-00:14:992 - these whistles destroy the atmosphere you wanted to create by using only long sliders.. try the default ones? or lower the volumen on the heads so they arent too annoying
-00:24:800 (1) - dont you always end these on the red tick? uhhm
-00:28:967 (3,4) - using a closer distance would be nicer as this is still the intro and as you do earlier
-00:51:127 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - kinda weird transition you made here, i think a counter clockwise would feel smoother like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8552622-01:04:453 (4,5,6,1) - this is too sudden imo, increasing the spacing in each object would be better than using high spacing all together
-01:18:231 (1) - doesnt really fit when there's nothing in the song and you already made a pause here 01:17:564 (5) - . 3/4 slider is better, would fit with 01:18:453 (1) -
-01:20:453 (1,2,3) - so spaced but 01:21:787 (1,2,3) - is so not spaced, i can see the contrast you want to do but that's a bit too much
-01:25:564 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - that's 1/3 tho
-01:39:564 (1,2,3) - as 3/4 would sound cool, like you did earlier
-02:29:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 1/3 tho and from 02:30:008 - is 1/4.. mm
-02:53:675 (6,1) - too exaggerated jump compared to the rest with similar rhythms
-03:13:119 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this sounds more like
http://puu.sh/wFT5B/d06ed9991f.jpg to, with 1/3 included
-03:29:342 (5,6,7,8,1) - this is such a weird movement into the stream. try to use a bit more of movement like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8553618 -03:30:786 (3,4) - too big of a jump compared to the rest of the section
-03:38:008 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part of the stream seems to be focused on 1 place. going back and forth to the same origin point doesnt look too nice
-uhm if you wanted to copy mazzerin, i think you're lacking a bit of constancy on your distance usage and not to use awkward angles like 01:38:009 (1,2,3,4) - 03:47:119 (5,6,1) - 03:57:119 (5,6,1) - 04:45:229 (8,1,2) - etc. but if you werent then i dunno, kinda weird map to play i'd say ;;
stuff repeats thought the copypaste of the song, including snapping stuff ofc