PremiumShiny wrote:

Nice Lunatic diff

EYA- wrote:

NM mod

extra

00:02:937 - lets try to a allot stronk piano sounds, add a note, also while hitsounding, find a good sound to use them on that doubles

00:04:242 - same as above

00:07:285 (7285|2,7285|3,7502|0,7502|1,7720|3,7720|2,7937|1,7937|0) - seems u are using 2 2 2 2 for all pattern, in my opinion thats will be better to allot the strongest one sound as tripple 00:07:937 (7937|0,7937|1) -

00:10:763 - place a ln here and remove that 00:11:633 (11633|2) -

00:11:633 (11633|2) - 00:09:894 (9894|0) - same as above

00:12:502 (12502|3,13372|0) - thats about make that LNs longer for 1 1\4 point to make unique pattern?

00:34:676 (34676|2,34676|1) - there is no any sound, delete it as it is a ghostsound and will be noticed by BN as misstake

00:35:002 (35002|0,35002|3) - Hey. leatherman, your sound is one block down 00:34:894 -

02:39:024 - that happened with hitsounds? They are kinda quite

02:51:415 (171415|1) - excess LN, there is no sounds allowing to place him there

Lunatic

00:03:155 (3155|1,3372|0,3589|2,4024|1,4242|2,4459|3,4894|2,5111|1,5328|2) - actually i dont understand usage of that LNs with single notes, in my opinion it would be better to use LNs or Note only Fixed with a note!

00:51:850 (51850|0,52068|1,52285|2) - unsuitable pattern, use pattern that were used before Fixed!

01:36:415 (96415|3) - this ln shouldnt stop at 01:36:850 - make it longer oh nice one!I missed it.. Fix

01:40:546 - add here LN as u used that pattern before 01:39:024 (99024|3,99894|1) - but in this case it allowed to be longer Nice..Fixed!

And dont forget to allot this sounds 01:40:763 - 01:40:981 - Yeah..of course.. i move it to centre col

01:45:111 - to make ur map looks more balanced, use 01:45:111 (105111|0,105111|2,105111|3,105328|1,105546|2,105546|1,105763|0,105981|2,105981|0) - pattern in that points 01:46:850 - 01:48:589 - 01:50:328 - 01:52:068 - 01:53:807 - 01:55:546 -

As for this point, add lns at 01:55:546 - 01:55:981 - 01:56:415 - 01:56:850 - 01:57:285 - 01:58:155 - Fix with another pattern!

try to find same places futher by yourself

02:31:198 - use patterns as you used before 02:17:285 - Fixed!

delete 02:51:415 (171415|2) - this LN and allot that by LNs 02:51:633 - 02:51:850 - Nice Idea..Fixed!

03:21:633 - same pattern as 03:07:720 - Fixed!

Well, im kinda tired to mod such ez diffs as Hard and Normal, I think you are satisfied by that mod. Good luck.

