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Fragmented

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Topic Starter

Fragmented 2017-05-31T02:37:24+00:00

Haganenno wrote:
Really liking that Error's Insane. Gonna drop two stars on this, please try and rank it, p fun stuff.

thanks for your kds!!

-Keitaro

1,013 posts

Joined October 2013

-Keitaro 2017-05-31T05:32:40+00:00

Haganenno wrote:
Really liking that Error's Insane. Gonna drop two stars on this, please try and rank it, p fun stuff.

Thx OwO

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

-Aerith- 2017-05-31T22:39:13+00:00

# Request From my Modding Queue #

As i said this is a Short Mod so..... here it is :

Easy

-00:16:712 This slider should end in here -00:14:866
-00:15:528
-00:17:174

Do the rest like that for the first half please .. i think it fits the song more

Normal

-00:27:789 add clap for hitsound
-01:52:251 it would be better if u start it from here -01:52:135 and end it in here -01:52:712

Arnold's Advanced

-02:31:943 fix this blanket please

Hard

-01:01:251 add circle
-01:04:943 ^
-01:06:789 remove circle
-02:07:712 remove circle
-02:27:588 CTRL + G
-02:28:020 remove circle
-02:35:404 add circle

Wow Nice Song u got there
Done!!! Thats all from me , Good Luck with your map !! i hope its Ranked

Fragmented

424 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Fragmented 2017-06-02T21:48:54+00:00

-Aerith- wrote:
# Request From my Modding Queue #

As i said this is a Short Mod so..... here it is : every feedback counts

Easy
-00:16:712 This slider should end in here -00:14:866 i don't understand what you're trying to say ._.
-00:15:528
-00:17:174

Do the rest like that for the first half please .. i think it fits the song more
Normal
-00:27:789 add clap for hitsound fixed
-01:52:251 it would be better if u start it from here -01:52:135 and end it in here -01:52:712 that'll be too sudden for new players? owo

Hard

-01:01:251 add circle fixed!
-01:04:943 ^ emphasizing on them claps
-01:06:789 remove circle fixed!
-02:07:712 remove circle fixed!
-02:27:588 CTRL + G i did ctrl + g on 02:27:097 (1) - instead
-02:28:020 remove circle im following the vocals
-02:35:404 add circle emphasizing on claps

Wow Nice Song u got there
Done!!! Thats all from me , Good Luck with your map !! i hope its Ranked thanks!

elena2705

530 posts

Joined May 2012

elena2705 2017-06-03T11:15:58+00:00

Hi~
From my queue M4M

Easy

This diff is really good enough! But you missed many very strong sounds like 00:16:712 - 00:20:404 - 00:24:097 - 00:35:174 - 00:38:866 - . I don't know maybe it's your idea, but these should be added. Also in second couplet
02:44:866 (1) - earlier at the place like this, it hasn't NC, so why here?
02:49:481 (1) - Also, It seems too strange
02:24:558 - spinner fits here, but you do slider in the form of the heart, it will be so cool!!!! Because in the video girl (sorry, don't know she's name...) repeats the heart shape, and here pink combo)

Normal

02:24:558 - heart as in easy diff
00:43:943 (3) - add sound of clap, like in the second kiai
Everything is cool!

arnold's Advanced

This diff is bad.... and require changes.
00:23:635 (3) - copy slider like previous one
00:25:020 (2,1) - strange flow, direct tail of the slider in other side
00:26:404 (1,2) - in one line
00:37:481 (1,2,3) - really ugly

00:43:943 (3,1) - why these two slider not the same?
00:43:943 (3,1,2) - overlap, take it off
00:44:635 - circle, 00:44:866 - 00:45:328 - slider, 00:45:558 - 00:45:789 - slider. So that it matches the rhythm
00:57:328 (3,1) - this overlap not so pretty
00:59:404 - circle, 00:59:635 - 00:59:866 - slider. also fits better
01:24:097 (1,2) - ctrl g
01:44:866 (3) - do privios one like this
01:45:789 (1,2,3) - do it like in first kiai
01:49:020 (3) - direct tail in other side
01:49:481 (1,2) - do these two the same
01:51:789 (3,4) - also ctrl g
01:53:635 (3,4) - ^
01:55:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part is cool!
02:00:558 - here strong sound, but you don't use it... here should be head of the slider
02:28:251 (1,3) - if you want to do it beautiful, do it, but now it's ugly
02:29:174 (3,1) -

Click

02:31:943 (1,2) - also it's bad, 02:33:789 (1,2) - it is good!
03:00:097 (2,1) - overlap
03:10:251 (3,1) - is situated really strange
I advise you to use only one spacing, 0.9 - fits good
Some things repeat, so check it

Hard

00:15:789 (2,3) - do blanket
00:22:943 - triple will be good here, because of words in vocal
00:45:328 (2,3) - blaket!! fix it please
00:47:981 - kick slider fits better
01:02:404 (3,6) - overlap, looks bad
01:06:328 (6) - do this slider straight
01:05:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - copy all this, 01:07:020 - paste it here, so that it will be like repeat, do not reflect vertically or smth like this, just only paste (it's 3*, so jump here is ok)
01:12:558 - delete break, because it 3*, it will be better
01:16:020 - triple here, not 01:16:251 - here
Part of rap is complicated for mapping((

So think more about this part
01:46:251 (2,3) - blanket..... After repeat of chorus, so i don't repeat all i say about it
02:59:404 (1,2) - do the same, so that it will be similar
03:11:058 - circle, 03:11:174 - 03:11:404 - slider

Check Aimod, because there are many warnings. You can reduce to 192 kbps online, in internet, so please do it. Video not so good even now, but you must reduce memory 21 Mb is a lot. I can advise you Xvid, i think it's easy to understand this program, you can choose what quality you want, what size of memory you want and etc. 15 Mb will be good. Some people can't play with video, just because video slows down the computer very much. But if it will bre 15 Mb, everything will be ok)Another artists in some diffs incorrect, so fixed it.
Since 38 second picture is losing. Try to play without video and you will notice that screen is black. And you must fix this problem because many players usually plays without video (it interrupts and distracts from the game)

I really tired of mod it

I looked at Alfaster's Insane, it's not so good, but i like how and when you change SV, 00:46:712 (1,2) - here changing SV also will be great))) And 00:56:635 (1,2,3) - these three have different distanse from each other, 01:03:328 (1,3) - here if do it visible, i mean a bit move it right
And i also looked at Error's Insane, this diff is very very good, i like it. It's easy to play, but check all blankets, it's not ideal and 01:47:981 (2,3) - here stack is better
....................................................................................................................................................................................
Ok, so FIGHTING!!!

Last edited by elena2705 2017-06-09T20:42:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Fragmented

424 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Fragmented 2017-06-03T12:22:05+00:00

elena2705 wrote:
Hi~
From my queue M4M

Easy

This diff is really good enough! But you missed many very strong sounds like 00:16:712 - 00:20:404 - 00:24:097 - 00:35:174 - 00:38:866 - . I don't know maybe it's your idea, but these should be added. Also in second couplet i left those as it will be similar to normal, so i decided to not put any notes there since its an easy diff
02:44:866 (1) - earlier at the place like this, it hasn't NC, so why here? oooh didnt see that
02:49:481 (1) - Also, It seems too strange okie changed it with a slider
02:24:558 - spinner fits here, but you do slider in the form of the heart, it will be so cool!!!! Because in the video girl (sorry, don't know she's name...) repeats the heart shape, and here pink combo) nice idea, okie i replace a heart shape with the spinner!

Normal

02:24:558 - heart as in easy diff replaced!
00:43:943 (3) - add sound of clap, like in the second kiai okie
Everything is cool!

Hard

00:15:789 (2,3) - do blanket fixed
00:22:943 - triple will be good here, because of words in vocal okie
00:45:328 (2,3) - blaket!! fix it please fixed
00:47:981 - kick slider fits better i think its fine that way
01:02:404 (3,6) - overlap, looks bad fixed
01:06:328 (6) - do this slider straight okie
01:05:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - copy all this, 01:07:020 - paste it here, so that it will be like repeat, do not reflect vertically or smth like this, just only paste (it's 3*, so jump here is ok) fixed
01:12:558 - delete break, because it 3*, it will be better fixed
01:16:020 - triple here, not 01:16:251 - here
Part of rap is complicated for mapping(( So think more about this part i think its fine because it still follows her vocals. if anyone else brings it up ill do smth abt it
01:46:251 (2,3) - blanket..... After repeat of chorus, so i don't repeat all i say about it fixed!
02:59:404 (1,2) - do the same, so that it will be similar huh?
03:11:058 - circle, 03:11:174 - 03:11:404 - slider i think its fine that way

Check Aimod, because there are many warnings. You can reduce to 192 kbps online, in internet, so please do it. Video not so good even now, but you must reduce memory 21 Mb is a lot. I can advise you Xvid, i think it's easy to understand this program, you can choose what quality you want, what size of memory you want and etc. 15 Mb will be good. Some people can't play with video, just because video slows down the computer very much. But if it will bre 15 Mb, everything will be ok)Another artists in some diffs incorrect, so fixed it.
Since 38 second picture is losing. Try to play without video and you will notice that screen is black. And you must fix this problem because many players usually plays without video (it interrupts and distracts from the game) hmmm ill resolve that issue soon

I really tired of mod it
I looked at Alfaster's Insane, it's not so good, >w< but i like how and when you change SV, 00:46:712 (1,2) - here changing SV also will be great))) And 00:56:635 (1,2,3) - these three have different distanse from each other, 01:03:328 (1,3) - here if do it visible, i mean a bit move it right fixed!
....................................................................................................................................................................................
Ok, so FIGHTING!!!

thanks so much! ill mod your map tmr

Somi

115 posts

Joined November 2015

Somi 2017-06-05T05:00:33+00:00

Add "나연" , "정연" , "모모" , "사나" , "지효" , "미나" , "다현" , "채영" and "쯔위" to tags
~Don't give me kudos since this is barely even a mod xd

cosmic

641 posts

Joined February 2017

cosmic 2017-06-05T08:08:19+00:00

woaw so much has changed

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2017-06-08T13:36:09+00:00

henlo there!

