13:653 -.There are additional drum sounds at empty places.By the way I guess I heard cymbal or hi-hat sound at 00:16:653 (29,30) - ,how about finisher?If you think it doesn't fit or it is inconsistent,no need to apply that.
  4. 00:20:320 (18) - Isn't the sound at 00:20:209 - or did you follow something else?If you apply that,apply at 00:27:431 (18) -
  5. 00:26:653 (14) - Although there's drum sound,it doesn't fit at all.I suggest remove that.So it'll fit to the vocal.
  6. 00:32:653 - I suggest 1/4 quintuplet due to 1/4 strong sounds.
  7. 00:36:209 - 00:38:653 (12,13,14,15) - Follow vocal pitches,kd dk will make better flow.00:38:431 (11,12) - First pattern ends with don and next one starts with don.00:39:097 (15,16) - same.If someone play it with DT,he/she would get fingerlock.So consider to change as kd dk.
  8. 00:45:542 - This part of this song is same as 00:13:542 - but patterns aren't same.Isn't it inconsistent?
  9. 00:50:542 (12,13) - I suggest Ctrl+G.00:50:431 (11) - You emphasized snare sound with kat but 00:50:542 - why is it don?00:50:653 - You could emphasize kick sound with don instead.If I look at this pattern according to vocal,00:50:653 (13) - breathing sound stops here.So dkddkkd pattern is more fit here.
  10. 01:24:209 (11,12,13) - How about kdk to highlight "chu chu~" sound?
I hope it helps to you,good luck ^^

Stefan wrote:

SR system is garbage.
I agree!
edit:I forgot something,now fixed.sry chaos .w.
Last edited by zigizigiefe , edited 3 times in total.
Skylish
1,070 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Skylish
Upgrading the difficulties starting from Futsuu isn't a great idea as Futsuu's density could be well improved to strike a better balance with Kantan and Muzukashii, meanwhile two Oni(s) could be more simple, as I suggested before.

So, to a large extent I disagree with Stefan's suggestion on improving the overall spread. (I don't give a dem to SR system)

> Buff Futsuu a lot

> Nerf Muzukashii a bit

> Nerf Oni a lot
Nardoxyribonucleic
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3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic

Skylish wrote:

From self-modding

[Nardo's Oni]

> 00:19:653 (94,95,96,97) - / 00:26:764 (133,134,135,136) - this pattern feels unnatural here, with inconsistent emphases on vocal/ instruments. I cant tell it. Moved the one of the notes to 00:20:097 - / 00:27:209 - for closer connection to vocal.

> 00:49:986 - / 01:11:542 - really dunna want to have 7-plet in Oni... (maybe 1 at the climax is just fine) Having only one 7-plet throughout the difficulty would cause awkwardness owing to the fact of standing alone. It is not really demanding at all as they are common in typical Onis in the ranked section.

[]

Leave other stuff for modders, I just point out something I concerned about the spread issue.

JessiChan wrote:

Hi, M4M req from your queue. :>

That's All, ily and Nardo diff it's okay for me. GL! ;)

zigizigiefe wrote:

Hey IamKwaN,iloveyou4ever,Nardo and Sky o/ M4M from Sky's queue as requested ^^ Where is Chaos? :o

[ General]
  1. I think mappers' name should be capitalized on guest diff names.It looks really weird. To be decided by Skylish.
[ Nardo's ONI]
  • I will mod your maps 'till you apply at least one xD
  1. 00:00:653 (1,2) - This "chu chu sound" is strong and pitch goes same.I couldn't get what you followed.k k will be better emphasis for strong and high pitch sound. 00:00:653 (1,3) - have the same vocal pitch, so d k d would be fine to me.
  2. 00:01:098 (1) - Inner Oni has a finisher here,I don't know if it is inconsistent between diffs but I think so. The background sound there is not that strong, so I would prefer an ordinary note here.
  3. 00:07:764 (33,34) - Same suggestion about "chu chu sound".Also it makes the flow better. same as 00:00:653 (1,2) -
  4. 01:11:986 (378,379,380) - It is not bad idea but vocal sound is too strong,although vocal pitch goes mid-high-high.So i suggest you to highlight strong vocal sounds with kkk. ddkdkkk is more common than ddkddkk and when pattern that you used appears suddenly,players might be confused. Retained to accompany the vocal pitch in a more accurate way.
    Little note for Nardo:Modding your maps is the best way to improve my modding skills.I hope it helps to you :3 no more thanks for your mod though please :"U
I hope it helps to you,good luck ^^
Thanks for you guys' mods and opinions~ :)

Update: https://puu.sh/wbQ9L.rar
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
Joined November 2013
Chaoslitz

JessiChan wrote:

Chaoz's Oni

  1. 00:07:764 (35,36) - ctrl + g or kkd Followed 00:00:653 (1,2,3) to use dkk for the same vocal
  2. 00:11:653 (54) - Move to: 00:11:542 - and change the pattern as kkd fixed
  3. 00:22:764 (117) - Move to: 00:22:986 - and change this: 00:23:431 (121) - to k fixed
  4. 00:31:542 (166) - Maybe k but it is already a k? 0w 0

