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Asuka_-

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Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-06-19T11:03:42+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
References Garden set, e ....time signature

锦鲤抄

okay fixed alldiff!!

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-06-19T11:59:42+00:00

xJ1 wrote:
From my mod queue

Easy:

00:54:185 (2,1) - Just a suggestion, maybe blanket this keep
01:25:685 (1,2) - Maybe make this blanket better(a little more spaced) like this: https://gyazo.com/79f384b8aaf78b76888b6e9cfe25a781 nice

Hard difficulty:

01:39:785 (3,1) - I think this should be a blanket ok

Principia:

01:15:335 (2,3) - Spacing here is a bit too intense since it isn't the build up of the song yet keep
01:29:285 (1) - This can be a blanket with 01:28:685 (2) keep...
Same thing here 01:40:085 (1) - with 01:39:635 (4)

Ametrin wrote:
nm from my q

actually I want to make a gd for that song ;w; love it so much
maybe... a 5.3* diff? sorry... spread is fine xd

[hard]
00:40:685 (1,2,3) - angle not even little changed

[principia]
00:23:285 (3) - ctrl+g. flow now kinda wired imo little changed, (i didnt do ctrl +g)
00:50:585 (1) - make this a 3/4 slider will be cool i want to jump... if i changed to 3/4, i will not be able to make jump xd
01:34:385 (1,2,1) - blanket ye

Thanks!!

Minorsonek

402 posts

Joined December 2014

Minorsonek 2017-06-19T14:18:33+00:00

Hi, mod as you requested (I'll skip easy/normal, too easy for me to deal with

)

Principia

00:20:135 (7) - i suggest moving this a little bit up to make a perfect star between (4,5,6,7) and move 00:20:285 (8) - to make triangle between (6,7,8)
00:30:785 (6) - and 00:32:285 (4) - repair blanket
00:55:985 (4,6) - i would remove overlap, looks bad
01:03:485 (5,6,7,8) - make perfect star here
01:18:185 (5,6,1) - make the same distance from 5 to 6 and from 6 to 1
01:19:985 (3,1) - make better blanket
02:02:915 (1,2,1,2) - bpm had changed, i would do NC on every circle or decrease spacing, now its spaced as every 1/2 beat was spaced earlier so it would be confusing to play
02:03:644 (1) - i think better idea would be to start slider from top of it, sliderhead in the middle doesnt look good

overall diff is pretty good, flow isnt bad, only aesthetics things

Milan's Insane

00:33:485 (1) - i suggest to make long slider here, break here is so confusing
00:52:385 (1) - wtf that slider under circles, not even stacked
00:53:285 (1) 00:55:085 (1) 00:55:985 (1) - 00:56:885 (1) - - - ^
nvm, you'd better ask Irreversible for mod this, im not into that kind of diff's, for me its just bad so i wont complain about it anymore to not make it worse

joker's insane

00:18:935 (7) - missed sound here, you mapped it before (00:17:135 (6) - )
00:51:485 (1,2) - the song speeds up, increase the spacing
(overall, after 50th second the spacing should be increased, or you need to decrease it earlier when song is calm)
01:28:385 (4) - for me its breaking flow too much, i recommend Ctrl+G or something
overall, nothing special here, just slider + circle spam, but atleast aesthetics is fine

Hard

(suggestion) so many sliders at the beginning, i would add some circles for example for this sound 00:22:085 (4,5) - (for the whole section of course)
00:33:485 (1) - spinner ends on blue tick? reason?
00:37:085 (2) - i would add NC here, as later you did the same on 00:38:585 (5,1) - or 00:40:385 (4,1) -
00:42:935 (2) - you skipped very important sound in the middle of this slider (white tick)
01:18:860 (2) - i would add something here, there are some hearable sounds to map but it isnt required
01:39:785 (6,1) - make this (6) slider more overlap on (1) slider just like you did before for example here 01:21:785 (6,1) -
02:02:585 (4,5,6) - once again, if it isnt 1/2 gap bcs of bpm changes, dont space it equally as you do normal 1/2 space
overall, diff is pretty good, flow is perfect, dont see any major problem here

Map is good, should be ranked easily

A s h e m u

376 posts

Joined February 2013

A s h e m u 2017-06-20T22:44:31+00:00

Hi Asuka senpai \o/

Easy

完璧過ぎて何も言うことがみつかりませんでした… nice diff !!

Maki's Normal

00:22:685 ~ 00:29:885 - I suggest a pattern of different NC
NC
1 . 00:22:685 -
2 . 00:24:485 -
3 . 00:26:285 -
4 . 00:28:085 -
5 . 00:29:885 -

Done ~~Kappa~~
00:32:585 (4,5) - the flow here looks good by the straight line imo
image
01:12:185 (5) - everybody will not miss this blanket.
01:22:085 (5) - nazi DS ? and i think this form to do it this way
image
https://puu.sh/wpQ54.png
please use this cord if good :3
01:22:085 (1,2,3) -
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01:32:885 (4) - remove finish ?
01:40:085 (4) - I think that this, being piled up is not good
01:41:885 (1) - DS
01:42:785 (2) - ^

Hard

Hard Diffから受けた第一印象が「これはLight Insaneかな？」の一点でした

00:44:885 (2) - パターンの一貫性を尊重するならここは重ねるべきではないかな？と思います
01:32:885 (1,2,3) - Guestなので関係ないとするべきかもしれませんがInsane Diffが1/2のスライダーで取っているので、それらよりも難化してるように見えるのはどうかな？と小さいながら疑問を抱きました
個人的には1/2スライダーでシンプルに拾わせた方がHard Diffに相応しいと思うので1/2スライダーへの変更を提案したいと思います。

