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Garden

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Garden 2017-05-06T01:54:39+00:00

01:08:035 (2,3) - more equal visual is appreciated!
01:23:286 (7,8) - can we save the biggest spacing to latter sections
01:33:677 - 01:53:118 - miss a finish?
01:41:051 (6) - nc like first part for the intensity changes
01:43:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - a bit unjustified spacing for me
02:28:482 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - might be personal, i feel bunch of circles here make the consistent jump emphasizes at around 2:40 stand out less
02:36:191 (1,2,4,5) - considering how other similar parallel patterns are done i suggest avoid the overlap here
03:24:627 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - divide combo into 3 like how your jumps are constructed, follows the guitar better
okok

Sotarks

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Sotarks 2017-05-06T09:16:04+00:00

Garden wrote:
01:08:035 (2,3) - more equal visual is appreciated! i don't understand what you mean by equal visual here, the pattern itself is okay tho
02:28:482 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - might be personal, i feel bunch of circles here make the consistent jump emphasizes at around 2:40 stand out less
this jump is fine imo

rest fixed! thx garden ♥

Garden

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Garden 2017-05-06T13:51:35+00:00

bubble one

Nao Tomori

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Nao Tomori 2017-05-07T23:15:55+00:00

[general]
mp3 file is 320 kbps? (popped)
[melancholy]
00:04:180 (5) - should be 2 circles cuz there is a strong beat on the slider end
00:34:347 (2) - nothing changed in the song here why start using kicksliders?
03:29:655 (1) - hella small
03:38:202 (6) - randm drum finish?

Sotarks

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Sotarks 2017-05-08T11:54:00+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
[general]
mp3 file is 320 kbps? (popped) wut i remember changing it like days ago, nvm i'll replaced it by a 192KBps one (AImod didn't even telll me this)
[melancholy]
00:04:180 (5) - should be 2 circles cuz there is a strong beat on the slider end
00:34:347 (2) - nothing changed in the song here why start using kicksliders? i like using this kickslider pattern, when kick+violin (more thaan 2 instrument)
are both emphasizing and building up. so yeah want to keep this, and it still plays like a jump since kick sliders are not streams.
03:29:655 (1) - hella small it's a really small beat here, compared to the rest...
03:38:202 (6) - randm drum finish?

no reply = fixed!
thx

Nao Tomori

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Nao Tomori 2017-05-08T12:02:44+00:00

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Garden

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Garden 2017-05-08T14:00:32+00:00

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Natsu

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Natsu 2017-05-08T23:04:47+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
guys thanks a lot for mods !! fixed some stuff (don't have much time to reply since really busy with school atm..)
but yea it helped a lot!!

updated and ready

I'll check the map, but if you reply to their mods-

Sotarks

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Sotarks 2017-05-10T23:42:53+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Sotarks wrote:
guys thanks a lot for mods !! fixed some stuff (don't have much time to reply since really busy with school atm..)
but yea it helped a lot!!

updated and ready
I'll check the map, but if you reply to their mods-

Alright, did~

Natsu

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Natsu 2017-05-10T23:50:54+00:00

today later~ 1,50 am here hue

Sotarks

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Sotarks 2017-05-10T23:51:40+00:00

Natsu wrote:
today later~ 1,50 am here hue

same, np dude!

Natsu

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Natsu 2017-05-11T21:32:28+00:00

IRC STUFF

2017-05-11 23:03 Sotarks: if you want to clarufy stuff irc
2017-05-11 23:03 Sotarks: i'm free
2017-05-11 23:03 Sotarks:

