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(ça vaut pas un DQ ou quoi, c'est juste un avis perso, surtout pour Ponoyoshi le plus beau)
Je trouve que la SB est genre trop géniale et tout, mais y'a juste un truc que je trouve qui fait un peu bizarre, c'est les deux tons de blancs différents utilisés pour les lyrics et le spectrum. Le spectrum est vachement plus clair que les lyrics et du coup, l'oeil il est plus attiré, par le spectrum que les lyrics, mais en vrai on s'en ballek, c'est juste pour dire ça, si jamais la bubble est pop, peut-être que tu pourrais fix ça en mettant un ton moins clair pour le spectrum, c'est vraiment pas grave du tout, et pas important, donc voila, sinon super travail Pono sur la SB et Real, Linada et Kyuukai pour la map
Je trouve que la SB est genre trop géniale et tout, mais y'a juste un truc que je trouve qui fait un peu bizarre, c'est les deux tons de blancs différents utilisés pour les lyrics et le spectrum. Le spectrum est vachement plus clair que les lyrics et du coup, l'oeil il est plus attiré, par le spectrum que les lyrics, mais en vrai on s'en ballek, c'est juste pour dire ça, si jamais la bubble est pop, peut-être que tu pourrais fix ça en mettant un ton moins clair pour le spectrum, c'est vraiment pas grave du tout, et pas important, donc voila, sinon super travail Pono sur la SB et Real, Linada et Kyuukai pour la map
your storyboard bg images look way too compressed, most of them are filled with jpeg artifacts and it hurts the sb quality overall a lot
you still have a lot of filesize to work with so just get them in better quality it won't be hard to find them and use less compression when converting to jpg
difficulty settings see a little overdone to me
ar 9 od8.3-8.5 would probably be nicer to play in contrast to difficulty of the whole map
and 9.2 also kills the slower parts a bit
00:43:979 (7,8,9,10) - 00:46:573 (7,8,9,10) - 00:49:168 (7,8,9,10) - too anime
these should all be toned down noticeably as right now they are similarly in intensity+difficulty to the more intense parts of the song
00:51:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - would make this more similar to 00:09:763 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - cause drums are similar, current is quite underwhelming
00:52:087 (11,12) - could be 1/4 slider for transition to vocals. so something like http://i.imgur.com/fuqKVSF.jpg probably
01:16:898 (4,5) - would look much better if visuals spacing was similar to 01:15:763 (1,2) - and 01:18:195 (8,1) -
01:53:810 (2,4) - add some drum additions here too, inconsistently hitsounded streams are kinda ass to play with their weird feedback
02:11:016 (2) - could be drum sampleset
02:20:016 (4,5,1) - this is so gross, either get rid of the nc at the end of the stack or space the triple?
02:38:526 (3) - missing hs? compare to your other triples
02:57:928 (5) - ^
03:31:039 (7,8) -03:40:182 (7,8) - etc. these things just don't fit the overall feeling of this part well as they make the slider feel much more "suprising" if that makes any sense lol. i just don't think they work well in a part like this and are also used quite inconsistently
04:24:817 (2,3,4,6) - patterns like this would profit so much from even visual spacing like http://i.imgur.com/jEVnS8l.jpg
04:24:349 (1) - hitsounding in this part seems a bit fucked up cause sometimes you put hitnormals on kicks and sometimes you don't?
then suddenly you add the kick hitsound 04:27:161 (3,4) - + normal and idk what is happening
06:04:950 (1) - could have whistle on end + lower volume
02:25:503 - reminder to check combocolors here since nc on some spots before might change after everyone replied
05:15:803 - ^
overall way better than last time
you still have a lot of filesize to work with so just get them in better quality it won't be hard to find them and use less compression when converting to jpg
difficulty settings see a little overdone to me
ar 9 od8.3-8.5 would probably be nicer to play in contrast to difficulty of the whole map
and 9.2 also kills the slower parts a bit
00:43:979 (7,8,9,10) - 00:46:573 (7,8,9,10) - 00:49:168 (7,8,9,10) - too anime
these should all be toned down noticeably as right now they are similarly in intensity+difficulty to the more intense parts of the song
00:51:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - would make this more similar to 00:09:763 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - cause drums are similar, current is quite underwhelming
00:52:087 (11,12) - could be 1/4 slider for transition to vocals. so something like http://i.imgur.com/fuqKVSF.jpg probably
01:16:898 (4,5) - would look much better if visuals spacing was similar to 01:15:763 (1,2) - and 01:18:195 (8,1) -
01:53:810 (2,4) - add some drum additions here too, inconsistently hitsounded streams are kinda ass to play with their weird feedback
02:11:016 (2) - could be drum sampleset
02:20:016 (4,5,1) - this is so gross, either get rid of the nc at the end of the stack or space the triple?
