Hiiragi Mayuki(CV:Ogura Yui)/Hagino Chiaki(CV:Toujou Hisako)

Lemaire

Joined October 2012

Lemaire 2017-05-26T11:40:59+00:00

直してないところだけ書きまーす

Akitoshi wrote:
のーまるで気になるとこあったので書きましゅ
RepL4y's Normal
00:00:867 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ここだけど20秒以上ずっと時計回りになってる所が個人的に危ないと思ったので一応書いておきます、あと右側のエリアも使われていないように見えるのでそこを使って途中で反時計回りにできたりできなかったり　一箇所直したら他全部連動して直さなきゃいけなくなるし、また問題点出てくると思うのでこのままでいいですか
00:14:391 (3) - まだイントロだから消してもいいかも + 1/2の使いすぎからにも避けられる
00:26:194 (4,1) - ここだけstackされてたの気になります、00:18:326 (4,1) - や00:22:260 (4,1) - などstackされてなかったのでいうだけ言っておきます
00:32:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ずっと1/2の隙間になってる所に不安です、bpm低くても少しだけ1/1の隙間取ってみたいｗｗ00:35:047 - 00:38:981 - とか普通に消してもNormalなら大丈夫かも
00:49:801 (4) - 多分00:57:670 (1) - から見てNC
01:08:735 (2) - 普通にこんなかんじじゃだめですかね...今のだと複雑っぽい形してたから初心者からだと多分難しい可能性あったりなかったり
01:28:407 (2) - デフォルトのスキンでもhp barからあたってるのでアウト、01:27:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - これもっと下に置いた方が安全だと思います
01:35:293 (1,2) - 細かくてただの勝手ですが二つのスライダーのボディーが近すぎるのでビジュアル的に01:35:293 (1) - の形をコピペした方がきれいに見えます http://puu.sh/w0R9N/ac0cd7dffa.jpg
01:37:014 (3,4) - 01:44:883 (3,4) - ここStackさせてて01:40:948 (3,4) - だけStackさせてない所気になります、全部Stackさせるかさせないか決めといてくださいね☆　stackさせました
あと最後に00:48:817 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:52:014 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:55:948 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - この三つだけどkiaiより激しくて怖い（）　ここはBNに言われるまでは直したくないなー（めんどくさいなんて言えない。）
9歳だから変な事言ってたらごめんなさい

normal上手い人のmodは違うな～
マジで勉強になります。。。直ってない所あったら言ってください。

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Artist:Hiiragi Mayuki(CV:Ogura Yui)/Hagino Chiaki(CV:Toujou Hisako)
ArtistUnicode:柊 真雪(CV：小倉 唯)／萩野千秋(CV：東城日沙子)
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Lemaire

183 posts

Joined October 2012

Lemaire 2017-05-27T02:18:28+00:00

m3gB3g

no changed

thanks mod~!

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2017-05-27T06:57:35+00:00

気になる点を一つ
プレビュー01:03:203 - ここにしませんか？
『ぃあわーせーの色はどんな色』な感じに聞こえるのでちゃんと『しあわーせーの』の方がしっくりくる

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-05-27T09:00:27+00:00

@Yasaija714 りょーかい！！

おそらくInsaneでも、DTHD100%でクリアする方が続々出ると思うので、ランキングに差をつけるために、最後にspinを追加しました。
終わりは、いまのところRepl4yさんのDiffの01:54:965 - に揃えようと思っています。

Last edited by Asuka_- 2017-06-02T15:02:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2017-05-29T17:00:26+00:00

i want to map this song too ;; too cute

add a red line

111360,491.803278688525,4,2,1,60,1,0

(F6 then copy paste)
for insane i suggest to use this for the new timing http://puu.sh/w4EGo/3a00247851.jpg , reverse slider with one repeat is also fine

Insane
00:15:129 (2,3,4) - spacing is confusing, 00:15:375 (3,4) - this is 1/4 but the jump is as big as 00:15:129 (2,3) - this
00:16:358 (9,1) - should be a bigger jump than 00:16:112 (8,9) - this imo

other diffs are fine

metadata source?

kawaisugi

also @RepL4y reply to mods properly instead of just saying "no change", it's a rule

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-05-30T02:42:31+00:00

Karen wrote:
i want to map this song too ;; too cute (^^♪

add a red line
111360,491.803278688525,4,2,1,60,1,0
(F6 then copy paste)
for insane i suggest to use this for the new timing http://puu.sh/w4EGo/3a00247851.jpg , reverse slider with one repeat is also fine ok~ Thanks!!

