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Iceskulls

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Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-10-11T14:11:16+00:00

as requested

[general]

looks fine

[extra]

00:16:866 (5) - I think curve this up instead would make flow here 00:16:523 (4,5,1) - better imo
00:19:437 (5,6) - since (6) sound a bit emphasized so using high spacing will make rhythm here play nice , try move (6) to around x244 y96 ?
00:32:295 (1) - curve this the another way so it flow with the next notes better
SPOILER
00:44:638 (1) - I think ctrl+g this make flow here 00:44:295 (5,1) - better

[insane]

00:13:438 (2,3) - I think swap place of these two notes make flow here 00:13:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice
00:35:895 (5,6) - I think make the flow go up instead will be a bit better , try move (6) to around x200 y136
00:41:552 (6,1) - should have bigger spacing to emphasis the impact on (1) so the rhythm here will play better , try swap place of the notes here 00:41:895 (1,2) -
00:48:752 (5) - nc ?

[rocket]

00:19:952 (1) - curve the another way so it will make flow here 00:19:438 (3,1,2) - better imo
SPOILER
00:22:695 (1,2) - why spacing is around 1.3x here lol, better use 1.4x so it consistent with others spacing
00:28:866 (4,5) - mmm similiar to what I said above , 1.4x spacing would work better here
00:30:923 (1) - play a bit weird somehow , I would prefer to have this beat 00:31:266 - clickable
SPOILER
00:42:923 (3) - move to around x256 y124 instead ? for better flow here 00:42:581 (2,3) -

[eze]

00:37:095 (5,6,7) - I think 1/2 reverse slider would work better

[easy]

looks fine

I think flow and spacing in extra and insane can be improved a bit

good luck

Feb

1,027 posts

Joined June 2014

Feb 2015-10-12T16:33:26+00:00

haii
m4m

[Extra]

just gonna stay that overall it's not bad but, the spacing sometimes is really odd. (Mostly in extra & insane).
e.g. 00:42:409 (4,1) - you emphasize that with a 1/4 slider and with your claps yet the spacing here is really close.
but i love you for the cs6 map srs and it's pretty clean not really much error "in looks".

00:16:180 (2,3,4) - this should be ctrl+j since the current breaks the flow of the current ring a round the rosie thing you do before. With the awkward backjump there. However you can improve that and safe the backjump by doing the ctrl+j thing.

yea the whole diff is actually quite okay, it's just the spacing problem the spacing seems often pretty random. The downbeat is pretty often ignored too. (Putting a 1/2 slider instead).

[Insane]

00:12:238 (3,4) - why are you stacking this? I mean doubles are quite okay because they are basically 1/2 sliders (if you think very far away), but this breaks the flow of your continously used back and forth jumps. Maybe it's just because I have looked at the Extra too much, where you used it once I believe, but in a different occasion.

00:23:209 (2,3,4,5,6) - pretty good example of bad spacing. 5-6 downbeat has lower ds than the beats before which are not even emphasized in the song.
00:41:381 (5,6) - ^thats better emphasizing.

00:31:781 (4,6) - I don't have anything against overlaps, but I do if they are overlapping 1/4 reverses. They should be clear to the player.

00:35:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm not really a fan of this pattern, you still can keep it, but move 6 a bit up, it's almost outside of playfield.

rest seems okay.

[rockethard]

dat wordgame tho

00:33:838 (6,1) - nc swap
00:44:466 (6,1) - don't you think this is a little bit edgy?
00:51:323 (6,1) - I usually do not point this out because I usually don't care but this blanket is lackluster.
00:53:552 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not shitting - this the first time I see a Stream in a Hard diff LOL

[ezenormal]
00:32:809 (2,3) - are you sure you wanna do this edgy moving in normal? Just go for linear flow.
00:34:181 (4) - okay first thing the downbeat should be clickable here second you can make a better curve in such sliders when giving it an additional point in the centre:

the img

[ez]
00:18:581 (1,2,3) - this kinda of patterns look super cool and they are, but they play horribly for new players, because those ppl fucking suck we have to compromize the edgyness.

rest seems fine.

gl guys.

Deppyforce

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Topic Starter

Deppyforce 2015-10-13T07:37:08+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
as requested

[extra]
00:16:866 (5) - I think curve this up instead would make flow here 00:16:523 (4,5,1) - better imo sure
00:19:437 (5,6) - since (6) sound a bit emphasized so using high spacing will make rhythm here play nice , try move (6) to around x244 y96 ? moved 6 where 4 was
00:32:295 (1) - curve this the another way so it flow with the next notes better nah flows weird with next slider imo
00:44:638 (1) - I think ctrl+g this make flow here 00:44:295 (5,1) - better sure
[insane]
00:13:438 (2,3) - I think swap place of these two notes make flow here 00:13:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice sure
00:35:895 (5,6) - I think make the flow go up instead will be a bit better , try move (6) to around x200 y136 nop forming pattern with the notes before
00:41:552 (6,1) - should have bigger spacing to emphasis the impact on (1) so the rhythm here will play better , try swap place of the notes here 00:41:895 (1,2) - sure
00:48:752 (5) - nc ? sure
[easy]
looks fine yee
I think flow and spacing in extra and insane can be improved a bit idk

good luck thanks :3

Feb wrote:
haii haihai
m4m

[Extra]

just gonna stay that overall it's not bad but, the spacing sometimes is really odd. (Mostly in extra & insane).
e.g. 00:42:409 (4,1) - you emphasize that with a 1/4 slider and with your claps yet the spacing here is really close. fixed
but i love you for the cs6 map srs and it's pretty clean not really much error "in looks".

