Maeno Tomoaki, Hanae Natsuki, Toriumi Kohsuke - Kimi Iro Smi · forum

_Meep_

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Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2017-06-22T20:37:01+00:00

just
staph

_handholding

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Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-06-22T22:32:03+00:00

00:05:887 (5,1,2,3) - I'm not too sure what to make of this pattern. 1,2,3 use the same spacing as 00:05:887 (5,1) despite being a different snap and it throws you off at first when transitioning (tho it's also acceptable the way it is because reasons). I do think the low spacing for 1/2 beats is kinda meh

also remember to revert back the NC patterning as discussed on discord

Realazy

Elite Mapper

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Joined June 2011

Realazy 2017-06-23T00:36:31+00:00

Tarrasky wrote:
sup, some tips

Real's Normal
00:00:029 (1,2) - The only other moment you use this stack are in 00:27:744 (1,2,3) - and for me both looks In totally different situations, one is a 1/1 timing distance that looks confortable with this semi-stack and the other is in the start of the song that maybe will not feel so nice, of course this is just an opinion but this semi-stack with just one circle isn't good in my opinion 00:00:029 (1) -, maybe stacking in 00:02:601 (1) - can be more consistent, like no semi-stack in 1/2 timing distance, just in 1/1 in all the map, you may disagree this does make sense, but both stacks are used where there are little to no instruments, so i guess it kinda fits imo
00:21:458 (2,3) - you can do a non-linear line in 00:21:887 (3) - as you have done in 00:19:601 (3) -, looks more consistent changed some patterning here
00:29:744 (4) - This can be changed just for a circle, of course have a song extended until 00:30:029 - but as before you have ignored the guitar in 00:27:744 (1,2) -, maybe can be a good idea, and looks more confortable for play just a circle than a slider starting in a red tick and finishing in a big white, looks a bit strange (this is the only situation that have happen in all map) yeah as nao said i can't do this, need to have 30s drain time
good map

PolkaMocha wrote:
[Normal:]
You're missing combo colours. oops
00:21:887 (3,4,5,1) - Square is a little warped for me. Maybe move (1) up a bit? yep i remade that square
00:27:744 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this stacking at all. It's hard to read and doesn't really fit as well as sliders do. ehh id really like to keep the stack here, i think it emphasizes the vocals quite well though if more people disagree on it i can change it
I would add at least one spinner at the end to help keep the scoreboard more competitive. Starting 00:27:744 - like Armin did. i don't think a spinner really fits here at all tbh

@mir agree, done

https://real.s-ul.eu/7zr1Aa1m.osu boop

Yahuri

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Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-06-23T00:43:57+00:00

PolkaMocha wrote:
[Hard:]
This difficulty is missing tags. fixed
I would add at least one spinner at the end to help keep the scoreboard more competitive. Starting 00:27:744 - like Armin did. Otherwise, 00:29:744 (3) - is better as a circle imo. what nao said, also can't do circle because of minimum drain time

Mir wrote:
this song is
TRASH
i think u mean this song

[Yahuri's Hard]
- 00:20:172 - this seems like a triple worth mapping cuz snare is on it and it was mapping for most of the map already// 00:22:458 - 00:23:601 - hmmmm i skip quite a lot of snare that doesn't happen on white ticks, mapping all the snare would make my diff pretty dense. might change my mind depending on future mods tho

thanks, but no changes

apparently i sent u the wrong code earlier idk fixed again from other post

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Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

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Topic Starter

Nao Tomori 2017-06-23T01:05:58+00:00

lets see..

