Nedsing wrote:

You should decrease the HP around 7 Done! I prefer it with 7, not having insta-death when messing up a stream lol - I might fiddle around with slightly higher, but 7 plays nicer than 8 I think
00:29:416 (1,2,3,4,5) - There are more sounds between the circles Noted, fixed!
00:42:082 (9) - New combo on 9 Fixed all of these, thanks!
00:55:082 (9) - ^
01:30:082 (9) - ^
02:23:416 (9,1) - Remove the new combo and set it on the 9 instead Done!
05:36:416 - I personally think you should continue place a few circles here or place spinner Yeah, I toned down the slider speed from this point a little bit and placed some circles which works out nicely

I couldn't find anything more! This map is fantastic and I would like to see it ranked! GOOD JOB!

Emilia wrote:

mazzerin wannabe on 180 beepee em Tru

[weebname]

1. 00:21:416 (1) - in this whole section you mapped 5 note stream as 3 note wh Y?? do not skip over sounds that are BLATANTLy obvious imo Converted these all to 5s. I held these as triples because I didn't want for a sharp difficulty spike which was more intense than the chorus,
   though, as per the rest of your advice I've no issue with this now.
2. 00:32:082 (1) - feels very weird playing the map against a very soft instrument in this entire kiai instead of the rather stronger drums? maybe just stream the whole thing i dont think anyone will care now that its 2017 Made the chorus sections a lot more streamy but retained some of the previous rhythm - happier with it this way tbh
3. 00:55:416 (5) - just make this a stream Done
4. 01:05:416 (1,2,3) - you probably have mapped some empty triplets along the way. as u can hear theres nothing in the music here that supports triplet (repeated) Addressed these and missed triplets plus a few added streams to the best of my ability
5. 01:05:832 - you probably have missed some actual triplets along the way. as u can hear theres something that indicates a triplet should be mapped here (repeated) As above
6. 01:06:749 (1,1,1,2,1,2) - no harm making some of these stream I've tried putting streams into these combos in various ways but they always felt a little out of place since, at least to me, the sounds here are a little subdued
7. 01:26:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no triplet here Un-tripleted.
8. 01:29:499 (2) - nothing here Gotcha. Deleted.
9. 01:31:832 - something here etc..... Done
10. 04:52:416 (2,2) - theres nothing here Noted. Didn't feel happy not having something for these two points though, so replaced these two with sliders with silent ends which feels better.
    
    i think what you have is enough for insane diff, so if you dont wanna smack on more streams its fine. but the occasional wrong stream mapped is kinda the main crux. your map is mostly rankable tho so it should get there with enough effort put into getting mods Nah it's cool - having more streams around the map is nice and I feel fits a lot better - having hit Extra territory with these I'm not too fussed about avoiding adding difficulty. Thank you!

gl

1. 00:08:082 (3) - Consider making it shorter, ending on a white tick. I would suggest adding a hitcircle next, to transition into the next slider. Like here:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:23:582 (5,6) - Maybe recude spacing a bit between these 2? Your call
3. 02:15:249 (7) - Slider seems too slow for this part. A triangle pattern of single hitcircles would suit this part of the song better
4. 03:00:082 (4) - Slider doesn't match the sound. The sound starts 1/8th of a beat on the right from the current position of the sliderhead. Ends on the correct white tick though
5. 03:37:416 (1) - Reverse this once because the player expects this slider to be equal to 03:34:749 (1)
6. 03:40:082 (1) - Same with this one. Although you can just use the pattern that's already there, at 03:34:749 (1) to set the same rhythm.
7. 04:49:416 (3,4,5,6,7) - Ctrl + J. So they lead into 04:50:082 (1), and also because 04:47:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) has one-directional flow. More of a suggestion than an important needed change.