00:16:180 (2,3,4) - this should be ctrl+j since the current breaks the flow of the current ring a round the rosie thing you do before. With the awkward backjump there. However you can improve that and safe the backjump by doing the ctrl+j thing. sure

yea the whole diff is actually quite okay, it's just the spacing problem the spacing seems often pretty random. The downbeat is pretty often ignored too. (Putting a 1/2 slider instead). nah if i keep doing that it'll be boring af

[Insane]

00:12:238 (3,4) - why are you stacking this? I mean doubles are quite okay because they are basically 1/2 sliders (if you think very far away), but this breaks the flow of your continously used back and forth jumps. Maybe it's just because I have looked at the Extra too much, where you used it once I believe, but in a different occasion. no change looks fine

00:23:209 (2,3,4,5,6) - pretty good example of bad spacing. 5-6 downbeat has lower ds than the beats before which are not even emphasized in the song. fixed
00:41:381 (5,6) - ^thats better emphasizing. what idk

00:31:781 (4,6) - I don't have anything against overlaps, but I do if they are overlapping 1/4 reverses. They should be clear to the player. its ok i think

00:35:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm not really a fan of this pattern, you still can keep it, but move 6 a bit up, it's almost outside of playfield. its still in playfield so its fine

[ez]
00:18:581 (1,2,3) - this kinda of patterns look super cool and they are, but they play horribly for new players, because those ppl fucking suck we have to compromize the edgyness. nope its fine

gl guys. thanks

Thank you both for modding <3

eeezzzeee

979 posts

Joined August 2013

eeezzzeee 2015-10-14T14:37:05+00:00

Feb wrote:
[ezenormal]
00:32:809 (2,3) - are you sure you wanna do this edgy moving in normal? Just go for linear flow. Mmm but i dont think it is particularly hard since the note density is super low
00:34:181 (4) - okay first thing the downbeat should be clickable here second you can make a better curve in such sliders when giving it an additional point in the centre: Changed the thing with the shape but I want to map the melody here
the img

CelsiusLK wrote:
[eze]
00:37:095 (5,6,7) - I think 1/2 reverse slider would work better Ok a bunch of people suggested this by now and i give

Also made some changes with the master himself Deppy and a small hitsound fix

Sorry for the delay!

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Deppyforce

1,981 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Deppyforce 2015-10-14T20:03:49+00:00