@kisses i redid some of my nc'ing to make it clear when the snapping changes from 1/2 to 1/1 - this is then introduced by the pattern you brought up, so that issue is resolved hopefully.

updated other diffs

A r M i N

1,298 posts

Joined October 2014

A r M i N 2017-06-23T11:29:00+00:00

fixed sth

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A r M i N

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Joined October 2014

A r M i N 2017-06-23T14:20:41+00:00

man btw I'm not gay pls change that BG to something with clothes on plsss

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

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Topic Starter

Nao Tomori 2017-06-23T23:19:35+00:00

no this bg is good

edit: updated

Ohwow

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Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2017-06-27T05:41:43+00:00

From ur Q part 2

[Princess]

Spacing inconsistencies in this map can throw off a lot of players (it's only a 3.6* map). You can try to NC stuff to make things easier to read, but sometimes it forces NCs on places that doesn't match the music, like you did at 00:20:601 (1) - when the NC should be on the next note.
00:11:744 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Seeing how 00:16:029 (1,2,3,4) - is part of the same pattern as 00:13:744 (1,2,3,4) - & 00:14:887 (1,2,3,4) - but the vocals are completely different on 00:16:029 (1,2,3,4) - , so i think the pattern should differ there.
00:18:029 (2,3,4,5,1) - hard to play for a 3.6*

As far as map spread goes, Easy diff should have lower star rating.
Other than that, other diffs looks fine

Hope this helps xD

Ar 8.1 lul

Net0

1,238 posts

Joined October 2014

Net0 2017-06-27T15:05:23+00:00

M4M

[General]

No metadata links, had to confirm it myself:
http://oneroom-anime.com/products_cat/disc_roommate/
So you have the Romanized artist but the original song features their names in JP, so you might wanna fix that:
葦原巧（CV：前野智昭）仁科葵（CV：花江夏樹）宮坂真也（CV：鳥海浩輔)
The Romanized title is currently “Kimi Iro Smile” I’m pretty sure you need to double check that since I’m not familiar with the rule about mixing Romanized words with foreign languages since at first glance the title rominized would be “Sumairu”
You should the Japanese name of the show , ルームメイト , in the tags since you’re using “RoomMate” as the source.
Would be great that the map density went along with the song more often, especially in terms of taking advantages of the 1/1 pauses it contains on vocal to help new players out, such as 00:17:458 - ~ 00:18:029 - /00:04:029 - ~ 00:04:601 - . If the spread is currently good, this definitely can improve that specially if applied in the easy and normal diffs.

[

A r M i N's Easy]

The finish here 00:04:029 – sounds really off and so it goes with the following; 00:06:029 (3) - / 00:09:172 (4) -/ 00:10:601 (3) –
And a lot of important transition sounds were not finished hitsounded like this one 00:27:744 (1) -
Shouldn’t it be a clap here 00:08:887 – instead of the whistle? You’re clapping every second and third white ticks and switches here when song is pretty much the same.

[

Real’s Normal]

It seems hitsounding of this diff is copied and it’s the same of easy, so you can check what was mentioned there.
I don’t get the reason behind this repeat here 00:26:601 (3) - , the blue tick there doesn’t have anything that worthy to emphasize to put a repeat, it’s not even hitsouded for any rhythm purposes so this is really off compared to the diff overall. At least imo, maybe you have some reason, but it’s not clear enough to me, sorry.

[

Yuri’s Hard]

If you want your diff to be consistent with others so far, you need to NC this 00:00:315 (2) -
Making the same pattern and rhythm 00:18:029 (4,5,6,7,1) - cover instrumentals only section 00:18:029 (4,5) – and vocal+instrumentals 00:18:314 (6,7,1) – seems to make the pattern loose the representation it could have. My suggestion is that you keep the circle to vocals there and change this 00:18:029 (4,5) – into a slider.