LimePixel wrote:

Hi!
NM request from mod queue

Kamikakushi

1. 00:08:082 (3) - Consider making it shorter, ending on a white tick. I would suggest adding a hitcircle next, to transition into the next slider. Like here:
   
   SPOILER

   
   I agree, the first slider plays better a little shorter - unfortunately I'm not too sure on the circle in between which feels a bit jarring at least to me so I've left that out
2. 01:23:582 (5,6) - Maybe recude spacing a bit between these 2? Your call Done - changed the angle between 4,5 to match 2,3 which cuts it down a little bit
3. 02:15:249 (7) - Slider seems too slow for this part. A triangle pattern of single hitcircles would suit this part of the song betterI've tried this with a few variations on spacing and hitsounding but I can't help but find it somewhat awkward to play so, at least for now, I'll keep this as is. Sorry!
4. 03:00:082 (4) - Slider doesn't match the sound. The sound starts 1/8th of a beat on the right from the current position of the sliderhead. Ends on the correct white tick though Ah I see, nice spot! Fixed
5. 03:37:416 (1) - Reverse this once because the player expects this slider to be equal to 03:34:749 (1)Done - I wanted to make the difficulty of this section escalate a bit through having those jumps but seeing your feedback instead changed the spacing after the reverse sliders. Thanks!
6. 03:40:082 (1) - Same with this one. Although you can just use the pattern that's already there, at 03:34:749 (1) to set the same rhythm.Done
7. 04:49:416 (3,4,5,6,7) - Ctrl + J. So they lead into 04:50:082 (1), and also because 04:47:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) has one-directional flow. More of a suggestion than an important needed change. Simple but nice, I like it! Changed

Had a lot of fun while playing this! Hope this helps, good luck

MBmasher wrote:

my mod queue

Kamikakushi

02:06:749 (4,1) - spacing could be larger Done
02:09:416 (4,1) - ^ Done
02:58:749 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These triples should be 5 note bursts, for 03:00:124 (4) - you can just simplify the rhythm and make it start on the downbeat. Gotchu, thanks!
04:10:749 (1) - don't you think adding a long spinner here doesn't fit the music, just map this part Yeah I had a mod mention this previously -
I've mapped out this section focusing on the repetition while also increasing the intensity part way through to reflect the pitch of the vocals. Of course it's very much subject to change from here on out.
shouldn't kiai end at 04:42:749Yeah I'd been debating this with myself for a while - adjusted both this and the second chorus section to this.

Nice map, good luck!

kookoo11 wrote:

from my nm queue

someweirdwordidontunderstandlol

• 00:07:749 (2) - ugly stack? if you were trying to only stack 00:08:082 (3) - , then maybe consider a different strategy

Done -Added a small amount of spacing in to remedy this

• 00:23:916 (4,2,3) - keep this in a straight line, it's off by quite a bit

Fixed

• 00:24:416 (3,3) - overlap, maybe move 00:25:082 (1,2,3,4,5) - more to the top right

Done, sort of. I didn't want to move this too far so instead I placed 00:25:082 (1) over 00:23:916 (4)

• 00:29:416 (1) - remove nc and put nc 00:29:916 (4) -

Done!

• 00:30:749 (1) - feels out of place, maybe just me tho ;/, it loses its calm-ness and it transitions immediately from hard to soft to immediately hard again,
  maybe map to the vocals with circles as a transition instead

To me the spinner feels suitable for this part so I don't think I'll change this for now - however if future feedback brings up the same issue I'll revisit it.

• 00:40:916 (7) - weird overlap

Slightly tweaked this and the following stream

• 00:53:416 (1,2) - these two sliders are different angles, if you wanted them different, then make it more noticeable

Argh thank you for pointing this out -that's just inconsistency on my part during tweaking this bit - thanks

• 01:03:666 (6) - ds inconsistent, maybe for the previous ones as well, but also it looks kinda off, maybe just adjusting the ds will help

I took a look at this and readjusted accordingly

• 01:25:416 (1) - not stacked properly, you can place it directly on top of 01:24:749 (5) -

Re-stacked properly

• 01:28:749 (4,6) - touching

Rearranged this slightly, further on from the slider

• 01:31:749 (4,5,6) - stack on 01:30:749 (1) -

Done

• 02:02:666 (8) - ds inconsistent

Done

• 02:08:416 (3) - stack this or move this more to the bottom right

Reworked this whole combo since movement felt a bit awkward, made sure it was better stacked than previously

• 02:24:082 (1) - i think this should start 02:24:249 - and the gap should be filled with 2 notes onto the stream

Yeah I can see where you're coming from, done

• 02:40:082 (1) - i dont think this is allowed, just move the head a little to the left so people can distinguish the direction

Ah, gotcha, changed it slightly

• 03:02:749 (1) - 's tail not stacked properly on 03:01:916 (4) - 's tail

Done

• 03:41:416 (1) - move this more to the left

Done

• 03:44:082 (13) - nc

• 04:56:082 (1,1) - you're losing sound during the sliders; same 05:01:416 (1,1) - ,05:06:082 (2,1) - , 05:17:416 (1,1) - ,etc.

