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Shinjugamine Jogakuen Hoshimori Class - Hoshi no Kizuna

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-Atri-
3,047 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-Atri-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年7月1日 at 16:35:45

Artist: Shinjugamine Jogakuen Hoshimori Class
Title: Hoshi no Kizuna
Source: バトルガール ハイスクール
Tags: KuranteMelodii krt Regou Suzuki_1112 1112deng Left hvick225 hvick SnowWhite xLolicore- LowComboFC LCFC NNK -nanako- -N_a_n_a_k_o- Fuccho m1223961117 DreaM117er Battle Girl High School colopl コロプラ 星月みき 洲崎綾 若葉昴 佐倉綾音 成海遥香 雨宮天 天野望 東山奈央 火向井ゆり 上坂すみれ 常磐くるみ 早見沙織 煌上花音 本渡楓 国枝詩穂 下地紫野 粒咲あんこ 内山夕実 芹沢蓮華 南條愛乃 楠明日葉 田村睦心 藤宮桜 久野美咲 南ひなた 五十嵐裕美 サドネ 悠木碧 千導院楓 木戸衣吹 綿木ミシェル 加藤英美里 朝比奈心美 原田ひとみ 蓮見うらら 内田真礼 Aya Suzaki Sora Amamiya Ayane Sakura Nao Touyama Sumire Uesaka Saori Hayami Kaede Hondo Shimoji Shino Yumi Uchiyama Yoshino Nanjou Mutsumi Tamura Misaki Kuno Hiromi Igarashi Aoi Yuuki Ibuki Kido Emiri Katou Hitomi Harada Maaya Uchida Hoshitsuki Miki Wakaba Subaru Amano Nozomi Himukai Yuri Tokiwa Kurumi Tsubuzaki Anko Serizawa Renge Kusunoki Asuha Fujimiya Sakura Minami Hinata Sendouin Kaede Watagi Michelle Asahina Kokomi Hasumi Urara Sadone Kougami Kanon Kunieda Shiho
BPM: 178
Filesize: 27861kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. 1112's Extra (5.5 stars, 338 notes)
  2. 117's Insane (4.2 stars, 329 notes)
  3. Fuccho's Extra (5.19 stars, 358 notes)
  4. hvick225's Insane (4.69 stars, 415 notes)
  5. LCFC's Easy (1.47 stars, 94 notes)
  6. Left's Insane (4.63 stars, 291 notes)
  7. Loli's Insane (4.36 stars, 350 notes)
  8. Misaki (5.74 stars, 446 notes)
  9. NNK's Hard (2.95 stars, 207 notes)
  10. Normal (2.18 stars, 174 notes)
  11. Regou's Insane (5.04 stars, 336 notes)
Download: Shinjugamine Jogakuen Hoshimori Class - Hoshi no Kizuna
Download: Shinjugamine Jogakuen Hoshimori Class - Hoshi no Kizuna (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Banner by xLolicore-

Thank you BC Yume for better mp3~
Redownload 2017/07/05

史上咕咕得最強的坑


Misaki: Me
Extra1: Fuccho
Extra2: Suzuki_1112
Insane1: DreaM117er
Insane2: hvick225 coco
Insane3: xLolicore-
Insane4: Left
Insane5: 善良麻婆 Regou
Hard: -N a n a k o-
Normal: Me
Easy: LowComboFC

Other diffs:
Extra: zeluaR
http://puu.sh/xF7fr/793b1f3cb0.osu

Some diff hitsounded by DreaM117er (revised by Fuccho)
Last edited by -Atri- , edited 63 times in total.
-Atri-
3,047 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-Atri-
Will change mp3 in the next update, the new offset is 531
Thanks you BC Yume for providing the mp3~
melon boy
278 posts
Joined August 2013
melon boy
http://puu.sh/wCwCM/9319822e7e.rar

Here's my dificulty without hitsounding. Please copy your hitsounds over to my diff when you're done if you don't mind.
Hope it's good enough!!
-Atri-
3,047 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-Atri-
updated

