1. Hornet Hole (1,21 stars, 72 notes)
2. Parrot Chute Panic (4,85 stars, 197 notes)
3. Rambi Rumble (3,79 stars, 138 notes)

Blue Dragon wrote:

woosh

Hornet Hole
00:25:265 (4,1,2,3) - NO. PLEASE. This doesn't make sense. I highly suggest you to remove it. actually I had misplaced them >_<
00:48:465 (1) - Start 1/2 earlier? Sounds better IMO k
01:06:065 (1,1) - The spinner isn't very long, so this note is very hard to hit because it's far away from the center and comes right after the spinner. drawn closer to the center, I hope it fixes

Rambi Rumble
01:05:665 (4,5,6) - 1 grid down? [nazi >.>] oups, okay

Parrot Chute Panic
Nothing here.


Pretty sleepy, so not modding very right.
Star.

DJPop wrote:

- Hornet Hole -
01:15:865 (4,1,2) - should be sliders, because they're not matched to the melody Turned (1,2) into a slider

- Rambi Rumble -
Fine. yay

- Parrot Chute Panic -
00:20:565 - add note nope
00:22:165 - ^ same
00:23:765 - ^ same
00:23:965 (1) - delete listen more carefully to the music
00:25:365 - add note nope
00:25:565 (1,2,3) - move 1/4 right oups, fixed, thanks
00:26:965 - add note nope


+Star

James2250 wrote:

For a 1 minute map you don't really need the break Break is here to establish a gap between the introduction (the boring pattern time) and when the song actually starts :p
Remove countdown on every difficulty (doesn't fit at all) I AM ASHAMED AAAAAAAAA
I would say go steal the combo bursts from my map but I only have donkey kong and diddy kong so you would have to find Dixie
(need sb of bee's flying across the screen, too bad I fail at sbing ) I don't really like forcing skin elements other than hitsounds on people
I don't like any of the difficulties having a note at 00:27:265 :(

Hornet Hole:
00:48:265 (1) - start at 00:48:065 k
01:15:865 (4,5,6) - sounds odd in this difficulty (sounds ok in the others) maybe remap it somehow? yeah, you're right remapped a bit

Rambi Rumble:
Why the 3 second lead-in? oups, mistake
00:38:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is used too many times for my liking, switch it up more? I tried to find other patterns, but I couldn't find any that matches what I wanted to do -_-
Map looks good

Parrot Chute Panic:
01:04:065 (10) - almost hidden repeat changed

Good job
*star*

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
Tags: "the best game ost ever" <- should that really be in the tags? It's in the tags of the other ranked DKC2 songs I mapped
128 kbps? Could you maybe find a better mp3 if you can? Would be totally awesome. I tried and couldn't find any ;_;
Parrot_Chute_Panic.png is rather small and looks really stretched. Maybe find a better BG for this IMO. The background needs to be a screenshot from the level... and I couldn't find anything better :/

Hornet Hole:
01:06:065 (1) - such a rather short spinner for the easiest diff? IMO beginners would be confused changed
01:16:865 (7) - shorten by 1/2 Nah, it has this length on purpose
01:17:465 - add a note if you do the above one

Rambi Rumble:
The low hitsounds in the beginnig really bother me. In the easier diff they weren't so problematic because you could still hear the sliderslide and the tick most of the time but here there are no sliders at all, and it's easy to get out of rythm if you can't hear any sounds.
Just saying. okay, raised the sounds
00:39:265 (3) - stack that with (6) by disabling grid snap. k
00:41:265 (7) - stack with (4) done
00:44:465 (7) - ^ done
00:47:665 (7) - stack it under the sliderend done
00:48:865 (3) - and last but not least stack this with (6) done

Parrot Chute Panic:
Maybe raise the hitsounds of this beginning a bit too, but this one already sounds better done
Otherwise fine, though a bit repetetive in the beginning. I know :/

Overall nice map^^ Thanks

Blazevoir wrote:

Ah, childhood memories Anyway,

[General]
* I agree with James. I don't really like the breaks That's three people, I will map something then.
* Some of the inherited timing sections aren't on ticks, but I guess they're not a major issue. The offset was changed while I was still mapping, but it doesn't matter much except for kiai times. And there's no kiai time here so it doesn't matter much~

[Hornet Hole]
* 00:48:065 (1) - Shouldn't this end on 00:51:265 instead? (Move the inherited timing section too if you decide to do this.) Done.