[

Princess ]

If you want your diff to be consistent with others so far, you need to NC this 00:00:315 (2) -
Finish spam is good for emphasis, but if your finishes all sound the same 00:08:744 (4,1,2,1) – the transition one 00:09:458 (1) – has some emphasis lost. Imo that finish hitsound patterning works a ton better if you use two different samples of cymbal crash.
That spacing tho 00:19:601 (4,5,6,7,1) - , didn’t know you liked to map hard to read patterns.
So far most of the 1/2 were covered with decent amount of spacing 00:02:030 (5,1) -/00:03:172 (4,1) -/00:04:315 (5,1,2) –/00:07:744 (2,1) -/00:08:744 (4,1) -/00:10:315 (3,4) -/00:11:458 (6,1) -/00:12:315 (4,1) -/00:13:744 (1,2) -/00:14:601 (4,1) -/00:15:744 (4,1,2) -
Exception is this slow down section 00:05:887 (5,1,2,3,4) – that works just fine. However in this case 00:20:315 (7,1,2) – you already are in the slow down section once again and spacing were kept the same or you can even say that it has increased at some points 00:19:029 (2,3,4) -, and you have 3 consecutive 1/4 00:19:601 (4,5,6) – to break it here afterwards 00:20:315 (7,1) -. Consider re-working this a bit

Mapset looks fine mostly. I hate the song but well, musical taste :3 . I'll to get to the other map in the weekend. GL o/

Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Realazy 2017-06-27T16:09:30+00:00

Net0 wrote:
[Real’s Normal]
It seems hitsounding of this diff is copied and it’s the same of easy, so you can check what was mentioned there. nao did the hitsounding so i'll leave that to him
I don’t get the reason behind this repeat here 00:26:601 (3) - , the blue tick there doesn’t have anything that worthy to emphasize to put a repeat, it’s not even hitsouded for any rhythm purposes so this is really off compared to the diff overall. At least imo, maybe you have some reason, but it’s not clear enough to me, sorry. so it's not hitsounded because nao didn't map it in his top diff, but there's a really audible sound on the blue tick which sounds similar to the one on the white tick except that it's more emphasized by the snare

thanks for looking!

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

3,089 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Nao Tomori 2017-06-27T17:06:10+00:00

Ohwow wrote:
From ur Q part 2

[Princess]
Spacing inconsistencies in this map can throw off a lot of players (it's only a 3.6* map). You can try to NC stuff to make things easier to read, but sometimes it forces NCs on places that doesn't match the music, like you did at 00:20:601 (1) - when the NC should be on the next note. i nc'd whenever it switched from 1/2 to 1/1 snapping though lol, that way it matches the song since the map is mapped on the song. and it isn't a spacing inconsistency if it's on purpose and fits the song anyway. also using the sr as a judgement in a map is kinda dumb unless it's strictly for spread purposes since the map define the SR, not the other way around.
00:11:744 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Seeing how 00:16:029 (1,2,3,4) - is part of the same pattern as 00:13:744 (1,2,3,4) - & 00:14:887 (1,2,3,4) - but the vocals are completely different on 00:16:029 (1,2,3,4) - , so i think the pattern should differ there. yes, the vocals are different, and if i wasn't spamming triangle patterns everywhere i would change this but, it's still part of the same vocal phrase and the underlying instruments are the same, and the triangle thing is central to all of the patterns in the map, so changing it here would be against that theme.
00:18:029 (2,3,4,5,1) - hard to play for a 3.6* if i remove everything that's hard to play fr 3.6 star then it won't be 3.6 stars loool

As far as map spread goes, Easy diff should have lower star rating.
Other than that, other diffs looks fine

Hope this helps xD

Ar 8.1 lul =(

Net0 wrote:
M4M
[General]
No metadata links, had to confirm it myself:
http://oneroom-anime.com/products_cat/disc_roommate/
So you have the Romanized artist but the original song features their names in JP, so you might wanna fix that:
葦原巧（CV：前野智昭）仁科葵（CV：花江夏樹）宮坂真也（CV：鳥海浩輔) yeah, the issue is that then the title field runs out of space so i just kept their actual names; i saw kwan suggest this on some random other map (i think gabriel drop kick?) where there was too much stuff so to drop the character names.
The Romanized title is currently “Kimi Iro Smile” I’m pretty sure you need to double check that since I’m not familiar with the rule about mixing Romanized words with foreign languages since at first glance the title rominized would be “Sumairu” will check
You should the Japanese name of the show , ルームメイト , in the tags since you’re using “RoomMate” as the source. changed source and will add to tags
Would be great that the map density went along with the song more often, especially in terms of taking advantages of the 1/1 pauses it contains on vocal to help new players out, such as 00:17:458 - ~ 00:18:029 - /00:04:029 - ~ 00:04:601 - . If the spread is currently good, this definitely can improve that specially if applied in the easy and normal diffs. well, for top diff i don't think that amount of contrast is needed since i can do cool stuff with spacing and patterning other than only rhythm based stuff.