    Cute diff <3

zigizigiefe wrote:

[ Chaoz's ONI]
  1. Firstly,I need some "siktir" to be motivated,you know xD siktir!!!
  2. 00:00:653 (1,2) - "chu chu sound" is too strong and they have same pitches.So I suggest kat kat as I pointed out on Nardo's diff. Doesn't like how it sounds when 00:00:653 (1,2,3) - all of them are k, I used dk in 00:00:653 (1,2) - due to the difference in pitch
  3. 00:07:764 (35,36) - Same above ^
  4. 00:21:097 (106) - Nardo and Sky emphasized here with kat.I heard weird sound here.So I suggest kat. ok
  5. 00:21:653 (110,111) - CTRL+G,it will fit to the vocal and ddkd dk is more common than ddkd kd. ok
  6. 00:36:207 (195) - Unsnapped note oops lol fixed
  7. 00:24:764 - Why didn't you emphasize vocal? ye added
  8. 00:28:764 (151,152) - CTRL+G,same reason. fixed
  9. 00:33:764 (180) - Move to 00:33:653 - to highlight vocal fixed
  10. 00:35:319 (190,191) - CTRL+G,ddd represents calm vocal,k represents high pitch vocal I think ddk it better in this case to follow the background sound on 00:35:320 -
  11. 01:24:653 (482) - You used finisher at 00:01:098 (3) -,why is it just kat? added
  12. 01:23:986 (479,480,481) - I suggest d k k,d for weak beat,k k for "chu chu" as I explained. as explained
edit:I forgot something,now fixed.sry chaos .w. .w.
Thanks!
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Skylish
1,070 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Skylish

JessiChan wrote:

Hi, M4M req from your queue. :>

Kantan

  1. 00:14:209 (19,22) - Maybe you can delete these two, just for more space.

    > yes, the rhythm there may be too complicated.
  2. 00:43:320 (18) - Delete, same reason^

    > Welp I think this one is quite impt due to the leading melody, so I will keep it.
  3. 00:46:209 (23,26) - ^

    > same, removed
  4. 00:53:097 (4,5) - ctrl + g 00:54:875 (7) - Delete 01:01:986 (7) - Delete 01:04:653 (12) - Delete 01:14:431 (5) - Delete.

    > 00:52:653 - yup ddk here makes more sense.

    > I re-arranged some patterns in the Kiai.


Raphsody Inner Oni

  1. 00:02:209 (7,8) - ctrl + g and 00:02:653 (9,10,11) - kkd I think sound better. :>

    > adopted for the former, but rejected for the latter.

    Woow! amazing diff :)

That's All, ily and Nardo diff it's okay for me. GL! ;)

Stefan wrote:

SR system is garbage. > as always, no surprise.

[Inner Oni]
00:20:320 (18) - flow of 00:20:097 (17,18,19) - feels odd to me, it plays better to me with kd k instead of k dk.

> I feel that k dk is better for me, no change.

00:27:431 (18) - ^

> same
00:37:431 (5,6,7) - instead of dk d I would try k dk instead. The standalone k note goes with the holding voice, dk suits better to the vocals.

> yup I agree that it also works pretty well, but I would like to keep the consistent structure and its flow there, which fits the instrumental part better imo.

[]
Ideally, the best thing to do is:
- to buff Muzukashii slightly so it can be considered as the Oni difficulty of the set. Basically the part between 00:17:097 - 00:50:653 - is necessary to buff, by giving longer combos (not necessarily harder pattern).

- create a difficulty between Futsuu and current Muzukashii which can work on the idea of Futsuu to use a lot of single 1/4 notes and many combinations between 1/2~1/4.

- rename current Oni Difficulties to Inner Oni and current Inner Oni to Ura Oni.

> I disagree to buff any difficulties except Futsuu from now on as the structures of GD Onis are quite solid already, meanwhile my Inner Oni would be an extra, with just slightly more difficult patterns used.

For now it's really hard to give a proper mod to your mapset since it literally miss an entire difficulty section imo. Both Oni difficulties are okay as difficulties theirself but not what you can call as "Oni difficulties", they're way too hard than the average, spread-wise.

I can offer you to check the mapset later again when these issues are clearer and you took care for that. Because it'd be wasted time (without intending to sound offensive) to point out every little thing between Futsuu~Oni what needs to be changed/solved/whatever. You're also free to skip my request in your queue, just if you don't think that I don't deserve it till I've give a real mod.

> I will still mod yours, dont worry. I will call you back the the mapset is at acceptable standard.


zigizigiefe wrote:

Hey IamKwaN,iloveyou4ever,Nardo,Chaoslitz and Sky o/ M4M from Sky's queue as promised ^^

[ General]
  1. I think mappers' name should be capitalized on guest diff names.It looks really weird.