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

As requested in Crumpeys Mod Queue

Lunatic IRC

23:18 Mai9392: yo
23:19 CrumpetFiddler: Ive been super lazy
23:19 Mai9392: oh about that queue?
23:19 CrumpetFiddler: starting my mods now and because [B A D] is dumb im doing ur map, do you want a quick irc?
23:20 CrumpetFiddler: ive got a bit to say about i think
23:20 Mai9392: ah yes IRC
23:20 Mai9392: not problem
23:21 CrumpetFiddler: this your first map yeah>
23:21 Mai9392: yes
23:21 Mai9392: targeted to rank
23:21 CrumpetFiddler: First maps are typically not the best to get ranked, as your still learning but ill still help you out
23:21 CrumpetFiddler: i played a bit of hard, and ive played insane
23:22 CrumpetFiddler: any one else modded this?
23:22 *CrumpetFiddler is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1098902 senya - Iro wa Nioedo, Chirinuru wo [D44's Extra]] <osu!mania> |4K|
23:22 Mai9392: yes
23:26 CrumpetFiddler: so first up
23:26 CrumpetFiddler: without going into the map i can see something youll probably want to fix
23:27 CrumpetFiddler: your song is 3:36 long, thats fine
23:27 CrumpetFiddler: the Extra diff is 3:32
23:27 Mai9392: yeah proably that diff wasn't completed yet
23:27 Mai9392: it will be updated once more
23:27 CrumpetFiddler: What diff did you want me to focus on?
23:28 Mai9392: lunatic and hard
23:28 CrumpetFiddler: aight
23:28 CrumpetFiddler: from waht i saw lunatic and hard had similar things with them
23:28 CrumpetFiddler: Lunatic it is then
23:28 *CrumpetFiddler is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1098900 senya - Iro wa Nioedo, Chirinuru wo [Lunatic]]
23:29 Mai9392: by the way teach me how to make a modding queue sir
23:29 Mai9392: yeah
23:29 CrumpetFiddler: lol
23:29 CrumpetFiddler: idek
23:29 CrumpetFiddler: i just basically said send ur shit to mer
23:29 CrumpetFiddler: im a bad person to ask about that one
23:30 CrumpetFiddler: first of all
23:30 CrumpetFiddler: 00:01:633 (1633|1,1850|2) - 
23:30 Mai9392: ok
23:30 CrumpetFiddler: delete those 2 notes
23:30 CrumpetFiddler: your mapping vocals, thats typically bad
23:30 Mai9392: w8
23:31 CrumpetFiddler: hm?
23:31 Mai9392: hmm if i change that into a LN that was too awkward
23:31 CrumpetFiddler: no as in
23:31 CrumpetFiddler: delete those notes
23:31 CrumpetFiddler: you dont need them
23:31 CrumpetFiddler: theres no beat there
23:32 Mai9392: but i think that was nice placed that note
23:32 CrumpetFiddler: You dont need to head my advice, but mapping vocals is a bad idea it feels really weird to play
23:32 CrumpetFiddler: it happens again later in the song, ill be bringing it up again
23:32 Mai9392: that note follow "Iro" and "Wa" sound
23:32 CrumpetFiddler: Yes it follows the vocals
23:32 CrumpetFiddler: but no beat
23:32 CrumpetFiddler: so it feels a bit off
23:33 Mai9392: did i tell the extra GD too?
23:33 Mai9392: to delete that?
23:33 CrumpetFiddler: he can read off the IRC
23:33 CrumpetFiddler: and for whats relevent he can do
23:34 CrumpetFiddler: you seem to be mapping vocals an awful lot
23:34 Mai9392: k, delete
23:34 CrumpetFiddler: 00:03:155 (3155|1) - 
23:34 CrumpetFiddler: make that a single note
23:34 CrumpetFiddler: 00:03:372 (3372|0,3589|2) -  delete these 2
23:34 CrumpetFiddler: following vocals
23:35 Mai9392: make into a note?
23:35 CrumpetFiddler: 00:03:155 (3155|1) - 
23:35 CrumpetFiddler: make that one a note
23:35 CrumpetFiddler: the other 2, delete them, they are following the vocals
23:36 CrumpetFiddler: ehh
23:36 CrumpetFiddler: that second ln you could make a single note
23:36 CrumpetFiddler: 00:03:372 (3372|0) - 
23:36 Mai9392: but this  00:03:155 (3155|1) -  are following "Ni" sound
23:36 CrumpetFiddler: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7822999\
23:36 CrumpetFiddler: yes but thats vocals
23:36 Mai9392: so that was following vocals
23:38 CrumpetFiddler: 00:04:024 (4024|1) - delete this note, theres no beat
23:38 Mai9392: ooh
23:38 CrumpetFiddler: 00:05:111 (5111|1,5328|2) - no beat for either of these, they are following vocals
23:39 CrumpetFiddler: no beat for any of these
23:39 CrumpetFiddler: 00:05:763 (5763|1,5981|0,6198|1) - 
23:40 CrumpetFiddler: 00:07:502 (7502|3) - no beat
23:40 Mai9392: that was have a beat
23:40 Mai9392: a small piano
23:40 CrumpetFiddler: what one
23:41 Mai9392: w8
23:41 Mai9392: 00:05:763 (5763|1) -
23:41 Mai9392: and this one are louder  00:07:502 (7502|3) -
23:42 CrumpetFiddler: its so faint it may aswell not be there, you could get away with that 
23:42 CrumpetFiddler: this here isnt mapped to anything
23:42 CrumpetFiddler: 00:08:589 (8589|2) - 
23:42 CrumpetFiddler: BUT
23:42 CrumpetFiddler: you should keep it in'
23:43 CrumpetFiddler: its mapped to the vocals,  but without it the songs flow is broken
23:43 CrumpetFiddler: 00:10:546 (10546|1) - gotta be consistant, remove this note 00:10:546 (10546|1) - 
23:43 CrumpetFiddler: oops
23:43 Mai9392: yes
23:44 Mai9392: for that the beginning i follow the vocals
23:44 CrumpetFiddler: yeah u need it there for the song to play well
23:44 CrumpetFiddler: its one of the only times ill say mapping vocals is okay
23:45 Mai9392: yes i just make those LN pattern for LN at beginning
23:45 Mai9392: 00:10:328 (10328|2,10546|1,10546|0) -
23:46 Mai9392: I think this piano are louder than before
23:46 Mai9392: so i take 2
23:46 CrumpetFiddler: i dont think thats the best call
23:47 CrumpetFiddler: if you really think thats right
23:47 CrumpetFiddler: 00:10:546 (10546|1) - 
23:47 CrumpetFiddler: make that an LN
23:47 Mai9392: double LN?
23:47 CrumpetFiddler: yeah
23:48 CrumpetFiddler: 00:14:459 (14459|2,14894|2) - remove these 2 notes
23:49 CrumpetFiddler: make this a double
23:49 CrumpetFiddler: 00:18:155 (18155|2,18155|3,18155|0) - 
23:49 Mai9392: w8
23:49 CrumpetFiddler: there are other sounds the same that are never triples
23:51 Mai9392: that was very loud there
23:51 CrumpetFiddler: later in the song tho
23:51 Mai9392: i take a extra reference
23:51 CrumpetFiddler: you dont use triples
23:51 CrumpetFiddler: consistancy
23:51 CrumpetFiddler: but its eeh, you could get away with it
23:52 CrumpetFiddler: im gunna get thru this chorus section a little quicker ill stop after you can have time to catch up
23:52 CrumpetFiddler: 00:18:698 (18698|1) - no beatg
23:52 CrumpetFiddler: 00:19:133 - beat here, place a note
23:52 CrumpetFiddler: 00:19:568 (19568|0) - no beat
23:52 Mai9392: ok
23:53 CrumpetFiddler: 00:20:002 - could justify a note here, doesnt reeeeeaaaaaly matter
23:53 CrumpetFiddler: 00:20:872 (20872|3) - no beat
23:53 CrumpetFiddler: 00:20:981 (20981|0,21089|1) - have these highlighted and press control+j
23:54 CrumpetFiddler: 00:21:307 - note here
23:54 CrumpetFiddler: 00:21:742 (21742|0) - delete this
23:54 CrumpetFiddler: ^^ ignore that one
23:54 CrumpetFiddler: 00:22:394 (22394|0) - consider deleting this
23:55 Mai9392: Ctrl+j??
23:55 Mai9392: 00:20:981 (20981|0) -
23:55 CrumpetFiddler: have em highlighted and it will do what i said
23:55 CrumpetFiddler: 00:23:046 (23046|2) -  delete this
23:55 CrumpetFiddler: delete this 00:23:481 (23481|1) - 
23:56 CrumpetFiddler: 00:24:350 (24350|2) -  delete this
23:56 CrumpetFiddler: 00:24:785 (24785|1) -  delete this
23:56 CrumpetFiddler: just to clarify, columns are 1|2|3|4
23:57 Mai9392: w8
23:57 CrumpetFiddler: 00:25:220 (25220|0) - move this to here 00:25:437 - 
23:57 CrumpetFiddler: 00:26:415 (26415|1) - make this a double for consistancy
23:57 CrumpetFiddler: 00:26:742 - note here
23:57 CrumpetFiddler: make this a double 00:27:285 (27285|3) - 
23:58 CrumpetFiddler: 00:29:024 (29024|3) - make a double
23:58 CrumpetFiddler: delete this 00:29:133 (29133|2) - 
23:58 CrumpetFiddler: make a double
23:58 CrumpetFiddler: 00:29:459 (29459|3) - 
23:58 CrumpetFiddler: 00:29:459 (29459|3) - note here
23:58 CrumpetFiddler: 00:30:220 - ****
23:58 CrumpetFiddler: note here 00:31:307 - 
23:59 CrumpetFiddler: your mapping vocals 00:32:937 (32937|1) - 
00:00 CrumpetFiddler: delete this note, its awkwardly placed and makes no sense 00:33:263 (33263|3) - 
00:00 CrumpetFiddler: and this 00:33:589 (33589|1) - 
00:00 Mai9392: k
00:00 CrumpetFiddler: delete these 2 00:34:676 (34676|3,35111|3) - 
00:00 CrumpetFiddler: 00:35:328 (35328|2) -  move to col 4
00:01 CrumpetFiddler: id say delete this, but you might get away with iit being a single note
00:03 Mai9392: w8 i'll pee
00:03 CrumpetFiddler: ill keep going
00:03 CrumpetFiddler: its 12am here, i got other peeps to do aswell
00:03 CrumpetFiddler: remove 00:38:589 (38589|1) - 
00:04 CrumpetFiddler: 00:40:111 (40111|2) - move to col 2 for fingerbalance
00:04 CrumpetFiddler: 00:40:328 (40328|0) -  no beat
00:04 Mai9392: k i'm back
00:04 CrumpetFiddler: no beat
00:04 CrumpetFiddler: 00:40:546 (40546|2) - 
00:04 CrumpetFiddler: beat here 00:40:655 - 
00:05 CrumpetFiddler: a single note is probably enough here, but it shouldnt matter v
00:05 CrumpetFiddler: 00:41:415 (41415|1,41415|3) - 
00:05 CrumpetFiddler: this here, 00:41:633 (41633|3,41850|2,42068|1,42285|0) - 
00:05 CrumpetFiddler: feels wrong
00:06 CrumpetFiddler: i think your mapping to both vocals and the beat and it feels super off
00:07 CrumpetFiddler: your over mapping imo
00:07 CrumpetFiddler: instead of those lns
00:07 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7823255
00:07 CrumpetFiddler: thats all you need
00:07 Mai9392: hmm
00:07 Mai9392: nc
00:08 CrumpetFiddler: just as a reminder you dont need to do all my changed, im merely suggesting them
00:08 CrumpetFiddler: imo it would make the song better
00:08 CrumpetFiddler: if you think otherwise you dont need to
00:08 Mai9392: yes
00:08 CrumpetFiddler: 00:42:937 (42937|2) -  remove ln