I see what you mean - I'll have a bit of an overhaul on this section in the coming week once my exams have finished.

• 05:12:082 (4) - fix blanket and also ^^ ;/

• 05:36:749 (2) - move this more to the top-right

Done

pretty yelly song
gl!

Nightsky wrote:

From my modding queue, nice song btw.

Kamikakushi

- 01:25:916 (2) - Maybe place this note somewhere else since you only used this note placement once, feels random. Copied and Ctrl G'd the previous instance of the same rhythm and tinkered a bit with the previous notes for flow
- 02:24:166 (10) - This note doesn't really fit the stream, consider deleting it and placing the spinner there instead. Ouch, I've changed my skin to one with more distinct hitsounds since I last edited here and it stuck out baaad, fixed
- 02:34:749 - You could add a final note here. Done
- 02:57:416 (1,2,3) - Note placement feels random too, try placing them in a triangle shape or placing the third note on top of the first. Triangled and moved them on top the repeat slider just before
- 03:16:082 (1) - Remove NC
- 03:16:748 (3) - NC I think I agree with these two, so implemented and done the same to previous verses Still not 100% certain so there is a possibility of reverting but I'd say unlikely
- 03:50:249 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can place these stacks further away from the previous ones.
- 03:52:916 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
- 03:55:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
- 03:58:249 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Increased the spacing in the middle of each combo
- 04:48:082 (4) - NC Not sure whether I feel a new combo is needed here - that's not to say, however, I won't bear this in mind going forward. If anyone else makes a similar suggestion I'll come back to it
- 04:49:416 (3) - ^
- 04:50:749 (3) - ^
- 05:46:416 (4) - Ctrl+g and placing it a bit further away? Gotchu fam

Other than that nothing much I can spot. Very nice map!
Good luck!

Pandano wrote:

Hi o/ from my queue

Metadata & General

1. I don't think you need to add "180 bpm" to the tags Roger
2. Maybe decrease the HP drain down to 6 - 6.5? 7 is a bit too high Dropped to 6.5
3. Probably reduce the OD beneath 8 too. There are some spinners with quite short duration and players need like 350+ RPM to achieve 300 Not sure on this one, I've had this map on 7.5 before but a few friends who playtested agreed OD 8 was more appropriate - I've not had much trouble with spinners myself, so I'll keep as is for now, though I'll bear your feedback in mind!
4. Are you sure you've used the Ctrl + Shift + F function properly? It seems like some of your streams were made freehand. Make a perfect curve slider and convert it into stream using the above command. It will look nicer. I can't specifically pick out where the streams don't appear nice, it's you who decides. Well, there's something I didn't know existed. Thanks! Redid the majority of the streams throughout the map

