[General]*Storyboard had multiple issues and wasn't super clean, so I made some adjustments and nazi'd every line:
http://puu.sh/1Bd8*IIRC the only thing I "added" was flashes for the triplet beat at 00:19:312. Everything else in the SB should be the same albeit cleaned up. I'd still like to see the Doomsday's background be a little bit brighter, but then the flashes get too bright and hurt my eyes. I guess the subtle strobes should be fine.
*The only other SB-related complaint I have now is that the mapper names aren't centered nicely. I especially don't like how the shorter names look being right-aligned instead of centered. D:
*Tags: Maybe add "seven" to go with "7"? Also, I don't think "Collab" is needed since it's included in "Collaboration".
*Only 4 drain? How about raising that 1-2 ticks?
[Doomsday]*Expected the first half to be at a slower SV. Maybe try something like 0.75x and scale down the sliders to keep their shapes?
[DiamondCrash]00:31:477 (4,1) - Spacing? I mean I can still read it fine, but it might be confusing.
01:02:545 (1,2) - The overlap is a little bit hard to read... Maybe place 1 somewhere else or give 2 a new combo?
[pieguy1372]01:26:545 (2) - should be on the next blue tick (and then appropriately adjust the distance spacing, of course)
01:29:175 (2) - ^
01:45:449 (1) - remove the new combo?
[Sallad4ever]01:47:340 (6) - The sliderticks sound horrible on sliders like these... maybe try a lower volume?
01:53:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - a bit difficult to read, even though I'm very familiar with the song/rhythm
02:25:559 (1) - Didn't expect this note, so how about removing it? Your other patterns start with a red tick note anyway.
[NachoPiggy]*Expected more finishes in this part. I think I only heard like... one.
[Kurisuchianu]*A bit too heavy on the slider use imo.
03:34:201 (5) - Unrankable; Second repeat arrow is hidden from the previous hitburst (100/300).
03:43:587 (3) - ^
03:46:268 (3) - ^
[Derekku]*Still not super happy with how I mapped this, but I guess it's okay... Maybe I'll try changing some hitsounds around or something later.
[Beuchi-Chan]*A few sliders could be adjusted to look more symmetrical/sexy.
05:09:526 - Expected a note here.
05:16:746 (1) - Expected this to end on the next white tick to follow the music.
[CDFA]06:00:061 (4,5,6) - A bit too confusing to read
06:01:345 (4,5,6) - ^
06:09:687 (7) - Ughhh this is really hidden and silly... I suggest removing it.
[ignorethis]06:36:960 (5) - I
really suggest not doing this. Sliders that look exactly the same but have different speeds are usually pretty confusing and just result in combobreaks. ):
06:37:922 - Expected a note here.
[Emdyion]07:17:492 (1,2) - Perhaps try silencing those extra slider ticks.
[xxheroxx]07:40:148 (6) - Second repeat arrow is partially hidden under a previous hitburst
07:58:784 (2) - Expected this on the previous blue tick with a new note on 07:58:940.
08:03:484 (7) - And then this as a similar triplet pattern to what I suggested above.
[Lilac]08:13:993 (7) - Expected this to be slightly farther away from 6 (or at least a new combo).
[Kecco]09:11:940 (7) - Perhaps finish the end of this?
[Lybydose]09:30:572 (4) - End on the previous blue tick?
09:37:203 (5) - Expected this on the previous red tick.
09:39:809 (6) - I think this actually sounds better on the next red tick.
09:45:888 (2) - Remove one repeat?
[Xgor]10:09:098 (3) - new combo this instead of 10:09:414 (1)?
10:30:888 (7) - this combo is a bit long (time-wise), so perhaps new combo this?
10:40:993 (7) - ^
10:48:414 (1) - shorten to the red tick, although I think another uninherited section or two should be used for the preceding sliders and this.
[Blue Dragon]11:05:352 (1) - fix the symmetry please :p
I'd still like to look over the timing again, but overall this map is pretty solid! I'm very pleased with it and am happy to have contributed.