00:08 Mai9392: thanks for your sugestion
00:08 CrumpetFiddler: single note here 00:42:937 (42937|2) - 
00:08 CrumpetFiddler: fuck
00:08 CrumpetFiddler: 00:43:155 - 
00:09 CrumpetFiddler: you should look over this
00:09 CrumpetFiddler: 00:43:372 (43372|0,43807|1,44242|3,44242|2,44676|1,44894|0,45111|2,45111|3) - 
00:09 CrumpetFiddler: play this in .25 and try to listen to the beats
00:11 CrumpetFiddler: 00:47:285 (47285|0,47285|1,47285|3) -  make a double
00:12 CrumpetFiddler: move to 3|4
00:12 CrumpetFiddler: make  a double 00:48:155 (48155|2,48155|3,48155|0) - 
00:12 CrumpetFiddler: this is louder than the beat before, make a double, possibly a triple
00:12 CrumpetFiddler: 00:48:372 (48372|1) -
00:13 CrumpetFiddler: single 00:48:589 (48589|2,48589|0) - 
00:13 CrumpetFiddler: 00:48:807 (48807|0) -  double or triple
00:13 CrumpetFiddler: double 00:49:024 (49024|3,49024|1,49024|0) - 
00:13 CrumpetFiddler: 00:49:242 (49242|3,49242|2) - control+H
00:13 CrumpetFiddler: make a double 00:49:894 (49894|0,49894|2,49894|3) - 
00:14 CrumpetFiddler: note here 00:50:328 - 
00:14 CrumpetFiddler: double 00:51:633 (51633|2,51633|3,51633|1) - 
00:15 CrumpetFiddler: no beat 00:55:655 (55655|2,55872|2) - 
00:15 CrumpetFiddler: add a note 00:55:655 (55655|2,55872|2) - 
00:15 CrumpetFiddler: 00:56:850 (56850|0,56850|1) - make a single noteg
00:15 CrumpetFiddler: note here 00:56:850 (56850|1,56850|0) - 
00:16 CrumpetFiddler: note here 00:56:850 (56850|0,56850|1) - 
00:16 CrumpetFiddler: again mapping to the vocals
00:16 CrumpetFiddler: but i think its acceptable here
00:16 CrumpetFiddler: 00:59:894 (59894|2,60328|0,60763|3,60763|2) - 
00:17 CrumpetFiddler: other wise id say remove all of those
00:17 CrumpetFiddler: actually
00:17 CrumpetFiddler: remove those notes and test it
00:17 CrumpetFiddler: i think its pretty good without them
00:17 CrumpetFiddler: makes the sv look cool af
00:18 Mai9392: af?
00:18 CrumpetFiddler: cool as fuck
00:19 Mai9392: XD
00:19 Mai9392: my diff?
00:19 CrumpetFiddler: wat
00:20 Mai9392: my diff are cool?? :v
00:20 CrumpetFiddler: yes but not what i was referring to
00:20 Mai9392: the SV?
00:20 CrumpetFiddler: i say remove these
00:20 CrumpetFiddler: it makes the sv in this area really goodf
00:20 CrumpetFiddler: good*
00:21 CrumpetFiddler: 00:59:894 (59894|2,60328|0,60763|3,60763|2) - 
00:21 Mai9392: ooh i get it
00:22 CrumpetFiddler: t01:01:633 (61633|1,61633|0,61633|3,62068|2,62068|0,62068|3) - im only going to mention this here once, (unless it happens in the other choruses)
00:22 CrumpetFiddler: be consistant these 2 are triples
00:22 CrumpetFiddler: later they are doubles
00:23 CrumpetFiddler: with the same beat
00:23 CrumpetFiddler: delete 01:01:742 (61742|2) - 
00:23 CrumpetFiddler: add a note
00:23 CrumpetFiddler: 01:01:742 (61742|2) - 
00:23 CrumpetFiddler: ^^ignore that
00:24 CrumpetFiddler: 01:03:915 - add a note her
00:24 CrumpetFiddler: delete this
00:24 CrumpetFiddler: 01:04:350 (64350|1) - 
00:24 CrumpetFiddler: add a note 01:05:655 - 
00:24 CrumpetFiddler: add a note 01:07:394 - 
00:25 CrumpetFiddler: add a note 01:09:242 - 
00:25 CrumpetFiddler: delete this note 01:09:459 (69459|1) - 
00:26 CrumpetFiddler: 01:09:676 (69676|2,69785|3,69894|1,69894|0,70002|2,70111|0,70111|3,70220|1,70328|2,70328|3) - control+H
00:26 CrumpetFiddler: note here
00:26 CrumpetFiddler: 01:10:437 - 
00:26 CrumpetFiddler: note here 01:10:981 - 
00:26 CrumpetFiddler: delete this
00:26 CrumpetFiddler: 01:11:198 (71198|2) - 
00:27 CrumpetFiddler: one sec, bathroom break
00:28 Mai9392: go
00:29 Mai9392: pee?
00:37 CrumpetFiddler: back
00:37 Mai9392: what r u doing?
00:37 CrumpetFiddler: still modding
00:37 CrumpetFiddler: just had to use the facilities
00:37 CrumpetFiddler: no beat
00:37 CrumpetFiddler: 01:11:524 (71524|1) - 
00:38 Mai9392: k
00:38 CrumpetFiddler: no beat
00:38 CrumpetFiddler: 01:13:481 (73481|3) - 
00:38 CrumpetFiddler: put a note here 01:13:481 (73481|3) - 
00:38 CrumpetFiddler: note here
00:38 CrumpetFiddler: 01:13:481 (73481|3) - 
00:38 CrumpetFiddler: delete this
00:38 CrumpetFiddler: 01:15:981 (75981|2) - 
00:39 CrumpetFiddler: im going to stop repeating myself so much as alot of this seems to be the same stuff, youll have to go thru this yourself aswell
00:39 CrumpetFiddler: no beat 01:16:742 (76742|2) - 
00:39 CrumpetFiddler: make a double
00:40 CrumpetFiddler: no beat 01:18:263 (78263|1) - 
00:40 CrumpetFiddler: no beat 01:18:915 (78915|0) - 
00:40 CrumpetFiddler: 01:20:328 (80328|0) -  delete this
00:40 CrumpetFiddler: make a double 01:21:198 (81198|1,81198|0,81198|2) - 
00:40 CrumpetFiddler: note here 01:21:198 (81198|2,81198|0,81198|1) - 
00:41 CrumpetFiddler: note here 01:21:198 (81198|1,81198|0,81198|2) - 
00:42 CrumpetFiddler: no beat here
00:42 CrumpetFiddler: 01:34:133 (94133|3,94350|3) -  
00:42 CrumpetFiddler: re arrange the notes so that col 4 isnt empty
00:42 CrumpetFiddler: note here v
00:42 CrumpetFiddler: 01:34:133 (94133|3,94350|3) - 
00:42 CrumpetFiddler: uuuugh
00:42 CrumpetFiddler: 01:35:220 - i meant here*****
00:42 CrumpetFiddler: note here 01:36:742 - 
00:43 CrumpetFiddler: remove this 01:37:611 (97611|0) - 
00:43 CrumpetFiddler: add a note here 01:37:937 - 
00:43 CrumpetFiddler: remove this ln
00:43 CrumpetFiddler: 01:39:024 (99024|3) - 
00:43 CrumpetFiddler: 01:39:242 - single note here
00:44 CrumpetFiddler: note here
00:44 CrumpetFiddler: 01:44:350 - 
00:44 CrumpetFiddler: note here 01:49:133 - 01:49:350 - 
00:45 CrumpetFiddler: im gunna try to go a lil faster i gotta do some other things
00:45 CrumpetFiddler: so i might miss some things
00:46 CrumpetFiddler: delete this 02:02:394 (122394|1) - 
00:46 Mai9392: dont push yourself
00:46 CrumpetFiddler: im not
00:46 Mai9392: this is midnight
00:46 CrumpetFiddler: also, ill only mod lunatic as this is hell long and that most things here are also in the hard diff
00:47 CrumpetFiddler: delete this 02:06:742 (126742|0) - 
00:47 CrumpetFiddler: and this 02:08:481 (128481|2) - 
00:47 Mai9392: hahaha longest IRC ever
00:47 CrumpetFiddler: ive done longer i just dont have enough time lol
00:47 CrumpetFiddler: note here 02:08:481 (128481|2) - 
00:47 CrumpetFiddler: delete this 02:11:742 (131742|3) - 
00:48 CrumpetFiddler: move to 2|3
00:48 CrumpetFiddler: delete 
00:48 CrumpetFiddler: 02:12:068 (132068|2) - 
00:48 CrumpetFiddler: make this a single note 02:12:720 (132720|1) - 
00:48 CrumpetFiddler: missed a note 02:15:220 - 
00:49 CrumpetFiddler: only noticed now, might of been in the other chorus im not sure
00:49 CrumpetFiddler: 02:15:546 (135546|0,135546|1,135655|2,135763|1,135763|0,135872|2,135981|1,135981|3,135981|0) - 
00:49 CrumpetFiddler: VERY left hand heavy
00:49 CrumpetFiddler: delete 02:19:350 (139350|0) - 
00:49 Mai9392: fixed
00:49 CrumpetFiddler: note here 02:20:546 - 
00:49 CrumpetFiddler: delete this
00:49 CrumpetFiddler: 02:20:763 (140763|1) - 
00:50 CrumpetFiddler: this happens alot in this song i wont mention those again to save time XD
00:50 CrumpetFiddler: but they are pretty easy to spot
00:50 CrumpetFiddler: delete 02:21:307 (141307|2) - 
00:51 CrumpetFiddler: note ehre 02:21:307 (141307|2) - 
00:51 CrumpetFiddler: fuck
00:51 CrumpetFiddler: here *02:25:763 - 
00:51 CrumpetFiddler:  i can tell you copied parts of this song
00:51 CrumpetFiddler: 02:26:959 (146959|1,147068|3,147068|2,147176|1,147285|2,147285|0,147285|3) - 
00:51 CrumpetFiddler: wait
00:52 CrumpetFiddler: remove this 02:26:959 (146959|1) - 
00:52 CrumpetFiddler: yeah becareful when copying sections, errors will persist
00:52 CrumpetFiddler: like this
00:52 CrumpetFiddler: 02:28:589 (148589|0,148589|1,148698|3,148807|0,148807|1,148915|2,149024|0,149024|1,149024|3) - 
00:52 CrumpetFiddler: left hand heavy
00:53 CrumpetFiddler: make sure you fix all of those other wise it would be weird
00:53 CrumpetFiddler: note here 02:29:133 - 
00:53 CrumpetFiddler: `note here 02:30:872 - 
00:54 CrumpetFiddler: notre here 02:44:568 - 
00:54 CrumpetFiddler: and here 02:45:111 - 
00:54 Mai9392: k fix that errors
00:54 CrumpetFiddler: id consider making this an ln or something 02:45:546 (165546|3,165600|2,165655|1,165709|0) - 
00:54 CrumpetFiddler: its the only time youve got 1/8
00:55 CrumpetFiddler: its not that bad but idk
00:55 CrumpetFiddler: should be okay
00:55 CrumpetFiddler: no beat 02:52:176 (172176|2) - 
00:55 Mai9392: hmm that was burst sounds
00:55 Mai9392: very EZ if i changed it to LN
00:55 CrumpetFiddler: no beat 02:53:915 (173915|2) - 
00:56 CrumpetFiddler: the last chorus has the same problems as the second
00:56 CrumpetFiddler: so i wont repeat myself
00:57 Mai9392: yeah
00:57 CrumpetFiddler: the last chorus starting here 03:03:807 (183807|0,183807|2,183807|1,183807|3) -  and ending 03:29:242 (209242|2,209242|1) - here
00:57 CrumpetFiddler: make a double 03:29:459 (209459|2,209459|1,209459|0) - 
00:58 CrumpetFiddler: start this ln 03:29:785 (209785|0) - here 03:29:894 - 
00:58 CrumpetFiddler: and remove this 03:29:894 (209894|1) - 
00:58 CrumpetFiddler: thats about it
00:58 CrumpetFiddler: also in AI mod, (control+shift+A
00:59 CrumpetFiddler: 1/3rd of your map is in kiai time
00:59 Mai9392: yes
00:59 CrumpetFiddler: which should be ok for your map
00:59 CrumpetFiddler: but there are other errors in there i didnt mention you need to check on
00:59 CrumpetFiddler: i dont really understand them cause im bad with svs
00:59 Mai9392: k w8
01:00 Mai9392: hmm i must cut off the kiai
01:00 CrumpetFiddler: its not unrankable
01:00 CrumpetFiddler: youve started and ended at the correct times imo
01:00 CrumpetFiddler: its just the song
01:01 Mai9392: i think the kiai was correct replaced
01:01 Mai9392: but it too long
01:01 Mai9392: that wasn't problem

