M4M ~
[General]
Preview in 01:07:012 - works better. In the current one you can hear the instrument stopping, with this one you only hear the voice.
Don't know if I'm deaf, but your greenlines are a bit low compared to the song. Maybe turn them a bit higher?
[Kantan]
00:16:012 - katsu here. it's a strong sound, gives emphasis to the next one and consistency with previous pattern
00:51:712 - k k d sounds cool here. sound is getting lower, and it's the opposite colours of the last notes.
01:26:062 - consider deleting this one. you put it there because of the last sounds, sure, but it doesn't really follow anything.
01:34:012 - katsu? same than 00:16:012 -
check if your greenlines are really doing something. since it's the same than other diffs, there's a high chance one of them isn't doing anything
[Futsuu]
00:22:012 - this one works cool as katsu
00:37:612 - d k, the strong sound is definitely on the second note.
00:47:212 - k k k here? all of them are strong sounds
00:52:312 - d can work cool, since sound is getting lower
01:01:612 - put the sliderend in the white tick, it feels so weird how it is right now ):
01:24:112 - turn this d k like the others, it's the same sound going all over. if yes, maybe 01:23:812 - can be katsu to give emphasis to the next notes
check greenlines here too
[Muzukashii]
00:11:212 - I would turn this kkd or kdk. I think kdd feels weird.
00:17:212 - ^
00:24:412 - ^
00:13:912 - ddk in muzukashii is pretty hard, specially at this bpm. Maybe use ddd
00:23:512 - if ddk is hard, dkd sounds even worse. ddd too?
00:25:612 - d d k feels great here.
00:37:612 - d k d k here? strong sound is on the second note
00:40:012 - don't you think k k d d k works better?
00:55:612 - 00:56:212 - put a don here, it's weird to leave it empty
01:08:812 - katsu works better for vocals/bass sound
01:32:812 - 01:40:012 - 01:35:212 - k k d matches the melody better
[Inner Oni]
00:18:862 - 00:28:462 - 01:36:862 - 01:46:462 - kkk sounds better in those
00:20:512 - 01:38:512 - kkd feels better than kdd, also consistency with the rest of the map
00:22:912 - 01:40:912 - maybe kkddk? consistency with 00:13:312 -
00:25:762 - 01:43:762 - dkk here sounds weird, use ddk like you did before
00:28:762 - 01:46:762 - I really would suggest using kkd here, but you probably would need to remove the finisher. up to you though.
00:43:312 - 00:48:262 - consider deleting one note on this part? it may be an inner oni, but you still need breaks.
00:50:362 - 00:52:762 - turn this one katsu, gives a good emphasis to the next note
01:01:612 - you are using a wrong snap here. use something like this
Maybe I can mod Skylish's Oni when it's ready
good luck ~
[General]
Preview in 01:07:012 - works better. In the current one you can hear the instrument stopping, with this one you only hear the voice.
Don't know if I'm deaf, but your greenlines are a bit low compared to the song. Maybe turn them a bit higher?
[Kantan]
00:16:012 - katsu here. it's a strong sound, gives emphasis to the next one and consistency with previous pattern
00:51:712 - k k d sounds cool here. sound is getting lower, and it's the opposite colours of the last notes.
01:26:062 - consider deleting this one. you put it there because of the last sounds, sure, but it doesn't really follow anything.
01:34:012 - katsu? same than 00:16:012 -
check if your greenlines are really doing something. since it's the same than other diffs, there's a high chance one of them isn't doing anything
[Futsuu]
00:22:012 - this one works cool as katsu
00:37:612 - d k, the strong sound is definitely on the second note.
00:47:212 - k k k here? all of them are strong sounds
00:52:312 - d can work cool, since sound is getting lower
01:01:612 - put the sliderend in the white tick, it feels so weird how it is right now ):
01:24:112 - turn this d k like the others, it's the same sound going all over. if yes, maybe 01:23:812 - can be katsu to give emphasis to the next notes
check greenlines here too
[Muzukashii]
00:11:212 - I would turn this kkd or kdk. I think kdd feels weird.
00:17:212 - ^
00:24:412 - ^
00:13:912 - ddk in muzukashii is pretty hard, specially at this bpm. Maybe use ddd
00:23:512 - if ddk is hard, dkd sounds even worse. ddd too?
00:25:612 - d d k feels great here.
00:37:612 - d k d k here? strong sound is on the second note
00:40:012 - don't you think k k d d k works better?
00:55:612 - 00:56:212 - put a don here, it's weird to leave it empty
01:08:812 - katsu works better for vocals/bass sound
01:32:812 - 01:40:012 - 01:35:212 - k k d matches the melody better
[Inner Oni]
00:18:862 - 00:28:462 - 01:36:862 - 01:46:462 - kkk sounds better in those
00:20:512 - 01:38:512 - kkd feels better than kdd, also consistency with the rest of the map
00:22:912 - 01:40:912 - maybe kkddk? consistency with 00:13:312 -
00:25:762 - 01:43:762 - dkk here sounds weird, use ddk like you did before
00:28:762 - 01:46:762 - I really would suggest using kkd here, but you probably would need to remove the finisher. up to you though.
00:43:312 - 00:48:262 - consider deleting one note on this part? it may be an inner oni, but you still need breaks.
00:50:362 - 00:52:762 - turn this one katsu, gives a good emphasis to the next note
01:01:612 - you are using a wrong snap here. use something like this
Maybe I can mod Skylish's Oni when it's ready
good luck ~