    > 'Guest' = normal, diff. name = capt.ed
[ KANTAN]
  1. 00:01:098 (1) - Finisher to be consistent to last part. > oops I missed it, fixed.
  2. 00:23:320 (10) - Drum sound is at 00:23:209 - .But if you think it is too hard,you may keep that.Apply at 00:32:209 (12) - and 00:30:431 (10) - for consistency. > that weird snap will be strongly opposed by Nardo, so I will keep my current ver.
    Nothing to say,looks pretty solid lol
[ RHAPSODY INNER ONI]
  1. 00:05:431 (5) - I heard something like "ring sound".You emphasized it with kat at 00:02:764 (10) -.So I suggest dkk for variety or dkd for consistency.

    > I ignored that ringing sound since I cannot, and need not to handle it with melody and vocal at the same time, so no change.
  2. 00:11:431 (19) - Vocal sound?That's low pitch imo.Also since kd dk flow is more common than kk dk,it would be better.If you apply that,apply other parts where there's that flow and you think the sound is similar to that.

    > it's vocal variation with 00:04:209 - , kk dk makes sense.
  3. 00:15:653 - This part isn't same as 00:13:653 -.There are additional drum sounds at empty places.By the way I guess I heard cymbal or hi-hat sound at 00:16:653 (29,30) - ,how about finisher?If you think it doesn't fit or it is inconsistent,no need to apply that.

    > added a don at 00:16:542 - , 00:16:653 - / 00:16:875 - are kept as normal notes to emphasize upcoming D.
  4. 00:20:320 (18) - Isn't the sound at 00:20:209 - or did you follow something else?If you apply that,apply at 00:27:431 (18) -

    > 00:20:431 - is the moment of returning of on-beat, 00:20:320 - is a stylish accompaniment.
  5. 00:26:653 (14) - Although there's drum sound,it doesn't fit at all.I suggest remove that.So it'll fit to the vocal.

    > density variations here and there, currently keep unless other modders say they are weird and anti-flow.
  6. 00:32:653 - I suggest 1/4 quintuplet due to 1/4 strong sounds.

    > wanna state those clear high-pitch beep beep beep with clean strucutres there, no change.
  7. 00:36:209 - 00:38:653 (12,13,14,15) - Follow vocal pitches,kd dk will make better flow.00:38:431 (11,12) - First pattern ends with don and next one starts with don.00:39:097 (15,16) - same.If someone play it with DT,he/she would get fingerlock.So consider to change as kd dk.

    > dk kd at 00:38:653 (12,13,14,15) - is a variation of 00:37:097 (3,4,5,6) - . Meanwhile, kd dk is actually matching the overall pitch flow at that timing (fingerlock? do full alt then :P )
  8. 00:45:542 - This part of this song is same as 00:13:542 - but patterns aren't same.Isn't it inconsistent?

    > re-arrange both parts.
  9. 00:50:542 (12,13) - I suggest Ctrl+G.00:50:431 (11) - You emphasized snare sound with kat but 00:50:542 - why is it don?00:50:653 - You could emphasize kick sound with don instead.If I look at this pattern according to vocal,00:50:653 (13) - breathing sound stops here.So dkddkkd pattern is more fit here.

    > I accumulated the uses of 'dk' actually at 00:49:320 - / 00:49:653 - / 00:49:986 - . At 00:50:542 - , with a little stream connected, the 'dk' effect is even more obvious and clear, while ending with kat 00:50:653 - is considering the existence of D at 00:50:875 - which is a new start.
  10. 01:24:209 (11,12,13) - How about kdk to highlight "chu chu~" sound?

    > good idea, adopted.
I hope it helps to you,good luck ^^

Stefan wrote:

SR system is garbage.
I agree!
edit:I forgot something,now fixed.sry chaos .w. > RIP Chaoz
Thanks for all help there! :>
Ozu
647 posts
Joined July 2011
Ozu
hi Skylish~ m4m form your queue xD


[ General ]

kantan(130) -> futsuu(178) -> muzu(351) the spread of the number of circle seems little worried, but i don't know the spread criteria xD


[ KANTAN ]

00:30:431 (10,12) - move to 1/4? there's no sound and also finisher. criteria says that use simple pattern in easy diff even beat is little out, but this two circles in on-beat seems awkward for me.

01:16:653 (2,5,8) - same opinion with above suggestion, but this seems good for me.


[KwaN's FUTSUU]

00:29:542 (59,60,61,62) - finisher? here is the point where all of sound is in, so for emphasize here.

kiai start onbeat pattern suddenly, while the other part is fitted in offbeat, even kiai has more drum sound. so little worried.


[ ily4's MUZUKASHII ]

00:13:542 , 00:15:320 - add d? all offbeat circle seems little hard to me.

01:17:320 (308,316) - delete? for little rest time cause of hard stream


[ Chaoz's ONI ]

00:14:542 (69,70,71,72,80,81,82,83) - some other pattern to avoid continued same kdkd?

00:59:764 (337,338,339,340) - sudden onbeat might be break consistency imo.


