1. Oni (4,38 stars, 1768 notes)

1. 00:00:214 (1) - I don't feel finish here neccesary, i pref k (little kat). It sounds exactly same as 00:01:382 (8) -
2. 00:03:331 - this section doesn't have any consistency with the first part, if you notice, you're using triplets on the first part on the fourth circle (00:00:798 - )
   and 00:03:526 - second here (even not in the fourth)
3. check both comments about the first part, try to keep the consistency (maybe do it again ^^)
4. 00:12:683 - same comment here, triplets are so randomized imo, for example try deleting this: 00:16:092 (98) - and adding some here 00:16:287 -
5. i'm gonna skip this, i'll irc mod when you have fixed it :3
6. 00:24:567 - since ik there will be a lot of hr players (like me) i think 1,5x sv it's too much, maybe 1,25 is still great :p
7. 00:28:951 (179) - unnecesary note imo
8. 00:31:386 (193) - if you're using finisher here, you should add finish here too: 00:29:438 (181) - because you're following the section start on both, but i suggest you to remove both
9. 00:33:432 (206) - try deleting this, it's kinda dense and you just started using 5-streams
10. 00:51:649 (321) - delete since you're following vocal here
11. 00:54:766 (336) - move it to 00:54:961 - , sounds great
12. 00:56:130 (341) - delete this one
13. 00:57:883 (348) - try deleting this one and making 00:57:688 (347) - don
14. hmmm on this section 01:02:559 - try to emphatise heavy sounds and use finisher on them, if you're making it then don't make triplets, and do single notes on them :3
15. 01:25:159 (503) - make this don
    hmmm imo in general you should take a relook on the whole map, focusing the triplets in other ways... these comments are similar along all the song, if you want to call me back it's really ok so don't worry, good luck about the map ^.^
    

xfraczynho wrote:

Hi! mod request from my queue t/579972 . Remember they're just suggestions so feel free to deny

[Oni]
Check the Audio sheet on Song Setup -> Reset both Settings There are so many volume changes.
Also just a personal opinion: You can look for another bg, i don't like artist's backgrounds but whatever, is good too :3 I like this one
01:28:861 - Why no preview point here? I feel it better That was intentional. If I put it there the song starts late, tested myself.

1. 00:00:214 (1) - I don't feel finish here neccesary, i pref k (little kat). It sounds exactly same as 00:01:382 (8) - Nope, the first one has a crash cymbal sound which is the reason I put finisher.
2. 00:03:331 - this section doesn't have any consistency with the first part, if you notice, you're using triplets on the first part on the fourth circle (00:00:798 - )
   and 00:03:526 - second here (even not in the fourth) 00:03:623 (21) - This note has been moved to 00:04:013 - that section. However, the 2nd one has already a triplet.
3. check both comments about the first part, try to keep the consistency (maybe do it again ^^)
4. 00:12:683 - same comment here, triplets are so randomized imo, for example try deleting this: 00:16:092 (98) - and adding some here 00:16:287 - I don't see any difference adding or deleting notes on this spot. Except the hi-hat sounds of the drums the sounds are mostly 1/2 so i've tried to spice it up.
5. i'm gonna skip this, i'll irc mod when you have fixed it :3
6. 00:24:567 - since ik there will be a lot of hr players (like me) i think 1,5x sv it's too much, maybe 1,25 is still great :p Those are only 2 ninja notes, I don't think that'll create a problem.
7. 00:28:951 (179) - unnecesary note imo Deleted.
8. 00:31:386 (193) - if you're using finisher here, you should add finish here too: 00:29:438 (181) - because you're following the section start on both, but i suggest you to remove both Not really, the 1st one has a crash cymbal sound and yet the 2nd one has only a snare sound.
9. 00:33:432 (206) - try deleting this, it's kinda dense and you just started using 5-streams Exactly. And that pattern is a good start for them.
10. 00:51:649 (321) - delete since you're following vocal here I've tried to follow vocals and drums together. This is unchanged but i'll consider about this later.
11. 00:54:766 (336) - move it to 00:54:961 - , sounds great I don't want to skip the kick sound on the measure start.
12. 00:56:130 (341) - delete this one Okay.
13. 00:57:883 (348) - try deleting this one and making 00:57:688 (347) - don Sounds better.
14. hmmm on this section 01:02:559 - try to emphatise heavy sounds and use finisher on them, if you're making it then don't make triplets, and do single notes on them :3 About this suggestion, i believe you've realized this song is 5 minutes and about 4 minutes of this song includes ONLY 1/2 notes which will make the map pretty boring. That's why I overmapped this song. About the triplets: I don't like the usage of finishers like this.
15. 01:25:159 (503) - make this don Why? There is a certain snare sound here.
    hmmm imo in general you should take a relook on the whole map, focusing the triplets in other ways... these comments are similar along all the song, if you want to call me back it's really ok so don't worry, good luck about the map ^.^ Thank you