全体的に見るととてもプレイしてて楽しいと思える内容だと思いましたこれもnice diffです suki \o/

Principia

初見フルコン気持ちよかったですもうこのままRankedして欲しいなぁ… (ぉ

00:25:385 (6) - 一応強い音なのでよかったらNCとかどうですかね？
00:28:985 (6) - ^
02:03:644 (1) - スキンによっては始点からどちらに進むのか混乱を招くかもしれないので被らないようにするのがいいかな？と思いました
Code置いておくのでよかったら参考にでもしてやって下さい \o/
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Insaneは特に指摘すべき場所が見つけれませんでした orz
どちゃくそ面白いマップセットでした(^o^)ﾉ Ranked期待してます！

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-06-21T13:47:10+00:00

Minorsonek wrote:
Hi, mod as you requested (I'll skip easy/normal, too easy for me to deal with )

Principia
00:20:135 (7) - i suggest moving this a little bit up to make a perfect star between (4,5,6,7) and move 00:20:285 (8) - to make triangle between (6,7,8) no
00:30:785 (6) - and 00:32:285 (4) - repair blanket k
00:55:985 (4,6) - i would remove overlap, looks bad fixed
01:03:485 (5,6,7,8) - make perfect star here hm... keep
01:18:185 (5,6,1) - make the same distance from 5 to 6 and from 6 to 1 flow is good
01:19:985 (3,1) - make better blanket keep
02:02:915 (1,2,1,2) - bpm had changed, i would do NC on every circle or decrease spacing, now its spaced as every 1/2 beat was spaced earlier so it would be confusing to play okay
02:03:644 (1) - i think better idea would be to start slider from top of it, sliderhead in the middle doesnt look good i wanna keep!! lol

overall diff is pretty good, flow isnt bad, only aesthetics things

Hard
(suggestion) so many sliders at the beginning, i would add some circles for example for this sound 00:22:085 (4,5) - (for the whole section of course)
00:33:485 (1) - spinner ends on blue tick? reason? it is fit music
00:37:085 (2) - i would add NC here, as later you did the same on 00:38:585 (5,1) - or 00:40:385 (4,1) - avoid nc spam here.
00:42:935 (2) - you skipped very important sound in the middle of this slider (white tick) important sound...? i don think so for now.
01:18:860 (2) - i would add something here, there are some hearable sounds to map but it isnt required keep for now
01:39:785 (6,1) - make this (6) slider more overlap on (1) slider just like you did before for example here 01:21:785 (6,1) - nice
02:02:585 (4,5,6) - once again, if it isnt 1/2 gap bcs of bpm changes, dont space it equally as you do normal 1/2 space put nc
overall, diff is pretty good, flow is perfect, dont see any major problem here

A s h e m u wrote:
Hi Asuka senpai \o/ no im unko /o\
Hard

Hard Diffから受けた第一印象が「これはLight Insaneかな？」の一点でした
00:44:885 (2) - パターンの一貫性を尊重するならここは重ねるべきではないかな？と思います　ういっす
01:32:885 (1,2,3) - Guestなので関係ないとするべきかもしれませんがInsane Diffが1/2のスライダーで取っているので、それらよりも難化してるように見えるのはどうかな？と小さいながら疑問を抱きました
個人的には1/2スライダーでシンプルに拾わせた方がHard Diffに相応しいと思うので1/2スライダーへの変更を提案したいと思います。ここもkeepさせたいんじゃ...　でも確かにそうなのでめっちゃ指摘されたら変えますｗ

全体的に見るととてもプレイしてて楽しいと思える内容だと思いましたこれもnice diffです suki \o/ arigato♪
Principia

初見フルコン気持ちよかったですもうこのままRankedして欲しいなぁ… (ぉ
00:25:385 (6) - 一応強い音なのでよかったらNCとかどうですかね？　置きましたー　この曲NCわからんｗｗｗ　
00:28:985 (6) - ^ ^
02:03:644 (1) - スキンによっては始点からどちらに進むのか混乱を招くかもしれないので被らないようにするのがいいかな？と思いました
Code置いておくのでよかったら参考にでもしてやって下さい \o/　ここできるだけkeepしたいです、、、、、、、、、、、
269,150,123644,6,0,B|337:116|411:189|387:268|328:330|285:356|245:328|245:328|194:353|128:323|95:266|75:192|126:124|193:146|193:146|193:98|230:62|230:62|176:79|133:44,1,856.800020917969

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ありがと！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-06-22T02:46:50+00:00

こんにちわ how a you?

A s h e m u wrote:
Hi Asuka senpai \o/
Maki's Normal
00:22:685 ~ 00:29:885 - I suggest a pattern of different NC LeL, Done
NC
1 . 00:22:685 -
2 . 00:24:485 -
3 . 00:26:285 -
4 . 00:28:085 -
5 . 00:29:885 -

Done ~~Kappa~~
00:32:585 (4,5) - the flow here looks good by the straight line imo Oki do so
image
01:12:185 (5) - everybody will not miss this blanket. It's hard do with this spacing, but I tried to fix it
01:22:085 (5) - nazi DS ? and i think this form to do it this way Fix
image
https://puu.sh/wpQ54.png
please use this cord if good :3
01:22:085 (1,2,3) - Thanks
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01:32:885 (4) - remove finish ? idk but it's copy hitsounds from high diff
01:40:085 (4) - I think that this, being piled up is not good Sorry, сould not think up better than this
01:41:885 (1) - DS Do special for this pattern
01:42:785 (2) - ^ Fix
どちゃくそ面白いマップセットでした(^o^)ﾉ Ranked期待してます！

ありがと　Ashemu

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lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-06-23T09:16:12+00:00

[general]

so quite without hitsounds .-.
spread looks unbalanced between N, H and I

[principia]