[ Nardo's ONI ]

perfect to me xDDDDD


[ RHAPSODY INNER ONI ]

How about RHAPSODINNER ONI of diff name lol

00:11:653 (20) - delete? vocal delaying is not here like 00:04:542 (19) - and no circle in 00:04:431 - if this is followed synth sound imo.



all diff are cool, nice mepset so that i can't point out !

Thanks for make this song's mapset cause i really like this song xD
iloveyou4ever
825 posts
Joined September 2014
iloveyou4ever

404 AccNotFound wrote:

hi Skylish~ m4m form your queue xD


[ General ]

kantan(130) -> futsuu(178) -> muzu(351) the spread of the number of circle seems little worried, but i don't know the spread criteria xD
nerf my diff a little bit :)

[ ily4's MUZUKASHII ]

00:13:542 , 00:15:320 - add d? all offbeat circle seems little hard to me.
I don't want to add so many doublets at non-kiai time already T.T
01:17:320 (308,316) - delete? for little rest time cause of hard stream
nice point and also delete 01:19:097 - too
all diff are cool, nice mepset so that i can't point out !

Thanks for make this song's mapset cause i really like this song xD Thanks XDD

zigizigiefe wrote:

Hey IamKwaN,iloveyou4ever,Nardo,Chaoslitz and Sky o/ M4M from Sky's queue as promised ^^ Hi,and sorry for late reply T.T

[ ily4's MUZUKASHII]
  1. In general,the gap between Muzu and Oni is too low.Your diff should be nerfed.
  2. 00:02:764 - Delete this note,doublets don't seem like it is good idea for Muzukashii density.Delete 00:06:320 (20) - as well for consistency.
    ok
  3. 00:07:764 (25,26) - You emphasized "chu chu" with kat kat but 00:00:653 (1,2) - why is it don kat?It is inconsistent.I suggest you to keep where you used kat kat and change to kat kat where you used don kat.
    change 00:00:653 - to kat
  4. 00:09:875 (33) - 00:11:431 (39) - Doublet issues ok
  5. 00:18:097 (62) - Actually doublets on this diff are the reason of high SR.Review some doublets,they're too hard for Muzukashii.It's not your fault,blame song lol delete some doublets and change to single note
  6. 00:34:653 (130,131) - CTRL+G so weak vocal will match with don and strong vocal will match with kat. ok
    Doublets everywhere,so nothing to say.
Thanks for modding :)

*Base on the spread,I nerf my Muzukashii to 2.9* (delete doublets on kiai time mostly)
muzu
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Skylish
1,070 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Skylish

404 AccNotFound wrote:

hi Skylish~ m4m form your queue xD


[ General ]

kantan(130) -> futsuu(178) -> muzu(351) the spread of the number of circle seems little worried, but i don't know the spread criteria xD

> Futsuu needs a big amendment later, thanks for your concern which is certainly not wrong at all.


[ KANTAN ]

00:30:431 (10,12) - move to 1/4? there's no sound and also finisher. criteria says that use simple pattern in easy diff even beat is little out, but this two circles in on-beat seems awkward for me.

01:16:653 (2,5,8) - same opinion with above suggestion, but this seems good for me.

> Re-shifted back to the Exact spots of the music.

[ RHAPSODY INNER ONI ]

How about RHAPSODINNER ONI of diff name lol > NOPE :D

00:11:653 (20) - delete? vocal delaying is not here like 00:04:542 (19) - and no circle in 00:04:431 - if this is followed synth sound imo.

> patterns building up and variations happen here, no change



all diff are cool, nice mepset so that i can't point out !

Thanks for make this song's mapset cause i really like this song xD
Thanks for modding. Updated ily4's Muzukashii.
Skylish
1,070 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Skylish
> Replace KwaN's Futsuu as she jumps off the car of jiu jiu ye.

> Add my own Futsuu

舅舅爺從新發車 beep beep~
KamizonoShinobu
722 posts
Joined October 2011
KamizonoShinobu
No kds

I don't think it makes any sense of making the diff names capitalized, should it be restored to the default ones? (Title is full caps but I dont find it a reason to make the diff names upper case at all.)
yuzu__rinrin
943 posts
Joined July 2014
yuzu__rinrin
yahello~ thanks M4M~
M4M from your queue :3

[General]
  1. Chaoz's ONI, ily4's MUZU, INNER ONI
    please remove check Widescreen Support.

  2. Is the note that is placed before the first red line is Rankeble?
    If it is anxious element, you may want to change offset to "-679".
[KANTAN]
  1. 00:04:209 (5,6) - ctrl+g?

    I think that there is not so much discomfort even if I change it.
    In order to achieve consistency, I thought that making this part a kdk would make a pattern.

