General
01:12:491 - why does the kiai end here though? It's the same as 00:54:029
Easy
00:19:909 (5) - shouldn't the NC be here?
00:34:249 (3,3) - why the claps on the repeat arrow though, the snare isn't on that beat, unlike 00:35:239 (4,2) - and that part is softer
00:43:315 (1) - finish on slider start?
00:54:030 (1) - ^
00:59:304 (1,2,3) - the drums on the white lines in this section are in equal volume in the music, have all claps?
01:01:777 (1) - finish on slider start? Getting back into the kiai
01:12:491 (1) - same as 00:54:030 (1)
01:16:283 (3) - same as 00:57:821 (3) - ? so should both of them have finish, or none?
01:17:766 (1,2) - all claps as the drum is rolling here?
01:20:403 (1) - finish on slider start?
Normal
00:06:557 (1) - finish on slider start?
00:07:216 (3) - shouldn't the clap be on the sliderstart instead? The beat of the snare is at 00:07:216 - likewise for 00:09:854 (3)
00:11:172 (6) - sliderstart also has the snare, goes with clap
00:18:920 (5) - could remove that finish on the slider start, it is a high-hat, but not really a long drawn cymbal crash like 00:19:579
00:22:216 (1) - you could add the finish on the slider start here
00:30:128 (1) - could add the clap on slider end
00:34:249 (3,3) - similar to Easy
00:38:206 (1) - finish on slider start?
00:52:711 (3,4,5,6) - could reduce the overall densiy here, maybe something like:
00:59:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - similar to Easy
01:01:777 (1) - why the sudden long note though, is it following the "jumping up" or the held note by the singer? If the former, it's quite different from every single other one around it, so it's very isolated and out of the blue. If the latter, it would extend all the way to 01:02:930 - that circle at 01:02:931 (2) would not be needed then, also it's the only singlepated 1/2 note in the difficulty that seems to start before slider, I think that can be avoided
01:11:667 (2,3,4) - reducing the density here again like previously could help lighten the load for players in the Normal, something like:
01:20:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - similar to the starting of the song 00:06:557 (1) - 00:07:216 (3) - 00:11:172 (6) -
Note hitsounds for rest of difficulties
Hard
00:09:030 (5) - not really necessary to tie in to the next part with this, also if you notice, there is no break at all since the start
00:32:271 - the beat here is stronger, would be better not as a slider end
00:34:249 (5,5) - like the previous 2 difficulties
00:34:085 (4,2) - could remove, there's been no breaks since 00:17:436
Fraction's Oni
00:13:810 (32,33,34) - sticks out comparing to 00:16:447 (42,43,44)
00:18:590 (51) - change it to d, keep it distinctively different from 00:18:755 (52,53) - so that when the snare and hihat comes in, it is different from what is before it
00:19:414 (55) - change to d? Differ from 00:19:250 (54,56)
00:21:228 (65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - to have this 11 beat doubles stream is a big jump from the Muzukashii
00:27:821 (101) - remove, it is quite redundant here, it doesn't follow the patterns commonly used in the difficulty too like 00:22:217 (76,77) - .
00:40:018 - don't know if it is because of how the difficulty was structured before this, but this seemed like an awkward gap nevertheless. It seemed to be given for the preparation for the stream but still can't get the feeling out with this gap in the song due to the strength in the music here
00:42:985 - I think it's not really good to leave this beat empty, a d will do, it will still leave enough time before 00:43:315 (181) - and there will still be impact on that note
00:57:326 (246) - remove this note, give the note and held vocals at 00:57:162 (245) some change to resonate, ensure the lack of music at 00:57:326 is emphasized
01:04:579 (289) - change to k, there's a dip in the pitch in 01:04:579 (289,290,291) - where 01:04:744 (290) is lower than the surrounding 2 notes
01:05:239 (292) - shift to 01:05:073 and change to k, the synth there is higher than 01:04:909 (291) and there is nothing at 01:05:238
01:05:898 (295) - shift this to 01:05:733 and likewise change to k to follow the synth as well, there is nothing at 01:05:898
^ so for that last 3 points it would look something like:
01:15:458 (356,357,358) - kdd instead, the higher tone is at 01:15:458
01:17:766 (367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383) - 17 stream again is quite a big jump from the Muzukashii, which is just a slider
Hope you consider these, good luck
01:12:491 - why does the kiai end here though? It's the same as 00:54:029
Easy
00:19:909 (5) - shouldn't the NC be here?