Worms wrote:

M4M stuff

00:18:155 - create a new timing point here so that the emphasis is on the correct beat

Lunatic

00:03:155 (3155|2) - this could be an LN Hmm ok i'll use this LN as her vocal
00:19:133 (19133|1) - remove, i'm not hearing anything here I think so
00:31:415 (31415|3,31524|3) - i don't think using a jack here fits Ah that was my mistake.. My shity mouse
00:31:415 (31415|3,31524|3) - add note here Ok
00:33:263 - add note here for the vocal Sure!
00:43:589 - add note here for piano I can't hear anything here
01:02:720 (62720|3,62937|3,63155|3,63372|3,63589|3,63807|3) - rearrange the patterns Hmm i think that was still a nice pattern
03:19:459 (199459|3,199676|3,199894|3,200111|3,200328|3) - same as above Little re-arranged

03:03:807 (183807|0,183807|1,183807|2,183807|3) - the problem that i have with this SV is that unlike the ones used for LNs, there's less time to react. for the LNs you used 1.5x and 0.8x, but for this you used 3.0x and 0.75x (basically the speed up is twice as fast but the slow down is just barely slower). i suggest that you either lower the speed up to something between 2-2.5x, or lower the slow down to under 0.5x. Nice! then i'll use 2.50 and 0.05 SV!