    00:01:098 (1) - and 00:08:209 (11) -

    00:04:653 (6) - and 00:11:764 (16) -

  2. 00:57:097 (11) - delete
    Perhaps you picked up the voice.
    But this Kantan seems to have less breaks.
    Therefore, by taking only the main vocal, there are merits that you can take more easy-to-understand rhythms and breaks. :3

  3. 01:04:653 (12) - delete
    ^same as

  4. 01:11:320 (11,12) - delete
    ^same as
[FUTSUU]
  1. 00:04:209 (6,7) - ctrl+g?
    same Kantan><

    -------------------------------------------------------
  2. 00:20:431 (11) - delete
  3. 00:23:986 (6) - delete
  4. 00:27:543 (11) - delete
  5. 00:53:986 (11,12) - delete or 00:53:986 (11) - only del
  6. 00:57:320 (22,23) - delete
  7. 01:01:097 (11,12) - delete or 01:01:097 (11) - only del
  8. 01:04:320 (4) - delete
  9. 01:08:208 (11,12) - delete or 01:08:208 (11) - only del
  10. 01:11:542 (22,23) - delete


    I wrote without thinking about spread,
    It seems to be high density because color change is intense.
    As I wrote, you could make it easier to do by cutting a note a little or making it a monotone color like dd or kk.

    --------------------------------------------------------

[ily4's Muzukahsii]


  • look good. nice vocal map. :3
  1. 00:35:653 (126) - move to 00:35:542 -
  2. 00:35:764 (127) - delete

    If you follow vocal you will hear this form the clearest.

  3. 00:39:209 (138) - move to 00:39:097 -
  4. 00:39:320 (139) - delete

    ^same as

  5. 00:53:764 (190) - delete

    Useless?
    A good flow is born by erasing.

  6. 01:00:875 (218) - delete

    ^same as

  7. 01:07:986 (245) - delete

    ^same as

  8. 01:15:097 (275) - move to 01:15:542 - and change k?

    You can hear it.
    However, because it is adjacent to big, I will not force it.

[Chaoz's ONI]
  1. 00:00:875 (2) - change d
    I can not see any difference in vocal.
    The one who unified it with d will stand out the next K

  2. 00:07:986 (36) - change d


    00:12:653 - ~00:42:653 -
    There is no space.
    Although it may be only me, I feel that playability as Oni is greatly impaired.
    And since there are more notes than Inner, it looks unstable in appearance.

[Nardo's ONI]

  • fun map. 好き
  1. 00:38:764 (197) - change d?
    Unify vocal with d. 00:38:431 (195,197,199) -
    At the same time I think that it is good to get a drum sound.

  2. 00:56:431 (293,294,295,296,297,298) - Replace (dkd-kdk)
    Following the high sound( 00:57:097 (298) - ) while giving unity.

  3. 01:10:653 (370,371,372,373,374,375) - dkd-kdk?
    ^same as 01:11:320 (375) -
[INNER ONI]
  • look good.
  1. 00:15:653 (23,25,27) - d
    Why is not d?

  2. 00:47:653 (13,15,17) - d
    ^same as

  3. 00:58:542 (4) - move to 00:58:764 -
    I thought that such a rhythm pattern is suitable.01:05:431 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
    It can also maintain consistency.
  4. 01:13:542 (9) - change d
    By making it d, it is easier to understand the vocal height.

that's all.
I would be pleased if it will be of any help. :3

good luck for Ranked~! ></
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

yahello~ thanks M4M~
M4M from your queue :3

[Nardo's ONI]

  • fun map. 好き
  1. 00:38:764 (197) - change d?
    Unify vocal with d. 00:38:431 (195,197,199) -
    At the same time I think that it is good to get a drum sound. I would prefer keeping it as k to contrast with 00:35:209 -

  2. 00:56:431 (293,294,295,296,297,298) - Replace (dkd-kdk)
    Following the high sound( 00:57:097 (298) - ) while giving unity. Hmm... Retained to follow the background trumpet.

  3. 01:10:653 (370,371,372,373,374,375) - dkd-kdk?
    ^same as 01:11:320 (375) - same as ^
that's all.
I would be pleased if it will be of any help. :3

good luck for Ranked~! ></
Thanks for your mod and comment yzrin~ :)

@Skylish: You may need to update tags as you replaced KwaN's Futsuu.
_handholding
3,109 posts
Joined April 2014
_handholding

Kantan
  1. 00:13:542 (18,20) - add finishes on these because there is a finish on 00:17:097 (1)
  2. nice kiai

ily4
  1. 00:17:097 (56) - missing finish? You have them on 00:13:653 (44,50) so it feels like one should be here as well
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Sylphi
osu! Alumni
3,300 posts
Joined February 2012
Sylphi
M4M ( . _.)

