Hey Zig~ here my m4m.
- d=Don
D=Big Don
k=Katsu
K=Big Katsu
- Ups, lot of notes aren't snapped, don't forget to resnap them.
- 01:09:374 - add a k here? fits good there with the background imo.
- 01:16:207 - the stream vocal + instrumental fits really nice, but here the vocals sounds a bit different, how about make from 01:16:207 - to 01:17:541 - kdddkkddkdddkkddk ?
- 01:48:207 - to 01:49:541 - , same as ^?
- 02:11:791 - change this note to d and 02:11:874 - to k? (ddk) you usually follow 02:11:874 - with k but not here, also, if ddk it doesn't sounds good for you, you can try kdk too.
- 04:18:452 - change this note to k and 04:18:619 - to d for consistency with 04:13:119 - ?
- 04:45:125 - i don't know if this is intentional, but you can add a k here and make a kkkkddk.
- 04:56:125 - here it sounds stronger than in the other sections, so how about add a d here?
- 05:01:875 - as i suggested before, change 05:01:875 - to d and 05:01:959 - to k? so it follows better the instrumental.
- 05:18:958 - from here to 05:20:292 - , same as 01:16:207 - ?
- 05:29:625 - from here to 05:30:958 - , same as ^?
- 05:33:292 - change to k like you have in 01:19:874 - for consistency?