Updated Map eze is back finally

Rohit6

425 posts

Joined August 2013

Rohit6 2015-10-18T08:32:42+00:00

Huge ass IRC Mod

12:48 Rohit6: yo
12:48 Rohit6: want m4m?
12:48 Deppyforce: whats your map
12:48 Rohit6: oh shit i remember
12:48 Rohit6: i posted in your queue but you didnt like my song
12:49 Deppyforce: eh
12:49 Deppyforce: lemme see it again
12:49 Deppyforce: i may take cuz its m4m
12:49 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/787418 Jun Kuroda & aaaa - Cygnus]
12:51 Deppyforce: ya ok i can take this request
12:51 Rohit6: can i irc mod your map?
12:51 Deppyforce: yea you can
12:51 Rohit6: alright lemme dl real quick
12:51 Deppyforce: lemme get some cola
12:51 Deppyforce: for this
12:51 Rohit6: sure
12:53 Deppyforce: ok back
12:53 Rohit6: alright lets see
12:54 Rohit6: cs6
12:54 Rohit6: nice
12:54 Deppyforce: yeah this game need more cs6 map
12:54 Rohit6: yep
12:54 Rohit6: 00:08:980 (1,2,1,2) - this
12:55 Rohit6: while playing
12:55 Rohit6: the player wont play the slider fully
12:55 Rohit6: so half the impact is lost
12:55 Rohit6: id suggest moving the circle after the slider
12:55 Deppyforce: its after slider
12:55 Deppyforce: already
12:56 Rohit6: i meant the positioning
12:56 Deppyforce: o
12:56 Deppyforce: after the slider's end?
12:56 Rohit6: yep
12:56 Rohit6: [http://puu.sh/kOnr9/5bd5dc194b.jpg somthing like this would be more impactful]
12:57 Rohit6: 00:10:695 (2,3,4,5) - why is the ds constant here
12:57 Deppyforce: ya ok
12:58 Rohit6: red->white should be higher ds
12:58 Rohit6: and white -> red should be lower since red is kinda weak
12:58 Deppyforce: how to fix this
12:59 Rohit6: uh
12:59 Deppyforce: do i have to change pattern
12:59 Rohit6: uh no
12:59 Rohit6: just distance snap
12:59 Rohit6: but if i see
12:59 Rohit6: a star pattern fits better
12:59 Deppyforce: i use ds like 90% on this diff
13:00 Deppyforce: k ill make a star
13:00 Rohit6: constant ds implies that the beats have same pressure
13:01 Rohit6: the beats youve chosen are good though
13:01 Rohit6: i dont see passive sliders yet
13:02 Rohit6: 00:12:066 (2,3,4,5) - fix ds here
13:02 Rohit6: pattern is nice
13:03 Deppyforce: ok
13:04 Rohit6: 00:16:180 (2,3) - fix ds
13:04 Rohit6: 00:25:438 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - nice pattern
13:05 Rohit6: 00:27:323 (7,8,1) - kinds
13:05 Rohit6: kinks should be on the big white tick here
13:05 Rohit6: red tick stream kinks are rare cases
13:07 Rohit6: also in dnb
13:07 Rohit6: the streams arent that strong
13:07 Rohit6: so i would tone down the ds by a bit
13:07 Rohit6: but thats upto you
13:07 Deppyforce: eh
13:08 Rohit6: i map almost exclusively dnb
13:08 Rohit6: so i know
13:10 Rohit6: 00:32:295 (1,2,3) - the angle here is too shallow
13:10 Rohit6: making it very hard to hit properly
13:10 Rohit6: you seem like a good player so you can understand better
13:11 Rohit6: when you play hollow wing's sentimental skyscraper v/s captin1's sentimental skyscraper
13:11 Rohit6: which of the two maps feels easier?
13:11 Deppyforce: ofc captin
13:11 Rohit6: do you know why
13:11 Rohit6: hollow wings doesnt give a shit about angle
13:12 Rohit6: even though the ds between the jumps is almost the same
13:12 Deppyforce: ya true hollow wings angle is hard
13:12 Rohit6: hw jumps feel harder because more speed is required to hit jumps in a straight line
13:12 Rohit6: rather than aim
13:13 Rohit6: 00:34:181 (2,3) - ctrl+g fits much better here imo
13:13 Rohit6: because right now the ds is kinda awkward
13:14 Deppyforce: ok
13:14 Rohit6: 00:35:038 (1) - youd have to ctrl g this as well though
13:14 Rohit6: otherwise youll lose the good swirly movement from those jumps
13:15 Rohit6: 00:35:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - back and forth doesnt work well here
13:15 Deppyforce: oki
13:15 Rohit6: also please dont just blindly accept all of my mod
13:15 Rohit6: tell me why youve put stuff the way it is
13:15 Deppyforce: yeah i know
13:15 Rohit6: i need to hear your reasoning as well
13:16 Deppyforce: idek why i put back and forth there myself
13:16 Rohit6: back and forth is also kinda pressured
13:17 Rohit6: 00:41:895 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - this is good
13:17 Rohit6: i like it
13:17 Rohit6: 00:44:638 (1,2) - the same issue as the start
13:17 Rohit6: player wont play the full slider thereby reducing the impact of the white tick
13:18 Rohit6: 00:50:381 (4,5) - whenever you kink just be consistent with your patterning of kinking
13:18 Rohit6: earlier you kinked the stream on red
13:18 Rohit6: and now its on blue
13:19 Rohit6: this type of kink should only be done on white ticks atleast in dnb
13:20 Rohit6: 00:52:866 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - this is good
13:20 Deppyforce: 00:44:638 (1) -
13:20 Deppyforce: wait pls
13:20 Deppyforce: wat should i do about this
13:20 Rohit6: place the note after the slider
13:20 Rohit6: like you did with the first slider i told you about
13:20 Rohit6: at the start of the map
13:20 Deppyforce: yea ok
13:20 Rohit6: this is rather well mapped for cs6
13:21 Rohit6: generally it becomes easier to point out mistakes when you use higher cs
13:22 Rohit6: alright done with extra
13:22 *Rohit6 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/733753 Asterisk - Ren-chon no Drum and Bass [Insane]]
13:23 Deppyforce: oki
13:24 Rohit6: 00:12:238 (3,4) - this is not wrongly mapped
13:24 Rohit6: but youre ignoring the main beats youre mapping to
13:24 Rohit6: and mapped to the background
13:25 Deppyforce: so should i change pattern
13:25 Rohit6: as a rule of thumb
13:25 Rohit6: stacking should be done
13:25 Rohit6: when the sounds are identical
13:25 Rohit6: the sounds ARE similar
13:26 Rohit6: but the sound you wanted to map to is the weak background music
13:26 Rohit6: 00:13:438 (2,3,4,5) - fix ds
13:26 Rohit6: 00:16:180 (2,3) - same problem with stacking
13:27 Rohit6: youve stacked a strong beat with a weak beat
13:27 Rohit6: which implies both the beats have same pressure
13:28 Rohit6: 00:20:809 (6,7,8) - increase ds from 6->7 and decrease ds from 7->8
13:28 Rohit6: 00:22:352 (4,5) - stacking problem
13:29 Rohit6: 00:15:152 (4) - sliderend is on a very strong beat
13:29 Rohit6: you shouldnt put a sliderend on a strong beat
13:29 Rohit6: if its a strong baet then it NEEDS to be clicked
13:29 Rohit6: otherwise it feels lackluster
13:30 Rohit6: youve also hitsounded a strong snare to the sliderend
13:31 Rohit6: respond so i know youre here lol
13:31 Deppyforce: im here
13:31 Deppyforce: fixing the stack patterns lol
13:32 Rohit6: i dont think you should put any 1/1 sliders in this diff
13:32 Rohit6: like almost all of them end on a strong beat
13:33 Rohit6: 00:25:781 (2,3,4) - ds fix
13:34 Rohit6: 00:32:123 (6) - NEVER END A SLIDER ON A DOWNBEAT AAAAAA
13:34 Rohit6: 00:32:123 (6,1) - ds makes it look like a 1/4 snap
13:35 Rohit6: remove the repeat slider and make it a 1/4 slider then a circle
13:35 Deppyforce: yea doing that
13:36 Rohit6: 00:31:438 (1,4) - remove clap from red ticks
13:37 Rohit6: if you want to use 1/1 sliders
13:37 Rohit6: you have to make the sliderend play as an object as well
13:38 Rohit6: 00:37:781 (1,2) - like this is good
13:38 Rohit6: if youre ending on a stronger beat
13:38 Rohit6: just make sure you place the next object after the strong beat
13:39 Rohit6: 00:46:695 (7,8) - you have to fix this
13:40 Deppyforce: ok

[Rocket's Hard]
00:19:438 (3) - No need for a red anchor here since it only make the slider look bad
00:21:323 (1,3) - Why isnt this symmetrical aaaaa
00:24:923 (4) - missed a really strong beat in the middle of a slider which needs to be clicked,make this a circle->1/2 slider
00:28:866 (4) - just make this a regular curve
00:31:781 (5) - slider starting on a weak beat and ending on a strong beat
00:33:323 (5) - NEVER end a slider on a DOWNBEAT aaaaa
00:41:895 (1) - Missed a snare in the middle of the slider which is not good
00:42:581 (2,3,1) - this is not mapped to the beats , this would be ideal since it would highlight the strong beats here
00:44:638 (1) - Strong beat on a reverse tick which is not clicked
00:47:381 (1) - ^
00:47:381 (1,6,1) - Bad blanket

-Lemons

219 posts

Joined July 2012

-Lemons 2015-10-25T09:06:32+00:00

This song is so cute i puked rainbows

Easy

00:33:666 (3,1) - This could probably be blanketed better
00:38:466 (1) - Move to 240|298

Eze's Normal
00:20:295 (4) - If you meant for this to be a perfect square this note is slightly off
00:21:323 (7) - the way these are stacked is probably gonna throw normal players off
00:21:666 (1) - Fix the elbow to be red anchor in the dead center
00:40:523 (1) - Move to 166|265
00:43:266 (7) - Same with the other stack thing
00:45:323 (5) - Seems a bit off, either make the anchor be lower or make it in the dead center, http://puu.sh/kWNhv/e11472438f.jpg or http://puu.sh/kWNhX/3ce5c0e49e.jpg
00:46:523 (2) - Move to 336|220 and then move 00:46:695 (3) - to 338|168 for a cute curve