[General]
  1. Disable Widescreen Support on Muzukashii, Chaoz's Oni and Inner Oni.
  2. Please check the spread between all difficulty. Especially, the spread issue between Muzukashii and whatever Oni difficulties, It has to adjust one of Oni difficulties. if not, it might become to the result nobody wants.
[KANTAN]
  1. 00:11:320 (15,16) - Swap these? this closer feeling to 00:11:320 (15,16) and 00:07:764 (10,11), in my opinion.
  2. 01:03:986 (11) - Consider about who plays this difficulty. for beginners, this might be difficult to catch the rhythm.
  3. 01:11:764 (12) - Remove for consistency with 00:57:097? I think, the difference between those is only the pitch of vocals.
[FUTSUU]
  1. from 00:13:542 to 01:21:097, except a spinner, there is no enough spacing to give the player the time to prepare actually. It might need to remove some patterns for avoiding problems.
    1. 00:22:986 (2) - 00:23:542 (4) - 00:30:097 (2) - 00:31:875 (2) - Maybe the patterns should be adjusted, but It can be removed.
    2. 00:44:209 (19) - for the part 00:45:542.
    3. 01:03:653 (2,3,4) - in kiai time, nothing for it. so at least, these should be adjusted, in my opinion.
  2. 00:14:653 (26) - 00:16:431 (31) - Seems high dense compared to Kantan. What about removing these?
  3. 00:20:209 (10) - 00:23:986 (6) - 00:27:321 (10) - 00:30:098 (2) - 00:31:875 (2) - 00:32:875 (6) - There is rather a gap between Kantan and Futsuu. Removing these might help for the spread.
  4. 00:27:321 (10,11) - Swap these for consistency.
  5. 00:35:097 (7,8) - kd k would be more fit vocals pitch, in my opinion.
  6. 00:41:764 (13) - Remove for emphasizing 00:41:986 (14,15,16)? I think, it would be not bad choice.
  7. 00:46:653 (25) - 00:46:653 (25) - Same as 00:14:653.
  8. 00:57:764 (24) - 01:11:986 (24) - In my opinion, It seems to be better to remove this for the flow.
[ily4's MUZUKASHII]
  1. 00:30:542 (107) - What about removing this? in overall, it may be not bad choice.
  2. 00:39:986 (142) - Remove for consistency.
  3. 00:56:875 (202) - Considering the pattern of 01:10:431, It might be better moving to 00:56:431.
  4. 01:04:764 (233) - What about removing for emphasizing 01:04:653 (232)?
[Nardo's ONI]
  1. 00:14:875 (69,70) - Swap these? There is no difference actually, but In my opinion, It would be more natural for the flow.
  2. 01:02:209 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331) - What about using a rhythm pattern like as oooo_oo_o? I felt like that current thing is a bit awkward.
[Chaoz's ONI]
  1. 00:43:764 (237) - Add finish to follow cymbal sounds like as 00:42:653?
  2. 01:13:986 (423) - Unnecessary finisher. there is nothing to emphasize enough.
  3. 01:23:764 (479) - k for consistency with around patterns.
[RHAPSODY INNER ONI]
  1. 00:56:209 (30,31,32,33,34) - How about applying reverse section? I think, it would be more natural for overall.
<3
iloveyou4ever
825 posts
Joined September 2014
iloveyou4ever

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

yahello~ thanks M4M~
M4M from your queue :3

[General]
  1. Chaoz's ONI, ily4's MUZU, INNER ONI
    please remove check Widescreen Support.
    ok!

    [ily4's Muzukahsii]


    • look good. nice vocal map. :3
    1. 00:35:653 (126) - move to 00:35:542 -
    2. 00:35:764 (127) - delete

      If you follow vocal you will hear this form the clearest.

    3. 00:39:209 (138) - move to 00:39:097 -
    4. 00:39:320 (139) - delete

      ^same as
      I don't want n nnnnn n nnnnn patterns keep repeating,so I put doublet to avoid it
    5. 00:53:764 (190) - delete

      Useless?
      A good flow is born by erasing.

    6. 01:00:875 (218) - delete

      ^same as

    7. 01:07:986 (245) - delete

      ^same as
      both three ok!
    8. 01:15:097 (275) - move to 01:15:542 - and change k?
      I don't want to connect two different music parts here :c

      You can hear it.
      However, because it is adjacent to big, I will not force it.

Kisses wrote:

ily4
  1. 00:17:097 (56) - missing finish? You have them on 00:13:653 (44,50) so it feels like one should be here as well beat here is soft and not strong enough to put finisher :3
that's all.
I would be pleased if it will be of any help. :3
good luck for Ranked~! ></

Sylphi wrote:

M4M ( . _.)

[ily4's MUZUKASHII]
  1. 00:30:542 (107) - What about removing this? in overall, it may be not bad choice.
    deleted it temporarily
  2. 00:39:986 (142) - Remove for consistency. But I want to show drum sound here.
  3. 00:56:875 (202) - Considering the pattern of 01:10:431, It might be better moving to 00:56:431. change to patterns like in 01:10:431-
  4. 01:04:764 (233) - What about removing for emphasizing 01:04:653 (232)? sure!
<3
Thank you all of you for modding <33333

muzu
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Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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TitleUnicode:青空のラプソディ(TV size)
Artist:fhana
ArtistUnicode:fhána
Creator:Skylish
Version:ily4's MUZUKASHII
Source:小林さんちのメイドラゴン
Tags:kobayashi san chi no maidragon aozora no opening op anime maid dragon taiko IamKwaN Nardoxyribonucleic Chaoslitz iloveyou4ever
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Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic

Sylphi wrote:

M4M ( . _.)