[ A r M i N's Easy]
The finish here 00:04:029 – sounds really off and so it goes with the following; 00:06:029 (3) - / 00:09:172 (4) -/ 00:10:601 (3) –
And a lot of important transition sounds were not finished hitsounded like this one 00:27:744 (1) -
Shouldn’t it be a clap here 00:08:887 – instead of the whistle? You’re clapping every second and third white ticks and switches here when song is pretty much the same.

[Real’s Normal]
It seems hitsounding of this diff is copied and it’s the same of easy, so you can check what was mentioned there.
I don’t get the reason behind this repeat here 00:26:601 (3) - , the blue tick there doesn’t have anything that worthy to emphasize to put a repeat, it’s not even hitsouded for any rhythm purposes so this is really off compared to the diff overall. At least imo, maybe you have some reason, but it’s not clear enough to me, sorry.

[Yuri’s Hard]
If you want your diff to be consistent with others so far, you need to NC this 00:00:315 (2) -
Making the same pattern and rhythm 00:18:029 (4,5,6,7,1) - cover instrumentals only section 00:18:029 (4,5) – and vocal+instrumentals 00:18:314 (6,7,1) – seems to make the pattern loose the representation it could have. My suggestion is that you keep the circle to vocals there and change this 00:18:029 (4,5) – into a slider.

[ Princess ]
If you want your diff to be consistent with others so far, you need to NC this 00:00:315 (2) -
Finish spam is good for emphasis, but if your finishes all sound the same 00:08:744 (4,1,2,1) – the transition one 00:09:458 (1) – has some emphasis lost. Imo that finish hitsound patterning works a ton better if you use two different samples of cymbal crash.
That spacing tho 00:19:601 (4,5,6,7,1) - , didn’t know you liked to map hard to read patterns.
So far most of the 1/2 were covered with decent amount of spacing 00:02:030 (5,1) -/00:03:172 (4,1) -/00:04:315 (5,1,2) –/00:07:744 (2,1) -/00:08:744 (4,1) -/00:10:315 (3,4) -/00:11:458 (6,1) -/00:12:315 (4,1) -/00:13:744 (1,2) -/00:14:601 (4,1) -/00:15:744 (4,1,2) -
Exception is this slow down section 00:05:887 (5,1,2,3,4) – that works just fine. However in this case 00:20:315 (7,1,2) – you already are in the slow down section once again and spacing were kept the same or you can even say that it has increased at some points 00:19:029 (2,3,4) -, and you have 3 consecutive 1/4 00:19:601 (4,5,6) – to break it here afterwards 00:20:315 (7,1) -. Consider re-working this a bit reworked a lot so now all wide angle +nc = 1/2 gap lol

Mapset looks fine mostly. I hate the song but well, musical taste :3 . I'll to get to the other map in the weekend. GL o/

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-06-28T03:34:38+00:00

Net0 wrote:
[Yuri’s Hard]
If you want your diff to be consistent with others so far, you need to NC this 00:00:315 (2) - done
Making the same pattern and rhythm 00:18:029 (4,5,6,7,1) - cover instrumentals only section 00:18:029 (4,5) – and vocal+instrumentals 00:18:314 (6,7,1) – seems to make the pattern loose the representation it could have. My suggestion is that you keep the circle to vocals there and change this 00:18:029 (4,5) – into a slider. makes sense, appleid

fix my metadata pls

doot

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squirrelpascals

982 posts

Joined March 2015

squirrelpascals 2017-06-28T23:12:15+00:00

Hi second mod

p rinc ess

• 00:17:172 (5) - nc should be moved here to stay consistent with 00:14:887 (1,1) - (you use the nc right after the 1/4 jumps)