Rocket's Hard
00:19:438 (3) - This slider is so FUCKING cute I just wanted to tell you that
No changes tho ur gud

Insane
00:18:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part feels weird to me, mostly because there is no distance betwwen 1-2 and then a big distance betwwen 2-3 and 3-4 and 4-5, and then you just make it return back to slightly before 4 for 6. I think there should be some movement for 1-2 and maybe scrap the return back for 5-6
00:28:181 (1,2) - I would make these into a stream
00:51:495 (1,2) - ^

Extra
00:12:752 (6) - http://puu.sh/kWNHv/11635ced91.jpg put it here for flow and because I like a jump there (make it prettier)
00:14:466 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These aren't perfect squares, maybe I'm drunk idunno
00:25:438 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - You can probably make these increase in size as they change from one combo to the other but I understand you made a pretty shape
00:29:552 (1,2,3,4) - This feels so awful to play I can't get over it do this or something http://puu.sh/kWOfX/62a67081f9.jpg it looks awful but you get it I hope
00:32:123 (6,7,1) - Make overlap consistant
00:49:438 (1,2,3,4) - it feels so cramped ohmaigawd

Nyanpasu

Deppyforce

1,981 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Deppyforce 2015-10-26T10:58:11+00:00

-Lemons wrote:
This song is so cute i puked rainbows >///<

Easy
00:33:666 (3,1) - This could probably be blanketed better fixed
00:38:466 (1) - Move to 240|298 fixed

Insane
00:18:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part feels weird to me, mostly because there is no distance betwwen 1-2 and then a big distance betwwen 2-3 and 3-4 and 4-5, and then you just make it return back to slightly before 4 for 6. I think there should be some movement for 1-2 and maybe scrap the return back for 5-6 already fixed in previous mod i forgot to update .w. my bad
00:28:181 (1,2) - I would make these into a stream nop i want this to be relaxing
00:51:495 (1,2) - ^ ^

Extra
00:12:752 (6) - http://puu.sh/kWNHv/11635ced91.jpg put it here for flow and because I like a jump there (make it prettier) changed pattern in the last mod i didnt update sorry
00:14:466 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These aren't perfect squares, maybe I'm drunk idunno it is perfect square i use polygon circle creator to make
00:25:438 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - You can probably make these increase in size as they change from one combo to the other but I understand you made a pretty shape idk why it should be increasing i dont think it'll fit so ill keep this
00:29:552 (1,2,3,4) - This feels so awful to play I can't get over it do this or something http://puu.sh/kWOfX/62a67081f9.jpg it looks awful but you get it I hope changed pattern
00:32:123 (6,7,1) - Make overlap consistant fixed
00:49:438 (1,2,3,4) - it feels so cramped ohmaigawd nah wanna keep that i think its fine
Nyanpasu

thanks for modding :3

Deppyforce

1,981 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Deppyforce 2015-10-26T12:12:35+00:00

To eze :
I'm sorry i didn't tell you first but i fixed some little problems in your diff

I feel like the things i fix has to be fixed

eeezzzeee

979 posts

Joined August 2013

eeezzzeee 2015-10-29T07:45:11+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
To eze :
I'm sorry i didn't tell you first but i fixed some little problems in your diff

I feel like the things i fix has to be fixed

What. I don't understand why you had to change those there was nothing wrong. And now all the hitsounds i had other than claps are gone too lol

Idk man. If you think my map is holding this set back then just delete it don't edit it like it is your own

Deppyforce

1,981 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Deppyforce 2015-10-30T15:48:13+00:00

updated

used eze's latest update dont mad pls

HappyRocket88

4,322 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-11-03T19:52:57+00:00

"CelsiusLK"

[rocket]

00:19:952 (1) - curve the another way so it will make flow here 00:19:438 (3,1,2) - better imo Nice suggestion! _:3_>_
00:22:695 (1,2) - why spacing is around 1.3x here lol, better use 1.4x so it consistent with others spacing OHMAIGAD! HOW COULD IT HAPPENED TO ME THAT! Fixed!
00:28:866 (4,5) - mmm similiar to what I said above , 1.4x spacing would work better here Do you wear any special kind of glasses ? o-o
00:30:923 (1) - play a bit weird somehow , I would prefer to have this beat 00:31:266 - clickable oHHH! I liked this one! TUTURITU TUTIRUT
00:42:923 (3) - move to around x256 y124 instead ? for better flow here 00:42:581 (2,3) Why not? <3

Feb

[rockethard]

dat wordgame tho o.o you mean this?

00:33:838 (6,1) - nc swap Sure.
00:44:466 (6,1) - don't you think this is a little bit edgy? It is. What's the problem with it?
00:51:323 (6,1) - I usually do not point this out because I usually don't care but this blanket is lackluster. Actually the blanket is fine. Don't know if you're blind or something.
00:53:552 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not shitting - this the first time I see a Stream in a Hard diff. LOL The first time? I think you haven't played hard diffs enough to support this. Here a list of hard difficulties with streams. n.n

02:27:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - https://osu.ppy.sh/b/223532
01:14:643 (9,10,11,12) - https://osu.ppy.sh/b/646709
00:34:746 (1,2,3) - 00:44:746 (3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/b/667687

The way you modded is really unappropriated. Despite you have some knowledge about mapping and stuffs, it's very impolite. This is not a forum where you can prove you know everything, this is a forum where modders and mappers discuss stuffs to improve the mapset and the way you did it this time is unworthy. There are better ways to explain to the mapper why you suggested is better than the current point; saying just: "this the first time I see a Stream in a Hard diff. LOL" makes you feel so ignorant and inexperienced. Try to be politer and explain better your points to make, at least, an useful mod to the mapper.