General

Remove the ''(Twice)'' from the artist since it's a romanization for 트와이스 and keep the twice a the romanized artist

Offset seems just a biit late to me, try 13 476

Sliders like these could be done in a much better way that'll make them look alot neater, here's 1 2 examples of how you could do them instead :^) (this goes for all your diffs)

Is the video supposed to be that size? it seems so small o.o just saw that the 2 highest diffs have a normal video, wut

Feel free to use the tags below if you to~ (Added korean names and k-pop)
```
worstpolackeu error- alfarai arnoldusj jyp entertainment kpop k-pop twicecoaster lane 2 nayeon chaeyoung tzuyu momo sana mina jihyo jisoo dahyun jeongyeon 나연 정연 모모 사나 지효 미나 다현 채영 쯔위
```

Easy

00:15:328 (3) - Splitting this up to 2 1/1 sliders instead would play much better and fit the vocals
00:17:174 (1) - You should do this a 1/1 repeat slider to emphisize the kno kno kno kno knock on ma door better (and put a circle afterwards so it doesnt feel empty) oh and this goes for every knock knock during the map, make it consistent! :3
00:20:866 (1) - Same here about splitting up to 1/1 sliders, you should really look over the map and do little changes like these to make the rhythm better :3, i see you randomly just skip mapping these 00:24:097 - beats after a long slider, try not to do that because it feels very awkward ; just put a circle there!
00:24:558 (1,2) - Try doing this instead! to emphisize more vocals
00:50:404 (1,2) - And for this part in the kiai, you can do this! for more variation instead of just 1/1 repeat sliders everytime they say knock knock xD

Basically go through the whole diff and try to make more variations in the rhythm (and don't be scared to do more 1/1 sliders! just don't spam them pls)

Normal

00:13:481 (1,2,3,4) - Remember how i said in Easy to use some 1/1 sliders but not to spam them too much? Yeah, that's because in Normal you usually just go for 1/1 sliders instead of these long ones and do some 1/2 sliders (Since Hard uses 1/2 sliders, magic right) Try doing alot more 1/1 sliders in normal and don't be afraid to put stuff on the red tick, it's good for spread! (Just don't do it too much) Here's an example of how you could do the rhythm here instead!
00:17:174 (1,2,3) - Ooh i really like this, try doing more of these throughout the diff!
00:43:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - To follow vocals better, try this!
00:54:097 (1) - You should totally map this part instead of having a slider! Same goes for easy (I forgot to mention it in easy, sorry xD)
00:57:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - :thinking:
01:03:097 - Jihyo actually starts singing here, so you should move 01:03:328 (3) - there instead :^) and end it on 01:04:251 -
01:04:712 (4) - If you apply the suggestion above^ put a circle here
01:08:866 (1) - Yeah you should map this too!
Honestly you should map the rap part, it would be cool! Do some 1/2 sliders and shits and it will be funn (And the break doesnt really fit there imo)
01:21:789 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe this instead? That long slider felt really awkward and didn't really follow anything
Since the second kiai is copied, just replace it with the first kiai after you applied the stuff i said there and paste it here again xD (if you applied the stuff ofc)
02:24:558 (1) - Aw so cute! seems hard to read tho, get a testplay or two and see if they can actually read it (from newer players who play normal) just to be sure :3 I really like it
Just check the previous stuff i modded on the kiai and apply it on the last one so i don't have to repeat myself xD (If you want to apply it ofc)
The break after the kiai seems kinda random, you should map it instead!
03:05:174 (1,2,3) - :thinking:
03:08:866 (1,2,3,4) - Why not do these knock knocks like you did them earlier? Make them consistenttt :3

Hard

00:14:289 - She actually starts singing here, so putting the slider on the white tick feels pretty awkward
00:16:135 - ^
00:19:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe less curve on the sliders?
00:20:866 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm follows vocals much better imo, try it!
00:30:443 (2,3) - I recommend stacking the circle with the slider to improve aestethics and make it a bit easier :3 (If you do this, do it on all objects that are like this)
00:42:328 (1) - 2 circles to emphisize the KNCOK KNCOKkdfdsf instead?
00:47:751 - You should end the slider here instead and put a circle 00:47:866 - here! also stack them if you want to, plays better imo
00:52:020 - Add circle?
00:54:097 (1,2,3) - To follow vocals better, do this owo
01:28:712 (3) - End slider at 01:29:058 - pls, and add an circle or slider after :3
01:40:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really get what you're following here with this rhythm uwu, try this
01:43:020 (3,4) - Maybe a long slider instead? To emphisize the HaaaaAaaand And try to do a cool slider art! You can use this shitty one i did if you want to xD
Same as normal with the kiai copying xD (And the last kiai, just check the mods on the kiai part before and apply it on the last one as well)
02:24:558 (1) - Do a cute slider here pls like u did in normal
02:54:097 (1) - You mapped this in the previous kiais, why not here?
03:04:020 - Add circle pls, feels empty

Won't mod the higher diffs since i'm not that experiened with diffs over hard yet :3 But nice map and gl!

dingo424

90 posts

Joined March 2016

dingo424 2017-06-09T08:46:34+00:00

Firetruck wrote:
Is the video supposed to be that size? it seems so small o.o just saw that the 2 highest diffs have a normal video, wut

Looks like this https://puu.sh/wf77r/5846da1284.png in widescreen, I think it's because the Widescreen Support is off except the 2 highest diffs. (It goes normal when you turn it on) So.. maybe you should turn it on or find a other way

Sylas

Elite Mapper

1,022 posts

Joined January 2014

Sylas 2017-06-09T12:41:46+00:00

hii m4m from your queue

Error's Insane

00:15:789 (5,6) - here you overlapped the 2 sliders while in every other pattern with the same rhythm you spaced them out (like in 00:13:943 (5,6)) so move them apart so they don't overlap for consistency
00:36:097 (3,4) - ^
00:34:712 (5,6,7) - i don't see a reason for this triple being more spaced out than every other triple since the song is the same so i'd make it the same spacing as 00:32:866 (5,6,7)
00:38:289 (4) - it'd look better if u made a blanket with 00:37:943 (3)'s tail and this slider's curve
00:47:174 (3) - the loud vocal is on this slider's tail which is bad emphasis (assuming ur mapping vocals). you should make this pattern the same rhythm as 00:48:558 (1,2,3) which will also help consistency
00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - i'm not sure exactly what sounds these sliders are following since they don't fit with either vocals or drums. Imma break it down:
00:54:443 (2) - the white tick the slider passes through has a much stronger sound than the blue tick u started the slider on. theres also a vocal starting on that white tick so itd be much better if that note was clickable. you should turn this slider into a circle and a 1/4 slider starting on 00:54:558, this fits the rhythm way better.
00:55:366 (2) and 00:56:289 (2) - ^ same thing
This rhythm problem repeats twice in every chorus so u gotta change it each time
01:14:404 (1,2) - they overlap, same thing as 00:15:789 (5,6)
02:45:558 (4,1) - i think the spacing between these notes should be much smaller since there isn't a very strong sound on (1) which makes for bad spacing emphasis
Overall the diff is ok, not a huge fan of it but its pretty fun

WORST's IKSDE

Pleaaase use ar 9 or above some of the patterns are quite hard to read and ar 8.5 is too low and makes it even harder to read
00:38:634 (1,2) - I like the way these slider paths merge, but im not sure its rankable since sliders paths have to be clear and visible. I'm not 100% sure so you should probably check with someone more experienced than me lel
00:55:250 (2,3) - these sliders are rly hard to read, even worse than ^. Again, i like the pattern but you should probably change it to avoid readability issues
I won't spend too much time since the diff is only half way done, but its really interesting and i like the aesthetics and concepts

Alfaster's Insane

00:41:174 (1) - this slider is pretty ugly, make it nicer by having the anchor points smthing like this:

aesthetic

00:48:558 (1,2) - would look better if these sliders were the same as 00:46:712 (1,2) as in copy paste and rotate them
01:00:789 (1,2) - stack them to be consistent with 00:46:020 (3,4) since they're the same sounds
02:16:481 (6,7,8) - dont think the consistent spacing in this pattern fits the song well, these notes should stand out more with a higher spacing since theyre stronger notes compared to 02:13:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) but have the same spacing as them which is bad spacing emphasis
Thats all the significant issues I could find, theres probably more but it's pretty solid overall

Hard

00:26:174 (5) - this slider would look better if the red anchor point was at a sharper angle meaning reduce the curves
00:28:251 (1) to 00:40:943 (4) - the note density drastically increases here compared to 00:13:481 (1) to 00:28:251 (1) but there isn't much difference in the song to call for such a difficulty spike. do you have a reason to justify this difficulty increase?
01:28:712 (3) - downbeat with a strong finish sound on a slider tail doesn't really represent the song well, better if its clickable with a slider head or note
02:54:097 (1) - whyd u use a spinner here instead of mapping this part? in every other chorus u mapped it normally so itd be much more consistent to do the same here
Everything else seems fine

arnold's Advanced

00:44:635 (1) - dunno why ure ignoring the downbeat since theres a strong sound and vocal on it. use active rhythm instead.
you did this in every chorus so i'd recommend u change it each time