Too much yell lol

1. Nice slider arts right the beginning :3
2. There are no distinct changes in sound, instrument, speed and pitch around 00:21:416 to 00:28:582 . So I suggest add NC every 5 notes (If you're too lazy, here are the time points where you need to NC: 00:21:916 - 00:22:916 - 00:24:582 - 00:25:582 - 00:27:249 - 00:28:249 ) Done
3. 00:28:249 - It stays quite near the (3) before and spaces out like 1/2 beat. Suggest arranging like so: Done
4. 00:29:416 - Why a reverse slider here? Should there be 3 notes? I had a reverse slider here to match the timing of previous reverse sliders - however I ended up reworking the entire end section of this which now has three notes
5. The whole first kiai: Usually I'm not used to map streams much but let's just assume you followed the beat in the background rather than the main instrument. It's understandable that it's a metal song so why not lol. But I think there are still some parts you need to consider like 00:38:749 where 12 notes are placed over representable sounds. This is just my opinion. While tweaking streams I reworked these sections, cheers
6. 00:40:082 (1,2,3,4,5) - They are placed quite far away Had to completely change their position while reworking streams, so fixed
7. 00:53:916 - You might wanna let this space out further. It spaces like 1/1 beat Changed these to five note sliders where the spacing is more appropriate
8. 01:01:582 (2,3,4) - Either go with the flow or opposite the flow: Edited for more circular flow
9. 01:24:749 (5,6) - Try to arrange them like so: Done
10. 01:31:249 - Fix blanket with (1)'s slider head Done
11. 01:32:082 (1,2,3,4) - Fix this section like so: (to avoid (2) and (4) overlapping and (1) blanketing (4) properly) Done
12. 01:37:749 - Way too far from (1) and already slightly overlaps (4). Redo [(4) blankets (3); (2) evenly spaces (1) and (4) and stays on (8) which is coming up shortly afterwards]: Done
13. 02:13:916 - Blanket (1)'s slider head Done
14. 02:24:082 - NC Done
15. 02:40:082 - (Just an aesthetic problem lol) Better curve: Can't disagree - changed
16. 02:56:082 - Strong beat. I think there should be 3 circles here. But their spacing should be smaller than 3 circles after that Done
17. 03:30:082 - Could be further: Done
18. The third kiai: Why did you choose to place 1/2 sliders here whereas, imo, being the hard part of the song? I felt this section was fine difficulty wise with the jumps and streams but decided to rework it entirely and made it much more streamy and fast, hopefully should reflect the intensity
19. 03:50:249 (1,2,3) - Swap the time place of these 3 for these 3 - 03:50:582 (4,5,6) With each of these, I made the second set of triplets start just off the line between the previous two, then move outward, if that makes any sense? So, the closest one first then the furthest, so kept the same for continuity
20. 04:01:416 - Blanket Done
21. 04:18:082 - Quite overlap (1) Moved
22. 04:31:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not as circular as I expected. As I mentioned before, you could use Ctrl + Shift + F to make perfect curve stream. Also the slider (1) after (8) should follow the circular flow as well. Changed these sliders anyway plus made the slider flow out of it
23. From 04:53:416 to end: I think it should be fine for now but I think this part can be improved more. The spacing should be reasonable and try to make all of those 1/1 beats nice and neat.I'll review this over time, wanted to make sure I got all the most important bits out of the way so haven't looked over this as comprehensively yet. Once my exams are out I can probably look more closely

Quite a hard song to map (for me) since it's hard to identify the main sound every section. Don't know why Mazzerin pulled these kinds of song off lol. Anyway, that's all from me. Good luck!

[Nemesis] wrote:

Mod from my queue. (why no m4m tho ;-;) I suck big time at modding lul. I did take a look through your m4m map and felt it was a bit above the level where I could provide criticism

Kamikakushi (ching chong pala wala ping li)

00:53:416 (1,2,1) - I feel like this lacks movement, The first two are fine but the third one just lazily returns to where the first one has been, I feel like this stale movement doesn't really express the song to its fullest I getchu. I wanted to keep these close together because I felt it suited the drum-heavy break section, so I've tried to incorporate a bit more movement while retaining my original thought process
01:06:749 (1) - and 01:06:499 (7) - are touching a little, maybe you move 1 a little further to the left? besides the 1/4 gap allows for a bigger jump so you can freely move it to the left imo Increased the spacing between each kick slider to retain the cross shape and rotated to make room for the spacing.
01:10:249 (5) - maybe you'd stack it with 01:09:749 (2) - since that gimmick has been used so frequently before? I chose this placement to expand the triangle shape since I feel that this riff has a feeling of change towards a heavier sound
01:10:749 (1) - meh slider, you can do a better one (besides such an awesome aaaaaa map doesn't deserve meh sliderart) Roger. Remodeled this slider to be more "jagged" than simply zigzagging
01:29:416 (1) - how about a 1/4 slider instead? leaves an awkward gap that can be easily filledRolling with this
01:57:582 (2,1) - they are touching even though they shouldn't which triggers me, leniency's fault or not Moved 1
02:24:166 - I feel like sliders would be way better here, trust me HAd this suggested before so I'm trying it out - still not sure, but it's growing on me. Changed
03:00:082 (5) - this slider ignores a lot of sounds, I suggest you remove it completely and just map all the sounds using circles Placed circles to adhere to the drums
03:32:749 (1) - these sounds are way more distinct, maybe you can map them using a different patter (1/4 jumps, circles maybe?) I'm trying some 1/4th kick sliders here, which I think works better than the original
03:44:082 - circle?
04:02:416 (9,1,3,1,6,1) - TRIGGERED
04:06:582 (4,1,3,1) - TRIG- oh wait these ones are intentional
04:08:749 (5,1) - ARGHHH JUST WHEN I THOUGHT IT WAS OVER
04:09:916 (4,6) - .. I actually ended up remodelling this entire section - should be a trigger-free safe space now
04:18:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - increase ds, the song is still growing in intensity yet you dropped the ds increase from there Done
04:53:416 - those ching chong hitsounds from before would fit here perfectly Truuuuuuuuuuuu