Hard

03:17:068 - could be a double Oh Nice!

sorry for the short mod for the "Hard" diff, couldn't find anything wrong with it
good luck with rank!

Moku_Hazushi wrote:

(From my modding queue)

Hey there, sorry you posted your request like 2 weeks ago, and the modding arrive just now :c (hard&lunatic just like you asked) Im a bit frustrated, i love touhou i should have mod this sooner ahah xD

So yeah hopefully you will find some interesting stuff but as always change your map only if you 120% agree with it (like for example yesterday i modded Worms's map and he(she?) rejected all my suggestions on one diff ahah xD but he's right a mapper should keep his/her map like he/she like not like the modder want it to be -dunno if he will read this-)

So yup i hope it will be helpful, good luck for getting your map rank

Legend is 0|1|2|3

Hard

00:06:633 (6633|0) - Would move it to (3) and Ok!
00:06:850 - Add a note at (2) here and Hmm i didn't hear hard piano here like before
00:07:068 - Add a note at (1) Same ^
The note added are because you started the note + LN pattern (00:06:415 (6415|1,6415|2,6633|0,6633|1)) and it feels weird to have it stopped in the middle (okay maybe its because the piano is mainly present only on the first 2 but still). And the move 00:06:633 (6633|0) to (3) is to give more space to the mapping Fix some~

00:09:024 (9024|3) - Would move it to (2) + Hmm i think about this part i'll stay for my consistency pattern (i was decided it)
00:09:242 (9242|2) - To (3) + ^
00:09:459 (9459|3) - To (2) + ^
00:09:676 (9676|2) - To (1), Okay here the idea is to follow the echo between the voice and the piano by reproducing this pattern 00:08:372 (8372|3,8589|2,8807|1) Ahahaha sorry about that .. i was move 00:08:372 to (1) :v

00:11:415 (11415|1) - I think you should make it a simple note, and this time you had exactly the echo of 00:10:111 (10111|2,10328|3,10546|1) awsome :3 Thanks~ but i think at 00:11:415 (11415|1) - the piano was holding

Ok at 00:34:676 i suggest you do the following, because at the beginning (from 00:32:068) you started mapping the voice with LNs, but this time the LN is too early and maybe because you tried to map the piano at the same time. So on the suggestion i keep the piano mapping with the single note and stick with the voice mapping with LNs Ok!



01:05:437 - Maybe add a note here at (2) to shortly follow the bass and add variation during this kiai (doesnt affect the star rating) Ooh Get it..Fix!

Ok same i would add note at 01:06:198 and 01:06:633 but you can keep it like that, its perfectly alright too Hmm i'll just keep those LN pattern like that

01:19:350 - If you decided to add a note at 01:05:437 you should do the same here (so maybe moving 01:19:242 (79242|3) also) Ok!

02:02:285 (122285|2,122394|1) - CTRL+H these to keep balances between left to right and right to left patterns Fix!

02:05:763 (125763|1,125763|2) - I would move them to (0,1) to recall the jack at 02:05:111 (125111|3,125111|2,125328|3,125328|2) Ooh Nice!Fix!

02:12:502 (132502|2) - This one should be an LN i think Fix!

02:28:589 (148589|1) - Maybe just move it to (3) otherwise it makes maybe doubles on (0,1) columns Fix!

02:38:589 (158589|3) - Would move it to (0) to keep those close doubles during the battery beats Fix!

02:44:024 (164024|2) - Move it to (3) its important to keep the jacks here Nice~Fix!

03:06:850 (186850|1) - To (2) Fix!
03:07:068 (187068|2) - To (1) Fix!
03:07:285 (187285|1) - To (2), you are using too much the (0,1) columns for those doubles and triples Fix!

03:13:589 (193589|2) - Would move it to (3) to recall the jack at 03:12:937 (192937|0,193155|0) and then move
03:13:807 (193807|3) - To (2), the 2 jacks mark the transition discretly Fix!

03:20:763 (200763|0) - To (2), same for doubles balance

Good difficulty, interesting patterns and clean mapping. In fact aimod complains about too much kiai times but i dont know want you can do, there are perfectly fine for me. So yeah there are still space to improve i think, and dont forget the hitsouding ;3

Lunatic

Before getting to the actual mod we will talk a bit about timings and SVs
First aimod says that you have 2 timing point at 01:00:981 be careful Thanks for warning

Then the first SV at 00:17:720 is too fast, usually you should try to keep the note arround the middle of the screen at the end of the SV, thats where most of the player read Yeah sorry about that.. Fixed~ Into 2.50 and 0.70 (This SV are more softly)

Finally the SV at 01:00:763 is too unpredictable. Its really hard to keep a good accuracy at the end of the LNs with this SV. Ok I modified those SV into 1.80

I modified all those 3 SV trying to keep the speed but without being too unpredictable, please create a backup of your map, copy this in the timing point section of the lunatic .osu file (only the firsts timing points until 6133 the rest is perfect) and tell me what you think.

329,434.782608695652,4,2,0,20,1,0
329,-125,4,2,0,30,0,0
17720,-50,4,2,0,30,0,0
17828,-142.857142857143,4,2,0,30,0,0
18155,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
32068,-125,4,2,0,30,0,0
45111,-111.111111111111,4,2,0,30,0,0
45981,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
59024,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
60763,-50,4,2,0,30,0,0
60981,-125,4,2,0,30,0,0
61415,-142.857142857143,4,2,0,30,0,0
61633,-100,4,2,0,55,0,1

Nice Sugest!,more softly SV!Fix!
Otherwise the SVs during the kiais time are awsome great job owo)b

Lets go to the modding

00:22:176 (22176|3,22285|2) - I find those 2 a bit weird, in fact i would make them start at 00:22:285 to keep that simple-simple-double patterns I was re-arrange that

00:43:155 (43155|1) - Would move it to (3) for the jack Little awkward i think to combine that :v

00:50:981 (50981|2) - Ok its a bit random LN here, why not simple note at 00:50:981 and 00:51:089 ? Nice one!

Maybe move the following
01:07:068 (67068|0) - to (1) Fix!
01:07:176 (67176|1) - To (0) Fix!
01:07:285 (67285|0) - To (1), just to use different triples Nice!Fix!

01:20:546 (80546|0) - On one hand i would like to move this to (3) to have double jacks with 01:20:111 (80111|0,80328|0) but if so we should move 01:20:763 (80763|3) (0) and that would mean remapping the following so maybe not, as you wish Fix!

01:27:937 (87937|2) - To (3) and
01:28:372 (88372|2) - To (0) i think you had a good idea insisting on jack just at this moment on the Hard difficulty, so maybe keep with it here too Oh nice!