00:09:035 (4,5) - the slider reverse on (4) seems weird since the end should be clickable like u did on 00:08:285 (1,2,3) - would be better
00:10:985 (5) - what are u trying to follow here, despite for not having a note from the song? u could do it like 00:08:285 (1,2,3) - instead would be better
00:12:635 (4) - well this again
00:14:585 (5) - you know what to do with this
00:15:485 (1) - would be better to have a 1/2 slider instead of 2 notes, which makes no sense for me due to an absent note on (2). same goes to 00:17:285 (1,2) - 00:19:085 (1,2) - 00:20:885 (1,2) -
00:16:235 (5,6,7) - optional, since u tried to follow both, but u were using a slider all the time from that synth sound, so it'd be better to follow it like 00:08:285 (1,2,3) - . should be apply to 00:18:035 (5,6,7) - 00:19:835 (5,6,7) - 00:21:635 (5,6,7) -
00:25:010 (3) - i don't think there's anything that supports the flute sound well, so better remove this. should apply to 00:28:610 (3) - 01:51:410 (3) - 01:55:010 (3) - as well
00:24:485 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/ws4OJ/04309ff56f.jpg . works on 00:28:085 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:50:885 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:54:485 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - there, as i have noticed that there are some absent notes that shouldn't be there
00:29:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/ws4Tt/e86a7eb8c5.jpg
00:31:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - http://puu.sh/ws4UK/aa51b76eb0.jpg
00:36:785 (1,2) - having 2 notes here are pretty weird for me and it doesn't make any sense for me from what u were trying to follow. i'd suggest to have a 1/2 slider, or 3/4 slider instead to follow a vocal there better, before entering to a calm part
00:37:085 - someone should increase the volume to 50 or 60, even the green line here is missing
00:37:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think this follows way more better on rhythm based on the instruments with vocals https://puu.sh/ws5f7/c5283712fe.jpg . should work on 00:38:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too. oh, 00:44:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this too, except 00:47:585 (7,8) - that follows the vocal well
00:42:185 (6,7) - having a 1/2 slider should be better rather than having 2 notes, which makes no sense to follow "nothing" on that red tick. 00:49:385 (6,7) - too
00:42:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/ws5k5/00e30f9a82.jpg should work on this rhythm if u were trying to follow both instruments and vocals too
00:55:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - vs 01:02:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - both rhythms are the same thing from those 2 parts from the song, so 01:03:185 (4) - should be 1/1 slider that follows the vocal well
01:04:985 (4,5) - suits well to use 1/2 slider here
01:13:985 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/ws5tR/a155f7c58a.jpg follows well with the rhythm
01:16:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hm, for this rhythm, i'd use 1/2 sliders around from such low spacing to high spacing on its initial snare and vocal's sound pitch
01:18:785 (2,3,4,5,6) - u could rework the pentagon neatly by selecting 2 notes, rotate 72 degrees, and keep doing that until it's neat pentagon shape, then have a star pattern there
01:21:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - suits well to follow both vocals and rhythm rather than having a note on such empty note from the song http://puu.sh/ws5Jz/13074f9055.jpg . should work on 01:23:885 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:27:485 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:31:085 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 01:34:685 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:38:285 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:41:885 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:45:485 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too. if u want to modified on 01:21:185 (1) - for example, u can use a 1/1 slider instead too
01:26:585 (1,2,3,4) - would be better to have 2 1/2 sliders instead rather than having all notes around on that red ticks from by an absent note
01:30:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - would be better to follow like 01:22:985 (1,2,3) - instead of overmapping the missing note on the red tick there. should work on 01:37:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (leave (5) and (6) as a note there) 01:40:985 (1,2,3,4) - 01:44:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too
01:32:885 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2) - try this to follow the rhythm well http://puu.sh/ws60L/474f17c3ab.jpg
01:48:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/ws626/4f6ef219f6.jpg with a jumps by that high vocal pitch should work on this too
02:01:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be better to have jumps before the ending part and having 02:01:685 (1) - as 1/2 slider + note as well
02:02:915 (1,1,1,1) - i tried a testplay on that, and i find it hard to time it well to hit it. i'd suggest using a slider will do to make it more easier play on such extra diff
02:03:644 (1) - u could ask someone who's good at slider art to fix this apple slider .-.

[milan]

01:21:785 (3) - blame the stacks from 01:20:885 (3) -
uh check more bug stacks around on ur diff
01:27:185 (3) - imo, this would be better to use 2 notes for following a vocal well. should work on 01:41:585 (3) - 01:48:485 (2) - as well

nice diff xd

[joker]

00:18:935 - didn't want to add a note like u did on the rest from this part?
00:37:085 - do sth with the volume pls orz
01:17:585 (4,5,6,7) - why not a slider instead since there are no sound from the red ticks, since it is an absent note .-.
01:23:585 (6,7) - 01:25:385 (6,7) - 01:26:585 (4,5) - 01:48:785 (6,7) - should be 1/2 slider instead after i tried to listen to that part a bit
01:57:485 (5,6) - if this is an intentional blanket, fix this one
02:03:267 (1) - try to adjust the sv a bit if u want to end it on 02:03:644 - or do something in ur on way idk

[h]

00:09:035 (3) - 00:10:835 (3) - 00:12:635 (3) - 00:14:435 (3) - 00:16:235 (3) - 00:18:035 (3) - 00:19:835 (3) - 00:21:635 (3) - weird slider reverse choice, despite it has a note there. try this in optional http://puu.sh/ws6Ok/6eb91da953.jpg http://puu.sh/ws6OP/c34de1341f.jpg or some other way than that
00:42:485 (1) - why not 1/1 slider reverse? it should be better than having 00:42:935 (2) - on a 1/2 note
00:49:685 (1,2,3) - why not use 1/1 reverse on 00:49:685 (1) - ? it should follow the rhythm well there from the song
01:21:785 (6,1) - 01:27:185 (6,1) - 01:30:785 (6,1) - 01:39:785 (6,1) - i'd avoid overlapping it with the slider tail from both sliders if i were you (overlapping between a slider tail to the body is fine though)
01:47:735 (2) - why not follow like 01:45:485 (1,2,3) - , since u used this every time on kiai part
01:45:485 (1,2,3) - if i want to make it more easier way to end it on 02:03:644 - or elsewhere, try to adjust the sv a bit from ur calculation and use a slider art if necessary to make it easier for them