Insane
00:15:129 (2,3,4) - spacing is confusing, 00:15:375 (3,4) - this is 1/4 but the jump is as big as 00:15:129 (2,3) - this i try (littele change)
00:16:358 (9,1) - should be a bigger jump than 00:16:112 (8,9) - this imo ok

other diffs are fine

metadata source? here~ t/595536/start=1

kawaisugi wakaru　

Thanks!! cute hinako avater xD

@GD
timing追加したときに　unsnapが出てきたので全diffの最後を少し弄りました。

edit: waiting repl4y's post

Lemaire

183 posts

Joined October 2012

Lemaire 2017-06-01T10:04:07+00:00

m3gB3g wrote:
hi!~

RepL4y Normal
Seems good but
00:45:867 (5,1,2) - i think this is bad overlap. Bcs Appear immediately 3 objects in one heap. It is a permissible pattern if normal
01:48:817 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:29:391 (4,5) - this pattern is ok , but i think still confusing for newbies ^
00:34:309 (5) - NC
00:38:735 (5) - ^
00:49:801 (4) - ^ 00:57:670 (1) - bcs you puted here It matches the music. no change.

thx

自分で気になる所あったのでちょっと修正

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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TitleUnicode:しあわせ色
Artist:Hiiragi Mayuki(CV:Ogura Yui)/Hagino Chiaki(CV:Toujou Hisako)
ArtistUnicode:柊 真雪(CV：小倉 唯)／萩野千秋(CV：東城日沙子)
Creator:Asuka_-
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Source:ひなこのーと
Tags:Hinako note Gekidan Hitotose Akitoshi RepL4y
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Asuka_-

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Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-06-01T11:13:27+00:00

ok

update: add spin Akitoshi's diff Because the end points were not aligned.

ready

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2017-06-03T08:34:23+00:00

no kd
00:30:621 (2,3,4) - remove slider body hitsounds and add them on the heads and tails
01:02:588 (4,5,6) - drum-whistle doesn't fit here imo, soft-whistle better
01:51:544 - whistle?

Asuka_-

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Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-06-03T08:51:52+00:00

ok fixed

Karen

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Joined August 2013

Karen 2017-06-03T09:13:11+00:00

bubble

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-06-03T11:03:43+00:00

Thanks Karen!!

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-06-03T12:31:09+00:00

:b:

pop reason:
00:27:424 (3) - 01:10:703 (6) - on normal are offscreen, even if only by a few pixels
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other things:

hitsounding
seems you decided to replace soft whistles with kicks instead of using another way to hitsound kicks.
like replacing the drum/normal clap or just switching to normal-hitnormal on beats with kicks. makes hitsounding feel really bland since whistles are great to emphasize melody/vocals/... especially since most your map follow vocals or melody
spots like 00:18:326 (1,3,4) - and many more would be great for whistles for example

00:30:621 (2,3,4) - hitsounding here makes no sense, it's all piano with snares on 00:30:867 (3,4) - so you should remove kicks and add claps on 3 head +4 head/tail

insane
I'll just be honest,I don't like this difficulty and think it needs more work put into it

some issues I have with it:
00:00:867 (1,2,3,4) - patterns like this don't really feel representative of what happens in the song
00:00:867 (1,2) - and 00:01:850 (3,4) - are quite different in the song, first is 1/1 vocals/melody, second 1/2, yet you represent them the same way

spacing seems very unorganized, with things like 00:25:948 (6) - suddenly having pretty low spacing when it was a jump all the time before, like on 00:18:080 (6) - 00:22:014 (6) -

all sections of the map feel nearly the same, which makes it pretty boring and uninteresting to play and also doesn't fit the changes in the song. parts are different, so they should be represented differently, yet you just use similarly spaced sharp angled jumps for a huge part of the map.
examples would be 01:08:735 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - - 00:54:227 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - intensity is quite different, but there is no real difference in how yuo represented them
or the overall spacing in this part 01:35:293 (1,2,3,4,5) - being the same as the chorus before despite being quite different
the whole map being 1x sv also doesn't really help, though it you at least used different base spacing for parts with different intensity it would already be much better. you could utilize things like low spacing, more linear movement etc

normal
check the thing at the top of the mod
you overuse 1/2 sliders, forcing unnecessarily dense rhythm on spots like 01:37:260 (4,5,6) -, all of these could be circles
01:41:194 (4,5) - etc.

00:26:440 - 00:40:211 -

Avoid slider-only sections. Aiming and following a lot of sliders in a row can be tiring for new players. In such cases, circles and rest moments without hitobjects to click or follow should be used.