02:38:526 (3) - missing hs? compare to your other triples
02:57:928 (5) - ^
03:31:039 (7,8) -03:40:182 (7,8) - etc. these things just don't fit the overall feeling of this part well as they make the slider feel much more "suprising" if that makes any sense lol. i just don't think they work well in a part like this and are also used quite inconsistently
04:24:817 (2,3,4,6) - patterns like this would profit so much from even visual spacing like http://i.imgur.com/jEVnS8l.jpg
04:24:349 (1) - hitsounding in this part seems a bit fucked up cause sometimes you put hitnormals on kicks and sometimes you don't?
then suddenly you add the kick hitsound 04:27:161 (3,4) - + normal and idk what is happening
06:04:950 (1) - could have whistle on end + lower volume
02:25:503 - reminder to check combocolors here since nc on some spots before might change after everyone replied
05:15:803 - ^
overall way better than last time
Topic Starter
I also changed the background to another oneLasse wrote:
your storyboard bg images look way too compressed, most of them are filled with jpeg artifacts and it hurts the sb quality overall a lot
you still have a lot of filesize to work with so just get them in better quality it won't be hard to find them and use less compression when converting to jpg Alright, got em' in higher quality !
difficulty settings see a little overdone to me
ar 9 od8.3-8.5 would probably be nicer to play in contrast to difficulty of the whole map
and 9.2 also kills the slower parts a bit
00:43:979 (7,8,9,10) - 00:46:573 (7,8,9,10) - 00:49:168 (7,8,9,10) - too anime
these should all be toned down noticeably as right now they are similarly in intensity+difficulty to the more intense parts of the song
00:51:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - would make this more similar to 00:09:763 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - cause drums are similar, current is quite underwhelming
00:52:087 (11,12) - could be 1/4 slider for transition to vocals. so something like http://i.imgur.com/fuqKVSF.jpg probably
01:16:898 (4,5) - would look much better if visuals spacing was similar to 01:15:763 (1,2) - and 01:18:195 (8,1) -
01:53:810 (2,4) - add some drum additions here too, inconsistently hitsounded streams are kinda ass to play with their weird feedback
02:11:016 (2) - could be drum sampleset
02:20:016 (4,5,1) - this is so gross, either get rid of the nc at the end of the stack or space the triple?
02:38:526 (3) - missing hs? compare to your other triples
02:57:928 (5) - ^
04:24:817 (2,3,4,6) - patterns like this would profit so much from even visual spacing like http://i.imgur.com/jEVnS8l.jpg
04:24:349 (1) - hitsounding in this part seems a bit fucked up cause sometimes you put hitnormals on kicks and sometimes you don't?
then suddenly you add the kick hitsound 04:27:161 (3,4) - + normal and idk what is happening
06:04:950 (1) - could have whistle on end + lower volume
fixed everything above (and about the SB colors too)
changed the patterns and a few inconsistent hitsounds in spring snow fragment, kyuukai took care of lost sorrow
00:51:763 (6) - missing nc (see 00:10:249 - )
00:51:600 (5) - missing hitsounding ^
don't forget to set 01:29:369 - to red combo color afterwards
and make sure the others are fine too
let me know when I can qualify
00:51:600 (5) - missing hitsounding ^
don't forget to set 01:29:369 - to red combo color afterwards
and make sure the others are fine too
let me know when I can qualify
Topic Starter
Fixed the NC and updated the SB colors
ゆいこんぬ
gratz !
wew
Topic Starter
Is dis real lyf
o b o
Congratatulations! amazing songs and amazing mapping too :3 <3
lost sorrow best song >w<
lost sorrow best song >w<
Grats!~
nice collab!
nice collab!
it was a pain to map thogame rock wrote:
lost sorrow best song >w<
tags are wrong, the song name is "Higashi no Sora kara Hajimaru Sekai". the ranked set had a wrong Unicode metadata.
please delete "Azuma"
also I am curious if the QAT or ppy would like to fix that set because that metadata is kinda uhm... https://osu.ppy.sh/s/372552
please delete "Azuma"
also I am curious if the QAT or ppy would like to fix that set because that metadata is kinda uhm... https://osu.ppy.sh/s/372552
Topic Starter
Oh, I didn't know that D:Shad0w1and wrote:
tags are wrong, the song name is "Higashi no Sora kara Hajimaru Sekai". the ranked set had a wrong Unicode metadata.
please delete "Azuma"
also I am curious if the QAT or ppy would like to fix that set because that metadata is kinda uhm... https://osu.ppy.sh/s/372552
Will ask a QAT to change the tags of the map about that, thank you for helping !
Topic Starter
no ? It sounds really off lmaoTalli wrote:
Proper offset for first timing section SHOULD be 9763.
T'avais même pas mis Ponoyoshi dans les tags
Topic Starter
Il est dans les tags, mais seulement sur le site, pas sur le jeuPachiru wrote:
T'avais même pas mis Ponoyoshi dans les tags