(Still haven't finished my diff yet orz)
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
Bad mapping skills
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61795
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 45362,58508,71823
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Hoshi no Kizuna
TitleUnicode:ホシノキズナ
Artist:Shinjugamine Onna Gakuen Hoshimori Class
ArtistUnicode:神樹ヶ峰女学園星守クラス
Creator:Firis Mistlud
Version:117's Insane
Source:バトルガール ハイスクール
Tags:KuranteMelodii krt LowComboFC LCFC NNK -nanako- -N_a_n_a_k_o- zeluaR Fuccho m1223961117 DreaM117er Battle Girl High School colopl コロプラ 星月みき 洲崎綾 若葉昴 佐倉綾音 成海遥香 雨宮天 天野望 東山奈央 火向井ゆり 上坂すみれ 常磐くるみ 早見沙織 煌上花音 本渡楓 国枝詩穂 下地紫野 粒咲あんこ 内山夕実 芹沢蓮華 南條愛乃 楠明日葉 田村睦心 藤宮桜 久野美咲 南ひなた 五十嵐裕美 サドネ 悠木碧 千導院楓 木戸衣吹 綿木ミシェル 加藤英美里 朝比奈心美 原田ひとみ 蓮見うらら 内田真礼 Aya Suzaki Sora Amamiya Ayane Sakura Nao Touyama Sumire Uesaka Saori Hayami Kaede Hondo Shimoji Shino Yumi Uchiyama Yoshino Nanjou Mutsumi Tamura Misaki Kuno Hiromi Igarashi Aoi Yuuki Ibuki Kido Emiri Katou Hitomi Harada Maaya Uchida Hoshitsuki Miki Wakaba Subaru Amano Nozomi Himukai Yuri Tokiwa Kurumi Tsubuzaki Anko Serizawa Renge Kusunoki Asuha Fujimiya Sakura Minami Hinata Sendouin Kaede Watagi Michelle Asahina Kokomi Hasumi Urara Sadone Kougami Kanon Kunieda Shiho
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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-Atri-
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updated

Finished Ultimate, not hitsounded yet
Otosaka-Yu
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Otosaka-Yu
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Updated 117's insane with hitsounds
Copied it to Fuccho's Extra as he wanted to.
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Sorry guys, wrong offset again, it was 520
Edited all diffs as it's a general problem

Sorry again >_<
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LCFC's Easy again Xd
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updated

ready for mod~
Sir Idea
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Sir Idea
[Left's Expert]

AR 8.5 ? Ar 9.4 will be a pain for the player who play 4.7 stars map :/

00:12:991 (1,1,2,3,1,2) - Isn't it too much hard for a 4.76? x) I would say this is a little bit conterintuivite, but i think it's personal. I think 2 triple will more fit the difficulty ( It's 178 bpm :/ ).

00:22:598 (2,1) - I don't think this part respect the ranking criteria ''When including a slider velocity change, there should be a discernible change in the map's tempo''. This is conterintuitive too, the player will think the same shape -> same slider. I think you should use an other slider shape.

01:01:025 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - This is like extremely hard for à 4.76 tho x) I find it's two another problem with the ranking critera, the difficulty spread and the slider velocity. We have this slider shape : 00:28:497 (1) - low splider. Then these : 01:01:025 (1,1) - Same shape, but different velocity. I think it's not really intuitive for the player. And the stream is WAY too hard for a 4.76, i think it can fit on a 5.3 but i don't think 178 spaced/stacked stream fit on a 4.76 :/

The diff it's pretty good tho! But its main defect is probably the high number of different slider velocity and the difficulty spread.
I'm not really good at modding, sorry, i did my best.
sdafsf
309 posts
Joined October 2013
sdafsf
[ ultimate]
  1. 00:03:890 (2,1) - make them parallel
  2. 00:06:587 (3,1) - ^ if you dont want them parallel at least make them this one the same as the two previous sliders
  3. 00:10:126 - since youre following the vocals it seems odd to skip that one
  4. 00:12:991 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - really questionable nc spam eventhough i can see the idea
  5. 00:14:171 (2) - i dont hear anything here.
  6. 00:14:845 (5,6) - 5 is extremely weak in the music. yet you chose to map it almost equal as 6
  7. 00:16:699 (1,2) - the sound on 1 suggests a slider imo. the sound on 2 is barely worth mapping anyway
  8. 00:19:733 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is just overmapped
  9. 00:21:755 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
  10. 00:32:036 (5,1) - theres no sound on 1. id make them a slider
  11. 00:36:081 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this is just overmapped and overdone. most 1/2s arent there
  12. 00:37:767 (6,7,8) - the previous jump pattern completly kills this pattern because the 1/2s are actually there here
  13. 00:38:609 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too much
  14. 00:46:194 - you overmap the whole section. but when theres actually 1/2s you choose to not map them
  15. 00:50:407 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - a good fitting 1/2 pattern. too bad its not emphesised at all because of previous overmaps