01:52:285 (112285|1) - Move it to (2), its better to have the jack with the out patterns (01:52:068 (112068|0,112068|2,112068|3) and before) than the next pattern because the previous one is the end of a musical phrase Fix!

02:05:981 - I was expected an LN here cause you did one at 01:59:024 but since you start with others LN after i guess its okay Ah sorry about that non-cinsistency pattern so i re-arrange that

02:12:502 (132502|0) - I think you should make this an LN Fix!

02:16:198 (136198|2,136307|1) - CTRL+H these 2, you started a lot the previous patterns with right to left notes, lets add some variation Nice!Fix!

03:00:546 (180546|2) - At (3) to keep with the jacks before and after Oh nice!Fix!

Ok sorry, im getting tired, maybe i didnt take a good look at the last kiai and ending but the mapping is great, the SV during the kai are awsome so yup good job ^-^ Good luck for getting this ranked

Ari Knight wrote:

Yo!
from Ari Knight Modding Qu'eue'

here you go!

|1|2|3|4|

Normal (edited)

1. 00:04:894 - add note |3| the piano sound, i hear it ni here
2. 00:06:198 (6198|3) - delete plz, ghost note
3. 00:06:198 (6198|3) - why there's no note in here(?)
4. 00:12:720 - add 1 note on the white line, same on above
5. 00:14:459 - add 1 note per line, on the red, white and red line if you understand
6. 00:19:894 - add 1 more note
7. 00:21:633 - ^
8. 00:28:590 - ^
9. 00:40:111 - why there's no note here?
10. 01:53:155 - ^
11. 01:54:894 - ^ [why always like this?]
12. 01:56:415 - ^
    
    This will take too much time editing this [just if you found something related to that, just listen to the song more carefully]
    
    
13. 02:15:546 - use 1 note only
14. 02:16:415 - add 1 note
15. 02:19:024 - just 1 note
    
    Wut? Why like this? This will such a waste of time just editing this
    Just find something related to my mod and do as i tell (if you follow my mod)
    
    ok that's it for normal

Hard

1. 00:01:633 - sampe 00:15:981 - coba denger denger lagi deh suara piano-nya, pasti ngeh dah kurangnya dimana [saya mod kelamaan entar] Itu pola mapping vokal mblo :''v btw saya cek lg 00:05:328 (5328|0,5546|3,5546|2) - ada piano ampe 00:05:981 (5981|0) - .. Thanks
   
   overal dah bagus untuk yang hard, sisanya coba di mod sendiri, dengerin bener bener masing masing suara di musiknya

dah itu aja maap dikit

sisanya coba di dengerin ulang deh sambil liat autoplay-nya atau test sendiri, dengerin kalo ada yang kurang

Good Luck!

Surono wrote:

mau zogok brapa nich, 69ribu dolar zimbabwew?

atian540 wrote:

MARKED for HS :3

ini FILEnya
saya masih noob kakak :'3

jangan dibuka

= mulai di 00:18:372 di kasih Drum Fast Hit Click 20% di red line,kalau ada 2 note kasih di salah satunya,kalau tidak ada note tidak usah,kecuali di 00:19:242 - 00:20:981 - 00:22:720 - 00:24:459 - 00:26:198 - 00:27:937 - 00:29:676 - 00:47:068 - 00:48:807 - 00:50:546 - 00:52:285 - 00:54:024 - 00:55:763 - 01:02:720 - 01:04:459 - 01:06:198 - 01:07:937 - 01:09:676 - 01:11:415 - 01:13:155 - 01:16:633 - 01:18:372 - 01:20:111 - 01:21:850 - 01:23:589 - 01:25:328 - 01:28:807 - 01:32:285 - 01:34:024 - 01:35:763 - 01:37:502 - 01:40:981 - 01:42:720 - 01:46:198 - 01:47:937 - 01:49:676 - 01:51:415 - 01:53:155 - 01:54:894 - 01:56:633 - 01:58:372 - 02:00:111 - 02:01:850 - 02:03:589 - 02:05:328 - 02:07:068 - 02:08:807 - 02:14:024 - 02:15:763 - 02:17:502 - 02:19:242 - 02:20:981 - 02:22:720 - 02:24:459 - 02:27:937 - 02:29:676 - 02:31:415 - 02:33:155 - 02:34:894 - 02:36:633 - 02:40:111 - 02:41:850 - 02:43:589 - 02:47:068 - 02:48:807 - 02:50:546 - 02:52:285 - 02:54:024 - 02:55:763 - 03:00:981 - 03:04:459 - 03:06:198 - 03:07:937 - 03:09:676 - 03:11:415 - 03:13:155 - 03:14:894 - 03:18:372 - 03:20:111 - 03:21:850 - 03:23:589 - 03:25:328 - 03:27:068 - kasih Drum Hit HAT 30% di red line,kalau ada 2 note kasih di salah satunya,kalau tidak ada note tidak usah,, saran jangan pasang hit hat/fast hit click di bagian 00:30:328 sampai 00:45:981 - 00:56:089 sampai 01:01:198 - 01:25:981 sampai 01:27:720 - 01:30:328 sampai 01:31:198 - 02:09:459 sampai 02:12:937 - 02:37:285 sampai 02:39:024 - 02:44:676 sampai 02:45:981 - 03:27:720 sampai selesai
= 00:15:981 - RevCyHLWX 50%
= 00:32:068 - 01:01:633 - 03:03:807 - 01:27:720 - 01:45:111 - BassKickReverbXD 40%
= 00:45:111 - RevCyG 50% 00:52:068 RevCyG 30%
= 01:00:763 - RevCyRDW 50%
= cymbal use Drum FInish 50%
= snare use KickSWHBD 30%
= kick use KickDBeatBass 50%
= 00:20:763 - 00:24:242 - 00:27:720 - 01:04:242 - 01:07:720 - 01:18:155 - 01:33:807 - 01:37:285 - 01:40:763 - 02:15:546 - 02:19:024 - 02:29:459 - 02:32:937 - 02:48:589 - 02:52:068 - 03:05:981 - 03:09:459 - 03:19:894 - 03:23:372 - Chm Echo long 50%
= mulai di 00:45:981 sampai 00:52:937 snare use Hit Echo 50%
= di bagian 01:28:155 sampai 01:30:328 and 02:39:024 sampai 02:43:807 and 02:59:894 sampai 03:02:068 - ada suara clap pakai clap biasa

*note : kalau misalkan notenya kurang,dibuat sample aja

yah kurang lebihnya seperti itu lah,berlaku untuk semua diff,kurang lebihnya mohon maaf :''3