Normal

00:45:789 (3) - since ur following vocals, theres not really any sound where this slider starts so it feels kinda off. The better rhythm for 00:44:866 (1,2,3) would be 1/2 slider note 1/1 slider and then if u want a note after the 1/1 for the loud drums.
if you change it don't forget to change it in every other chorus too
02:24:558 (1) - unrankable slider, especially for a normal its impossible to read which way itll go. tho it looks nice you have to change it
All the spinner at the end of the chorus's dont really fit tbh and they're too long for a normal diff (since noobies cant rly spin). better if u just map it
02:54:097 (1) - you should probably map the part after this spinner too since its quite a strong part of the song

Easy

Same issues as normal w the spinners and unrankable slider

hope my mod was helpful

Good luck with this set!
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/318047

Fragmented

424 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Fragmented 2017-06-09T21:09:10+00:00

Firetruck wrote:
henlo there!
General
Remove the ''(Twice)'' from the artist since it's a romanization for ???? and keep the twice a the romanized artist fixed

Offset seems just a biit late to me, try 13 476 time to spend 5 hours fixing timing points ;w;

Sliders like these could be done in a much better way that'll make them look alot neater, here's 1 2 examples of how you could do them instead :^) (this goes for all your diffs) okie ill see where i could insert those designs in owo

Is the video supposed to be that size? it seems so small o.o just saw that the 2 highest diffs have a normal video, wut oops fixed

Feel free to use the tags below if you to~ (Added korean names and k-pop)
worstpolackeu error- alfarai arnoldusj jyp entertainment kpop k-pop twicecoaster lane 2 nayeon chaeyoung tzuyu momo sana mina jihyo jisoo dahyun jeongyeon ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??
fixed
Easy

00:15:328 (3) - Splitting this up to 2 1/1 sliders instead would play much better and fit the vocals okie
00:17:174 (1) - You should do this a 1/1 repeat slider to emphisize the kno kno kno kno knock on ma door better (and put a circle afterwards so it doesnt feel empty) oh and this goes for every knock knock during the map, make it consistent! :3 okie
00:20:866 (1) - Same here about splitting up to 1/1 sliders, you should really look over the map and do little changes like these to make the rhythm better :3, i see you randomly just skip mapping these 00:24:097 - beats after a long slider, try not to do that because it feels very awkward ; just put a circle there! i guess ill remap easy then lul
00:24:558 (1,2) - Try doing this instead! to emphisize more vocals
00:50:404 (1,2) - And for this part in the kiai, you can do this! for more variation instead of just 1/1 repeat sliders everytime they say knock knock xD

Basically go through the whole diff and try to make more variations in the rhythm (and don't be scared to do more 1/1 sliders! just don't spam them pls)
okie

Normal

00:13:481 (1,2,3,4) - Remember how i said in Easy to use some 1/1 sliders but not to spam them too much? Yeah, that's because in Normal you usually just go for 1/1 sliders instead of these long ones and do some 1/2 sliders (Since Hard uses 1/2 sliders, magic right) Try doing alot more 1/1 sliders in normal and don't be afraid to put stuff on the red tick, it's good for spread! (Just don't do it too much) Here's an example of how you could do the rhythm here instead! sure
00:17:174 (1,2,3) - Ooh i really like this, try doing more of these throughout the diff! :D
00:43:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - To follow vocals better, try this! okie cool
00:54:097 (1) - You should totally map this part instead of having a slider! Same goes for easy (I forgot to mention it in easy, sorry xD) but i like it that way though :<
00:57:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - :thinking:
01:03:097 - Jihyo actually starts singing here, so you should move 01:03:328 (3) - there instead :^) and end it on 01:04:251 - okie
01:04:712 (4) - If you apply the suggestion above^ put a circle here okie
01:08:866 (1) - Yeah you should map this too! ill leave it as a spinner >w<
Honestly you should map the rap part, it would be cool! Do some 1/2 sliders and shits and it will be funn (And the break doesnt really fit there imo) sure ill map that part then
01:21:789 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe this instead? That long slider felt really awkward and didn't really follow anything okie fixed
Since the second kiai is copied, just replace it with the first kiai after you applied the stuff i said there and paste it here again xD (if you applied the stuff ofc lul okie
02:24:558 (1) - Aw so cute! seems hard to read tho, get a testplay or two and see if they can actually read it (from newer players who play normal) just to be sure :3 I really like it fixed it by not stacking the slidertail and the sliderhead
Just check the previous stuff i modded on the kiai and apply it on the last one so i don't have to repeat myself xD (If you want to apply it ofc) okie
The break after the kiai seems kinda random, you should map it instead! mapped it
03:05:174 (1,2,3) - :thinking: okie
03:08:866 (1,2,3,4) - Why not do these knock knocks like you did them earlier? Make them consistenttt :3 fixed

Hard

00:14:289 - She actually starts singing here, so putting the slider on the white tick feels pretty awkward i think its fine tho, wasnt really trying to follow her vocals anyway
00:16:135 - ^ ^
00:19:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe less curve on the sliders? nah, its fine that way :3
00:20:866 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm follows vocals much better imo, try it! sure, fixed
00:30:443 (2,3) - I recommend stacking the circle with the slider to improve aestethics and make it a bit easier :3 (If you do this, do it on all objects that are like this) i like it that way tho owo
00:42:328 (1) - 2 circles to emphisize the KNCOK KNCOKkdfdsf instead? okie
00:47:751 - You should end the slider here instead and put a circle 00:47:866 - here! also stack them if you want to, plays better imo it will be awkward wouldn't it to alternate 3 times? if anyone else brings it up, i guess ill change that owo
00:52:020 - Add circle? i wanted to emphasize on the "knock knock on my door" so i left that empty
00:54:097 (1,2,3) - To follow vocals better, do this owo sure :3
01:28:712 (3) - End slider at 01:29:058 - pls, and add an circle or slider after :3 okie
01:40:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really get what you're following here with this rhythm uwu, try this sure
01:43:020 (3,4) - Maybe a long slider instead? To emphisize the HaaaaAaaand And try to do a cool slider art! You can use this shitty one i did if you want to xD lul i did an 'S' shape instead :3
Same as normal with the kiai copying xD (And the last kiai, just check the mods on the kiai part before and apply it on the last one as well) okie
02:24:558 (1) - Do a cute slider here pls like u did in normal okie
02:54:097 (1) - You mapped this in the previous kiais, why not here? its the last chorus, so i made it into a spinner owo ill map it if anyone brings that up again
03:04:020 - Add circle pls, feels empty emphasizing on chaeyoung's vocals

Won't mod the higher diffs since i'm not that experiened with diffs over hard yet :3 But nice map and gl!

TheKoala wrote:
hii m4m from your queue

Alfaster's Insane

00:48:558 (1,2) - would look better if these sliders were the same as 00:46:712 (1,2) as in copy paste and rotate them sure
01:00:789 (1,2) - stack them to be consistent with 00:46:020 (3,4) since they're the same sounds okie
02:16:481 (6,7,8) - dont think the consistent spacing in this pattern fits the song well, these notes should stand out more with a higher spacing since theyre stronger notes compared to 02:13:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) but have the same spacing as them which is bad spacing emphasis it follows the beat of the song though (the guitar i think?)
Thats all the significant issues I could find, theres probably more but it's pretty solid overall
Hard

00:26:174 (5) - this slider would look better if the red anchor point was at a sharper angle meaning reduce the curves okie sure
00:28:251 (1) to 00:40:943 (4) - the note density drastically increases here compared to 00:13:481 (1) to 00:28:251 (1) but there isn't much difference in the song to call for such a difficulty spike. do you have a reason to justify this difficulty increase? thats because i was following the vocals and there was a slight buildup to the song
01:28:712 (3) - downbeat with a strong finish sound on a slider tail doesn't really represent the song well, better if its clickable with a slider head or note changed that from firetruck's mod
02:54:097 (1) - whyd u use a spinner here instead of mapping this part? in every other chorus u mapped it normally so itd be much more consistent to do the same here fixed
Everything else seems fine
Normal

00:45:789 (3) - since ur following vocals, theres not really any sound where this slider starts so it feels kinda off. The better rhythm for 00:44:866 (1,2,3) would be 1/2 slider note 1/1 slider and then if u want a note after the 1/1 for the loud drums.
if you change it don't forget to change it in every other chorus too all fixed from firetruck's mod
02:24:558 (1) - unrankable slider, especially for a normal its impossible to read which way itll go. tho it looks nice you have to change it fixed
All the spinner at the end of the chorus's dont really fit tbh and they're too long for a normal diff (since noobies cant rly spin). better if u just map it nah ill keep it that way for now, if anyone else brings it up ill fix it
02:54:097 (1) - you should probably map the part after this spinner too since its quite a strong part of the song wouldn't it be considered as inconsistent since there were sliders in that section previously too? owo
Easy

Same issues as normal w the spinners and unrankable slider okie
hope my mod was helpful
Good luck with this set!
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/318047

~~nvr procrastinate kids~~

Last edited by Fragmented 2017-06-14T15:14:43+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Keitaro

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-Keitaro 2017-06-10T00:46:13+00:00