[Rambi Rumble]
Fine~

[Parot Chute Panic]
Also fine~

Sorry I couldn't really find anything... No kudosu for this post. ★~

Xgor wrote:

[General]
It would be neat if you had some kind of custom hitsound to this.
Most of the song it's only 2 sounds and when the other default sounds dosn't work here it would be neat with some kind of hitsounds like in Hot-Head Bop
I find the hitsounds I used neat... the normal clap goes well with the noisy drum, and the soft whistles and normals match pretty well the rest.

[Hornet Hole]
Not found of 1/2s in a easy but it worked pretty good here.

[Rambi Rumble]
Good.

[Parrot Chute Panic]

00:12:065 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - It feels kinda wrong that this part is easier then the part on Rambi Rumble as that one has 1/2 circles at the start Changed on Rambi Rumble.
00:32:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - I understand what you are trying to do here but i feel that a bit higher spacing on everything would be better here (Like 0,7-0,8x) Gonna try
01:03:265 (8,9,10) - Bad stacking :/ Unstacked.
01:20:565 (1) - (Suggestion) Make this 1/2 shorter, add a finish and add a circle when this ended before I don't like it, the finish souds weird there
01:23:765 (1) - ^ same

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*star*

jericho2442 wrote:

Hornet Hole

at the start of this song your hitsound volume is abit TOO low, rather then both sounding good together, the music is completely overpowering your hitsounds fixed

00:45:265 (1) - to flow to the music better this needs to end on 00:48:065 - it suits ending on the high tone better, then start the next spinner on the following red tick

(suggestion) 00:52:065 (1,2,3,4) - this looks REALLY odd, dunno it just feeling like (4) is falling to (1) in a very ugly way, maybe like this insted? Fixed but not your way :/
01:13:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - tbh i feel for a easy the flow of this pattern work better if you remove (4) , its fine as it is i guess, but it feels abit too much like a normal pattern atm :/ okay

Rambi Rumble
00:12:865 (1,2,3) - spacing, explained in irc fixed
00:14:465 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
00:30:465 (4) - newcombo here, your breaking the "one loop" pattern you have doing all the way upto here oups
01:01:265 (1,2,3,4) - .......everynote in this pattern has the same timing but a different spacing, please say this was a mistake :/ This is just me sucking at remapping, fixed
01:07:265 (1,2,3,4,5) - only small but look at the spacing of (1,2,3) compared to (3,4,5) fixed

Parrot Chute Panic
is there a consistant pattern to the constant jumps at the start of this map? ?

00:38:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why here have you made the spacing smaller to overlap, when ALL of the map before it has this same kinda timing and feel yet the spacing does not over lap, as it is it kinda breaks the flow and looks wrong, i do advise to give this the same spacing as the combos before it, also the same for these times once again it's me sucking at remapping
00:41:665
00:43:065

01:09:065 (1) - remove this newcombo, your breaking the pattern you are following on the combo before this, or you could make the combo before it like this one, your choice k

this map seems to have a crisis on what spacing it wants as its main spacing xD The different spacings are supposed to represent the different phases in the song... I guess it failed.

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good maps worth a star, but also some real odd spacing in the Rambi diff, i do really advise you to go through that whole map again and make sure everything fully makes sence and flows perfect Done, since it was actually a mistake.

most is rankable, but with more time spent it could become better It can be better for sure but I'm not sure I can make it better.