[maki]

both rhythm choice on some parts like 00:08:285 - 00:22:685 - | 00:22:685 - | 00:52:985 (4) - | 01:01:085 (6) - | 01:18:485 (3) - | some parts in kiai are rly weird for me, which doesn't suit with the rhythm choice so well based from the song
NCs like 00:25:385 (1) - 00:28:085 (1) - 01:25:385 (1) - 01:44:585 (1) - 01:58:985 (1) - make no sense for me on which are u trying to emphasize the note on. usually for the NCs, the NC is used on every big white tick there, but not as always there
00:08:285 (1,2,3,4,5) - and the rests - http://puu.sh/ws7zR/0acd654717.jpg or http://puu.sh/ws7Ax/a60cc01d1c.jpg or http://puu.sh/ws7AX/d0b92e7b7a.jpg suits so well here
00:22:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - http://puu.sh/ws7Et/14579af22e.jpg suits so well for this. should be work on 00:26:285 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - as well
00:33:035 (5) - how about a note? would work on this well before the calm part
00:40:685 (1) - why not 1/1 reverse slider since u were following a vocal?
00:47:885 (1) - 1/1 reverse slider or 3/2 slider + note
00:52:985 (4) - this reverse slider makes no sense for me to understand the reason why u did it based from the song. would just do a same thing like u did by using a note + 1/1 slider. same thing goes to 01:01:085 (6) - 01:01:085 (6) -
01:06:785 (2,3) - if u try to ctrl + g this (not a note placement), u will see that a note at first will emphasize a sound well to make it clickable first, then having a slider on "wa-su" would emphasize well enough after having a note clickable by the sound on 01:06:785 - . this should work on 01:10:385 (2,3) - 01:13:985 (3,4) - as well
01:13:085 (1) - try to use 3/2 slider
01:18:785 - why didn't u map this part? try a rhythm here http://puu.sh/ws7SH/b975f5b613.jpg
01:20:285 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - works well with this http://puu.sh/ws7Vi/129bc89515.jpg
01:23:885 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - works well with this http://puu.sh/ws7Wr/35c171a105.jpg
01:27:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/ws81T/fd1ba9299e.jpg
01:31:085 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/ws82T/85213b4d93.jpg
01:34:385 - add a note?
01:34:685 - 01:44:585 - i told ya about the same rhythm use before there
01:52:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why is this different from 00:22:685 - ? even the rhythm is the same, it should be consistent with the rhythm use .-.
01:58:985 (1) - 3/2 slider?
02:02:585 (6,7,8) - don't do this. would be more hard for them to hit the note properly for a beginner player by the bpm change here. i'd suggest you to use a bit of slider art ish and adjusting the sv to end the slider on 02:03:267 - carefully here for making them easier to play this, in order for them to avoid getting 50s / 100s/ missed

[e]

01:17:585 (2,3) - i'd use 1/1 slider reverse instead there if i were u rather than making things a bit harder there, or just sth like 01:16:685 (1) - is ok
01:32:885 (1,2) - this should be better by having (1) as a slider reverse and (2) as a note
02:03:644 (1) - i'd suggest u to start a spinner here rather than making things more complicated for new players to time that bpm change. it'd be hard for them if they want to get SS for example

gl

-Keitaro

1,013 posts

Joined October 2013

-Keitaro 2017-06-24T02:29:51+00:00

from queue (sorry for late xd)

[Principia]
00:09:035 (4) - I dunno if this will match with the sound, but imo, its better to use a slider and a circle instead, also you dont do this before and after
00:15:485 (1,2,3) - A perfect triangle will be nice.
00:19:535 (4) - move this a lil bit so it will be in the centre of 00:19:085 (1,2) -
00:21:635 (5,6,7,8) - Move them so 00:21:785 (6) - will stack on 00:20:885 (1) - just like you do before
00:24:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - these seems random tho maybe change to something like.. this
00:28:085 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same
00:31:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - Posibble star shape
00:41:585 (4,5) - I dont really sure to do an anti-flow here..
01:03:185 (4,5,6,7,8) - a lil bit better, still looks random imo, probaly just move 01:03:485 (5) - to right so it looks better
01:05:735 (9) - I have no idea why did you put this more far than 01:05:135 (5,7) -
well most jumps feels random, so, fix some jumps plz
I'll stop here, becouse most problems is in the jumps.

ahh sorry only mod one diff, since most problem already mentioned in lit120's mod >.<

Last edited by -Keitaro 2017-06-24T13:51:11+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Asuka_-

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Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-06-24T05:12:38+00:00

ill reply in 2-3days.