TheKoala wrote:
hii m4m from your queue
Error's Insane

00:15:789 (5,6) - here you overlapped the 2 sliders while in every other pattern with the same rhythm you spaced them out (like in 00:13:943 (5,6)) so move them apart so they don't overlap for consistency probaly nah, since the second one always have less spacing, just like compare 00:20:866 (1,3) - 00:21:328 (3,4) -
00:36:097 (3,4) - ^ pattern with 00:23:174 (3,4) -
00:34:712 (5,6,7) - i don't see a reason for this triple being more spaced out than every other triple since the song is the same so i'd make it the same spacing as 00:32:866 (5,6,7) not a big problem, also it looks bad for less spacing.
00:38:289 (4) - it'd look better if u made a blanket with 00:37:943 (3)'s tail and this slider's curve not a fan of it :^)
00:47:174 (3) - the loud vocal is on this slider's tail which is bad emphasis (assuming ur mapping vocals). you should make this pattern the same rhythm as 00:48:558 (1,2,3) which will also help consistency Well im not only map the vocal, if you listen again, I also map the drum.
00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - i'm not sure exactly what sounds these sliders are following since they don't fit with either vocals or drums. Imma break it down: Doing snare sounds.
00:54:443 (2) - the white tick the slider passes through has a much stronger sound than the blue tick u started the slider on. theres also a vocal starting on that white tick so itd be much better if that note was clickable. you should turn this slider into a circle and a 1/4 slider starting on 00:54:558, this fits the rhythm way better.
00:55:366 (2) and 00:56:289 (2) - ^ same thing
This rhythm problem repeats twice in every chorus so u gotta change it each time
01:14:404 (1,2) - they overlap, same thing as 00:15:789 (5,6) 01:15:328 (1,2) - hmm
02:45:558 (4,1) - i think the spacing between these notes should be much smaller since there isn't a very strong sound on (1) which makes for bad spacing emphasis
Overall the diff is ok, not a huge fan of it but its pretty fun

hope my mod was helpful
Good luck with this set!
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/318047

I cant beleive all no except the last one, thanks anyway
Also self modded for hitsounds.

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-Keitaro

1,013 posts

Joined October 2013

-Keitaro 2017-06-10T09:34:24+00:00

Remodding for Alfaster's Insane

00:17:174 (1) - A lil bit left for circular flow with 00:16:712 (2) -
00:23:520 (7) - ^ x:324 y:260
00:24:097 (2,3) - well yyou're not following the vocal here, while others is following the vocal.
00:25:481 (1,2,3,4) - A square probaly better
00:27:328 (1,2,1) - these hitsound is too low
00:31:943 (1) - not really a good idea to place it there, probaly around x:0 y:208 for flow
00:36:558 (5) - this looks like your 1/4, hmm..
00:39:328 (1) - do something like 00:37:020 (2,1) - , but be more perfect
00:42:558 (1,1) - blanket instead of overlap
00:45:558 (1,2,3,4,5) - A star or a square plz
00:47:981 (3,4) - do something like 00:37:020 (2,1) -
01:01:481 (4) - NC
01:19:481 (7,8,9) - A little bit down so it looks good imo
01:21:328 (1) - too late for vocal
01:30:212 (4) - anti flow is better imo
01:33:904 (4,5) - they doesnt flow good imo
01:34:828 (2,3) - same here
01:40:251 (1,3,5) - do a perfect triangle
01:41:174 (6,7) - center them in 01:40:251 (1,3,5) - triangle
01:41:174 (6,7) - something like this
01:54:328 (6,1) - overlap
02:13:020 (7,1) - 1/2 slider and 2 circles plz?
02:21:789 (4,1,2) - this
02:34:943 (2,1,2) - probaly a triangle instead, or increase the spacing
02:44:635 (2,3) - click
02:46:712 (4,5) - fix circular flow
02:55:943 (1,2) - again
02:58:251 (3,4) - blanket?

whoa

Fragmented

424 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Fragmented 2017-06-14T15:32:17+00:00

Error- wrote:
Remodding for Alfaster's Insane

00:23:520 (7) - ^ x:324 y:260 fixed
00:24:097 (2,3) - well yyou're not following the vocal here, while others is following the vocal. what should i change it to then?
00:25:481 (1,2,3,4) - A square probaly better okie sure
00:27:328 (1,2,1) - these hitsound is too low changed it to 20%
00:42:558 (1,1) - blanket instead of overlap fixed
00:45:558 (1,2,3,4,5) - A star or a square plz made it star-ish
00:47:981 (3,4) - do something like 00:37:020 (2,1) - why tho? its following the vocals
01:01:481 (4) - NC okie
01:30:212 (4) - anti flow is better imo nah ill keep it that way
01:33:904 (4,5) - they doesnt flow good imo but im following dem vocals ;w;
01:34:828 (2,3) - same here ^
01:40:251 (1,3,5) - do a perfect triangle sure
01:41:174 (6,7) - center them in 01:40:251 (1,3,5) - triangle fixed
01:41:174 (6,7) - something like this
02:13:020 (7,1) - 1/2 slider and 2 circles plz? fixed
02:21:789 (4,1,2) - this sure fixed
02:44:635 (2,3) - click okie
02:46:712 (4,5) - fix circular flow its fine that way
02:55:943 (1,2) - again ???

whoa i regret asking for too many mods in one go kms

Fragmented

424 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Fragmented 2017-06-14T15:37:59+00:00

??? i need help

edit: nvm problem solved

Alfarai

311 posts

Joined May 2015

Alfarai 2017-06-22T14:42:50+00:00

Error- wrote:
Remodding for Alfaster's Insane

00:31:943 (1) - not really a good idea to place it there, probaly around x:0 y:208 for flow fixed
00:36:558 (5) - this looks like your 1/4, hmm.. i dont know whats wrong in this part
00:39:328 (1) - do something like 00:37:020 (2,1) - , but be more perfect fixed
01:19:481 (7,8,9) - A little bit down so it looks good imo fixed
01:21:328 (1) - too late for vocal I'd rather keep it this way because consistency
01:54:328 (6,1) - overlap nah seems fine to me
02:34:943 (2,1,2) - probaly a triangle instead, or increase the spacing increased spacing
02:58:251 (3,4) - blanket? fixed

whoa

cisphobia

136 posts

Joined July 2012

cisphobia 2017-06-24T05:49:47+00:00

NM from my queue!
error's insane
00:13:943 (5,6) - these sliders don't touch, but 00:15:789 (5,6) do. i'd make both either not touching or touching, for consistency reasons.

00:22:020 (5,6,7) - if you could possibly make (5) blanket the slider, it would look better (and match 00:23:866 (5,6,7) ). another option i'd consider to make it look better is move the whole triangle closer to the slider so that there's no followpoint leading into (5).

00:29:058 (4) - sudden sharp-curve slider. i'd change it to a regular curved slider, or add sharp-curve sliders into earlier parts of the map. atm it's a new type of slider that's introduced in the 2nd section of the intro of the song, and it stands out too much for no reason, giving visual emphasis to nothing.

00:33:789 (1,2,3,4) - this looks more confusing to look at compared to 00:31:943 (1,2,3,4) , because 00:34:020 (2,4) - lead into eachother. i'd do something about it to make it less confusing to read, so that it fits better into gameplay. making it a bit confusing to look at makes it seem like this "knock knock" section is more important, but it's the same as the previous one.

00:32:866 (5,6,7) - has less spacing than 00:34:712 (5,6,7) . it gives more emphasis to 00:34:712 (5,6,7) , for no reason (as both sound exactly the same). i'd change 00:32:866 (5,6,7) to have the same spacing as 00:34:712 (5,6,7) .

00:40:712 (4,5,6,7,8) - nothing in the song calls for a stream. i'd just continue with jumps, rather than a stream, because 1/2 jumps synergize better with the vocals.

00:46:712 (1,2,3) - i'd change this pattern into something more like 00:48:558 (1,2,3) . atm the first pattern doesn't emphasize the 2nd "kung", but the second pattern does.
01:47:635 (1,2,3,4) - ^, and more.

01:04:712 (6,7) - i'd space these a bit further apart to better emphasize the vocals.

01:12:328 (8,9) - this is barely readable, even if the previous triple was spaced the same. i'd rather have them stacked on top of eachother than spaced out.

01:16:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this stream spaced less than every other stream that came before it, like 00:15:328 (1,2,3,4,5) and such? i'd have the spacing be the same so that both are emphasized equally.
01:20:174 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:58:251 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^, and more.

01:31:135 (2,3) - place these closer together so that no followpoint appears.

02:42:558 (1,2,3,4,1) - i'd make this a curved stream, just like every other stream in the map, for consistency reasons.

02:57:558 (6,7,1) - 90 degree triple seems very unfair, because it's a difficulty spike and it was never introduced before in the map. i'd make it straight, just like 02:56:866 (2,3,4) .

alfaster's light insane
00:13:937 (5,6) - why doesn't this place a circle on the vocals but 00:15:783 (4,5,6) - does? i'd make them both emphasize the vocals.
00:21:322 (3,4,5) vs 00:23:168 (6,7) - ^
00:28:706 (4,5,6,7,1) & 00:30:552 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^, and more.

00:55:014 (3) - new combo, cause this is the start of a new sub-section of vocals.
01:09:783 (3) - ^

00:57:322 (4) - this slider ends on 1/8, but it should end on the blue tick instead. sliders ending on 1/8 have never happened in the map before, so players may get a 100 because they expect the slider to end on the blue tick. i'd change it.

01:01:937 (2) - i'd make this slider more even. atm one side is longer than the other.

01:09:322 (2,3) - why is the spacing between the slider and circle so much different than the spacing between the slider and circle here: 00:54:552 (2,3) ? make the spacing the same for consistency reasons.

01:40:475 (2,4,6) - new combo on each of these, because it's a completely new rhythm that needs to be emphasized. also helps with sightreading, no followpoints allow the player to have to feel each note's rhythm rather than using followpoints to help aid, [the followpoints] leading to them hitting the rhythm wrong.

