Abe Nana
Abe Nana wrote:
Hi. From M4M
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]Unused hitsounds:drum-sliderslide57.wav normal-slidertick67.wav soft-sliderslide56.wav yea I will make sure things are fine there when someone wants to bubble[Dusk]00:27:138 (1) - is a little off the slider. need replace fixed03:32:026 (3) - it would be nice to put a newcombo in this circle IMO. I thought that is a bit spammy when I mapped, but I'll give it a try04:40:958 (2) - Let's move it a little to the right. just a bit off the grid area still not offscreen05:51:239 (1) - remove NC06:02:026 (1) - ^ both fixed
although I saw it many times there is only this.
sorry :s
PinkHeart
PinkHeart wrote:
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[Dusk]
00:23:262 (2) - , 00:25:958 (2) - I guess you changed another track to follow here. maybe move nc here to make it more noticeable? would make sense, but bit much nc for this part and it's all still mainly vocal, most emphasis here is on 00:25:958 (2) - and the stack basically "continues" the vocal
00:27:138 (1) - I can see your idea, but this pattern doesn't work well with short sliders like this...
(btw you can move 1's head to x82 y252 for a really minor fix) I curved pattern a bit less and moved things, should look better now
00:43:149 (1) - since you only used straight sliders in the former part, make this slider curved may be better for informing the incoming kiai imo good idea, made this a more outstanding sshape
01:17:869 (1,2) - , 01:20:565 (1,2) - a triple will be better if you'd like to follow the drum
01:42:812 (1,2) - ctrl+g fit the song better because 01:42:812 (1) - 's tone is lower than 01:42:475 (1) - don't think that matters much here and I really prefer current movement :c
01:58:149 - this empty feels a little weird to me. if you are following the song's arrangement of empty, then 01:57:981 (1) - should be removed imo. same for 03:16:183 (1) - not sure about this yet, I quite like the current effect, but maybe I will add notes in the following red ticks later?
02:00:003 (1) - just use a circle here is enough, as you reduced the volume of sliderend to 30%
see reply to mir
03:32:026 (3) - add nc? yes
04:07:588 - 04:10:284 - try add this here?changed 04:10:284 - to s:c82 (which is what it should have had, but I messed up, it'sd the same hs just shorter) so the bells alternate
05:04:048 (1) - the sound here is still strong enough for a short slider imo I think both ideas work, but circle is better for patterning here/avoid 1/4 slider spam and makes the snare on 05:04:301 - stand out a bit at least
06:04:385 - it would be nice if you reduced the volume and spacing together. I think it won't affect the consistency with the beginning. alright, changed it a bit more since mir already suggested something similar (but not sure how noticeable it is)
That's all. Ringo's voice is really impressiveespecially in eroge
thanks!
also made 04:02:194 (1,1,1) - a bit louder after some people complained about it being nearly inaudible