    very questionable rhythm choices. lack of emphesis and the combo colours look horrible imo. i think this needs work. structure and patterns are on point though

[ regou]
  1. 00:05:744 (1,2,3) - this triple is obviously overmapped and even if you aruge its to emphesise the downbeat that seems a bit much for this slow intro section
  2. 00:08:609 (1) - awkwardly undermapped imo
  3. 00:20:913 (2,3,4) - 3 is overmapped
  4. 00:25:463 (2,3,4,5,6) - this rhythm choice and pattern doesnt do a very good job at representing the pattern. sliders are more fitting here. at least change it for 5 and 6 because 6 is overmapped
  5. 00:26:643 (1,2,3) - again questionable overmap
  6. 00:29:508 (2,3,4,5) - what is this mapped to. theres nothing. only 3 and 4 are in the music
  7. 00:39:621 (8) - this 1/1 gap is extremely awkward. the music doesnt support that imo

    overall the same strengths and weaknesses as the top diff i would say

good luck!
-Atri-
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sdafsf wrote:

[ ultimate]
  1. 00:03:890 (2,1) - make them parallel
  2. 00:06:587 (3,1) - ^ if you dont want them parallel at least make them this one the same as the two previous sliders :arrow: Fixed both
  3. 00:10:126 - since youre following the vocals it seems odd to skip that one :arrow: Yeah not sure why i make this at all
  4. 00:12:991 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - really questionable nc spam eventhough i can see the idea :arrow: I did it on purpose, 00:12:991 (1,1,1) - were the places where the louder bass drum hits it, so i did this
  5. 00:14:171 (2) - i dont hear anything here. :arrow: 00:14:003 - Doesn't really sound like there's a longer sound while 00:14:340 (3) - more like is, i did this for better contrast on both of them
  6. 00:14:845 (5,6) - 5 is extremely weak in the music. yet you chose to map it almost equal as 6 :arrow: I prefer making a triangle here
  7. 00:16:699 (1,2) - the sound on 1 suggests a slider imo. the sound on 2 is barely worth mapping anyway :arrow: Same as 00:14:171 (2) -
  8. 00:19:733 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is just overmapped :arrow: It doesn't, i could hear it on 25%
  9. 00:21:755 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^ :arrow: ^
  10. 00:32:036 (5,1) - theres no sound on 1. id make them a slider :arrow: But i can't ignore the background sound on 00:32:205 (1) - , so i desired to make both clickable in order to emphasize both downbeat and background sound
  11. 00:36:081 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this is just overmapped and overdone. most 1/2s arent there :arrow: Obviously not, I switched the instruments to drums at this point, Although i do emphasized some vocals with sliders
  12. 00:37:767 (6,7,8) - the previous jump pattern completly kills this pattern because the 1/2s are actually there here :arrow: Not sure what you meant, but they're 1/2 sounds
  13. 00:38:609 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too much :arrow: But i can't just ignore all the drum sounds in order to emphasize the long vocal hold, or there's another meaning over it?
  14. 00:46:194 - you overmap the whole section. but when theres actually 1/2s you choose to not map them :arrow: Not here, i follows the drums completely on this section
  15. 00:50:407 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - a good fitting 1/2 pattern. too bad its not emphesised at all because of previous overmaps :arrow: This part have more stronger drums while the previous part only something like 00:46:362 (1,2) - have stronger jumps, so there's no problem on contrast on both

    very questionable rhythm choices. lack of emphesis and the combo colours look horrible imo. i think this needs work. structure and patterns are on point though Please don't kill mapper spirit
I'll mod your maps later
Regou
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Regou
[*]

sdafsf wrote:

[regou]
  1. 00:05:744 (1,2,3) - this triple is obviously overmapped and even if you aruge its to emphesise the downbeat that seems a bit much for this slow intro section listen to the vocal again it kinda shaked and left a sound on the blue tick
  2. 00:08:609 (1) - awkwardly undermapped imo that fits the prolonged bass there
  3. 00:20:913 (2,3,4) - 3 is overmapped alright
  4. 00:25:463 (2,3,4,5,6) - this rhythm choice and pattern doesnt do a very good job at representing the pattern. sliders are more fitting here. at least change it for 5 and 6 because 6 is overmapped this map is solely mapped for pp so circle spam is necessary
  5. 00:26:643 (1,2,3) - again questionable overmap i made it into 1/2 notes now
  6. 00:29:508 (2,3,4,5) - what is this mapped to. theres nothing. only 3 and 4 are in the music there's obviously sound of instrument there
  7. 00:39:621 (8) - this 1/1 gap is extremely awkward. the music doesnt support that imo technically speaking player would have to recover for a bit after playing tons of triplets so I put a 1/1 break here

    overall the same strengths and weaknesses as the top diff i would say I think you get the idea of this map wrong. This is mapped for pp. Thank you.

good luck!
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_handholding
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LCFC
  1. Hitsounds
  2. 00:00:520 -Increasing the volume of timing point to 30 or 40% or so would be nice
  3. 01:24:115 (4,1) - Swap NCs to fit in with your NC pattern

Normal
  1. 00:24:789 (1) - hitsound addition would be nice
  2. The way you've structured the whole diff feels a bit more than a normal and seems a bit uncomfortable to use this as the next step up from easy; imho I would add in another diff in between this diff and easy or just nerf this diff... here's why
    -The 1/2 beats are spaced, the CS is relatively small and there are a lot of 1/2 sliders. On top of this the overall object density is really so the player has to click a lot of objects as well as move their cursor quite a lot. Stuff like 00:47:036 (3,4,1,2) are quite hard in general but rhythms such as 00:51:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - where you have no 1/1 gaps make it really tricky to use as a normal. It would be ok if the CS, spacing, bpm etc was lower but it's not the case. If you want to nerf it I would suggest starting with making a lot of 1/2 sliders into circles instead to give players more 1/1 gaps in rhythms.
  3. AR doesn't match the diff at all. Needs something a lot higher, try 5
  4. Because of the way you've structured the whole map (having 1/2 beat objects spaced apart or overlapped) I would suggest not having objects like 01:14:003 (2,3) and 01:16:700 (2,3) etc touch every so slightly, either space them or overlap them.
  5. 01:25:463 (4) - No hitsound additions?
  6. Imho it would be nicer to have all your claps replaced with normal samplesets. Feels random and out of place to have claps here and there.

Ezonda
  1. 00:04:227 (3,1,2,3) - The spacing is kinda weird imo. The low spacing makes it very hard to read, try increasing it. Same with 00:09:284 (4,1,2)
  2. 00:59:845 (1) - Feels unnecessary to have this as 1/8, 1/4 would do but it's up to you. Also end this at 01:01:025 because this is where the beat lands
  3. 01:25:126 (3) - how about this rhythm? https://snag.gy/KqrFRe.jpg It would feel more natural imo. Also people may misread 01:25:126 (3) as a single reverse slider since you have one at 01:24:452 (3) -
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fattypikachu
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Joined May 2015
fattypikachu
Hello from your M4M queue! :)

[LCFC's Easy]

00:14:003 (1,2,3,4) - The melody seems to enphasise these beats: https://puu.sh/x0boJ/63fe7bad6b.png So, I suggest changing the rhythm to this: https://puu.sh/x0aIP/5fdb5c503b.png

00:16:699 (1,2,3,4) - Change the rhythm to this: https://puu.sh/x0bMO/afea8dc020.png

00:19:396 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:14:003 (1,2,3,4)

00:43:328 - It should be clickable here because of the new phrase in the vocals. I'd suggest to ctrl+G and ctrl+H 00:42:654 (1,2) - ,then fixing up the aesthetics.