01:43:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this kiai section's intro so much different than 00:43:014 (1,2,3,4,1,2) ? they both sound very alike and should keep the same rhythm patterns.
01:58:706 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^, and more.

01:52:014 (4,5,6,7) - why triple here instead of the reverse slider that you had in the previous kiai section?
02:06:783 (4,5,6) - ^, and more.

01:53:860 (4,5) - this doesn't follow the vocals very well, cause the player isn't clicking the kno-knock because (4)'s slidertail ends on knock.
02:08:629 (4,5) - ^, and more.

02:13:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - i feel this would be better as a break. however, if you don't want a break here, i'd instead change the whole thing to emphasize the vocals, like you did here 02:20:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) , instead of emphasizing the background beat, like you did here 02:13:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) .

02:54:783 (3,4,5,6,7) - nothing calls for a stream here, i'd change it to jumps instead.

hard
00:22:937 (1,2,3,4) - this should keep the same rhythm pattern as 00:20:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) , you introduced a new concept and you should repeat the concept in places where the song sounds the same, or very alike.

00:32:860 (1,2,3) - place this under 00:32:398 (3) for better readability.
00:34:706 (1,2,3) - ^, 00:34:245 (3) .
01:37:475 (5,6,7) - ^, 01:37:014 (3) and more.

i'd be careful about having perfectly stacking circles in a hard, like 01:10:245 (4,5) and such. consider changing it, or check with more people to see if it's okay.

01:12:091 (4,1) - a break can fit in the middle of these, if you want.

01:29:168 (1,2) - these vocals can be clicked twice with circles, but 01:32:860 (1) these vocals can only be clicked once. they should both be able to be clicked, for consistency.

01:40:822 (3,4) - new combo, cause new rhythm being introduced. it kinda signals to players that it's a different rhythm.

01:43:014 (3) - make the red node a white node in this slider and fix the curve a bit. atm it looks scrunched up.

02:24:552 (1) - heart slider nodes look more like this, rather than looking like an actual heart.

sorry for short mod!
some of what i said can be applied throughout the whole difficulty
i didn't mod any difficulties under hard cause i have very little experience mapping low star difficulties. i may come back to mod them once i gain experience tho :9
good luck with rank!
btw: "and more" means that the issue appears in other places in the map.

-Keitaro

1,013 posts

Joined October 2013

-Keitaro 2017-06-24T11:39:24+00:00

sonic8889 wrote:
NM from my queue!
error's insane
00:13:943 (5,6) - these sliders don't touch, but 00:15:789 (5,6) do. i'd make both either not touching or touching, for consistency reasons.

00:22:020 (5,6,7) - if you could possibly make (5) blanket the slider, it would look better (and match 00:23:866 (5,6,7) ). another option i'd consider to make it look better is move the whole triangle closer to the slider so that there's no followpoint leading into (5).

00:29:058 (4) - sudden sharp-curve slider. i'd change it to a regular curved slider, or add sharp-curve sliders into earlier parts of the map. atm it's a new type of slider that's introduced in the 2nd section of the intro of the song, and it stands out too much for no reason, giving visual emphasis to nothing.

00:33:789 (1,2,3,4) - this looks more confusing to look at compared to 00:31:943 (1,2,3,4) , because 00:34:020 (2,4) - lead into eachother. i'd do something about it to make it less confusing to read, so that it fits better into gameplay. making it a bit confusing to look at makes it seem like this "knock knock" section is more important, but it's the same as the previous one.

00:32:866 (5,6,7) - has less spacing than 00:34:712 (5,6,7) . it gives more emphasis to 00:34:712 (5,6,7) , for no reason (as both sound exactly the same). i'd change 00:32:866 (5,6,7) to have the same spacing as 00:34:712 (5,6,7) .

00:40:712 (4,5,6,7,8) - nothing in the song calls for a stream. i'd just continue with jumps, rather than a stream, because 1/2 jumps synergize better with the vocals. Following background sound

00:46:712 (1,2,3) - i'd change this pattern into something more like 00:48:558 (1,2,3) . atm the first pattern doesn't emphasize the 2nd "kung", but the second pattern does. I guess a nah will be better, its still emphasize with the sounds and song tho
01:47:635 (1,2,3,4) - ^, and more.

01:04:712 (6,7) - i'd space these a bit further apart to better emphasize the vocals.

01:12:328 (8,9) - this is barely readable, even if the previous triple was spaced the same. i'd rather have them stacked on top of eachother than spaced out. no, its still the same spacing as 01:11:635 (4,5,6) - so its still readable, some testplay results no readable issue

01:16:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this stream spaced less than every other stream that came before it, like 00:15:328 (1,2,3,4,5) and such? i'd have the spacing be the same so that both are emphasized equally.
01:20:174 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:58:251 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^, and more. well its already patterned to use low spaced stream in the second part, so its okay imo

01:31:135 (2,3) - place these closer together so that no followpoint appears.

02:42:558 (1,2,3,4,1) - i'd make this a curved stream, just like every other stream in the map, for consistency reasons. nah, streams can be variated even the shape is different from the others.

02:57:558 (6,7,1) - 90 degree triple seems very unfair, because it's a difficulty spike and it was never introduced before in the map. i'd make it straight, just like 02:56:866 (2,3,4) . 45 degree then

no comments = fixed.

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Alfarai

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Joined May 2015

Alfarai 2017-06-24T13:46:46+00:00

Let me just clarify that this diff is a collab between me and Charmcaster and it's also my first so yeah

sonic8889 wrote:
NM from my queue!
alfaster's light insane
00:28:706 (4,5,6,7,1) & 00:30:552 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^, and more. both are mapped the same way

01:43:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this kiai section's intro so much different than 00:43:014 (1,2,3,4,1,2) ? they both sound very alike and should keep the same rhythm patterns. it's a collab and 01:43:937 is my part while the other is charm's

01:58:706 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^, and more. ^

01:52:014 (4,5,6,7) - why triple here instead of the reverse slider that you had in the previous kiai section? ^
02:06:783 (4,5,6) - ^, and more. ^

01:53:860 (4,5) - this doesn't follow the vocals very well, cause the player isn't clicking the kno-knock because (4)'s slidertail ends on knock. made it into a triple

02:08:629 (4,5) - ^, and more. this is a different one than 01:53:860 and if you listen closely, 02:07:014 (6) seems to end on a less emphasized beat

also fixed the 'and more' thing

UniqueBlock11

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UniqueBlock11 2017-07-01T17:37:19+00:00

13476 is a bit late for offset, try to use 13460 for all difficulties
of course if you changed the offset you'd have to change the timing points but it's your choice

riffy

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riffy 2017-07-03T07:55:42+00:00

knock knock!

[General]

Just a friendly reminder that all of the difficulties are meant to be finished on the same spot. I know it's a WIP set, but I still feel like this could be mentioned.
Also, be sure toremove the unused hitsounds, check tags and video for consistency. You know, all the general stuff.

[Easy]

00:17:168 (1,2,3) - it'd be better to repeat a similar pattern like 1-2 two times, rather than using (3). After all, the vocals here are repeated TWICE, so using a the same or very similar pattern TWICE would make more sense.
Note: 00:31:937 (1,2,3) - this would apply here and to similar parts. So, basically each time a line is repeated, you could use a similar pattern or similar rhythm to be more consistent and to represent the song more accurately.
01:23:168 (2,3) - swapping these on the timeline (Ctrl+G) would match the vocals better. Here, it should feel more natural with the vocals.
02:24:552 (1) - I'd highly recommend avoiding overlaps of slider-head and slider-tail as those may confuse beginners. And since I couldn't really fix the heart-shaped slider to match this suggestion, I would probably recommend a plain arc-shaped thing. o hai

Generally, I feel like you've sort of overused spinners as there are 8 spinners and a large number of breaks. Replacing some of the spinners with hitobject could spice things up a little. Additionally, some slidershapes could be neater/softer, for instance 01:53:168 (3) - here. It may seem a bit difficult to make this, but I feel like sogfter shapes would suit the song better.

I'll be finishing this later, don't kudosu

Fragmented

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Fragmented 2017-07-05T12:31:40+00:00

Bakari wrote:
knock knock!

[General]
Just a friendly reminder that all of the difficulties are meant to be finished on the same spot. I know it's a WIP set, but I still feel like this could be mentioned.
Also, be sure toremove the unused hitsounds, check tags and video for consistency. You know, all the general stuff.
[Easy]
00:17:168 (1,2,3) - it'd be better to repeat a similar pattern like 1-2 two times, rather than using (3). After all, the vocals here are repeated TWICE, so using a the same or very similar pattern TWICE would make more sense.
Note: 00:31:937 (1,2,3) - this would apply here and to similar parts. So, basically each time a line is repeated, you could use a similar pattern or similar rhythm to be more consistent and to represent the song more accurately.
01:23:168 (2,3) - swapping these on the timeline (Ctrl+G) would match the vocals better. Here, it should feel more natural with the vocals.
02:24:552 (1) - I'd highly recommend avoiding overlaps of slider-head and slider-tail as those may confuse beginners. And since I couldn't really fix the heart-shaped slider to match this suggestion, I would probably recommend a plain arc-shaped thing. o hai

Generally, I feel like you've sort of overused spinners as there are 8 spinners and a large number of breaks. Replacing some of the spinners with hitobject could spice things up a little. Additionally, some slidershapes could be neater/softer, for instance 01:53:168 (3) - here. It may seem a bit difficult to make this, but I feel like sogfter shapes would suit the song better.