00:34:249 (3,3) - why the claps on the repeat arrow though, the snare isn't on that beat, unlike 00:35:239 (4,2) - and that part is softer
00:43:315 (1) - finish on slider start?
00:54:030 (1) - ^
00:59:304 (1,2,3) - the drums on the white lines in this section are in equal volume in the music, have all claps?
01:01:777 (1) - finish on slider start? Getting back into the kiai
01:12:491 (1) - same as 00:54:030 (1)
01:16:283 (3) - same as 00:57:821 (3) - ? so should both of them have finish, or none?
01:17:766 (1,2) - all claps as the drum is rolling here?
01:20:403 (1) - finish on slider start?
Normal
00:06:557 (1) - finish on slider start?
00:07:216 (3) - shouldn't the clap be on the sliderstart instead? The beat of the snare is at 00:07:216 - likewise for 00:09:854 (3)
00:11:172 (6) - sliderstart also has the snare, goes with clap
00:18:920 (5) - could remove that finish on the slider start, it is a high-hat, but not really a long drawn cymbal crash like 00:19:579
00:22:216 (1) - you could add the finish on the slider start here
00:30:128 (1) - could add the clap on slider end
00:34:249 (3,3) - similar to Easy
00:38:206 (1) - finish on slider start?
00:52:711 (3,4,5,6) - could reduce the overall densiy here, maybe something like:
00:59:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - similar to Easy
01:01:777 (1) - why the sudden long note though, is it following the "jumping up" or the held note by the singer? If the former, it's quite different from every single other one around it, so it's very isolated and out of the blue. If the latter, it would extend all the way to 01:02:930 - that circle at 01:02:931 (2) would not be needed then, also it's the only singlepated 1/2 note in the difficulty that seems to start before slider, I think that can be avoided
01:11:667 (2,3,4) - reducing the density here again like previously could help lighten the load for players in the Normal, something like:
01:20:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - similar to the starting of the song 00:06:557 (1) - 00:07:216 (3) - 00:11:172 (6) -
Note hitsounds for rest of difficulties
Hard
00:09:030 (5) - not really necessary to tie in to the next part with this, also if you notice, there is no break at all since the start
00:32:271 - the beat here is stronger, would be better not as a slider end
00:34:249 (5,5) - like the previous 2 difficulties
00:34:085 (4,2) - could remove, there's been no breaks since 00:17:436
Fraction's Oni
00:13:810 (32,33,34) - sticks out comparing to 00:16:447 (42,43,44)
00:18:590 (51) - change it to d, keep it distinctively different from 00:18:755 (52,53) - so that when the snare and hihat comes in, it is different from what is before it
00:19:414 (55) - change to d? Differ from 00:19:250 (54,56)
00:21:228 (65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - to have this 11 beat doubles stream is a big jump from the Muzukashii
00:27:821 (101) - remove, it is quite redundant here, it doesn't follow the patterns commonly used in the difficulty too like 00:22:217 (76,77) - .
00:40:018 - don't know if it is because of how the difficulty was structured before this, but this seemed like an awkward gap nevertheless. It seemed to be given for the preparation for the stream but still can't get the feeling out with this gap in the song due to the strength in the music here
00:42:985 - I think it's not really good to leave this beat empty, a d will do, it will still leave enough time before 00:43:315 (181) - and there will still be impact on that note
00:57:326 (246) - remove this note, give the note and held vocals at 00:57:162 (245) some change to resonate, ensure the lack of music at 00:57:326 is emphasized
01:04:579 (289) - change to k, there's a dip in the pitch in 01:04:579 (289,290,291) - where 01:04:744 (290) is lower than the surrounding 2 notes
01:05:239 (292) - shift to 01:05:073 and change to k, the synth there is higher than 01:04:909 (291) and there is nothing at 01:05:238
01:05:898 (295) - shift this to 01:05:733 and likewise change to k to follow the synth as well, there is nothing at 01:05:898
^ so for that last 3 points it would look something like:
01:15:458 (356,357,358) - kdd instead, the higher tone is at 01:15:458
01:17:766 (367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383) - 17 stream again is quite a big jump from the Muzukashii, which is just a slider
Hope you consider these, good luck