DoNotMess wrote:

rly old map, why u ask me to mod anyway wtf
1|2|3|4
Lunatic
00:24:024 (24024|2) - i would recommend something like this https://puu.sh/yU04G/5e833192fd.png so there is clear distinction between the actual melody u map and the bell sound effect, this also looks nicer imo great!
00:25:111 - this should be 3 notes to emphasize the crash since this is the last diff k
00:28:372 (28372|2) - there is only simple hi-hat in this particular part, i suggest to change it like before :3
00:31:633 (31633|1,31633|0) - this could be 3 notes since there is crash or bell in it oh gud boy
00:31:850 (31850|0,31850|1) - only suggestion, but i would love to see this being moved to the right side so it becomes jack, fits the song rather than trill :') i'll keep it up
00:44:676 (44676|1) - this piano ln would be lovely if it's extended to 00:45:111 - since u mapped the piano sound at least 1 or 1,5 ln beat long before nc catch
00:56:633 - i would suggest to add |3| in this note to fill this empty part for hihat sound, this is quite audible sound and should be mapped at least on the lunatic
00:57:502 - and also this one at |2| if applied
00:58:589 - ^ ^ yes this nope
01:44:242 - mapping here is different from here 00:31:307 - even though it's the same sound, i would suggest to keep the snap (like the blue line 1/4 i marked) but the note amount can be different if u want to emphasize the 2nd part to be harder biar jadi pembeda mana kiai mana enggak ea :*
02:08:155 - add |4| for snare k
02:50:981 - add |1| to keep the density spread on the left also k
02:52:937 - to 02:56:415 - would strongly suggest to make something different here besides simple streaming, those guitar sound is pretty noticeable and u can make something from it already done hehehehe
03:17:285 - this could be 3 notes to mark the transition of the new part of the song yep
03:27:937 - same with before

senya songs for touhou fags \:v/
goodluck, hope this helps to improve much further the quality of this senya map <3

Evening wrote:

irc

21:00 Envory: hi
21:02 Evening: helo
21:03 Envory: can i req a mod?
21:03 Evening: i don't really mod nowadays :x
21:04 Envory: hitsounding?
21:04 Evening: i dislike doing hitsounding lol
21:04 Envory: oh fuk
21:04 Envory: lol
21:04 Envory: testplay?
21:05 Evening: oh sure
21:05 Evening: gimme like 2 mins
21:06 Envory: 3:32 mins its okay?
21:07 Evening: yea
21:07 Evening: oh i mean give me 2 minutes, im doing something now
21:08 Envory: oh ok
21:08 *Envory is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1098902 senya - Iro wa Nioedo, Chirinuru wo]
21:11 Evening: lunatic?
21:11 Envory: yes
21:11 Envory: its up to you
21:11 Evening: alright
21:15 Envory: how is it?
21:15 Envory: seems bad lo
21:17 Evening: i think you are able to capture the motions and effects of the song well with the svs
21:17 Envory: yeah
21:17 Envory: it was very hard to capture that
21:17 Evening: i think the biggest issue here is how you choose rhythms in general
21:18 Evening: 00:18:155 (18155|2) - you did 1/4s here, but then you switched to 1/2s
21:18 Evening: which was quite odd of a change
21:18 Envory: where is it?
21:18 Evening: 00:22:937 (22937|0) -  
21:19 Envory: should i put ln at 00:18:155 -  ?
21:19 Envory: or i remove the 00:22:937 (22937|0) - ?
21:19 Evening: well, it's not the LN issue, it's how you decide to transition
21:20 Evening: 00:22:937 (22937|0) - this isn't a key point in the song where the song decides to play some other instrument/change pitch/etc.
21:20 Evening: so it was really odd to see a drastic change in mapping style 
21:20 Envory: i think so
21:21 Envory: and i do a 1/2 snap
21:21 Evening: and im not talking about the note itself, im using it as a timestamp, just to not confuse
21:21 Envory: what a weird
21:22 Evening: what
21:22 Envory: should i remove those lns?
21:22 Evening: do you get what im saying here firstly
21:23 Evening: it's really up to you to decide if you want to go with the LN mapping style or non-LN one
21:23 Evening: it's just not consistent
21:23 Envory: deled those ln
21:23 Envory: k
21:24 Envory: some re-arranged
21:25 Evening: i think that's just the recurring major problem in the map
21:25 Evening: otherwise i think the patterns in this map are not bad
21:25 Envory: just make a consistency
21:25 Evening: yes, just be consistent in sections
21:25 Envory: good opinion
21:26 Envory: but not hitsounded yet
21:26 Envory: rip ranked
21:26 Evening: you can change mapping styles in the map, it's just that you sometimes choose odd places to change
21:27 Evening: but yea that's just my brief take on the map
21:32 Envory: any svs recomend?
21:32 Evening: i think the svs here are enough
21:32 Evening: it's not too much nor too little
21:33 Envory: is it good svs?
21:33 Evening: i think they are fine
21:33 Evening: it's just that the transitions to slowjams are a bit rough
21:34 Evening: it's best to do 1.0, 0.95, 0.90, 0.85, 0.8 instead of 1.0, 0.8
21:34 Envory: where is it?
21:35 Evening: 02:39:024 (159024|2) - here is a bit sudden
21:35 Evening: 1.0 -> 0.8
21:36 Envory: better 1.0 > 0.9 > 0.8?
21:36 Evening: yea, better 
21:37 Envory: ok added sv 02:38:155 -
21:37 Envory: 0.9

Envory wrote:

Surono wrote:

mau zogok brapa nich, 69ribu dolar zimbabwew?

Ehrmm aink ga suka sogok2 eaa

Bub plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz arhgggghhhh msk kwbwrand lg map aink :'''''(

WhiteLotus- wrote:

hello Envory!
language: English

what an old beatmap :/

Hard

00:06:415 - > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10750645
00:08:372 (8372|1) - move to col 4
00:08:589 (8589|1,8807|2) - make an alter

lunatic

00:02:937 (2937|2) - 2 notes
00:03:155 (3155|1,3372|2,3589|1) - ctrl+h
00:09:894 (9894|3) - move to col 1 for jacking
00:11:633 - this part too

Goodluck dude!
sadly not hitsounded yet :/

Dark Flame wrote:

Hello there! M4M is ready to go!

Modding with col [0|1|2|3]

Hard

01:17:285 (77285|1) - https://puu.sh/Atkks/9bb454559a.png i think the red tick notes are too much on col 2 rearrange? Oh nice!
01:38:154 (98154|1) - https://puu.sh/AtkoX/38a36748d3.png would rearrange that to because you are ambusing col 2 to much for red tick notes ^^' Nice!
02:05:546 (125546|3) - Would delete this note to make it a 2 double stack 3 for Strong Kick
03:28:372 (208372|2,208372|1) - Wouldn't this stack fit more to col 0 and col 1? Ok

Have fun with these suggestions!

Unknown_player wrote:

Hello from PM request

[Lunatic]
01:01:089 - I think it's not good to put x1 here. I suggest you to delete this SV and move 0.7X on 01:01:198 thanks for your SV suggestion but i already re-arranged that VS
01:09:241 - The SV looks not comfortable to be played. Try to increase the SV from 1.2x to 1.7 and move it to blue line i think this part are not too rough and its enough as evening's said there was no problem so i'll keep
03:03:372 - Actually this part i would to recommend you to give a teleport SV here. Maybe you don't know how so i just recommend you to change the multiplier on 03:03:589 - to 1.90x and then move it to blue line. 1.7 will be fine i though But if you're interested to make the teleport sv, PM me again. It's a bit complicated so i think through IRC would be better
03:34:894 - it's better to make the last SV accelerate (0.8X to 1X) i want to make it slowly

Actually Extra diff has good SV. You can take it as reference or copy it.