Rohit6

[Rocket's Hard]
00:19:438 (3) - No need for a red anchor here since it only make the slider look bad. The previous slider has a red point in the middle and you didn't complain. xd
00:21:323 (1,3) - Why isnt this symmetrical aaaaa Symmetry = pro mappers. (?)
00:24:923 (4) - missed a really strong beat in the middle of a slider which needs to be clicked,make this a circle->1/2 slider Sure! Nice catch!
00:28:866 (4) - just make this a regular curve What do you have against "L" sliders? xd
00:31:781 (5) - slider starting on a weak beat and ending on a strong beat. yeah. c:
00:33:323 (5) - NEVER end a slider on a DOWNBEAT aaaaa Never say neveeer ♪♫ It's really subjective and in this case plays nice because of the hitsounds of the next patterns.
00:41:895 (1) - Missed a snare in the middle of the slider which is not good Totally agree! Remapped!
00:42:581 (2,3,1) - this is not mapped to the beats , this would be ideal since it would highlight the strong beats here. I tried it but it sounded really weird imo. did something different.
00:44:638 (1) - Strong beat on a reverse tick which is not clicked Should it be clicked? I don't see any rankable stuff on that. o.o
00:47:381 (1) - ^ _:3_>_
00:47:381 (1,6,1) - Bad blanket I wasn't trying to blanket them since they're really appart from each other. ;w;

KA-KA-KA-KAWAII

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Log Off Now

957 posts

Joined May 2014

Log Off Now 2015-11-03T22:45:06+00:00

#modreqs

Disclaimer: I'm pretty new to modding so what I say may be of no use to you, if this is the case please feel free to ignore it (although feedback would be nice). All mods are my opinion

[General]

Fine

[Easy]

00:24:752 (2) - The tail of this blanket is ever so slightly out I think? (x48 y148 fixes this)

Nothing to say really, it was actually fun to play and the blankets are very neat!

[eze's Normal]

00:17:895 (7) - Maybe curve this slider slightly so it flows better in 00:18:581 (1) - and also follows the general curve that starts with 00:17:209 (5)

00:21:152 (6,7) - Maybe move 7 to x280 y120? I think it looks better + also makes it easier to read

00:35:723 (3) - Maybe curve this slider slightly towards 00:36:409 (4) ?

[Rocket's Hard]

00:23:552 (2) - Maybe move this slightly to the left more since it's very close to overlapping with 00:24:066 (1)?

This plays really nicely

[Insane]

I don't see any problems really, nice flow throughout and the streams are well done

[Extra]

Didn't mod extra since I have no idea what i'm doing with difficulties like these, especially small CS ones. I will say that the flow feels very natural though

[]

I know this mod is super short but I enjoyed the map and there was nothing that I didn't really like about any difficulty

Hope this is useful

Deppyforce

1,981 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Deppyforce 2015-11-04T00:02:46+00:00

If you're reading I will reply this after school
Thanks for modding :3

HappyRocket88

4,322 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-11-05T04:59:03+00:00

Hellow, Deppy! After ages I'm here to mod your map. _:3_<_ Sorry for the late. /w\

IMPORTANT: Don't reply this mod with just: "THIS IS MY STYLE" or "I HAVE SEEN RANKED MAPS WITH THIS". Provide reasons that support your ideas properly.

[]

General

[

General]

I found out other versions of this song mapped by other guys with different titles. They differ from the Ren-chon no Drum and Bass and Asterisk - Ren-chon no Drum 'n' Bass. Better ask Iwakwan for a metadata mod about this song.

Easy

[

Easy] DEPPPY! Pretty neat easy. I love the way you blanket most of the objects making very intuitive flows. congratulations! But, I'd like to discuss with you somethings that are hitting me when I modded this diff:

00:08:980 (1,2) Rhythmically talking, these two sliders play really weird. I know you emphasized the start of the song with a circle here 00:08:980, but it just make an awkward space between the (2) which shouldn't end on a big white tick. I highly suggest you to try out this pattern which highlight the strong beats.
00:11:723 (1) The current slider doesn't make too much sense here because you're now following the instruments/vocals properly. It would be better if you reduced that slider into a 2/2 slider and add a circle here 00:12:752
00:24:066 (1,2) These two sliders doesn't flow properly. The slider 00:24:066 (1) suggests that the next note will be at the top but you placed the (2) blanketing the previous slider and make the players go into a non-intuitive flow. I think it would flow better if you did ctrl + G on the slider (2) to improve the flow as well as you did here 00:46:009 (1,2). Like this.
00:48:752 Increse the vol of the inherited timing point 5% as long as it's part of the same kiai.
00:47:381 (3) The current whistle which is set over the slider's end sounds really noisy. Consider to replace it with a finish.
00:49:095 (1) Make this spinner starts here 00:48:923 to keep consistency with the drums in this section.

eze's normal

[

Normal] Really decent diff! Despite the copy and pasta.

00:08:980 (1) Remove the clap of the slider's end and replace it with a whistle. The current clap doesn't fit properly and sound really really weird imo.
00:19:952 (3,4) This pattern doesn't play bad, but I think you're skipping many of the strong beats (red ticks) in this section. I think if you try something like this would improve the rhythm on this section. Consider doing the same here: 00:41:895 (3,4)
00:21:152 (6,7) The way you stacked these two objects make a really confusing pattern. As long as you haven't stacked two objects in the previous sections, what would it be so relevant to make a stack here? I think if you unstack them and place them next to it would flow better, just as well as you did here 00:15:838 (1,2,3) . Consider doing the same here 00:43:095 (6,7)
00:21:323 (7) Add NC to this object yo keep consistency with the NC'ing pattern you managed in the whole set. Consider doing the same here 00:43:266 (7)

Insane

[

Insane] A non-stack Insane. /w\

00:11:038 (4,5) I think these two objects would flow better if you kept the spacing consistent as well as you did here 00:10:695 (2,3) or 00:10:866 (3,4)
00:12:409 (4,5) The distance of this object make an awkward jump because players might need to follow a mini jump here 00:12:409 (4,5) and then go into an aggressive change of distance here 00:12:580 (5,6) . I think it would be better if you kept consistent the DS in that pattern.
00:20:981 (7) The overlap that this object makes over this slider 00:20:466 (3) look really uncluttered. It would be better if you move it a bit to the left to avoid it.
00:22:352 (4,5) The way you stack these two objects doesn't play bad, but I think it would make more sense if you had done something similar as 00:16:180 (2,3) as long as you haven't stacked objects before. It would look like this.
00:24:581 (2,3) This was really confusing. In the previous star patterns you didn't stack two objects consecutively 00:13:438 (2,3,4,5) So it would be better if you tried out to don't stack them here as long as they make an awkward flow.
00:50:638 (7) Remove the whistle of this circle. It really sounds random here.

