Soo, about the timing Arzenvald point out, I actually agree with him, it needs the additional red line.. I need you to do the same as what he told you, except that I need that you to make it 6/4 because the beat occured every 6 measurement. and for 01:42:634 - , And ALSO add red line 252 BPM 4/4 to normalize the 2 notes at 01:42:634 (102634|3,102753|2) -
do the same at 02:48:111 -
[Wasteland Predator]
00:27:992 (27992|2,27992|3,27992|1) - Think you should decrease the note amount here, the sound is noticeably a lot lower compared with previous one such as 00:27:635 (27635|0,27635|2,27635|1) - .
00:29:063 - you should also reduce the note to single note to differentiate it with 00:28:587 - , since this one felt almost the same with 00:29:539 -
00:30:254 (30254|0) - basically to emphasize the 1/2 synth better you can change this into 1/2 LN.
01:15:313 - you should add a note here, i know you wanna focus on vocal, but you also add 1/4 on small unnoticeable sound at 01:15:670 -
01:17:992 (77992|1,78111|3) - Switch column between these note is better as you actually give more breathing space after quad jack at 01:17:277 (77277|1,77396|1,77515|1,77635|1) -
01:21:087 (81087|1,81206|0,81325|1) - try make this 1-2-1? this way you give triple jack at left hand at 01:21:325 - , which mirroring jack at 01:21:206 (81206|3,81325|3,81444|3) - giving much more better balance, as you actually have all the jack focusing on right hand
01:22:515 (82515|0,82754|1) - having these at col 3 and col 1 actually make the flow stack have more readability to follow here, i also find it will form a more firm structure.
01:35:730 - I think you can try
http://puu.sh/wEsVs/f7803b6b07.png , this way the jack stack doesn't get too dense on the right hand and provide better readability here.
01:47:873 (107873|2,107992|2) - Why not try make this col 4 for the stacking instead?
, felt like the too long stack at same column you did at 01:48:587 (108587|2,108706|2,108825|2,108944|2,109063|2,109301|2,109420|2,109777|2,109896|2,110015|2) - started felt too awkward even if its the intention ...
01:54:658 (114658|3,114688|2,114777|3) - 3-4-3 pls, the unstable pattern at 01:54:361 (114361|1,114480|2,114599|1) - making the pattern after that felt lost "sense of balanciness" to hit, so at least if you make it one line stream it will prevent it from happening.l
02:01:920 - Can be made a little bit cool sv imo
02:58:944 (178944|1,178944|3,179063|3) - Try Ctrl+H these? i know you want to keep stacking with 02:58:587 (178587|1,178587|3,178587|2,178706|3,178706|1) - , but i felt the current stack kinda unbearable to hit..
The rest is great nice one
[Fontes' Insane]
00:14:857 (14857|1,14936|2) - Different snap with wonki diff. idk if it's for simplication or not, but just seem weird you only do it at some part, and it isn't even for making the gameplay easier either.
00:28:587 - Add one more note for kick, also to keep things consistent with 04:01:919 -
01:15:581 (75581|2,75581|3) - Different snap with wonki diff again.
03:22:337 - Don't really like if this get ignored, because this is really audible even as i play this on 100%
03:25:491 (205491|1) - Try make this 1/2 LN? It will form better structure with the one you made at 03:12:396 (192396|3,192396|2) - , this one also have more noticeable synth occured.
[Reba's Hard]
00:41:087 (41087|2) - This should me moved into column 2 to be jacked
01:38:706 (98706|1,98825|2) - Advice to switch column so the 1/2 LN can be emphasize better by differentiate it with 01:38:349 (98349|2,98468|2) - that have noticeable different sound.
01:54:063 (114063|2) - Felt lacking if this isn't LN tbh..
01:56:325 (116325|2,116444|1) - Prefer if you make 1-4 completing the trill for the wub-wub thingy
03:06:831 (186831|1,187009|2) - better if you snap these to red and blue line for simplification, if you try to snap exactly it's actually not this one i think.. these two are kinda risky.
03:12:158 (192158|0,192158|3,192396|0,192396|3) - Felt like it would suit more if you make it column 2-3 , differentiate them from 03:11:920 - in pitch things
03:43:705 - Felt like this one need to be LN since it is actually supposed to mirror 03:43:110 (223110|2,223229|1) -
[Normal]
00:12:873 (12873|2) - You sure there's already vocal that you follow at 00:13:230 (13230|2,13587|2,13944|2) - ? felt like this one doesn't have it, better be normal note
01:30:492 (90492|2,91444|2,91623|2) - I know your intention, but i really don't think the flow fit in here.. how about
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854720702:08:349 - The trill felt kinda sudden here, you can make
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8547220 instead
03:24:776 - Don't really see why emptying col 1 , try move 03:24:776 (204776|3,205015|2) - at col 1 and col 4?
03:39:776 - same with 02:08:349 -
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