Here we go!
from pm~
[ Oni ]
01:18:388 (130) - k? same melody with 01:17:832 (129)
01:23:758 (148) - also finish like 01:24:129 (149,150,151,152). here's big and howling Boom! sound.
01:31:906 (172,173) - k k? melody is going higher, but no change color seems little flat.
01:34:314 (182,185,190) - also finish same reason to 01:23:758.
and if you accept this, how is this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8067427
01:38:017 - spinner. maybe best way to connect next song xD
01:39:592 (2,3,4,5,6) - kdkkk? to follow pitch of sound.
01:54:526 (49) - finish. symbol crash sound.
02:00:718 - spinner. same reason 01:38:017. if accepted, consider to delete 02:01:355 (1).
02:04:273 (11) - maybe 02:04:179 here.
02:07:188 (29) - add circle. end of piano playing from 02:06:060 (18).
02:10:762 (42) - maybe 02:10:856 here.
02:10:856 (42) - how about finish?
03:11:049 (306,307,308) - maybe 03:10:847 here.
05:11:234 (2) - k. here is almost similar with 05:10:804 (1).
05:45:791 (116) - finish. like 05:39:866 (90,91,105,106).
06:02:828 (187,188,189) - not fit with melody imo. same after same place.
and, 04:35:135 (28,29,30) - i know this part is ranked ver, but how about 1/6?
Good luck~
from pm~
[ Oni ]
01:18:388 (130) - k? same melody with 01:17:832 (129)
01:23:758 (148) - also finish like 01:24:129 (149,150,151,152). here's big and howling Boom! sound.
01:31:906 (172,173) - k k? melody is going higher, but no change color seems little flat.
01:34:314 (182,185,190) - also finish same reason to 01:23:758.
and if you accept this, how is this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8067427
01:38:017 - spinner. maybe best way to connect next song xD
01:39:592 (2,3,4,5,6) - kdkkk? to follow pitch of sound.
01:54:526 (49) - finish. symbol crash sound.
02:00:718 - spinner. same reason 01:38:017. if accepted, consider to delete 02:01:355 (1).
02:04:273 (11) - maybe 02:04:179 here.
02:07:188 (29) - add circle. end of piano playing from 02:06:060 (18).
02:10:762 (42) - maybe 02:10:856 here.
02:10:856 (42) - how about finish?
03:11:049 (306,307,308) - maybe 03:10:847 here.
05:11:234 (2) - k. here is almost similar with 05:10:804 (1).
05:45:791 (116) - finish. like 05:39:866 (90,91,105,106).
06:02:828 (187,188,189) - not fit with melody imo. same after same place.
and, 04:35:135 (28,29,30) - i know this part is ranked ver, but how about 1/6?
Good luck~