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General
01:07:067 - 01:17:881 - remove finish hitsounds in this section, there aren't any finishes in the music
Shidz's Easy
00:10:556 (4) - i think it would be cool if you put red anchor(s) here 00:10:730 and/or here 00:10:904 to emphasize the melody, the current red anchor doesn't really do anything
00:19:625 - put a click here instead, this note is stronger than 00:19:277
00:33:579 (1) - could move red anchor to here 00:33:928 instead, where it is right now doesn't emphasize anything.
apply to any other applicable sliders, they look better and make more sense if you put red anchors on ticks instead of random spots00:34:974 (2) - ^ same idea
01:27:997 (1,2,3) - could make equilateral triangle
https://puu.sh/vDWJt/16462eabc7.jpeg02:06:370 (4,1) - fix blanket
02:32:184 - the soft-hitnormal sounds pretty icky for this spinner, maybe you could just mute it instead?
03:14:044 - add finish?
03:15:439 - ^
04:08:463 (1) - ^
04:19:625 (1,2,1,2,1) - you have all these interesting sliders, but then these 04:26:602 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) are incredibly bland. if you want to show the decreasing intensity of the song, i suggest making the slider shapes gradually less interesting, instead of a dramatic shift
Ataraxia's Normal
00:00:091 (1,2) - not a huge fan of the aesthetics here because the slidertail of 2 gets closer to the body of 1 than the tail of 1
00:05:672 (1) - could move red anchor here 00:06:021 to give emphasis on the note that is there, the current position of the red anchor looks pretty meaningless.
apply to any other applicable sliders, they look better and make more sense if you put red anchors on ticks instead of random spots00:24:858 (4,5) - how about turning this into a 1/2 slider instead for less emphasis? right now its the same pattern as spots like this 00:27:649 (4,5) which have finishes on both notes
00:44:742 - there isn't a finish hitsound in the music, remove finish and add whistle?
01:52:416 (2) - remove finish
02:08:114 (3,1) - fix DS
02:39:160 (2,1) - fix blanket
02:40:556 (1,2,3) - ^ blankets
02:51:718 (1,2) - ^
02:37:765 - the whistles in this section are pretty loud, turn down the volume
03:14:044 (1,2,3,4) - could make this pattern radial by fixing all the blankets
03:34:277 (5) - remove finish
04:33:579 (1,1) - blanket? if not, 04:34:974 (1) looks awkwardly curvy compared to past sliders, make it less curvy
Enjoy the Peace
00:02:881 (3) - shift right by 1 pixel
00:03:928 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:17:881 (3,4) - ^
01:31:137 (3,5) - ^
01:40:556 (1,2) - ^
00:04:974 (6,1) - DS is pretty small compared to 00:16:137 (6,1), its the same pattern in the music
00:07:067 (4,5) - aesthetics dont look good here, the head of 5 is too close to the body of 4
00:08:811 (2,3) - blanket? the patterns youve been using thus far are really blanket-heavy
00:14:393 (1,2) - aesthetic connection between these two sliders is pretty weak, looks like you could blanket the body of 1
00:15:091 (3) - 00:15:788 (5) - tail of 3 looks too close to head of 5
00:15:439 (4,6) - ^ same idea
00:17:532 (2,4) - ^
00:20:672 (4,5) - looks a bit messy because it looks like you could do a double blanket here (5 around tail of 4)
00:20:672 (4,1) - fix stack
02:44:393 (3,5) - ^
00:36:718 - tbh i have no idea how youre doing NC but this combo feels a bit long, put NC here? 00:37:765 (5)
01:16:137 (1,2,3,4) - these all have the same instrument backing but 1 really sticks out. 2,3 are the exact same. 1,4 are the same but ctrl+g'd (which is what makes 1 look so different, since 1 is the only slider which flows up instead of down)
01:37:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - im having trouble seeing coherence in this pattern. the angles at which you placed the circles don't seem to be connected, the visual spacing between circles also isn't consistent. the only circles that make sense to me are 01:37:765 (1,2) because of the stack and the blanket
01:41:341 (2,1) - this is the start of the kiai, you can give this higher DS
01:42:474 (4) - this is a weak note, i dont agree with putting on false emphasis by hitsounding :/
this applies to all bursts you did this for01:41:951 (1,2) - 2 is really weak note, i dont see why you need the DS to be so high
this applies to everywhere else you did this, like here 01:43:521 (2), 01:45:963 (10)02:04:277 - idk if it was your intention to use soft-hitclap default for this section, but its there
02:04:277 - 02:21:021 - same deal as 01:37:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), the angles and visual spacing are constantly changing so i can't see how these objects are related to each other
02:32:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this set of sliders is much different from the sliders around them because they overlap. i can't see any real meaning in this because the visual spacing opens up again here 02:34:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) so you cant really argue its to show "intensity going down"
02:43:695 (1,3) - stack?
02:50:323 (3,4,1) - doesnt look that good because 1 overlaps with 3, also really close to 4
02:53:114 (4,5) - slider bodies get really close, space them out a bit
03:00:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i don't hear anything on the blue ticks, if theres anything there then theyre pretty much ghost notes and shouldn't be mapped as circles
03:19:800 (2,4) - suggestion: make the angle of 03:19:800 (2,4) - the same as 03:19:625 (1,3)
03:23:201 (2,1) - like before, you can give this higher DS
03:40:468 (10,1) - this is the only time youve used a rhythm pattern like this. did you mean to put a circle here 03:40:381 too?
03:46:137 - same thing as 02:04:277
03:46:137 - same deal as 01:37:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), the angles and visual spacing are constantly changing so i can't see how these objects are related to each other. however, 03:57:649 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - seems to be using rectangles so thats good
04:21:806 - you skip this sound all the time but you map the one 1/2 beat before it 04:21:631, inconsistent mapping. map both or map none
applies all the way until end of songgood luck!