Hard

• 00:05:458 (2,3) - I dont like how circle 3 is placed next to slider 2, it doesn't look like it flows visually well. Moving it up so that it's in line with either part of slider 2 (the tail or the rest of the slider body) would look nicer

Normal and Easy, and mp3 look okay, all very polished. (I might be flammed for asking but would the bg be considered "safe?" If something like haitai was considered an edge case I wouldn't know about this, but the haitai case was also just fucking dumb)

Good luck!

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-06-29T00:02:25+00:00

squirrelpascals wrote:
Hard
• 00:05:458 (2,3) - I dont like how circle 3 is placed next to slider 2, it doesn't look like it flows visually well. Moving it up so that it's in line with either part of slider 2 (the tail or the rest of the slider body) would look nicer changed instead to put the middle of 3 on the bottom of 2 (so it matches the down/left flow of 1-2)

still fix my metadata

noot

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307,287,25887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,279,26029,2,0,L|175:257,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,258,26601,2,0,L|63:298,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,207,27029,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,157,27172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,59,27458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
183,107,27744,6,0,P|256:130|339:103,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,314,28887,2,0,P|248:324|197:313,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,130,29744,2,0,L|256:40,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Nao Tomori

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Nao Tomori 2017-06-29T04:18:54+00:00

squirrelpascals wrote:
Hi second mod

p rinc ess
• 00:17:172 (5) - nc should be moved here to stay consistent with 00:14:887 (1,1) - (you use the nc right after the 1/4 jumps) ya but here its clear that 00:17:458 (1) - is the start of a new phrase adn i dont want a 1 circle nc

Hard
• 00:05:458 (2,3) - I dont like how circle 3 is placed next to slider 2, it doesn't look like it flows visually well. Moving it up so that it's in line with either part of slider 2 (the tail or the rest of the slider body) would look nicer

Normal and Easy, and mp3 look okay, all very polished. (I might be flammed for asking but would the bg be considered "safe?" If something like haitai was considered an edge case I wouldn't know about this, but the haitai case was also just fucking dumb) yolo

Good luck!

_Meep_

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_Meep_ 2017-07-02T11:14:17+00:00

squirrel
dont u dare
bubble dis

Shmiklak

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Shmiklak 2017-07-03T08:05:53+00:00

what a gay bg. tbh I wouldn't call it really safe. imo it isn't what we mean "all ages". better to change it.

Yahuri

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Yahuri 2017-07-06T04:44:07+00:00

i watched the anime just now and i can confirm the background is a pretty darn accurate representation of the anime

_Meep_

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_Meep_ 2017-07-06T13:16:22+00:00

Yahuri wrote:
i watched the anime just now and i can confirm the background is a pretty darn accurate representation of the anime

more the reason it should change
if ur mom sees ur comp with a background of lolis
she'd think ur a lolicon
but witth naked men
...
gl

Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2017-07-09T04:32:45+00:00

well you might cut the bg somewhat so that they are only topless for the visible area of this pic <3

Nao Tomori

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Nao Tomori 2017-07-10T14:22:46+00:00

all no change

actually i asked oko about it and some other bns and general consensus was its fine so yea

squirrelpascals

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squirrelpascals 2017-07-12T02:44:32+00:00

hi, im rechecking this

General

• Judging from AI mod there's tag and source conflicts in my version of the top diff, unless i needed to redl

• You need to map a majority of the set before you can get this ranked. Right now you've only mapped a quarter of it

• Metadata confirmation?