Extra

[

Insane] Nice diff! Despite the small circlets... What about naming this diff differently? like: Renchon's heaven or idk. Extra is too generic.

00:09:495 (1) I know you wanted to make "symmetry" with this first slider 00:08:980 (1), but I can clearly listen to 1/4 beats in this section 00:09:495 (1) is stronger than this 00:08:980 (1) . So it would be better if you turn that slider into a triplet or a 1/4 slider with a reverse to highlight the main beats there.
00:34:523 (4) Why would you stack this object on this slider's end 00:33:666 (1) if you haven't stacked objects before? It would be better if you kept consistent the non-stack flows over this section too.
00:50:638 (7) Same of the insane diff. Remove this noisy whistle.

[]

Personally, I believe the diffs are better compared on the way they started. Including mine. Personally, I think this need just be checked for BNs and be ranked! Good luck!

Deppyforce

1,981 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Deppyforce 2015-11-05T14:51:17+00:00

Log Off Now wrote:
#modreqs hi

Disclaimer: I'm pretty new to modding so what I say may be of no use to you, if this is the case please feel free to ignore it (although feedback would be nice) . All mods are my opinion #modreqs is very hard to get a mod so thank you for modding <3

[Easy]

00:24:752 (2) - The tail of this blanket is ever so slightly out I think? (x48 y148 fixes this) fixed

Nothing to say really, it was actually fun to play and the blankets are very neat! thanks

[Insane]

I don't see any problems really, nice flow throughout and the streams are well done :3

[Extra]

Didn't mod extra since I have no idea what i'm doing with difficulties like these, especially small CS ones. I will say that the flow feels very natural though oki

I know this mod is super short but I enjoyed the map and there was nothing that I didn't really like about any difficulty

Hope this is useful Thanks for modding again :3

HappyRocket88 wrote:
Hellow, Deppy! After ages I'm here to mod your map. _:3_<_ Sorry for the late. /w\ wat this is so hard to reply lol
IMPORTANT: Don't reply this mod with just: "THIS IS MY STYLE" or "I HAVE SEEN RANKED MAPS WITH THIS". Provide reasons that support your ideas properly. sure ofc i will do that
General
[ General]
I found out other versions of this song mapped by other guys with different titles. They differ from the Ren-chon no Drum and Bass and Asterisk - Ren-chon no Drum 'n' Bass. Better ask Iamkwan for a metadata mod about this song ok.
Easy
[ Easy] DEPPPY! Pretty neat easy. I love the way you blanket most of the objects making very intuitive flows. congratulations! But, I'd like to discuss with you somethings that are hitting me when I modded this diff:
00:08:980 (1,2) Rhythmically talking, these two sliders play really weird. I know you emphasized the start of the song with a circle here 00:08:980, but it just make an awkward space between the (2) which shouldn't end on a big white tick. I highly suggest you to try out this pattern which highlight the strong beats. yes sure this works lot better actually lol
00:11:723 (1) The current slider doesn't make too much sense here because you're now following the instruments/vocals properly. It would be better if you reduced that slider into a 2/2 slider and add a circle here 00:12:752 changed
00:24:066 (1,2) These two sliders doesn't flow properly. The slider 00:24:066 (1) suggests that the next note will be at the top but you placed the (2) blanketing the previous slider and make the players go into a non-intuitive flow. I think it would flow better if you did ctrl + G on the slider (2) to improve the flow as well as you did here 00:46:009 (1,2). Like this.changed to something else
00:48:752 Increse the vol of the inherited timing point 5% as long as it's part of the same kiai. that part supposed to be the stream i reduced it 5% like the point at 00:26:809 i repeat in kiai to keep hs volume consistency
00:47:381 (3) The current whistle which is set over the slider's end sounds really noisy. Consider to replace it with a finish. changed
00:49:095 (1) Make this spinner starts here 00:48:923 to keep consistency with the drums in this section. changed
Insane
[ Insane] A non-stack Insane. /w\
00:11:038 (4,5) I think these two objects would flow better if you kept the spacing consistent as well as you did here 00:10:695 (2,3) or 00:10:866 (3,4) changed pattern
00:12:409 (4,5) The distance of this object make an awkward jump because players might need to follow a mini jump here 00:12:409 (4,5) and then go into an aggressive change of distance here 00:12:580 (5,6) . I think it would be better if you kept consistent the DS in that pattern. fixed
00:20:981 (7) The overlap that this object makes over this slider 00:20:466 (3) look really uncluttered. It would be better if you move it a bit to the left to avoid it. it forms a ds curve with the (3,4,5) triplets before
00:22:352 (4,5) The way you stack these two objects doesn't play bad, but I think it would make more sense if you had done something similar as 00:16:180 (2,3) as long as you haven't stacked objects before. It would look like this. changed pattern
00:24:581 (2,3) This was really confusing. In the previous star patterns you didn't stack two objects consecutively 00:13:438 (2,3,4,5) So it would be better if you tried out to don't stack them here as long as they make an awkward flow. made a star cuz you said something about star
00:50:638 (7) Remove the whistle of this circle. It really sounds random here. fixed
Extra
Insane] Nice diff! Despite the small circlets... What about naming this diff differently? like: Renchon's heaven or idk. Extra is too generic.