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-06-25T11:02:14+00:00

lit120 wrote:
[general]
so quite without hitsounds .-.
spread looks unbalanced between N, H and I
[maki]
both rhythm choice on some parts like 00:08:285 - 00:22:685 - | 00:22:685 - | 00:52:985 (4) - | 01:01:085 (6) - | 01:18:485 (3) - | some parts in kiai are rly weird for me, which doesn't suit with the rhythm choice so well based from the song In my opinion, everything is not so bad
NCs like 00:25:385 (1) - 00:28:085 (1) - 01:25:385 (1) - 01:44:585 (1) - 01:58:985 (1) - make no sense for me on which are u trying to emphasize the note on. usually for the NCs, the NC is used on every big white tick there, but not as always there Fix it in last mod
00:08:285 (1,2,3,4,5) - and the rests - http://puu.sh/ws7zR/0acd654717.jpg or http://puu.sh/ws7Ax/a60cc01d1c.jpg or http://puu.sh/ws7AX/d0b92e7b7a.jpg suits so well here Use 2 picture
00:22:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - http://puu.sh/ws7Et/14579af22e.jpg suits so well for this. should be work on 00:26:285 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - as well Fix first, The second left as it was
00:33:035 (5) - how about a note? would work on this well before the calm part Idk what you mean
00:40:685 (1) - why not 1/1 reverse slider since u were following a vocal? びさき i'ts one word, therefore, a long slider
00:47:885 (1) - 1/1 reverse slider or 3/2 slider + note What for?
00:52:985 (4) - this reverse slider makes no sense for me to understand the reason why u did it based from the song. would just do a same thing like u did by using a note + 1/1 slider. same thing goes to 01:01:085 (6) - 01:01:085 (6) - To express a strong sound
01:06:785 (2,3) - if u try to ctrl + g this (not a note placement), u will see that a note at first will emphasize a sound well to make it clickable first, then having a slider on "wa-su" would emphasize well enough after having a note clickable by the sound on 01:06:785 - . this should work on 01:10:385 (2,3) - 01:13:985 (3,4) - as well fix it
01:13:085 (1) - try to use 3/2 slider Do so
01:18:785 - why didn't u map this part? try a rhythm here http://puu.sh/ws7SH/b975f5b613.jpg I decided to give a pause so that the players could rest a little
01:20:285 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - works well with this http://puu.sh/ws7Vi/129bc89515.jpg Fix
01:23:885 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - works well with this http://puu.sh/ws7Wr/35c171a105.jpg I see no point in doing a reverse slider there
01:27:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/ws81T/fd1ba9299e.jpg Fix
01:31:085 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/ws82T/85213b4d93.jpg Fix
01:34:385 - add a note? There is no need
01:34:685 - 01:44:585 - i told ya about the same rhythm use before there Fix
01:52:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why is this different from 00:22:685 - ? even the rhythm is the same, it should be consistent with the rhythm use .-. Fix
01:58:985 (1) - 3/2 slider? Fix
02:02:585 (6,7,8) - don't do this. would be more hard for them to hit the note properly for a beginner player by the bpm change here. i'd suggest you to use a bit of slider art ish and adjusting the sv to end the slider on 02:03:267 - carefully here for making them easier to play this, in order for them to avoid getting 50s / 100s/ missed I did, because the editor says that the slider does not stand on a tick, so I had to put 3 notes
gl

Thanks for the mod

GD v 3

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Asuka_-

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Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-06-26T11:29:29+00:00

im not good at english

lit120 wrote:
[general]
so quite without hitsounds .-. joker have been editing now. thanks
spread looks unbalanced between N, H and I fine prolly/
[principia]
00:09:035 (4,5) - the slider reverse on (4) seems weird since the end should be clickable like u did on 00:08:285 (1,2,3) - would be better okay

00:10:985 (5) - what are u trying to follow here, despite for not having a note from the song? u could do it like 00:08:285 (1,2,3) - instead would be better
00:12:635 (4) - well this again
00:14:585 (5) - you know what to do with this
00:15:485 (1) - would be better to have a 1/2 slider instead of 2 notes, which makes no sense for me due to an absent note on (2). same goes to 00:17:285 (1,2) - 00:19:085 (1,2) - 00:20:885 (1,2) -

keep for now because the part 00:08:285 (1,2,3) - is continued 2-3 times is not fum imo.
and 00:11:135 (6) - is bit stronger than 00:09:335 (5) - , so i put circles to distinguish it.
(i may change ??)

00:16:235 (5,6,7) - optional, since u tried to follow both, but u were using a slider all the time from that synth sound, so it'd be better to follow it like 00:08:285 (1,2,3) - . should be apply to 00:18:035 (5,6,7) - 00:19:835 (5,6,7) - 00:21:635 (5,6,7) -

i put circle to distinguish bewween 00:15:485 (1) - part and 00:08:285 - part. there are not same sound (strong)

00:25:010 (3) - i don't think there's anything that supports the flute sound well, so better remove this. should apply to 00:28:610 (3) - 01:51:410 (3) - 01:55:010 (3) - as well
00:24:485 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/ws4OJ/04309ff56f.jpg . works on 00:28:085 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:50:885 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:54:485 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - there, as i have noticed that there are some absent notes that shouldn't be there
00:29:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/ws4Tt/e86a7eb8c5.jpg
00:31:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - http://puu.sh/ws4UK/aa51b76eb0.jpg

00:25:010 (3) - there is sound imo... so even if i follow this sound, i think no problem it cuz it is extra diff.
00:30:185 (2,3,4,5) - i think 00:30:485 - is clickable better cuz sound of 00:30:485 - is bigger than 00:30:335 - .
and 00:30:335 - dosent has big sound such like 00:22:685 (1,2,3) -
for these reasons , to distinguish between 00:22:685 (1,2,3) - to 00:29:885 (1,2,3,4,5) - , i think i shuold not change rhythm.

00:37:085 - someone should increase the volume to 50 or 60, even the green line here is missing ok fixed

00:36:785 (1,2) - having 2 notes here are pretty weird for me and it doesn't make any sense for me from what u were trying to follow. i'd suggest to have a 1/2 slider, or 3/4 slider instead to follow a vocal there better, before entering to a calm part
00:37:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think this follows way more better on rhythm based on the instruments with vocals https://puu.sh/ws5f7/c5283712fe.jpg . should work on 00:38:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too. oh, 00:44:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this too, except 00:47:585 (7,8) - that follows the vocal well

I want to use 1/1slider when follow the vocal such 00:37:085 (1) - ....
stacking of 00:37:685 (3,4) - is to emphasize next 1/1. i can also use 1/2 slider, but i think should not use it cuz the part is very calm certainly, but if i use 1/2, it looks like Insane diff (rhythm), not suitable for 5.8 extra imo.
but if it is wierd, it is problem xd. i'll change if there point is pointed out by many modder. Thanks xD

00:42:185 (6,7) - having a 1/2 slider should be better rather than having 2 notes, which makes no sense to follow "nothing" on that red tick. 00:49:385 (6,7) - too
00:42:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/ws5k5/00e30f9a82.jpg should work on this rhythm if u were trying to follow both instruments and vocals too

yes it is "nothing", it is little overmap.
but, the part is stronger than 00:36:785 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , so i think it is bad that rhythm and spceing of the part is weaker than 00:36:785 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - imo.
so the little overmap & spacing is fine, i think

00:55:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - vs 01:02:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - both rhythms are the same thing from those 2 parts from the song, so 01:03:185 (4) - should be 1/1 slider that follows the vocal well Nice appied

01:04:985 (4,5) - suits well to use 1/2 slider here

i put circle to distinguish before 1/2 slider
certainly, 1/2 may suit with music. but i don't want to follow to same way.
because i think not fun.