All from me, good map.

Gokateigo wrote:

yo, from my q (wow this music is sex) I'd really recommend the rest of this album, they put in a lot of variety while keeping the signature sound *Q*

modderrino

1. 00:40:748 (6,7,8,9) - looks bad Changed this around a little, made a more flowy jump pattern
2. 00:50:749 (1,2,3) - ^ With this part I wanted to reflect the music having died down somewhat and being focused on a few key sounds so opted for some less intense angles. If other people bring it up as well, I'll try changing it around
3. 00:55:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - looks bad again, there is something wrong in the stream How the hell did I miss this dammit, fixed
4. 01:10:416 (6) - the jump looks bad, changing the rotation in the same jump is a bad idea in general Changed to maintain rotation
5. 02:09:582 (1,2) - increase the spacing Increased this a little, my basic pattern is two mainly jump based combos followed by one not as jumpy so didn't go too hard on this
6. 02:16:749 (6,7,8,9) - looks bad This serves as a less exaggerated version of the following combo - again, I'll change this if it's brought up again but keeping the same for now
7. 02:56:082 (1,2,3) - the spacing should be bigger tru tbh
8. 02:57:416 (1,2,3) - ^ gotchu
9. 03:34:749 (1) - space the streams in this part, startr hereI went in and gradually increased the spacing but didn't make the streams fully spaced as I didn't want a ridiculous difficulty spike, but with them partially spaced I feel it's more appropriate

good map, gl

Senery wrote:

Hi! from my queue

Kamikakushi

00:42:082 (1,2,3) - this part of the stream looks a bit weird Adjusted this ever so slightly so makes a nicer curve
00:44:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - stack with 00:43:166 (2) - Done
00:45:749 (2) - you can stack this with 00:46:749 (1) - Done
00:47:749 (9,10,11) - maybe use a slider from the white tick (9) to the red one (11) Yeah I like that - done :3
00:52:416 (2) - stack to 00:51:749 (5) - Done
00:55:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this part is 1/6 Yeah, I was always aware 1/4 streams were slightly off. Problem is I feel it's quite an inconsequential part of the song to adjust around since it doesn't come up again, at least to my knowledge, so I feel simplifying it to a regular 1/4 stream for the palyer's sake is the best way to go. Of course, I'll certainly bear this in mind.
00:58:082 (3,4,5,6) - maybe put these ones like so: https://puu.sh/wYWIj/28961fba63.PNG Done
01:10:749 (1) - stack with 01:09:749 (2) - Done
01:17:416 (1) - this one is not well aligned with the stream Changed rotation for a better fit
02:12:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe try to align this with the beginning of the curve I changed the stream to better stack with itself, then redesigned the slider to maintain the curve, so while it's not *exactly* what you might have been suggesting, I feel the prior issue is gone
02:29:082 (6) - make this the same position as 02:28:749 (5) - just like you did with the previous ones Okay, done, plus later occurrences
03:14:248 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - this looks a bit messy Re-examined and fixed the curve
03:25:582 (2) - stack this with 03:24:749 (3) - Done
03:34:749 (1) - stack with 03:34:082 (1) - Done
04:08:416 (3) - stack with 04:07:582 (1) - I ended up changing this section's positioning slightly so this no longer became needed
04:47:749 (6) - make this the same position as well as 04:47:416 (5) - Done
05:20:082 (1) - maybe blanket this one with 05:20:749 (3) - Ended up stacking with the slider end instead

hope this helps