[Nardo's ONI]
  1. 00:14:875 (69,70) - Swap these? There is no difference actually, but In my opinion, It would be more natural for the flow. There is an obvious decrease in pitch across the notes, so k d would fit well imo.
  2. 01:02:209 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331) - What about using a rhythm pattern like as oooo_oo_o? I felt like that current thing is a bit awkward. I think both constellations would work while the current one could provide greater pattern variety in the kiai since doublets and quadruplets are easily available.
<3
Thanks for the mod though~ :)
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
Joined November 2013
Chaoslitz

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

[Chaoz's ONI]
  1. 00:00:875 (2) - change d there is pitch increase so I used k
    I can not see any difference in vocal.
    The one who unified it with d will stand out the next K

  2. 00:07:986 (36) - change d


    00:12:653 - ~00:42:653 -
    There is no space.
    Although it may be only me, I feel that playability as Oni is greatly impaired.
    And since there are more notes than Inner, it looks unstable in appearance. removed some notes to leave spaces

Sylphi wrote:

[Chaoz's ONI]
  1. 00:43:764 (237) - Add finish to follow cymbal sounds like as 00:42:653? doesnt sounds good for me when both 00:42:653 (233) and 00:43:764 (237) are added finishes, epsecially when 00:43:764 (237) - has no vocal
  2. 01:13:986 (423) - Unnecessary finisher. there is nothing to emphasize enough. fixed
  3. 01:23:764 (479) - k for consistency with around patterns. fixed
Thanks for mod~

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Skylish
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Skylish

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

yahello~ thanks M4M~
M4M from your queue :3

[General]
  1. Chaoz's ONI, ily4's MUZU, INNER ONI
    please remove check Widescreen Support.

    > Removed now, though they are not considered as a thing at all.

  2. Is the note that is placed before the first red line is Rankeble?
    If it is anxious element, you may want to change offset to "-679".

    > yes it is rankable
[KANTAN]
  1. 00:04:209 (5,6) - ctrl+g?

    I think that there is not so much discomfort even if I change it.
    In order to achieve consistency, I thought that making this part a kdk would make a pattern.

    00:01:098 (1) - and 00:08:209 (11) -

    00:04:653 (6) - and 00:11:764 (16) -

    > yup, fix it in Futsuu as well.

  2. 00:57:097 (11) - delete
    Perhaps you picked up the voice.
    But this Kantan seems to have less breaks.
    Therefore, by taking only the main vocal, there are merits that you can take more easy-to-understand rhythms and breaks. :3

    > 00:57:542 - remove this note instead to make the pattern be easier.

  3. 01:04:653 (12) - delete
    ^same as

    > yes this is so awkward, removed.

  4. 01:11:320 (11,12) - delete
    ^same as

    > do the same change at 00:57:542 -
[FUTSUU]
  1. 00:04:209 (6,7) - ctrl+g?
    same Kantan><

    > fixed.

    -------------------------------------------------------
  2. 00:20:431 (11) - delete
  3. 00:23:986 (6) - delete
  4. 00:27:543 (11) - delete
  5. 00:53:986 (11,12) - delete or 00:53:986 (11) - only del
  6. 00:57:320 (22,23) - delete
  7. 01:01:097 (11,12) - delete or 01:01:097 (11) - only del
  8. 01:04:320 (4) - delete
  9. 01:08:208 (11,12) - delete or 01:08:208 (11) - only del
  10. 01:11:542 (22,23) - delete


    I wrote without thinking about spread,
    It seems to be high density because color change is intense.
    As I wrote, you could make it easier to do by cutting a note a little or making it a monotone color like dd or kk.

    --------------------------------------------------------


[INNER ONI]
  • look good.
  1. 00:15:653 (23,25,27) - d
    Why is not d?

    > because these notes have higher pitches than the previous one, they are kat. Change 00:15:320 - / 00:47:320 - to k instead

  2. 00:47:653 (13,15,17) - d
    ^same as

    > same reply

  3. 00:58:542 (4) - move to 00:58:764 -
    I thought that such a rhythm pattern is suitable.01:05:431 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
    It can also maintain consistency.

    > trumpet sound hits at 00:58:542 - , k is put.
  4. 01:13:542 (9) - change d
    By making it d, it is easier to understand the vocal height.

    > yes I agree that. kat is spammed too much ;w; .

that's all.
I would be pleased if it will be of any help. :3

good luck for Ranked~! ></

Sylphi wrote:

M4M ( . _.)

[General]
  1. Disable Widescreen Support on Muzukashii, Chaoz's Oni and Inner Oni.

    > done
  2. Please check the spread between all difficulty. Especially, the spread issue between Muzukashii and whatever Oni difficulties, It has to adjust one of Oni difficulties. if not, it might become to the result nobody wants.

    > now the problem exists across F-M-O due to different mapping channels and foci in the respective difficulties. Imo Muzukashii between Oni is still acceptable,
    but not imo, Muzukashii and one of the Oni should be nerfed a bit to create a better spread.
[KANTAN]
  1. 00:11:320 (15,16) - Swap these? this closer feeling to 00:11:320 (15,16) and 00:07:764 (10,11), in my opinion.

