Annyeonghaseyo

[General]
You need an easier diff (May I make an easier diff for you?)

[File]
1) When I download the file, it's over 10MB!!!! (Max. 20MB if you have a video) You have to compress the file (current 11.6MB)
2) Delete .osb and full submit

[Storyboard]
1) Your SB have a uneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed space
Example orion.png


If you see the black space, you have to rid off

2) The some SB are wrong type. In djpop.png, the word should be "DJPop" not "DJpop"

[Normal]
Why this countdown is enabled but other diff is disable??

[Collab]
02:01:840 ~ 04:10:480 (SB) - WHERE'S THE SB!!!!
03:02:920 (1) - Move forward to red tick and cut short?

[Second Collab]
03:39:280 ~ 04:10:480 (SB) - WHERE'S THE SB!!!!

GREAT SONG
STAR

Leorda wrote:

Annyeonghaseyo

[General]
You need an easier diff (May I make an easier diff for you?) Sure

[File]
1) When I download the file, it's over 10MB!!!! (Max. 20MB if you have a video) You have to compress the file (current 11.6MB)
2) Delete .osb and full submit

[Storyboard]
1) Your SB have a uneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed space
Example orion.png


If you see the black space, you have to rid off

2) The some SB are wrong type. In djpop.png, the word should be "DJPop" not "DJpop"

[Normal]
Why this countdown is enabled but other diff is disable??

[Collab]
02:01:840 ~ 04:10:480 (SB) - WHERE'S THE SB!!!!
03:02:920 (1) - Move forward to red tick and cut short?

[Second Collab]
03:39:280 ~ 04:10:480 (SB) - WHERE'S THE SB!!!!

GREAT SONG
STAR

all done

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• • Disable countdown

[Normal]

• • 00:54:400 (4) - 2 squares down (grid level 3)

dksslqj wrote:

Leorda wrote:

You need an easier diff (May I make an easier diff for you?) Sure

Oh thank you

And here the easy diff (I'M LATE! )

Download: fripSide - Memory of Snow (dksslqj) [Leorda's Easy].osu

fine

[Easy]
00:59:440 (5) move it down a little bit?
01:33:040 (2) more rounded?
01:40:720 (5) new combo?
01:56:080 (1,2,3) why slience all these notes?

[Normal]
00:33:520 (4,5,6,7..) 2 grid left (lv3)

[Collab]
(Glasslake)
00:31:600 (1) it hurts the HP bar, pull it back if you can.
00:47:920 (12) remove whistle?
01:03:520 (11) add clap?
the SB disappeared lol, I dunno who create the following parts.
02:23:440 (2,3) a bit too high, try to pull it back?
03:22:420 (8) ^
04:00:280 (4,5) ^

[Second Collab]
(ignorethis)
01:34:360 (4) make a symmetric slider?
(Sonnyc)
02:12:880 (8) change whistle to clap on the beginning?
02:13:840 (2) ^
02:14:800 (4) ^
(dksslqj)
04:29:680 (1) symmetric?

Star~!

I'm very sorry that it took me so long to get to this ;a;

[General]
*SB images have a lot of unneeded transparency, but I suppose they're fine...
*There's an unneeded space between Glasslake and DJPop in tags for all diffs
*Uhh is this map going for approval? o_o; The collab scores are waaay too high for ranking...
*Offset is on the wrong tick; this messes up the metronome. 22,000 is correct.
*A lot of your collab sprites aren't showing up because you still have the "Songs2 memory of snow" location for them. Fix this in both collab .osu files and they will show up correctly.
*Also, I think it'd be a neat touch if you SB'd Leorda's name for his diff and the same for the mapper of Normal.
*Some SB'd names fade in a bit late or awkwardly. :/
*Hitsound volume is a bit quiet in all diffs

[Easy]
*Shouldn't this be named "Leorda's Easy"?
01:13:840 (1) - a bit far from the center after the spinner :/
01:16:720 (6,7,8) - clustering the spacing like this looks a bit messy... Perhaps try stacking these instead?
01:56:080 (1) - a bit far from the center after the spinner
*Hitsounds are a bit quiet in spots; could you please raise the volume of them a bit?
*Also, 0 volume hitsounds are unrankable iirc unless they're used during sliders or spinners. Please correct this.