Ok that's it. So far the pattern is good to me. I have no kudosu left to shoot at this map

Oscyy wrote:

Extra

• SV
  i like the idea how the first SV is extremely fast and short then followed by long but relatively slow sv, its almost like a teleport

1. 00:17:720 - 4,5x
2. 00:17:774 - 0,5x
3. 00:18:155 - 1x
   or
4. 00:17:720 - 2,5x
5. 00:17:828 - 0,5x
6. 00:18:155 - 1x
   depends on your preference, if you like stronger teleport, choose the first one

1. 00:57:068 - 1,4x
2. 00:57:176 - 0,6x

1. 00:57:937 - 1,4x
2. 00:58:046 - 0,6x

1. 00:58:807 - 1,4x
2. 00:58:915 - 0,6x

1. 01:00:763 - 0,3x
2. 01:00:818 - 0,4x
3. 01:00:872 - 0,6x
4. 01:00:926 - 0,8x
5. 01:00:981 - 1x
6. 01:01:035 - 1,3x
7. 01:01:089 - 1,6x
8. 01:01:144 - 2x

1. 01:01:198 - 6x
2. 01:01:225 - 0,1x
3. 01:01:307 - 0,2x
4. 01:01:361 - 0,3x
5. 01:01:415 - 0,45x
6. 01:01:470 - 0,8x
7. 01:01:524 - 1,3x
8. 01:01:578 - 1,7x
9. 01:01:633 - 1x

1. 01:09:024 - 0,3x
2. 01:09:241 - 1,4x
3. 01:09:296 - 1,6x
4. 01:09:350 - 1,8x
5. 01:09:404 - 2x
6. 01:09:459 - 1x

1. 01:10:763 - 0,4x
2. 01:10:981 - 1,3x
3. 01:11:035 - 1,5x
4. 01:11:089 - 1,7x
5. 01:11:144 - 1,9x
6. 01:11:198 - 1x

^apply these two groups of svs for kiai part

02:09:459 - i already give you suggestion on this part

1. 03:03:372 - 0,5x
2. 03:03:698 - 2,5x
3. 03:03:807 - 1x

1. 03:27:720 - 1,9x
2. 03:27:774 - 0,7x
3. 03:27:937 - 1x

1. 03:28:589 - 1,9x
2. 03:28:644 - 0,7x
3. 03:28:807 - 1x

• Pattern
  00:15:111 - this sound is not audible
  00:21:850 - http://prntscr.com/jqz17r im not confident with this very very long anchor
  00:30:328 - as the highest diff i expect harder and more challenging stuff than that http://prntscr.com/jqz2on
  01:05:111 - why no minijack here?
  overall, the usage of minijack for vocal is actually don't fits that much
  01:30:763 (90763|1,90872|1) - why is there minijack tho
  01:40:546 - double
  01:43:372 - same transition as suggested
  01:52:828 - ?
  01:53:046 - ?
  there are so much stuff on blue tick that is questionable, i mean 01:47:611 - and 01:47:828 - is good example, they're both follows low pitch piano/bass but the rest of the low pitched sound is skipped, you might want to recheck that part
  01:59:024 - you can do short ln anchor like http://prntscr.com/jqz5lq
  02:22:937 (142937|1,143154|1,143372|1,143589|1,143807|1,144024|1,144241|1,144459|1,144676|1,144894|1,145111|1,145328|1,145546|1,145763|1,145981|1,146089|1) - loooooooooooooooooong anchor
  02:44:350 - you can make minijack
  02:44:894 - ^
  02:45:220 - ^
  02:58:807 - why is that 1/16, the sound is only 1/8 from 02:58:698 - . Bad example of layering

Oscyy wrote:

Extra

• SV
  i like the idea how the first SV is extremely fast and short then followed by long but relatively slow sv, its almost like a teleport

1. 00:17:720 - 4,5x
2. 00:17:774 - 0,5x
3. 00:18:155 - 1x
   or
4. 00:17:720 - 2,5x
5. 00:17:828 - 0,5x
6. 00:18:155 - 1x
   depends on your preference, if you like stronger teleport, choose the first one

1. 00:57:068 - 1,4x
2. 00:57:176 - 0,6x

1. 00:57:937 - 1,4x
2. 00:58:046 - 0,6x

1. 00:58:807 - 1,4x
2. 00:58:915 - 0,6x

1. 01:00:763 - 0,3x
2. 01:00:818 - 0,4x
3. 01:00:872 - 0,6x
4. 01:00:926 - 0,8x
5. 01:00:981 - 1x
6. 01:01:035 - 1,3x
7. 01:01:089 - 1,6x
8. 01:01:144 - 2x

1. 01:01:198 - 6x
2. 01:01:225 - 0,1x
3. 01:01:307 - 0,2x
4. 01:01:361 - 0,3x
5. 01:01:415 - 0,45x
6. 01:01:470 - 0,8x
7. 01:01:524 - 1,3x
8. 01:01:578 - 1,7x
9. 01:01:633 - 1x

1. 01:09:024 - 0,3x
2. 01:09:241 - 1,4x
3. 01:09:296 - 1,6x
4. 01:09:350 - 1,8x
5. 01:09:404 - 2x
6. 01:09:459 - 1x

1. 01:10:763 - 0,4x
2. 01:10:981 - 1,3x
3. 01:11:035 - 1,5x
4. 01:11:089 - 1,7x
5. 01:11:144 - 1,9x
6. 01:11:198 - 1x

^apply these two groups of svs for kiai part

02:09:459 - i already give you suggestion on this part

1. 03:03:372 - 0,5x
2. 03:03:698 - 2,5x
3. 03:03:807 - 1x

1. 03:27:720 - 1,9x
2. 03:27:774 - 0,7x
3. 03:27:937 - 1x

1. 03:28:589 - 1,9x
2. 03:28:644 - 0,7x
3. 03:28:807 - 1x

• Pattern
  00:15:111 - this sound is not audible
  00:21:850 - http://prntscr.com/jqz17r im not confident with this very very long anchor
  00:30:328 - as the highest diff i expect harder and more challenging stuff than that http://prntscr.com/jqz2on
  01:05:111 - why no minijack here?
  overall, the usage of minijack for vocal is actually don't fits that much
  01:30:763 (90763|1,90872|1) - why is there minijack tho
  01:40:546 - double
  01:43:372 - same transition as suggested
  01:52:828 - ?
  01:53:046 - ?
  there are so much stuff on blue tick that is questionable, i mean 01:47:611 - and 01:47:828 - is good example, they're both follows low pitch piano/bass but the rest of the low pitched sound is skipped, you might want to recheck that part
  01:59:024 - you can do short ln anchor like http://prntscr.com/jqz5lq
  02:22:937 (142937|1,143154|1,143372|1,143589|1,143807|1,144024|1,144241|1,144459|1,144676|1,144894|1,145111|1,145328|1,145546|1,145763|1,145981|1,146089|1) - loooooooooooooooooong anchor
  02:44:350 - you can make minijack
  02:44:894 - ^
  02:45:220 - ^
  02:58:807 - why is that 1/16, the sound is only 1/8 from 02:58:698 - . Bad example of layering