    > fixed
  2. 01:03:986 (11) - Consider about who plays this difficulty. for beginners, this might be difficult to catch the rhythm.

    > removed, empty a whole bar for rest
  3. 01:11:764 (12) - Remove for consistency with 00:57:097? I think, the difference between those is only the pitch of vocals.

    > removed when fixing Futsuu
[FUTSUU]
  1. from 00:13:542 to 01:21:097, except a spinner, there is no enough spacing to give the player the time to prepare actually. It might need to remove some patterns for avoiding problems.
    1. 00:22:986 (2) - 00:23:542 (4) - 00:30:097 (2) - 00:31:875 (2) - Maybe the patterns should be adjusted, but It can be removed.
    2. 00:44:209 (19) - for the part 00:45:542.
    3. 01:03:653 (2,3,4) - in kiai time, nothing for it. so at least, these should be adjusted, in my opinion.
  2. 00:14:653 (26) - 00:16:431 (31) - Seems high dense compared to Kantan. What about removing these?
  3. 00:20:209 (10) - 00:23:986 (6) - 00:27:321 (10) - 00:30:098 (2) - 00:31:875 (2) - 00:32:875 (6) - There is rather a gap between Kantan and Futsuu. Removing these might help for the spread.
  4. 00:27:321 (10,11) - Swap these for consistency.
  5. 00:35:097 (7,8) - kd k would be more fit vocals pitch, in my opinion.
  6. 00:41:764 (13) - Remove for emphasizing 00:41:986 (14,15,16)? I think, it would be not bad choice.
  7. 00:46:653 (25) - 00:46:653 (25) - Same as 00:14:653.
  8. 00:57:764 (24) - 01:11:986 (24) - In my opinion, It seems to be better to remove this for the flow.

[RHAPSODY INNER ONI]
  1. 00:56:209 (30,31,32,33,34) - How about applying reverse section? I think, it would be more natural for overall.
> Re-arrange the patterns here by alternating the order of triplets and 5-plets.
<3
I did a lot of amendments in Futsuu, basically they are nerfs and nerfs. I take your mods for Futsuu as a considertation, and hence not being able to answer them one by one. Sylphi's suggestion is pretty nice in Futsuu and almost all is accepted.

Thanks for your reply :D

> Fix tag issue

> Updated all difficulties.

> Re-snap all notes in all difficulties since I spot out some 1 ms errors.
xtrem3x
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General:

Don = d
Kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K


> Nardo's Oni (3.6) and Rhapsody Inner (3.59) ... ?????

Kantan

  • 00:22:431 - Remove finish --> is a little questionable this part, but is better to give an emphasis at the end and start a sequence with only 2 big notes.
    00:29:542 (9,11) - Same


Futsuu

  • 00:17:764 - this rhythm is a bit rare, can be this pattern.
    > 00:17:542 - note (more possible d)
    > 00:17:564 - Move this note to 00:17:875- --> because in this part I think you follow the BG sound, but in the next (00:19:320- ) you follow the vocal, applies in next similar patterns (00:21:320- , 00:24:986- , 00:28:431- )


    01:13:986 (5,6) - ctrl+g --> for high vocal pitch.

    01:20:097 (8,9) - ctrl+g --> here the consistency broke a bit.


Muzu4ever

  • 00:51:209 (180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188) - d k d d k d d k k
    00:55:653 (196,197,198) - d d k
    01:06:875 (237,238) - ctrl+g
    01:10:209 (250,251) - ctrl+g --> with these changes the vocal is followed more adequately.

    01:27:986 (319,320) - Delete --> just follow the vocal.


ChaozOni


  • 00:00:653 (1,2,3,4,5) - d d K d k --> chu chu YEAH!

    00:03:097 - Change this note to d --> is true, has high sound, but for some reason opaque the next 2 blue notes.

    00:08:653 - Change to k --> same as 00:00:653-
    00:12:209 - same

    00:23:986 - Change to k --> it's a bit inappropriate to have a small and a big note of the same color in this way, it takes emphasis from the big note.

    00:50:431 (275,276,277,278,279) - change for kkkkD --> is like a typical pattern to start kiai time with a big note.


DNA's Oni

  • GOOD ...


Rhapsody


  • 00:18:764 (9,10) - ctr+g --> is the only part that I have noticed something fanciful, because the rest of the pattern follows high sounds according to the vocal.

    00:50:431 (11,12,13,1) - change for kkkkD --> is nessesary more density in this part.

    00:53:764 - Add d note --> more density (and to raise the SR slightly).

    00:57:653 - Add k note
    00:57:764 - Change this note to d --> first change is for density, this second change is for bass sound.

    01:11:875 (43,44) - ctrl+g --> same ^

    01:18:764 - Add d note
    01:18:986 - add k note --> more density and more SR.

    >> well, is hard obtain more SR in this diff unless you use cut patterns or 1/3 type notes.
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