[Normal]
*Did you map this diff? In your project link it says Ichigo-Sora, but he isn't in tags :/
01:27:640 (4) - Hmm.. maybe lower this a few grids to make the triplet pattern a bit more apparent? =S

[Collab]
*No kiai? =S
01:27:640 (4) - Expected this to start on the white tick, but both ways work..
03:01:360 (1) - extend to the white tick?
*If you decide to add kiai: In addition to giving the choruses kiai, a single fountain at 04:41:200 would look great since the map ends a bit before the song itself does.

[Second collab]
*Kiai?
*Why isn't "collab" capitalized? :S
03:05:200 - Perhaps insert a break after this?
03:24:880 - Maybe fade miny's name out for the break and then put it back in when the break is over?
*same kiai fountain suggestion here

Nice job~

Derekku Chan wrote:

I'm very sorry that it took me so long to get to this ;a;



*Shouldn't this be named "Leorda's Easy"? Already
01:13:840 (1) - a bit far from the center after the spinner :/ Fixed
01:16:720 (6,7,8) - clustering the spacing like this looks a bit messy... Perhaps try stacking these instead? Fixed
01:56:080 (1) - a bit far from the center after the spinner NO!
*Hitsounds are a bit quiet in spots; could you please raise the volume of them a bit? Fixed
*Also, 0 volume hitsounds are unrankable iirc unless they're used during sliders or spinners. Please correct this.

Thanks Grandma

Download: fripSide - Memory of Snow (dksslqj) [Leorda's Easy].osu

I like new fripSide too

To Aru > Toaru
(copy paste from my another post so no need kudosu.)

>To Aru is wrong to explain source, should be Toaru.

>On ly a few page are written as Toaru , and it was 1st uploader's fault who upload to youtube or torrent.
>If you feel nothing for "on ly" or "so me" , don't need to change.

>If I say more grammatically, Toaru is one word and rentaishi(連体詞) in lexical category.
>That doesn't exist in English. Toaru is new word, aru is used to rentaishi and bit different from toaru.
>This will be too long to write here, but I know native English speaker who can explain this problem.
>So talk with me in Japanese or let me get him to talk with.

>Well Number is Power? BATs are lazy to replace most of them? I welcome any grammatical rebuttal to this.

star~

taiko ok?

별 도장 쾅!!

풀버전 원하면 말해요

Download: fripSide - Memory of Snow (dksslqj) [31's Taiko].osu

crazytaiko

Download: fripSide - Memory of Snow (dksslqj) [31's Taiko].osu

Why aren's some names storyboarded? Like mine? D:

Edit: nvm must've been bugged D:

Edit2: Oh mine isn't in Collab 1, it is in 2 though.

Star.

/poke /revive pl0x

done

Download: fripSide - Memory of Snow (dksslqj) [ign].osu

yay revived

Done~

btw my name is not Glasslake anymore, don't forget to change that =x

Download: fripSide - Memory of Snow (dksslqj) [Glass's part].osu

The taiko map is a really~good one for practice:3

new map

Download: fripSide - Memory of Snow (dksslqj) [31's Taiko].osu

If you remove my diff, it's ok. And please remove "Leorda" from tags, since you delete my diff. Well, good luck dksslqj No kudosu please

Leorda wrote:

If you remove my diff, it's ok. And please remove "Leorda" from tags, since you delete my diff. Well, good luck dksslqj No kudosu please

oh It's was mistake

I'll update later

Oh Actually I prefer to the previous taiko map. The new one sounds quite strange
Luckily I got backup of old version XD

Why in the world did you change my ENTIRE pattern in the first collab, I can't recognize any of my own. In that state you can better remove my name there because there's nothing left of my patterns there >_>

greaaat

my pending

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Star

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