01:13:985 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/ws5tR/a155f7c58a.jpg follows well with the rhythm
01:16:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hm, for this rhythm, i'd use 1/2 sliders around from such low spacing to high spacing on its initial snare and vocal's sound pitch

i understood that you said.
but i want to keep them. because it is just before Kiaipart,i think i want to emphasize the part by circle.

01:18:785 (2,3,4,5,6) - u could rework the pentagon neatly by selecting 2 notes, rotate 72 degrees, and keep doing that until it's neat pentagon shape, then have a star pattern there okay i try

01:21:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - suits well to follow both vocals and rhythm rather than having a note on such empty note from the song http://puu.sh/ws5Jz/13074f9055.jpg . should work on 01:23:885 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:27:485 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:31:085 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 01:34:685 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:38:285 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:41:885 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:45:485 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too. if u want to modified on 01:21:185 (1) - for example, u can use a 1/1 slider instead too

not agree, it is my style of this map.
In Kiai part, i put circles (such 01:21:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) in 1/2vocal part (01:21:185 (1,3,5) - ).
i want to keep.

01:26:585 (1,2,3,4) - would be better to have 2 1/2 sliders instead rather than having all notes around on that red ticks from by an absent note

same reason.

01:30:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - would be better to follow like 01:22:985 (1,2,3) - instead of overmapping the missing note on the red tick there. should work on 01:37:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (leave (5) and (6) as a note there) 01:40:985 (1,2,3,4) - 01:44:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too

same reason

01:32:885 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2) - try this to follow the rhythm well http://puu.sh/ws60L/474f17c3ab.jpg

the part should be emphasized imo. so i dont want to put 1/2 in this part.
because if i put 1/2, it is same with previous rhythm, so i think i cant emphasize it.
so circles are fine imo. keep.

01:48:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/ws626/4f6ef219f6.jpg with a jumps by that high vocal pitch should work on this too

keep it because i think it is fun, and same reason ↑.

02:01:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be better to have jumps before the ending part and having 02:01:685 (1) - as 1/2 slider + note as well

consistent with 01:59:885 (1,5,1) - , so keep for now (i may change)

02:02:915 (1,1,1,1) - i tried a testplay on that, and i find it hard to time it well to hit it. i'd suggest using a slider will do to make it more easier play on such extra diff i'll change if the point is point out by many modder.

02:03:644 (1) - u could ask someone who's good at slider art to fix this apple slider .-. ok

im making reply (rest diff)

Thanks!! i think there point you suggestion are nice & nice disscution (^^♪

Last edited by Asuka_- 2017-06-27T07:25:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-06-26T11:37:32+00:00

Error- wrote:
from queue (sorry for late xd)

[Principia]
00:09:035 (4) - I dunno if this will match with the sound, but imo, its better to use a slider and a circle instead, also you dont do this before and after fixed
00:15:485 (1,2,3) - A perfect triangle will be nice. k
00:19:535 (4) - move this a lil bit so it will be in the centre of 00:19:085 (1,2) - k
00:21:635 (5,6,7,8) - Move them so 00:21:785 (6) - will stack on 00:20:885 (1) - just like you do before keep
00:24:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - these seems random tho maybe change to something like.. this keep
00:28:085 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same keep
00:31:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - Posibble star shape keep
00:41:585 (4,5) - I dont really sure to do an anti-flow here.. intentional cuz calm part
01:03:185 (4,5,6,7,8) - a lil bit better, still looks random imo, probaly just move 01:03:485 (5) - to right so it looks better
01:05:735 (9) - I have no idea why did you put this more far than 01:05:135 (5,7) - its fine imo
well most jumps feels random, so, fix some jumps plz
I'll stop here, becouse most problems is in the jumps.

some people testplayed. flow of jump is not bad i think. (but if the point is pointed out by many modder, ill change,)

ahh sorry only mod one diff, since most problem already mentioned in lit120's mod >.< hm...

Thanks!

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-06-26T11:39:56+00:00

if the point is pointed out by many modder, ill change.

My Angel RangE

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My Angel RangE 2017-06-30T11:05:20+00:00

Owo.
sorry short mod :..
hello ~

[Principia]

00:26:135 (6,1) - so playing difficult , 00:26:135 (6) this raise better look, i think
00:29:285 (3) - l look this 00:29:585 (5,6) with Ds uniform , intention ?
00:46:085 (1) - this 00:46:985 (5) basket error
00:47:885 (1) - ^ too
00:52:385 (5) - this head too
00:53:285 (1) - basket error
01:24:485 (3) - symmetry 01:23:885 (1) this? error

[Milan-'s Insane]
00:48:185 (2,3) - emphasis point hear not, flow abnormality
01:13:985 (1) - tail , 01:14:285 (2,3) this head Ds uniform , 01:13:085 (1,2,3) such as
01:30:185 (1) - basket error
01:31:685 (3) - ^
01:38:285 (1) - basket ..?
01:41:885 (1) - basket error for 01:41:285 (2) this

Owo,

good luck :d

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-07-03T01:44:02+00:00

im not good at english. i use google translate

ok hs update! thanks joker!!
but i have been stopping finding mod now on mapper(and gd)'s various reasons.

i wll start finding mod when everyone ready~!
(i will reply mod posted when i start finding mod)

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Eir_DELETED 2017-07-11T06:40:25+00:00

xJ1 wrote:
joker's Insane:

Maybe make the hitsounds in the beginning a little louder (like 20% ->30%) updated hitsound
02:00:785 (1) - I think if this slider faced the left, the flow would be better
Same thing with 02:02:585 (1) intentional

lit120 wrote:
[joker]
00:18:935 - didn't want to add a note like u did on the rest from this part? add a note
00:37:085 - do sth with the volume pls orz rip my mistakes
01:17:585 (4,5,6,7) - why not a slider instead since there are no sound from the red ticks, since it is an absent note .-. i know what you mean. however i wanna express smh onto kiai part using the objects. i wanna leep it as possible when bns point out it
01:23:585 (6,7) - 01:25:385 (6,7) - 01:26:585 (4,5) - 01:48:785 (6,7) - should be 1/2 slider instead after i tried to listen to that part a bit i wanna increase density for kiai part
01:57:485 (5,6) - if this is an intentional blanket, fix this one ? why
02:03:267 (1) - try to adjust the sv a bit if u want to end it on 02:03:644 - or do something in ur on way idk okay
gl

thx guys

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Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-07-12T12:01:28+00:00

update~

Lemaire

183 posts

Joined October 2012

Lemaire 2017-07-14T11:21:09+00:00

こんちわ～
遅くなって申し訳ありません！許してください！何でもしますから！

hard

00:10:085 (1) - whistleつけ忘れ？
01:52:385 (6) - 誰も気にしないと思うけどちょっと→にずらした方が綺麗に見える（５のケツが６の真ん中に来る感じで）

じょーかーさん

01:17:585 (4,5,6,7,8) - これまじですこ。　パクらせていただきます。

一番うえ

01:06:635 (4) - 意図的だと思うけど個人的にこういうブランケットちょいずらしてるやつ気になるかも
ジャンプおくのうますぎ

みんなうまいから正直何にも書くことありません！
頑張ってください！

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-07-14T16:34:58+00:00

My Angel RangE wrote:
[Principia]

00:26:135 (6,1) - so playing difficult , 00:26:135 (6) this raise better look, i think hm.. keep for now
00:29:285 (3) - l look this 00:29:585 (5,6) with Ds uniform , intention ? intention
00:46:085 (1) - this 00:46:985 (5) basket error k
00:47:885 (1) - ^ too k
00:52:385 (5) - this head too k
00:53:285 (1) - basket error k
01:24:485 (3) - symmetry 01:23:885 (1) this? error k

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RepL4y wrote:
こんちわ～
遅くなって申し訳ありません！許してください！何でもしますから！　あとでお仕置きっすね
hard
00:10:085 (1) - whistleつけ忘れ？　いぇあ
01:52:385 (6) - 誰も気にしないと思うけどちょっと→にずらした方が綺麗に見える（５のケツが６の真ん中に来る感じで）　おｋ～

一番うえ
01:06:635 (4) - 意図的だと思うけど個人的にこういうブランケットちょいずらしてるやつ気になるかも　意図的じゃない。。ｗｗ　 fixed

thanks
ありがとおお

- Frontier -

1,854 posts

Joined April 2014

- Frontier - 2017-07-16T05:27:24+00:00

q. sorry for late & bad mod

[General]

Spread between Hard and joker's Insane is pretty high compared with the other spreads.
Difficulty Settings look questionable to me.
Color 2 might be too dark. Consider brighten this color a little bit.

[Hitsounds]

Unused hitsound: soft-sliderslide5.wav
Wave hitsound with possible delay > 5ms: soft-hitclap5.wav
01:34:085 - This part, the hitsounds pretty blend in with the song. Making the notes give less feedback and might cause players confused. But it might be just me. xP

[Easy]

I think you overuse the nc. Like adding nc every 2 notes or similar might be too frequent.

[maki's Normal]

Consider increase your HP and OD to make it not similar with Easy.
Tick out widescreen support since there is no storyboard.
Go check AiMod. No two uninherited or two inherited timing points can be placed at the same point.
00:26:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part is exactly the same as 00:22:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) but you mapped differently. Please consider making it the same for consistency between difficulty.
00:47:885 (1,3) - maybe avoid overlapping these because it can cause newbie players a complexity reading patterns. So I think you should reconstruct this part or whatever.
01:01:985 (7) - It touches the hp-bar. So consider moving it lower to avoid having difficulty in reading notes.
01:18:485 (3) - Maybe change it to only a circle, as the other diffs do.
01:25:385 (1) - Is it the reasonable reason adding NC here?
01:29:285 (3,5) - These are pretty near each other. So consider moving 01:30:185 (5) a little bit left.
01:30:185 (5) - Just my opinion. You may flip horizontally for better flow.
01:32:885 (4,5,6,7) - These might be a little too hard for newbie players, although these are emphasizing the vocal.
01:34:685 (1) - This is kinda breaks the flow since the previous notes are meant to go right side. This note is forcing the players to move back to the left side again which makes the map flows unnaturally.
01:49:085 (1) - While the other diffs have continued mapping regardless to the vocal, your diff adds a spinner. This might cause inconsistent between difficulties.
02:02:585 (6,7,8) - I suggest to add nc in each notes to make players recognize the changing BPM.

[Hard]

Tick out widescreen support since there is no storyboard.
00:47:585 (4) - I think you could make 2 circles here to emphasize the vocal.
01:39:785 (6,1) - IMO these notes overlap kinda weirdly.
02:02:585 (4) - You might add nc as you did on 02:03:089 (1,1).