princess

• 00:03:601 (2,3) - spacing feels pretty high here compared to something like 00:01:458 (3,4) -

• 00:05:887 (5,1) - this is inconsistent with the way you use this gimmick at 00:03:172 (4,1) - where you use an nc to incidate a pause in rhythm. So move nc to 00:06:315 (2) - basically or do something else

• 00:06:887 (4,1) - 00:09:172 (2,1) - Here you use the same spacing with different timeline gaps between objects, which hurts readability

• 00:16:315 (2,3,4) - I dont think that blindly using the same rhythm here as 00:13:744 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is good because there are different things happening in the song here, and leaves notes like 00:16:601 - ignored

• 00:19:029 (2,3) - Why is this spacing so high

real

•00:27:744 (1,2,3) - 00:00:029 (1,1) - beginner players might confuse these stacks to be the same rhythm

Naotoshi wrote:
general consensus

theres clearly some debate about this bg so i wouldn't want to move this forward until that gets cleared up. I would rather an official consensus over a general one

let me know when everything's good

Nao Tomori

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Nao Tomori 2017-07-12T05:24:32+00:00

squirrelpascals wrote:
hi, im rechecking this

[General]• Judging from AI mod there's tag and source conflicts in my version of the top diff, unless i needed to redl

• You need to map a majority of the set before you can get this ranked. Right now you've only mapped a quarter of it

• Metadata confirmation? net0 posted it for me!

princess
• 00:03:601 (2,3) - spacing feels pretty high here compared to something like 00:01:458 (3,4) -

• 00:05:887 (5,1) - this is inconsistent with the way you use this gimmick at 00:03:172 (4,1) - where you use an nc to incidate a pause in rhythm. So move nc to 00:06:315 (2) - basically or do something else

• 00:06:887 (4,1) - 00:09:172 (2,1) - Here you use the same spacing with different timeline gaps between objects, which hurts readability i do this literally everywhere in the map, i put an nc and the rhythm gap is doubled, it's the same thing here

• 00:16:315 (2,3,4) - I dont think that blindly using the same rhythm here as 00:13:744 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is good because there are different things happening in the song here, and leaves notes like 00:16:601 - ignored i explained this above; the map is very much based on triangular patterns. changing the rhythm too much would mess up that patterning structure. hopefully the current variation (i updted it) is sufficient.

• 00:19:029 (2,3) - Why is this spacing so high

real
•00:27:744 (1,2,3) - 00:00:029 (1,1) - beginner players might confuse these stacks to be the same rhythm they're 30 secnds apart. by now beginner players will not remember "oh at the start of the map a stack was used for this rhythm and now it is used for another one", they will just see the stack and use the approach circles to play it.

Naotoshi wrote:
general consensus
theres clearly some debate about this bg so i wouldn't want to move this forward until that gets cleared up. I would rather an official consensus over a general one

let me know when everything's good

bg is fine

ok well i asked kwan sergio shurelia etc and they said its bad so i changed it to a much more appropriate and fitting background. hope this is ok!!

squirrelpascals

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squirrelpascals 2017-07-12T19:44:55+00:00

thank you for cropping bg

Vivyanne

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Vivyanne 2017-07-12T19:55:45+00:00

top diff
00:16:314 (3) - unsnapped

gj nao

Nao Tomori

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Nao Tomori 2017-07-12T20:20:52+00:00

looks like aimod error to me tbh lol
like i copy pasted the same slider 3 times so no way its only unsnapped 3rd time

Vivyanne

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Vivyanne 2017-07-12T20:26:56+00:00

just drag the slider back and forth it fixes it

Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2017-07-17T02:14:11+00:00

[Yuri]
00:13:744 (8,1) - Now that 1 was curved why not make the curve a blanket with 8?

