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Cyndere wrote:
overall = look at some spacing and try to make them equal or use distance snap ratios/aesthetics/fix some overlapping/refrain from wide angled jumps
00:26:859 (3) - could polish this slider
00:32:736 (7) - curver better maybe?
00:33:664 (1,2,3,4,5) - vocals here aren't correctly emphasize/shouldn't be emphasized with slider ends -- https://puu.sh/t2F1L/7fac10f51e.png for example
00:55:622 (5) - direction of this slider kind of awkward, i suggest using the follow points as a guide line
01:10:467 (4,2) - blankey maybe?
01:19:127 (4,5,6,7) - smoother curve here
01:29:024 (5) - flip vertically on same position? looks nicer imo
01:30:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing problems and some overlaps
03:34:591 (3,4) - a slider should begin at the end of 3
03:40:468 (5,6,1,2) - some vocal emphasis errors here as well
03:49:437 (2) - make this smoother
03:48:509 (3,1) - could position 1 more nicely and blanket 3
03:49:128 (1,2) - doesn't look nice with the slider end of 2 nearly touching 1, try making them equidistant with the space from end of slider 1 to start of 2
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6909626
03:49:437 (2,4) - somehow blanket? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6909630
03:55:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - follow points make it look messy, either fix positioning or NC these 03:55:622 (1,1) -
03:59:333 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - jumps here dont look that nice, maybe use a shape/polygon?
04:09:231 (2) - flip vertical on the spot
04:11:550 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing/overlap issues
04:37:220 (6,2) - overlap
this is my first mod sorry if its bad
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Yeah i change few things and for first mod its good ^^
Thanks for the mod!