00:09:495 (1) I know you wanted to make "symmetry" with this first slider 00:08:980 (1), but I can clearly listen to 1/4 beats in this section 00:09:495 (1) is stronger than this 00:08:980 (1) . So it would be better if you turn that slider into a triplet or a 1/4 slider with a reverse to highlight the main beats there. changed to 1/4 reverse
00:34:523 (4) Why would you stack this object on this slider's end 00:33:666 (1) if you haven't stacked objects before? It would be better if you kept consistent the non-stack flows over this section too. that was for the swirly triangle pattern. if i move (4) idk how can i keep the pattern
00:50:638 (7) Same of the insane diff. Remove this noisy whistle. fixed
Personally, I believe the diffs are better compared on the way they started. Including mine. Personally, I think this need just be checked for BNs and be ranked! you're bn so bubble this pls Good luck! thanks :3

Thank you both for modding :3

eeezzzeee

979 posts

Joined August 2013

eeezzzeee 2015-11-07T15:09:56+00:00

Log Off Now wrote:
00:17:895 (7) - Maybe curve this slider slightly so it flows better in 00:18:581 (1) - and also follows the general curve that starts with 00:17:209 (5) done

00:21:152 (6,7) - Maybe move 7 to x280 y120? I think it looks better + also makes it easier to read sure done

00:35:723 (3) - Maybe curve this slider slightly towards 00:36:409 (4) ? want to leave this straight

HappyRocket88 wrote:
Really decent diff! Despite the copy and pasta. ya just a little lol
00:08:980 (1) Remove the clap of the slider's end and replace it with a whistle. The current clap doesn't fit properly and sound really really weird imo. sure this sounds nice
00:19:952 (3,4) This pattern doesn't play bad, but I think you're skipping many of the strong beats (red ticks) in this section. I think if you try something like this would improve the rhythm on this section. Consider doing the same here: 00:41:895 (3,4) I'm scared that it will be too dense if i do that to both of them since there is the two circles after the next slider too. So only change the first one into slider!
00:21:152 (6,7) The way you stacked these two objects make a really confusing pattern. As long as you haven't stacked two objects in the previous sections, what would it be so relevant to make a stack here? I think if you unstack them and place them next to it would flow better, just as well as you did here 00:15:838 (1,2,3) . Consider doing the same here 00:43:095 (6,7) But I placed them like this specifically for the drumroll at 00:21:152 -
00:21:323 (7) Add NC to this object yo keep consistency with the NC'ing pattern you managed in the whole set. Consider doing the same here 00:43:266 (7) Ok fine everyone complained about this lol

Green = changed
Red = no change
Blue = other
Thanks for modding!

sorry i got mad earlier, update ;_;

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 10352
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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Title:Ren-chon no Drum and Bass
TitleUnicode:Ren-chon no Drum and Bass
Artist:Asterisk
ArtistUnicode:Asterisk
Creator:Deppyforce
Version:eze's Normal
Source:Non Non Biyori
Tags:のんのんびより ren chan dnb nyanpasu non biyori remix deppy happyrocket88 eeezzzeee
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[Difficulty]
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Deppyforce

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Topic Starter

Deppyforce 2015-11-07T16:36:55+00:00

Updated

HappyRocket88 wrote:
Personally, I believe the diffs are better compared on the way they started. Including mine. Personally, I think this need just be checked for BNs and be ranked! Good luck!

BNs Pls ;w;

Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-11-15T13:04:26+00:00

Yo
[General]
All clear

[Easy]
Consider adding slidertick hitsounds to follow the claps (as you can see here for example)

[eze]
00:21:152 (6,1,2) - This is really trippy. The fact that (2) also is "close" to (6,1) it looks as the approach circle belongs there as well, making the rhythm look insanely weird. I literraly needed to watch this 10+ times to see what was going on. Move (1) to 232:132 to fix it (and maybe make it blanket with (2) \:D/)
00:43:095 (6,1,2) - ^^, move (1) to 124:344, (2) also blankets with the circles here \:D/

[Rocket]
00:37:095 (3,1) - Make them blankets please

[Extra]
00:49:438 (1,2,3,4) - Please space them so they don't overlap

Call me

eeezzzeee

979 posts

Joined August 2013

eeezzzeee 2015-11-16T18:09:17+00:00

Ok fine changed all the stacking stuff Baraatje suggested

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Deppyforce

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Topic Starter

Deppyforce 2015-11-18T14:09:42+00:00

Yo didnt see baraatje post

Fixed all :3

HappyRocket88

4,322 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-11-18T15:21:10+00:00

I don't know how to make a better blanket between them, Baraatje. ;w; I think they flow fine imo. If you consider there's still an issue, I'll change it. =w=

Deppyforce

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Deppyforce 2015-11-18T15:44:26+00:00

Updated Mapset

Bara-

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Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-12-02T17:43:29+00:00

orz
I'm soo slow

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2015-12-08T21:40:33+00:00

-normal-slidertick2.wav is unused, should be removed
-dunno if you realized but your custom finishes are just default soft-hitnormal xd. if you wanted to give some kind of feedback for those beats, you should remove these files.
-not sure where you got metadata from, but from what i got it should be like this:
Title:Ren-chon no Drum 'n' Bass
TitleUnicode:れんちょんのドラムンベース
still try to get some confirmation about it tho

easy
-if you use slidertick as a replacement for claps, hitsound volumen should be lowered on those places. Reduce the volumen by 10~15% wherever that hitsound plays
-higher od/hp than the AR. uh, it's better to use 2 for hp/od imoooo

normal
-you should try to avoid using tail for downbeats or big strong beats in general, like what happens here 00:12:752 (6) - or 00:24:752 (2) - in a lower degree
-00:22:695 (4) - whistle on head sounds so random >< it should be soft-whistle i believe
-00:40:523 (1,2,3,4) - aesthetically, this combo doesnt look cool. using more roundness in sharp angles will look better like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097513 where 00:42:581 (5) - is also blanked with 00:41:209 (2) -