[joker's Insane]

Widescreen
00:18:485 (6,7) - You might stack (7) with (6)'s slider-tail as you did on 00:16:685 (5,6) and 00:20:285 (5,6).
01:28:385 (4) - Just my suggestion but Ctrl+G this could give you a better flow and looks more appropriate.
01:34:085 (5) - You might add nc since the rhythm is different from the previous part.
<3

[Milan-'s Insane]

Consider increasing AR a bit higher since the song has high bpm, but it's up to your decision.
00:15:485 to 00:22:685 - While the other diffs mapped here, your diff instead skipping this part. Consider about consistency between map.
Widescreen
00:29:585 (3) - Off-screen!!
Gimmicks

Top diff looks pretty good for me.
GL~

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-07-16T16:06:54+00:00

Slot
I'll answer sometime in this life

- Frontier - wrote:
q. sorry for late & bad mod

[maki's Normal]
Consider increase your HP and OD to make it not similar with Easy. Increased by 1
Tick out widescreen support since there is no storyboard. Fix
Go check AiMod. No two uninherited or two inherited timing points can be placed at the same point. Fix
00:26:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part is exactly the same as 00:22:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) but you mapped differently. Please consider making it the same for consistency between difficulty. Made them the same
00:47:885 (1,3) - maybe avoid overlapping these because it can cause newbie players a complexity reading patterns. So I think you should reconstruct this part or whatever. Try fix it's do other overlap:D
01:01:985 (7) - It touches the hp-bar. So consider moving it lower to avoid having difficulty in reading notes. Fix
01:18:485 (3) - Maybe change it to only a circle, as the other diffs do. can try
01:25:385 (1) - Is it the reasonable reason adding NC here? Here, removed the nc, put it on the next
01:29:285 (3,5) - These are pretty near each other. So consider moving 01:30:185 (5) a little bit left. Fix
01:30:185 (5) - Just my opinion. You may flip horizontally for better flow. Try fix it
01:32:885 (4,5,6,7) - These might be a little too hard for newbie players, although these are emphasizing the vocal. Why if I already made such moments in the map?
01:34:685 (1) - This is kinda breaks the flow since the previous notes are meant to go right side. This note is forcing the players to move back to the left side again which makes the map flows unnaturally. Fix it
01:49:085 (1) - While the other diffs have continued mapping regardless to the vocal, your diff adds a spinner. This might cause inconsistent between difficulties. Question: Why should I follow in this place like in others diffs?
02:02:585 (6,7,8) - I suggest to add nc in each notes to make players recognize the changing BPM. Oki do so
GL~[/notice]

Very big thanks in the mod

GD

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Last edited by makisokk 2017-07-19T00:24:30+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

- Frontier -

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Joined April 2014

- Frontier - 2017-07-16T23:25:21+00:00

makisokk wrote:
01:49:085 (1) - While the other diffs have continued mapping regardless to the vocal, your diff adds a spinner. This might cause inconsistent between difficulties. Question: Why should I follow in this place like in others diffs?

for consistency in mapset. Although, it's up to you :3

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-07-26T12:00:45+00:00

update
Ill reply them in 2-5 days

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-08-08T09:10:31+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
q. sorry for late & bad mod

[General]
Spread between Hard and joker's Insane is pretty high compared with the other spreads.　fine!!
Difficulty Settings look questionable to me. pobably fine!!
Color 2 might be too dark. Consider brighten this color a little bit. keep
[Easy]
I think you overuse the nc. Like adding nc every 2 notes or similar might be too frequent. i understood. but keep for now. if it wil be pointed out by ,
ill consider again.
[Hard]
Tick out widescreen support since there is no storyboard.
00:47:585 (4) - I think you could make 2 circles here to emphasize the vocal.
01:39:785 (6,1) - IMO these notes overlap kinda weirdly.
02:02:585 (4) - You might add nc as you did on 02:03:089 (1,1). all fixed

Thanks!
& update!

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Weedy 2017-09-21T21:46:29+00:00

steals timing and mp3
doesn't credit
:thinkinGG:

Asuka_-

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Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-09-21T22:09:33+00:00

xd
ok sry, i wrote.

~~i"ll remove hard diff and look for gd.~~

Last edited by Asuka_- 2017-09-22T12:45:13+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Eir_DELETED

Eir_DELETED 2017-09-22T04:06:00+00:00

revive plz

- Frontier - wrote:
q. sorry for late & bad mod

[General]
Spread between Hard and joker's Insane is pretty high compared with the other spreads. oh seriously? i guess it's no problem in terms of intense and sd
Difficulty Settings look questionable to me. plz teach me senpai
Color 2 might be too dark. Consider brighten this color a little bit. addressed on my diff
[Hitsounds]
Unused hitsound: soft-sliderslide5.wav nah, the hitsound is used 01:19:085 (3,4,5) - in my insane.
Wave hitsound with possible delay > 5ms: soft-hitclap5.wav replaced new clap instead
01:34:085 - This part, the hitsounds pretty blend in with the song. Making the notes give less feedback and might cause players confused. But it might be just me. xP will wait more opinion from others
[joker's Insane]
Widescreen omg
00:18:485 (6,7) - You might stack (7) with (6)'s slider-tail as you did on 00:16:685 (5,6) and 00:20:285 (5,6). true
01:28:385 (4) - Just my suggestion but Ctrl+G this could give you a better flow and looks more appropriate. nope, the slider is emphasized by strong vocal and the hand clap
01:34:085 (5) - You might add nc since the rhythm is different from the previous part. yeeeeeeeeee
<3 lit
GL~

@あすかさん
hitsound何かといろいろいじったので、更新お願いします。
https://puu.sh/xFO2W/43c1d57c1a.wav　いまの"soft-hitclap5.wav"を消してかわりにこいついれてくだしあ！

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:風の唄
Artist:MAMI
ArtistUnicode:MAMI
Creator:Asuka_-
Version:joker's Insane
Source:ニュートンと林檎の樹
Tags:opening eroge Newton to ringo no ki apple novel makisokk joker- Milan-
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Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-09-22T14:26:18+00:00

ok~
updated!!

updateされてないぞーとかあったら知らせてくださいー

pishifat

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pishifat 2017-09-23T07:04:18+00:00

milan's diff is cool, though i can't really support the top diff's jump spam stuff lol. repeated 1/2 and equal spacing seems so weird when song only focuses on 1/1 pretty much everywhere

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-09-23T07:07:38+00:00

ah okay... lol
thanks for looking~!!

I want to keep jump of top diff.
But I judged that I can not do rank, so I'll remove it.
Milan's cs 5.5 map is suitable for the top lol

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-09-24T15:56:09+00:00

im reworking placement of hard diff.

hard update.

im reworking top diff....

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-11-11T15:11:08+00:00

i'll update and find some mods after syph done.

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