02:10:816 (1) - this red line is unused?
^ seems like it, offset and time signature/downbeat placement is the same
also agree with kagetsu's thing on hitsounding
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00:07:219 (1,2,4,5) - think both of these would be better as 1/4 sliders cause you follow melody before and after, sudden drum rhythm felt unfitting
at least 00:07:647 (5) - would make sense since drums are so much weaker than on 00:07:304 (2) - , just seemed really unnatural to click this
also (2) should be hitsounded with a snare
00:12:704 (1,2,4,5) - ^
00:16:818 - I just can't really agree with this par. there might be sounds on some of the 1/4 ticks, but a lot of the streams seem just unfitting like 00:16:818 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , even more so if you compare the spacing to 00:18:703 (1,2,3,4,5) - which has really audible snares
main issue here are the spaced streams on barely audible 1/4 sounds (if they even exist) like 00:20:931 (1,2,3,4) - they just don't feel very fitting to me
things like the other one mentioned above or 00:22:818 (1,2,3,4,5) - are nice though
00:17:332 (3,1,2,3) - should be more careful with autostacking
also your drum things really lack hitsounding, like for the snares on 00:18:703 (1,2,3,4) - the song has so many interesting drum rhythms, which you also mapped, but your hitsounding doesn't really reflect that
overall I can't really agree with lots of the rhythm choices, looking at things like 00:53:847 (1,5) - being emphasized in the song but not in how you map, even if you did stacking thing. I think something like
http://lasse.s-ul.eu/5EytxBk3.jpg could fit to focus the melody a bit more while keeping your 1/4s
00:56:932 - similarly here something like
http://lasse.s-ul.eu/tdKaYT5K.jpg could fit the make the snares stand out more instead of having multiple layers together
same for when both of these things occur again like 01:08:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:10:818 - would make more sense empty or as sliderend cause blue tick after is much more important
02:08:074 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - don't think this needs the nc spam, even if it uses 1/6 and 1/3, the only 1/6 snap clicking is on the sliderhead and should make rhythm clear enough to go with 3-3-3-3-
03:13:899 (4) - is this the only normal whistle in the whole map? sounds a bit out of place
same things obviously also apply to repeated parts
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don't really want to qualify this, patterns are nice, but I can't agree with rhythm and hitsounding is quite lacking
maybe at least hitsounding what your 1/4s are supposed to follow could help?