(rc for normal diff)
replacing some of the 1/2 sliders with circles would help here too

^both of these points apply to whole map
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yea not going to qualify this, fix the unrankable thing and at least take the other stuff into consideration before asking Karen to rebubble

gl

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-06-03T12:35:25+00:00

What Lasse said is true.
Thank you very much. (I'll post reply later)

確かにLasseさんの言う通りです。
for rankはやめませんが、ゆっくり進行で行きます。
gdさんごめんなさい！！！

planning
サビは変更するつもりはないので、スページング修正したのち、AメロとBメロのSVと音取りを変更してそれらを弱くして　サビとの強弱を明確にしようかなと思っています。

後で英語考えます！

Akitoshi

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Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-06-03T14:26:31+00:00

hitsoundでミスった所見つけたのでLasseのmod返信した後お願いします

code

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63203
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 8736,16604,24473,32342,40211,48080,55949,63818,71686,79555,87424,95293,103162,111522
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Shiawase Iro
TitleUnicode:しあわせ色
Artist:Hiiragi Mayuki(CV:Ogura Yui)/Hagino Chiaki(CV:Toujou Hisako)
ArtistUnicode:柊 真雪(CV：小倉 唯)／萩野千秋(CV：東城日沙子)
Creator:Asuka_-
Version:Akitoshi's Hard
Source:ひなこのーと
Tags:Hinako note Gekidan Hitotose Akitoshi RepL4y
BeatmapID:1296809
BeatmapSetID:614419

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:5.7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-06-04T05:12:22+00:00

im not good english
i use google translate

@Lasse
I think your opinion that there is no change on the whole and there is no fun is right.
I sympathized with the reason why you disliked it.

I change it because kiai part and other rhythms and spacing are very similar.
I do not want to change the rhythm of kiai part, so I will try to make the space of the jump a bit wider and not let the players get bored.
I will weaken the rhythm, SV, space, etc... other than kiai part, clarify the difference with kiai part and aim for a clean map in a whole.

After all the preparation is done, I would like you to see it again if possible.

I will reply again by quoting your post after the fix is over.
thank you very much.

@gd
The rank until the end of this season's animation has become tough. I'm sorry. After remap of insane, gather more mods and ask rebble.
ああ日本語でも良かったのか...
もっとmod集めます、ほんとにすみません。

@Akitoshi
Insaneの修正が終わった後、それ含めてupdateします。
updateしたら言うねー。

edit : fixed my english xd

Last edited by Asuka_- 2017-06-18T10:29:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-06-08T14:06:49+00:00

ok map update
im replacing hitsound now.

before : https://puu.sh/wenIq/500744f3c1.osu

Lemaire

183 posts

Joined October 2012

Lemaire 2017-06-09T11:25:14+00:00

Lasse wrote:
normal
check the thing at the top of the mod
you overuse 1/2 sliders, forcing unnecessarily dense rhythm on spots like 01:37:260 (4,5,6) -, all of these could be circles
01:41:194 (4,5) - etc. 　　Changed from 1/2 slider to 1/1 slider

00:26:440 - 00:40:211 - 　fixed
Avoid slider-only sections. Aiming and following a lot of sliders in a row can be tiring for new players. In such cases, circles and rest moments without hitobjects to click or follow should be used.
(rc for normal diff)
replacing some of the 1/2 sliders with circles would help here too

^both of these points apply to whole map

thx~

code

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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TitleUnicode:しあわせ色
Artist:Hiiragi Mayuki(CV:Ogura Yui)/Hagino Chiaki(CV:Toujou Hisako)
ArtistUnicode:柊 真雪(CV：小倉 唯)／萩野千秋(CV：東城日沙子)
Creator:Asuka_-
Version:RepL4y's Normal
Source:ひなこのーと
Tags:Hinako note Gekidan Hitotose Akitoshi RepL4y
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Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-06-09T11:31:57+00:00

update

ヒットサウンドまじでわかんない、、　やばい。。

hit sound now

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-06-09T15:29:47+00:00

insane
much better now
00:30:621 (2,3,4,1) - seemed a bit overspaced, would be nice to reduce this to fit this part better, it's too sudden together with the 1/4 sliders
01:49:309 (2,3,4) - ^ even more cause music is getting calmer here

hs stuff that I wrote before seeing you didn't change them yet. some things might not apply then

probably applies to all diffs:
00:06:276 - missing whistle?
00:13:162 (4,7) - ^
00:18:326 (1) - whistle placement makes no sense to me, melody and you emphasis is on red tick, so you should move the whistle from tail to head
same for 00:22:260 (1) - 00:26:194 (1) - etc.
happens in most parts, like 00:34:063 (1) -

00:51:030 - here they make some sense though, but on most spots they don't fit the song and your mapping

01:51:544 - could have whistle on the last hit of the slider
01:54:987 - could also have whistle on spinnerend

^take these into consideration when hitsounding

hard
01:51:360 (1) - should be 1/8 longer
01:51:360 - different sampleset on red/green line

other diffs look fine, fix hitsounds, get your rebubble from karen and I can qualify

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-06-10T03:44:40+00:00

all fixed from lasse's mod, thanks!