I'll be finishing this later, don't kudosu

oh fak didnt read the last line,
bn pls deny kds pls thanks

riffy

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riffy 2017-07-06T16:40:55+00:00

[Normal]

A bit more dense rhythm would be a good idea, 00:26:398 (3) - for instance this part is mapped in a less dense way than in Easy. This applies to a few more patterns, just play through both difficulties and you'll feel it. For insntance, 00:46:706 (1,2) - these feel really slow and Normal could use something more similar to the rhythm used in Advanced.

01:20:860 (2) - just like in the Easy difficulty, softer curves could make things appear neater. Example
02:24:552 (1) - try spreading tail/head apart a little. A bit of extra readability would make the slider look more natural since everything else in this difficulty is really easy to read.
02:27:322 (1,2) - these are practically inaudible. Consider using at least 30% volume to make the object give at least some audio feedback.
There's also a bit of an inconsistency with mapping, 02:59:398 - vocals are ignored, yet 03:06:783 - here they are mapped. It would be better to stick to either mapping them in every similar case or ignoring that kind of vocals.

A bit of this and that with rhythm, apart from that it is pretty neat.

[arnold's Advanced]

00:13:481 - I would complain about the visuals here as the objects are relactively close and slightly overlap. Personally, I feel like those overlaps were unintentional just because of how minor they are. Larger spacing would probably prevent the overlaps, making things slightly easier to read and neater.
00:47:404 (2) - 00:48:558 (1) - sliders like give a broken flow or change the way sliders feel making a player watch the path more attentively, which essentially complicates the part. I would suggest using simplier and more readable slidershapes to match the fast-paced and yet simplistic feel of the kiai.
01:29:174 (1,2) - overlapping with the slidertail and the circle makes the whole thing look a bit too messy, in my opinion. I would try to keep things neat by avoiding this kind of overlaps.
Note: 01:32:866 (1,2) - same would apply to similar patterns.

So, my main concern would be the visuals, which feel sort of unpolished and sometimes contradicting the feel/concept of the song.

edit, sorry, I just completely ran out of motivation to mod. prob you can consider this one a finished mod

Last edited by riffy 2017-07-13T16:34:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Fragmented

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Fragmented 2017-07-08T01:08:07+00:00

Bakari wrote:
[Normal]

A bit more dense rhythm would be a good idea, 00:26:398 (3) - for instance this part is mapped in a less dense way than in Easy. This applies to a few more patterns, just play through both difficulties and you'll feel it. For insntance, 00:46:706 (1,2) - these feel really slow and Normal could use something more similar to the rhythm used in Advanced.
01:20:860 (2) - just like in the Easy difficulty, softer curves could make things appear neater. Example
02:24:552 (1) - try spreading tail/head apart a little. A bit of extra readability would make the slider look more natural since everything else in this difficulty is really easy to read.
02:27:322 (1,2) - these are practically inaudible. Consider using at least 30% volume to make the object give at least some audio feedback.
There's also a bit of an inconsistency with mapping, 02:59:398 - vocals are ignored, yet 03:06:783 - here they are mapped. It would be better to stick to either mapping them in every similar case or ignoring that kind of vocals.

A bit of this and that with rhythm, apart from that it is pretty neat.
[arnold's Advanced]
00:13:481 - I would complain about the visuals here as the objects are relactively close and slightly overlap. Personally, I feel like those overlaps were unintentional just because of how minor they are. Larger spacing would probably prevent the overlaps, making things slightly easier to read and neater.
00:47:404 (2) - 00:48:558 (1) - sliders like give a broken flow or change the way sliders feel making a player watch the path more attentively, which essentially complicates the part. I would suggest using simplier and more readable slidershapes to match the fast-paced and yet simplistic feel of the kiai.
01:29:174 (1,2) - overlapping with the slidertail and the circle makes the whole thing look a bit too messy, in my opinion. I would try to keep things neat by avoiding this kind of overlaps.
Note: 01:32:866 (1,2) - same would apply to similar patterns.

So, my main concern would be the visuals, which feel sort of unpolished and sometimes contradicting the feel/concept of the song.

i'll finish later, don't kudosu since I already got one kd

OMFG CAN I STOP GIVING PEOPLE KUDOS JNHFLEGJELGKJELKJLKJKJF im sorry. i should read more books. im sorry

Fragmented

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Fragmented 2017-07-08T01:10:23+00:00

UniqueBlock11 wrote:
13476 is a bit late for offset, try to use 13460 for all difficulties
of course if you changed the offset you'd have to change the timing points but it's your choice

im pretty sure its fine

Fragmented

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Fragmented 2017-07-08T01:38:50+00:00

sonic8889 wrote:
NM from my queue!

alfaster's light insane
00:13:937 (5,6) - why doesn't this place a circle on the vocals but 00:15:783 (4,5,6) - does? i'd make them both emphasize the vocals. added a circle
00:21:322 (3,4,5) vs 00:23:168 (6,7) - ^ fixed

00:55:014 (3) - new combo, cause this is the start of a new sub-section of vocals. fixed
01:09:783 (3) - ^ fixed

00:57:322 (4) - this slider ends on 1/8, but it should end on the blue tick instead. sliders ending on 1/8 have never happened in the map before, so players may get a 100 because they expect the slider to end on the blue tick. i'd change it. fixed

01:01:937 (2) - i'd make this slider more even. atm one side is longer than the other. fixed

01:09:322 (2,3) - why is the spacing between the slider and circle so much different than the spacing between the slider and circle here: oops fixed
00:54:552 (2,3) ? make the spacing the same for consistency reasons.

01:40:475 (2,4,6) - new combo on each of these, because it's a completely new rhythm that needs to be emphasized. also helps with sightreading, no followpoints allow the player to have to feel each note's rhythm rather than using followpoints to help aid, [the followpoints] leading to them hitting the rhythm wrong. i dont think thats necessary

01:43:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this kiai section's intro so much different than 00:43:014 (1,2,3,4,1,2) ? they both sound very alike and should keep the same rhythm patterns. its called a collab for a reason....
01:58:706 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^, and more. ^

02:13:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - i feel this would be better as a break. however, if you don't want a break here, i'd instead change the whole thing to emphasize the vocals, like you did here 02:20:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) , instead of emphasizing the background beat, like you did here 02:13:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) . alright changed that section to a improved one

02:54:783 (3,4,5,6,7) - nothing calls for a stream here, i'd change it to jumps instead. was matching up this 02:56:629 (3,4,5,6) - but if anyone else brings it up, ill change it

hard
00:22:937 (1,2,3,4) - this should keep the same rhythm pattern as 00:20:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) , you introduced a new concept and you should repeat the concept in places where the song sounds the same, or very alike. im following the vocals for this

00:32:860 (1,2,3) - place this under 00:32:398 (3) for better readability. thats because of the stack leniency
00:34:706 (1,2,3) - ^, 00:34:245 (3) . ^
01:37:475 (5,6,7) - ^, 01:37:014 (3) and more. ^

i'd be careful about having perfectly stacking circles in a hard, like 01:10:245 (4,5) and such. consider changing it, or check with more people to see if it's okay. no complaints so far

01:12:091 (4,1) - a break can fit in the middle of these, if you want. sure

01:29:168 (1,2) - these vocals can be clicked twice with circles, but 01:32:860 (1) these vocals can only be clicked once. they should both be able to be clicked, for consistency. true, fixed

01:40:822 (3,4) - new combo, cause new rhythm being introduced. it kinda signals to players that it's a different rhythm. its fine like that tho

01:43:014 (3) - make the red node a white node in this slider and fix the curve a bit. atm it looks scrunched up. fixed

02:24:552 (1) - heart slider nodes look more like this, rather than looking like an actual heart. but this is fine too right?

sorry for short mod! that was considered short?? wot xD
some of what i said can be applied throughout the whole difficulty
i didn't mod any difficulties under hard cause i have very little experience mapping low star difficulties. i may come back to mod them once i gain experience tho :9
good luck with rank!
btw: "and more" means that the issue appears in other places in the map.

Thanks for your mod!!

Fragmented

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Fragmented 2017-07-08T01:58:01+00:00

Bakari wrote:
knock knock!

[General]
Just a friendly reminder that all of the difficulties are meant to be finished on the same spot. I know it's a WIP set, but I still feel like this could be mentioned. you're probably referring to the light insane, so i fixed it :3
Also, be sure to remove the unused hitsounds thats probably arnold's stuff xD, check tags and video for consistency. You know, all the general stuff. aites
[Easy]
00:17:168 (1,2,3) - it'd be better to repeat a similar pattern like 1-2 two times, rather than using (3). After all, the vocals here are repeated TWICE, so using a the same or very similar pattern TWICE would make more sense. okie fixed
Note: 00:31:937 (1,2,3) - this would apply here and to similar parts. So, basically each time a line is repeated, you could use a similar pattern or similar rhythm to be more consistent and to represent the song more accurately. okie cool
01:23:168 (2,3) - swapping these on the timeline (Ctrl+G) would match the vocals better. Here, it should feel more natural with the vocals. fixed!
02:24:552 (1) - I'd highly recommend avoiding overlaps of slider-head and slider-tail as those may confuse beginners. And since I couldn't really fix the heart-shaped slider to match this suggestion, I would probably recommend a plain arc-shaped thing. o hai did something similar

Generally, I feel like you've sort of overused spinners as there are 8 spinners and a large number of breaks. Replacing some of the spinners with hitobject could spice things up a little. Additionally, some slidershapes could be neater/softer, for instance 01:53:168 (3) - here. It may seem a bit difficult to make this, but I feel like sogfter shapes would suit the song better. i changed some spinners and fixed the slider shape

I'll be finishing this later, don't kudosu

Fragmented

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Fragmented 2017-07-08T02:16:59+00:00

Bakari wrote:
[Normal]

A bit more dense rhythm would be a good idea, 00:26:398 (3) - for instance this part is mapped in a less dense way than in Easy. This applies to a few more patterns, just play through both difficulties and you'll feel it. For insntance, 00:46:706 (1,2) - these feel really slow and Normal could use something more similar to the rhythm used in Advanced. fixed
01:20:860 (2) - just like in the Easy difficulty, softer curves could make things appear neater. Example fixed
02:24:552 (1) - try spreading tail/head apart a little. A bit of extra readability would make the slider look more natural since everything else in this difficulty is really easy to read. i did my best lul
02:27:322 (1,2) - these are practically inaudible. Consider using at least 30% volume to make the object give at least some audio feedback.
There's also a bit of an inconsistency with mapping, 02:59:398 - vocals are ignored, yet 03:06:783 - here they are mapped. It would be better to stick to either mapping them in every similar case or ignoring that kind of vocals. fixed

A bit of this and that with rhythm, apart from that it is pretty neat. :D
i'll finish later, don't kudosu since I already got one kd so sorry for giving you another kudo :<

josh1024

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josh1024 2017-07-23T15:18:03+00:00

Uh hello don't mind me here.