2017-05-11 23:03 Natsu: oh irc would be cool
2017-05-11 23:03 Natsu: wdf are you my stalker or something LOL
2017-05-11 23:03 Sotarks: acutally
2017-05-11 23:04 Sotarks: no
2017-05-11 23:04 Sotarks: xD
2017-05-11 23:04 Sotarks: i randomly typed natsu
2017-05-11 23:04 Sotarks: to see if you're modding
2017-05-11 23:04 Sotarks: xD
2017-05-11 23:05 Natsu: I literally downloaded the map like 20 secs ago wdf
2017-05-11 23:05 Sotarks: lol
2017-05-11 23:05 Sotarks: you said you gonna check it without looking at the map xD
2017-05-11 23:05 Natsu: no I redownloaded it lol
2017-05-11 23:05 Natsu: because u said u changed stuff xD
2017-05-11 23:05 Sotarks: oh
2017-05-11 23:05 Sotarks: i changed
2017-05-11 23:06 Sotarks: pixel
2017-05-11 23:06 Sotarks: placement
2017-05-11 23:06 Sotarks: xD
2017-05-11 23:06 Sotarks: i self popped
2017-05-11 23:06 Sotarks: btw
2017-05-11 23:08 Natsu: YE IK
2017-05-11 23:09 Natsu: 00:02:336 (5,1) - this has to be overlaped? you have some 1/4 jumps right after it 00:03:845 (3,4) - , would be a good introduction to don't overlap the former one as well o.o
2017-05-11 23:10 Sotarks: you want me to space more 1 ?
2017-05-11 23:10 Natsu: yes
2017-05-11 23:10 Sotarks: ok
2017-05-11 23:10 Natsu: 00:17:588 (4,5) - blanket could be improved o.O
2017-05-11 23:10 Sotarks: http://i.imgur.com/so8mtTC.png
2017-05-11 23:11 Sotarks: wasn't my intention to blanket here
2017-05-11 23:11 Natsu: btw u have the correct metadata of this
2017-05-11 23:11 Sotarks: ofc
2017-05-11 23:11 Natsu: and yes that work better
2017-05-11 23:11 Natsu: 00:25:968 (6) - missing nc?
2017-05-11 23:12 Sotarks: nc'ing every 2 beats
2017-05-11 23:12 Sotarks: for this section
2017-05-11 23:12 Sotarks: downbeats*
2017-05-11 23:13 Natsu: 00:35:856 (2,3,4) - reduce the spacing or increase it a bit at 00:36:191 (4,5) -
2017-05-11 23:14 Sotarks: fixed
2017-05-11 23:14 Sotarks: http://i.imgur.com/cLsVZQv.png
2017-05-11 23:14 Sotarks: made the transition smoother
2017-05-11 23:14 Natsu: yeah
2017-05-11 23:15 Natsu: why the combos in the kiai are kinda inconsistent
2017-05-11 23:16 Sotarks: 00:46:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) -
2017-05-11 23:16 Sotarks: actually
2017-05-11 23:16 Sotarks: after
2017-05-11 23:16 Sotarks: i combo at every finish
2017-05-11 23:16 Natsu: 00:51:442 (1,2,3,4) - there are things that last for 1 stanza and things for 2
2017-05-11 23:16 Sotarks: 00:56:806 (1) -
2017-05-11 23:16 Sotarks: 00:52:783 (1) -
2017-05-11 23:16 Sotarks: in kiai i just want to nc finishes
2017-05-11 23:16 Sotarks: only
2017-05-11 23:17 Sotarks: so it's actually consistent
2017-05-11 23:17 Sotarks: with the music
2017-05-11 23:19 Natsu: k
2017-05-11 23:19 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8062213 maybe move 01:42:057 (5) - like that?
2017-05-11 23:19 Natsu: 01:45:074 (1,3) - make them parallel o.o?
2017-05-11 23:20 Natsu: or something like this for 5 01:52:280 (2,3,4,5) - ?
2017-05-11 23:20 Natsu: 01:50:940 (2,3,4,5) - ^
2017-05-11 23:21 Sotarks: ok first fixed
2017-05-11 23:21 Natsu: 01:53:621 (2) - you'd need to move this a bit down as it's touching the hp bar
2017-05-11 23:21 Sotarks: 2nd too
2017-05-11 23:21 Natsu: 01:56:303 (1,2,3,4) - adjust the spacing a bit better here
2017-05-11 23:22 Sotarks: ok all fix
2017-05-11 23:22 Sotarks: ok done for last
2017-05-11 23:22 Sotarks: xd
2017-05-11 23:22 Sotarks: 01:52:280 (2,3,4,5) -
2017-05-11 23:22 Sotarks: whats wrong with this
2017-05-11 23:22 Sotarks: ?
2017-05-11 23:22 Natsu: no that was the example for the other ones
2017-05-11 23:23 Natsu: btw 02:19:599 (1) - probably remove the NC? you didn't stuff like that in the previous kiai o.o
2017-05-11 23:25 Natsu: 03:22:783 (7,1) - avoid the tiny overlap?
2017-05-11 23:26 Sotarks: fixed both
2017-05-11 23:30 Natsu: k that's all
2017-05-11 23:30 Natsu: tell me when u updated it

Natsu

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Natsu 2017-05-11T21:53:56+00:00

good