[Princess]
00:03:029 (3,4) - Ctrl+G them for better flow and avoid this weird spacing 00:03:172 (4,1) -
00:06:315 (1,2) - I don't think this is a nice idea, they are 1/1 they need to be spaced out.
00:12:172 (3,4) - Ctrl+G too
00:13:744 (1,2) - I think a stack of 1 on 2 would be great because it matches the vocal amazingly.
00:16:886 (5,6,1) - They need to be spaced out, the vocal here is quite in high pitch and deserves enhanced spacing.
00:18:315 (4,5,1) - Larger spacing could be applied to 5,1 but for 4,5 I think it does not deserve such a great spacing coz the sound on 00:18:458 (5) - is quite weak.
00:18:601 (1,2,3) - This is really a terrible flow, I suggest to place 00:19:029 (2) - on 292|248
00:20:601 (1,2) - Same as 00:13:744 (1,2) -
00:22:457 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
00:26:029 (3,1) - Need to be spaced out too

Cum me back

Yahuri

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Yahuri 2017-07-17T02:25:36+00:00

Regraz wrote:
[Yuri]
00:13:744 (8,1) - Now that 1 was curved why not make the curve a blanket with 8? i can't make a blanket with 8 without changing the slidershape significantly, which i dont want to do

thanks but no changes

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Nao Tomori 2017-07-17T05:18:16+00:00

Regraz wrote:
[Yuri]
00:13:744 (8,1) - Now that 1 was curved why not make the curve a blanket with 8?

[Princess]
00:03:029 (3,4) - Ctrl+G them for better flow and avoid this weird spacing 00:03:172 (4,1) - current one is sharper angle, but it's still fairly comfortable
00:06:315 (1,2) - I don't think this is a nice idea, they are 1/1 they need to be spaced out. no. this is the entire concept of the map, i do it consistently: every time there's a wide angle + NC, the rhythm gap is 1/1. the vocals slow down every time, so there's no reason for the cursor not to. i did my best to make it consistent and readable, and anything further is just making the map more boring and generic, and screwing up my concept.
00:12:172 (3,4) - Ctrl+G too
00:13:744 (1,2) - I think a stack of 1 on 2 would be great because it matches the vocal amazingly. my conceptttttt
00:16:886 (5,6,1) - They need to be spaced out, the vocal here is quite in high pitch and deserves enhanced spacing. i disagree, i already added an extra note which makes this pattern much harder and the idea of this is to have the same/similar pattern rotated 3 times to show the repetition in the song. having a completely different spacing for the last one would just screw stuff up.
00:18:315 (4,5,1) - Larger spacing could be applied to 5,1 but for 4,5 I think it does not deserve such a great spacing coz the sound on 00:18:458 (5) - is quite weak. the spacing isn't really that high. the movement to it is still part of that same rotational motion, so it's very comfortable. 1 on the other hand requires a sharp angle change and as such is more emphasized. anyway, i buffed the jump to 1.
00:18:601 (1,2,3) - This is really a terrible flow, I suggest to place 00:19:029 (2) - on 292|248
00:20:601 (1,2) - Same as 00:13:744 (1,2) -
00:22:457 (2,3) - Ctrl+G same as above
00:26:029 (3,1) - Need to be spaced out too same as above

Cum me back

all no change

we can discuss more if need be >.> also fixed hightec's unsnap

squirrelpascals

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squirrelpascals 2017-07-18T20:23:07+00:00

received word that this is okay to move on again

try #2

Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2017-07-21T12:00:01+00:00

osu! needs more BG like this!

meii18

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meii18 2017-07-21T12:17:02+00:00

sorry for breaking this party but don't you think that having as bg 3 naked guys would be inappropiate for younger audience? i don't say it like i really hate yaoi i don't hate yaoi but i don't think this bg is enough acceptable to be used

Shmiklak

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Shmiklak 2017-07-21T12:20:16+00:00

I agree with ByBy, I don't hate yaoi eithet but such type of bgs isn't what we want to see in the game with 12+ restrictions

Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2017-07-21T12:31:32+00:00

Nake? Nope, they are only topless.