for my hitsound, I'm using default whistle on 00:18:326 - and other related parts that kinda fits with the music (yeah me and asuka have different hitsounding)

code

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63203
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 8736,16604,24473,32342,40211,48080,55949,63818,71686,79555,87424,95293,103162,111522
DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Shiawase Iro
TitleUnicode:しあわせ色
Artist:Hiiragi Mayuki(CV:Ogura Yui)/Hagino Chiaki(CV:Toujou Hisako)
ArtistUnicode:柊 真雪(CV：小倉 唯)／萩野千秋(CV：東城日沙子)
Creator:Asuka_-
Version:Akitoshi's Hard
Source:ひなこのーと
Tags:Hinako note Gekidan Hitotose Akitoshi RepL4y
BeatmapID:1296809
BeatmapSetID:614419

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:5.7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-06-10T09:14:11+00:00

also one more thing about the hitsounds

Lasse wrote:
00:18:326 (1) - whistle placement makes no sense to me, melody and you emphasis is on red tick, so you should move the whistle from tail to head
same for 00:22:260 (1) - 00:26:194 (1) - etc.
happens in most parts, like 00:34:063 (1) - actually those whistles on slidertail fits for the music's instrument, maybe adding default whistle on head and keep the custom whistle on tail would be better than just moving the whistle from tail to head as soft-hitwhistle.wav is way too noisy for those red ticks

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-06-10T10:34:06+00:00

oh in my download there was no custom whistle, when I redownloaded before checking it again
so all whistle suggestions are related to default soft whistle

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-06-10T10:42:19+00:00

~~i'll replace HS (Easy and Normal) and reply Lasse's mod~~

Lasse wrote:
insane
much better now
00:30:621 (2,3,4,1) - seemed a bit overspaced, would be nice to reduce this to fit this part better, it's too sudden together with the 1/4 sliders
01:49:309 (2,3,4) - ^ even more cause music is getting calmer here
ok fixed

hs stuff that I wrote before seeing you didn't change them yet. some things might not apply then
probably applies to all diffs:
00:06:276 - missing whistle?
00:13:162 (4,7) - ^
00:18:326 (1) - whistle placement makes no sense to me, melody and you emphasis is on red tick, so you should move the whistle from tail to head
same for 00:22:260 (1) - 00:26:194 (1) - etc.
happens in most parts, like 00:34:063 (1) -

head : default whistle
tail : SC1 whistle

00:51:030 - here they make some sense though, but on most spots they don't fit the song and your mapping
i put SC1 whistle

01:51:544 - could have whistle on the last hit of the slider
01:54:987 - could also have whistle on spinnerend
^take these into consideration when hitsounding all apply (all diff)

really thanks for details of hs ‼
I'll ask karen to rebubble

Karen

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Karen 2017-06-11T06:37:41+00:00

no kd

insane
00:36:522 (2,4) - this overlap doesn't look like your style in other parts
00:55:211 - if you add clap here it would be better to make it clickable, like a circle? clap on a slider tail is weird x.x

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-06-11T12:47:45+00:00

@Karen
all fixed !

Chihara Minori

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Chihara Minori 2017-06-11T13:29:18+00:00

Just to polish hs (no kds)

最初は　https://puu.sh/wgYMr/2267cd5f3f.wav ・https://puu.sh/wgYNJ/826b471a66.wav　ｄｌし、フォルダに入れ、いくつ下にあるもの見てみる

00:15:989 (7) - これ消して00:16:112 (8) - こっちはclapに変わってみる
00:30:621 - clapつけて00:31:112 - こっちも上と同じ
01:02:342 (3) - clapにする？
01:03:203 (8) - 私ならwhistleです
01:27:178 (9) - clapあったほうがいいと思う
01:51:360 - sample2にして一番前と後ろだけにwhistleあげる

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-06-11T17:43:54+00:00

Time Capsule wrote:
Just to polish hs (no kds)

最初は　https://puu.sh/wgYMr/2267cd5f3f.wav ・https://puu.sh/wgYNJ/826b471a66.wav　ｄｌし、フォルダに入れ、いくつ下にあるもの見てみる

00:15:989 (7) - これ消して00:16:112 (8) - こっちはclapに変わってみる　ok
00:30:621 - clapつけて00:31:112 - こっちも上と同じ　少し変更
01:02:342 (3) - clapにする？せやね
01:03:203 (8) - 私ならwhistleです　ないす
01:27:178 (9) - clapあったほうがいいと思う　おｋ
01:51:360 - sample2にして一番前と後ろだけにwhistleあげる　ここはちょい保留　なんかHS浮いてる感じがしたので　BNからこれについてあれば変えますねー

ありがとうございま！
ready

Karen

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Karen 2017-06-15T09:00:10+00:00

Rebubbled.

Neptunee

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Neptunee 2017-06-16T01:50:49+00:00

Pls rank

Lasse