Easy

Personally I care about shape a lot so if you don't then, meh.

00:20:860 (1,2,3) - the shape of slider 2 into 3 is kinda awkward maybe tweak them.
00:28:245 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make these entirely symmetrical say like ctrlG 3 and move 2.
00:33:783 (3) - fill in a circle after this slider since you did earlier.
00:35:629 (1,3) - same sound but different shape.
00:52:239 (3) - maybe use a shape not so soft on the voice "knock" since you used reverse sliders earlier.
01:03:316 (3,4) - maybe map slider 3 4 into one to represent extended sound.
01:58:700 (1) - not that corners are bad but here it visually divides 2 beats into three 2/3s so maybe change this.

It's getting late here (11:13 I'm a 10th grade student got class tommorrow)
so I suppose I'll post what I have done and come back later (or you can kick me out lol)

Fragmented

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Fragmented 2017-10-12T04:55:13+00:00

josh1024 wrote:
Uh hello don't mind me here.

Easy

Personally I care about shape a lot so if you don't then, meh.

00:20:860 (1,2,3) - the shape of slider 2 into 3 is kinda awkward maybe tweak them. sure
00:28:245 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make these entirely symmetrical say like ctrlG 3 and move 2. okie but I didnt move 2 because idk where else to put it
00:33:783 (3) - fill in a circle after this slider since you did earlier. nah, since this is an easy diff, i purposely left that small break for beginners
00:35:629 (1,3) - same sound but different shape. uhmmm........?
00:52:239 (3) - maybe use a shape not so soft on the voice "knock" since you used reverse sliders earlier. i dont get what you mean
01:03:316 (3,4) - maybe map slider 3 4 into one to represent extended sound. ill leave that as it is, im following the rhythm
01:58:700 (1) - not that corners are bad but here it visually divides 2 beats into three 2/3s so maybe change this. fixed

It's getting late here (11:13 I'm a 10th grade student got class tommorrow)
so I suppose I'll post what I have done and come back later (or you can kick me out lol)

thanks for your mod puhuhuhu

Blukerbeh

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Blukerbeh 2017-10-17T05:14:06+00:00

Thanks for the great mod! Hopefully I may help you just as much!
(That being said i'm gonna be a little picky about overlapping LOL)

SPOILER

00:18:097 (5,6,7) - Snapping distance on triple may be just a little bit too high causing circle 7 to overlap with slider 4

00:36:443 (4) - overlap

00:39:328 (1) - you could move this up a little bit so that circle fits slider a little better

00:38:635 (5) - if you really wanted to, this could be a cool two sliders with a decent snapping distance

00:53:289 (6,7) - I put ctrl + g and rotated it a little bit so it wasn't overlapping horribly and I think it has a better flow

00:53:635 (8,1) - I'm nitpicking, but these sliders are too close, it can have the same distance as 00:54:097 (1,2) - without any trouble

sidenote: 00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this part is amazing, i love these.

00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this slider could use a tiny bit of help to fit better

01:14:404 (1) - awkward overlap; if you want to keep it a little closer to the center for flow then dont be afraid to make it a shell to 01:14:751 (2) -

01:17:058 (6,7,8) - just a tad too close

01:20:866 (7,8) - I think this would feel better as a double on slider 8 instead of having 7 as a reversal

01:55:712 (3) - head of slider 3 could be of on top of head of slider 1 (or is that a difficulty thing?)

01:52:020 (4,5) - ctrl + g and then stack onto slider 2,

02:01:251 (2) - this slider could be a shell but it isn't and it should be

02:04:020 (1) - ^

02:09:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - another great set of sliders, i adore these

02:13:251 (6,7,8) - this feels better as a triangle

02:32:635 (3) - same thing with the shell but also ctrl + g

the theme of my mod is to keep a consistency in slider spacing, and because you're using shells frequently, make sure they're all serving that purpose

thank you for making a TWICE map btw <3

Fragmented

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Fragmented 2017-10-18T02:01:51+00:00

Blukerbeh wrote:
Thanks for the great mod! Hopefully I may help you just as much!
(That being said i'm gonna be a little picky about overlapping LOL)

SPOILER
00:18:097 (5,6,7) - Snapping distance on triple may be just a little bit too high causing circle 7 to overlap with slider 4

00:36:443 (4) - overlap

00:39:328 (1) - you could move this up a little bit so that circle fits slider a little better

00:38:635 (5) - if you really wanted to, this could be a cool two sliders with a decent snapping distance

00:53:289 (6,7) - I put ctrl + g and rotated it a little bit so it wasn't overlapping horribly and I think it has a better flow

00:53:635 (8,1) - I'm nitpicking, but these sliders are too close, it can have the same distance as 00:54:097 (1,2) - without any trouble

sidenote: 00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this part is amazing, i love these.

00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this slider could use a tiny bit of help to fit better

01:14:404 (1) - awkward overlap; if you want to keep it a little closer to the center for flow then dont be afraid to make it a shell to 01:14:751 (2) -

01:17:058 (6,7,8) - just a tad too close

01:20:866 (7,8) - I think this would feel better as a double on slider 8 instead of having 7 as a reversal

01:55:712 (3) - head of slider 3 could be of on top of head of slider 1 (or is that a difficulty thing?)

01:52:020 (4,5) - ctrl + g and then stack onto slider 2,

02:01:251 (2) - this slider could be a shell but it isn't and it should be

02:04:020 (1) - ^

02:09:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - another great set of sliders, i adore these

02:13:251 (6,7,8) - this feels better as a triangle

02:32:635 (3) - same thing with the shell but also ctrl + g

the theme of my mod is to keep a consistency in slider spacing, and because you're using shells frequently, make sure they're all serving that purpose

thank you for making a TWICE map btw <3

oh no you didnt indicate which diff you're modding D:

Blukerbeh

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Blukerbeh 2017-10-18T02:28:45+00:00

CharmCaster wrote:
Blukerbeh wrote:
Thanks for the great mod! Hopefully I may help you just as much!
(That being said i'm gonna be a little picky about overlapping LOL)

SPOILER
00:18:097 (5,6,7) - Snapping distance on triple may be just a little bit too high causing circle 7 to overlap with slider 4

00:36:443 (4) - overlap

00:39:328 (1) - you could move this up a little bit so that circle fits slider a little better

00:38:635 (5) - if you really wanted to, this could be a cool two sliders with a decent snapping distance

00:53:289 (6,7) - I put ctrl + g and rotated it a little bit so it wasn't overlapping horribly and I think it has a better flow

00:53:635 (8,1) - I'm nitpicking, but these sliders are too close, it can have the same distance as 00:54:097 (1,2) - without any trouble

sidenote: 00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this part is amazing, i love these.

00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this slider could use a tiny bit of help to fit better

01:14:404 (1) - awkward overlap; if you want to keep it a little closer to the center for flow then dont be afraid to make it a shell to 01:14:751 (2) -

01:17:058 (6,7,8) - just a tad too close

01:20:866 (7,8) - I think this would feel better as a double on slider 8 instead of having 7 as a reversal

01:55:712 (3) - head of slider 3 could be of on top of head of slider 1 (or is that a difficulty thing?)

01:52:020 (4,5) - ctrl + g and then stack onto slider 2,

02:01:251 (2) - this slider could be a shell but it isn't and it should be

02:04:020 (1) - ^

02:09:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - another great set of sliders, i adore these

02:13:251 (6,7,8) - this feels better as a triangle

02:32:635 (3) - same thing with the shell but also ctrl + g

the theme of my mod is to keep a consistency in slider spacing, and because you're using shells frequently, make sure they're all serving that purpose

thank you for making a TWICE map btw <3

oh no you didnt indicate which diff you're modding D:

HECK i meant error's

-Keitaro

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-Keitaro 2017-10-21T05:24:11+00:00

Blukerbeh wrote:
Thanks for the great mod! Hopefully I may help you just as much!
(That being said i'm gonna be a little picky about overlapping LOL) :thonk:

SPOILER
00:18:097 (5,6,7) - Snapping distance on triple may be just a little bit too high causing circle 7 to overlap with slider 4 distance is totally fine, I'll move the circles so it doesn't overlap the slider

00:36:443 (4) - overlap intended

00:39:328 (1) - you could move this up a little bit so that circle fits slider a little better blanket is always my probs xD thanks for pointing it,
fixed.