00:49:733 (2) - blanket 00:51:755 (1) -

00:51:755 (1) - Curve the slider a little so it points to 00:52:767 (2) -

00:54:115 (4) - I'd place this at x348 y383 so it follows 00:53:104 (3) - and leads into 00:54:452 (1) - (You may want to bend 00:53:104 (3) a bit more to accomodate this)

00:57:486 (2) - Place the head at x274 y104 so it creates a square with 00:55:800 (3,4,1) - and blankets 00:55:800 (3) -

01:04:564 (4) - Move the head to x337 y294 so it gets blanketed by 01:03:722 (3) -

01:09:789 (3) - This is the only place where you emphasise the backing instruments instead of the vocals. I'd suggest https://puu.sh/x0cMv/d12c1886a2.png

[Normal]
(I'm surprised this is still Normal...)

Open the .osu file and set the AudioLeadIn to at least 1500. There needs to be at least 2 seconds of pause before the first object.
Increase te AR to 5, right now the section from 00:49:733 - to 00:57:149 - feels really cluttered.

00:10:295 (5) - Move the tail up (The point should be at ~x423 y58) so it follows 00:09:789 (4) -

00:10:969 (6) - Curve it a little so it blankets 00:09:789 (4) -

00:17:542 (3) - ^, though with 00:17:036 (2) -

00:20:407 (3) - Move to x117 y300 to form a triangle with 00:19:396 (1,2) -

00:25:969 (4) - Move the head so it directly follows 00:25:464 (3) -

00:28:497 (3) - I don't know... this feels like it could be more creative. Maybe make a loop like this: https://puu.sh/x0h6G/680a2f1192.jpg

00:41:980 (2,3) - Make into a 1/1 slider, 00:42:317 (3) - has the same emphasis as 00:41:980 (2) - despite not having vocals

01:18:385 (5,1) - Blanket can be improved

01:21:418 (1) - Blanket 01:19:902 (5) - ?

01:25:800 (5,6,1) - Use the Create Polygon tool to make a triangle out of these

[NHK's Hard]

Hitsounds feel too soft to hear at some points. You may want to raise it about 20%.

00:27:149 (4,1) - Make parallel

01:14:508 (3,4,5) - Why not make it similar to the pattern at 00:04:396 (1,2,3) - like this: https://puu.sh/x0hVf/49711dae3f.jpg

[117's Insane]

00:07:767 (3,4,5,6,7) - Use the Create Polygon tool to make a pentagon

00:18:216 (2,3) - (3) is emphasized by the synth, so this should be spaced more, like what was done at 00:17:711 (6,1) -

00:45:519 (3,4) - This should be spaced like 00:45:351 (2,3) - , since 00:45:351 (2,3,4,5) - are equally emphasised by the drum fill

00:56:137 (2) - Form a triangle with 00:56:306 (3,4) -

00:58:497 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Are you sure you can get away with using 3/4 spacing here? I would use 1/2 sliders here.

01:10:800 (2,3) - Spacing feels too low, 01:10:632 (1,2,3) - are all emphasised by vocals, so they should have equal spacing

01:15:519 (5,6,7) - Form a triangle?

[Loli's Insane]

00:32:036 (1) - Move closer to 00:32:373 (2) - to make the 1/1 spacing more obvious (though I do realize the NC there)

00:34:733 (2) - Stack on 00:34:902 (3) - , since (3) sounds like a continuation of (2)

00:58:497 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I'm really iffy about the 1/3 spacing. Maybe make 00:58:497 (1) - a slider

[hvick's Insane]

Open the .osu file and set the AudioLeadIn to at least 1500. There needs to be at least 2 seconds of pause before the first object.

00:18:722 (1) - Think you missed a whistle here

00:23:272 (1) - Not a problem, but I always appreciate slider art when it's there ^-^

00:40:295 (1,2) - Why are these two so close to each other? It should be spaced similar to 00:39:789 (4,5,6) -

00:58:160 (4) - Extend this to a 3/4 slider as a way to signal 00:58:497 (1,2,3) - as 3/4 spaced

01:04:059 (2,3) - Space further apart?

01:14:845 (3,4) - ^

[Left's Expert, Regou's Extra, Ultimate]

Open the .osu file and set the AudioLeadIn to at least 1500. There needs to be at least 2 seconds of pause before the first object.

Can't really play at this level, so I won't mod these (Sorry!)

There we go! Good luck on getting ranked! ^-^
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