00:38:635 (5) - if you really wanted to, this could be a cool two sliders with a decent snapping distance uhm, I don't get it :/

00:53:289 (6,7) - I put ctrl + g and rotated it a little bit so it wasn't overlapping horribly and I think it has a better flow its stacked instead of overlapping the other slider, also players might only touch the head so I think its pretty fine.

00:53:635 (8,1) - I'm nitpicking, but these sliders are too close, it can have the same distance as 00:54:097 (1,2) - without any trouble but its the sameee, 1,1x to be precise.

sidenote: 00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this part is amazing, i love these. thanks~

00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this slider could use a tiny bit of help to fit better

> 00:54:097 (1,2,3) - antiflow, 00:55:020 (1,2,3) - changes to normal flow, 00:55:943 (1) - anti flow and back to flow again from 00:56:289 (2,3) -

01:14:404 (1) - awkward overlap; if you want to keep it a little closer to the center for flow then dont be afraid to make it a shell to 01:14:751 (2) -

01:17:058 (6,7,8) - just a tad too close 01:17:520 (1) - Nc'ed so player now that this is something new.

01:20:866 (7,8) - I think this would feel better as a double on slider 8 instead of having 7 as a reversal vocal or probaly give example pls

01:55:712 (3) - head of slider 3 could be of on top of head of slider 1 (or is that a difficulty thing?) no thanks

01:52:020 (4,5) - ctrl + g and then stack onto slider 2, same as above

02:01:251 (2) - this slider could be a shell but it isn't and it should be I tried my best ;w;

02:04:020 (1) - ^ I feel like doing something else

02:09:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - another great set of sliders, i adore these

02:13:251 (6,7,8) - this feels better as a triangle too monstrata for me xd

02:32:635 (3) - same thing with the shell but also ctrl + g break flow

the theme of my mod is to keep a consistency in slider spacing, and because you're using shells frequently, make sure they're all serving that purpose

thank you for making a TWICE map btw <3

thanks for the mod.

uwu

osu file format v14

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Shanipika

114 posts

Joined April 2015

Shanipika 2017-10-21T07:33:33+00:00

Hi from mod queue owo

Oh gosh kpop I'll mod your diff only k? I don't wanna go through 6 diff of this sowwy Q-Q (Not that k-pop is any bad but if I listen to this to much it get stuck in my head x) )

[Hard]

00:21:091 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This triple is really unfitting for a hard diff. Its the only spaced triple like that in the entire map too and also is inconsistant with the next one. Also you could prolly change 4 into a 1/2 slider to avoid making this one random double clicked when you dont do it anywhere else in the map really.
00:23:168 (3) - I think you could turn this into a 1/2 slider and have something similar to what you'll change this to 00:21:322 (4,5,6,7) -
01:20:860 (3) - If this was meant to blanket its off
01:30:783 (2,3) - tbh I dont like pointing out blankets cuz they dont affect gameplay at all but emm some people care and this one is off (You should prolly just have a polishing look at those once most major playability fixes are done tbh)
02:24:552 (1) - Nice try lel
One little general comment : I feel you varied a lot between very curved and sligthly curved slider without any specific reason in the map. It kinda gives a weird visual look and I'm not sure if its just you dont care about aesthetic or you just didnt think about what it would do to have that wide variety of slider that aren't really meant to be more or less curved to represent anything specific.

[Normal]

01:23:629 (4,5,6) - Here, I'd recommand putting 6 a little bit off of making a perfect triangle like you did with this 01:21:783 (1,2,3) - since it can be a bit confusing in a normal.
03:05:629 (2,3,4,5) - this rhythm is inconsistant with 02:58:245 (1,2,3,4) - prolly should adapt one to be more similar to the other.
Could prolly say the same as hard diff about the slider aesthetics and the blanket stuff didn't really look at the blankets tho.

[Easy]

01:36:552 (1,2,3) - You could prolly try to rearrange this a little to keep same visual spacing between 1-2 and 2-3.
Again just give a look back at your blanket and slider curvature prolly here.

Also one thing I noticed, you tend to make your wavy slider very very curved to a point they sometime look a bit broken, maybe thats just me not liking how they end up looking tho.

I did give a quick look at gd but overall they looked about okish. Fun set owo. Good luck!

Luel Roseline

1,034 posts

Joined February 2014

Luel Roseline 2017-10-21T10:02:25+00:00

드디어...올 것이 왔군...
NM from #modreqs

[General]
1 - http://puu.sh/y3qjW/b1532ce54c.png https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9362876

[Easy]
00:43:014 - I think finish is better than whistle...

more

00:57:783 - 01:43:937 - 01:58:706 - 02:57:783

02:45:783 (4,1) - Ugly blanket.

Fixed code

208,300,166706,6,0,P|140:224|208:128,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,124,168091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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364,128,169475,2,0,P|348:188|292:216,1,110
220,200,170398,6,0,P|200:228|208:300,2,110,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,136,171783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,72,172245,2,0,B|172:112|116:76|116:76|60:40|4:80,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,148,173629,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,224,174091,6,0,P|192:248|232:240,1,110
284,192,175014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,248,175475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,232,175937,2,0,P|460:160|376:52,1,220
304,100,177322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,60,177783,5,0,0:0:0:0:

[Normal]
00:17:168 (1,2,1,2) - Add whistle hitsounds (Slidertails).

Well I can't found anymore.
I'm pretty shame. Anyway, GL.

edit1. Oh wait...Why Error's diff is more higher than WORSTPOLACKEU's diff?

Fragmented

424 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Fragmented 2017-10-23T11:14:34+00:00

Shanipika wrote:
Hi from mod queue owo

Oh gosh kpop I'll mod your diff only k? I don't wanna go through 6 diff of this sowwy Q-Q (Not that k-pop is any bad but if I listen to this to much it get stuck in my head x) )

[Hard]

00:21:091 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This triple is really unfitting for a hard diff. Its the only spaced triple like that in the entire map too and also is inconsistant with the next one. Also you could prolly change 4 into a 1/2 slider to avoid making this one random double clicked when you dont do it anywhere else in the map really. but if i do change 4 into a 1/2 slider, it would be too difficult for a hard diff so I'll leave it for now
00:23:168 (3) - I think you could turn this into a 1/2 slider and have something similar to what you'll change this to 00:21:322 (4,5,6,7) - nah, im following the vocals here
01:20:860 (3) - If this was meant to blanket its off yep it was, fixed
01:30:783 (2,3) - tbh I dont like pointing out blankets cuz they dont affect gameplay at all but emm some people care and this one is off (You should prolly just have a polishing look at those once most major playability fixes are done tbh) aites fixed, ill keep that in mind once all playability is okay-ish
02:24:552 (1) - Nice try lel thanks? xD
One little general comment : I feel you varied a lot between very curved and sligthly curved slider without any specific reason in the map. It kinda gives a weird visual look and I'm not sure if its just you dont care about aesthetic or you just didnt think about what it would do to have that wide variety of slider that aren't really meant to be more or less curved to represent anything specific. will see about it if anyone else complains about my slider shapes >.<
[Normal]

01:23:629 (4,5,6) - Here, I'd recommand putting 6 a little bit off of making a perfect triangle like you did with this 01:21:783 (1,2,3) - since it can be a bit confusing in a normal. fixed
03:05:629 (2,3,4,5) - this rhythm is inconsistant with 02:58:245 (1,2,3,4) - prolly should adapt one to be more similar to the other. hmmm idk, it was actually originally like that before but someone told me to change it, if anyone else points this out again i guess ill change it again :/
Could prolly say the same as hard diff about the slider aesthetics and the blanket stuff didn't really look at the blankets tho. tbh i like my sliders being that way tho, will look out for more blankets stuff
[Easy]

01:36:552 (1,2,3) - You could prolly try to rearrange this a little to keep same visual spacing between 1-2 and 2-3.fixed
Again just give a look back at your blanket and slider curvature prolly here. already mentioned above
Also one thing I noticed, you tend to make your wavy slider very very curved to a point they sometime look a bit broken, maybe thats just me not liking how they end up looking tho. its just you, some modders told me to shape them that way

I did give a quick look at gd but overall they looked about okish. Fun set owo. Good luck! arigato gozaimasu

Luel Roseline wrote:
드디어...올 것이 왔군...
NM from #modreqs

[General]
1 - http://puu.sh/y3qjW/b1532ce54c.png https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9362876 all fixed except the uninherited timing points,
idk how to fix it

[Easy]
00:43:014 - I think finish is better than whistle... all fixed
more
00:57:783 - 01:43:937 - 01:58:706 - 02:57:783
02:45:783 (4,1) - Ugly blanket. it seems fine to me hmmm
Fixed code
208,300,166706,6,0,P|140:224|208:128,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,124,168091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,168552,2,0,P|280:32|336:56,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,128,169475,2,0,P|348:188|292:216,1,110
220,200,170398,6,0,P|200:228|208:300,2,110,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,136,171783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,72,172245,2,0,B|172:112|116:76|116:76|60:40|4:80,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,148,173629,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,224,174091,6,0,P|192:248|232:240,1,110
284,192,175014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,248,175475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,232,175937,2,0,P|460:160|376:52,1,220
304,100,177322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,60,177783,5,0,0:0:0:0:
[Normal]
00:17:168 (1,2,1,2) - Add whistle hitsounds (Slidertails). all fixed

Well I can't found anymore. its okay
I'm pretty shame. Anyway, GL.

edit1. Oh wait...Why Error's diff is more higher than WORSTPOLACKEU's diff? he hasnt finish his diff yet

i might remap some parts of easy and normal so stay tune

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