hard
-the amount of offbeat sliders is really annoying. especially in this kind of song where strong and more noticiable sounds are upbeat. Rhythms like http://puu.sh/lOg4p/f6d1229d36.jpg or similar to 00:15:838 (1,2,3,4) - 00:21:323 (1,2,3,4) - , should be used more than 00:10:866 (2,3,4) - 00:12:580 (2) - 00:13:609 (2,3) - etc.
-00:18:066 (3,1) - hope you change rhythms, but if not this stack is still weird cuz you're stacking in what should be emphazed.
-00:21:066 - there's nothing here, so using multirepeater makes no much sense here
-00:29:209 (5,1) - this section is already hard, using extended sliders makes it even harder at this level. in addition that the multi reverse seems rather random. i'd do this instead http://puu.sh/lOgKX/465438b6c6.jpg as a 'rest point'.
-00:30:581 (4,1) - jumps on hard are fine.. but when you dont use them regulary they just look random. try reducing the distance here by a fair amount
-00:31:523 (4,5) - stacking is nicer for gameplay, spaced triples are hard to acc ;w;
-00:30:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - also this is missing hitsounds, a lot..
-00:33:323 (5) - you should avoid this kind the rhythms. it's sounds really bad
-00:37:095 (3,1) - i'd space them a bit more tbh like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097754 also looks cleaner
-00:44:295 (5,6,1) - flow tho ;(
-00:48:752 - no Normal sampleset? ;;;
-00:49:095 (2,3) - 00:49:781 (5,6) - and the next ones, i'd change them just for a slider tbh it sounds overdone with circles cuz the the 1/4 track isnt strong enough yet
-00:52:866 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - nerf plox.. people that play hards are just starting to tap constantly, if you add to that a stream it's just dead. i think i'd do something like this if you want to keep a similar rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097808

insane
-00:12:752 (6,1) - blending (6) will make the patter looks neater
-00:18:581 (1,2) - using a more constant distance makes more sense here like 1.8x or so
-00:32:123 (6) - i'd increase the sv here too. so it's not like a square long mini slider
-00:34:181 (2,3) - if you move it a bit down, the whole combo will look more equally spaced, which is good. http://puu.sh/lOlvS/b1a8f4c4ee.jpg
-00:42:066 (2,4,5,6) - would be nicer if you move 4-5-6 in order to make it look like a whole stream, you can NC (4) if you think it's hard to read, like you did here 00:43:095 (1) -
-00:46:009 (5) - nc(?

extra
-i still dont understand why distance is so low on this parttern 00:36:409 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - and 00:47:381 (1,2,1) - . the whole map has 'high' spacing except here. Doesnt make much sense with the map itself
-00:53:552 (1,2,3,4,5) - this shape looks better with a curved flow instead of linear one.

ya

Deppyforce

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Deppyforce 2015-12-09T11:11:36+00:00

fixed everything in general and my diffs

Mekki

Mekki 2015-12-09T15:49:31+00:00

Oh, Deppy. I saw that Milan modded your map so xD Good luck with qualifying :3

Deppyforce

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Deppyforce 2015-12-09T17:27:22+00:00

MkGuh wrote:
Oh, Deppy. I saw that Milan modded your map so xD Good luck with qualifying :3

yeah

will try ask him after i got gds update

:3

HappyRocket88

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Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-12-09T17:50:22+00:00

fized all that milan suggested about the flows and downbeats. Nerfed the stream of the end according to his points but I dind't touch the circles after the 3/4 slider because I found them important to highlight despite they're not strong beats.

already sent the diff to deppy xd

eeezzzeee

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Joined August 2013

eeezzzeee 2015-12-09T18:10:32+00:00

Milan- wrote:
-you should try to avoid using tail for downbeats or big strong beats in general, like what happens here 00:12:752 (6) - or 00:24:752 (2) - in a lower degree Ok fixed the first one second one is alright i guess since its a reverse slider
-00:22:695 (4) - whistle on head sounds so random >< it should be soft-whistle i believe Ya mistake here lol
-00:40:523 (1,2,3,4) - aesthetically, this combo doesnt look cool. using more roundness in sharp angles will look better like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097513 where 00:42:581 (5) - is also blanked with 00:41:209 (2) - ok ill try that

Thanks! Update (hitobjects only)

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Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2015-12-10T06:43:41+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:
fized all that milan suggested about the flows and downbeats. Nerfed the stream of the end according to his points

b-b-but i dun see some of the changes

extra
-aimod
-00:26:809 (1) - finish'll sound good here. same for 00:28:181 (1) - 00:29:552 (1) - 00:30:238 (1) - 00:41:895 (1) - , (00:48:752 (1) - 00:50:123 (1) - 00:51:495 (1) - 00:52:180 (1) - 00:52:866 (1) - probably too if you like)
-00:38:295 (2,3) - i'd stack with over 00:37:095 (1) - , looks cleaner
-00:50:809 (1) - whistle on head? as you added whistle on similar sounds
-00:54:238 - wwould increase the volumen to 50% or so, the cymbal is too similar to the music, so it blends a bit
-00:26:809 - on this stream section, i found that using your soft-hitclap instead of this kick hitsound, makes more sense here. using a kick sound for these strong beats leave a 'empty feeling' while playing imo. The last section is ok tho iguess
-also about the custom finishes, normal-hitfinish was also included

stuff should apply to others diffs since they're just copying. except normal

letmeknow

Deppyforce

1,981 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Deppyforce 2015-12-12T08:20:05+00:00

i fixed everything cuz i suck at hitsound so i'll follow people who have more knowledge about it.

edit :

Milan- wrote:
-00:50:809 (1) - whistle on head? as you added whistle on similar sounds i put it on this instead 00:50:638 (7) -

HappyRocket88

4,322 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-12-19T16:42:56+00:00

Talked with milan- about nerfing the amount of circles of the last pattern as he suggested. Hope it looks nicer.

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Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2015-12-19T19:40:14+00:00

Ren chan sugoii >///<

HappyRocket88

4,322 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-12-20T16:04:52+00:00

Deppy, I checked the diff with the upload and for some reason there are missing notes at the beginning of the song. This is what I found

and this is what it should be

So here I send you the update. Hope this bug won't happen again.

^

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:れんちょんのドラムンベース
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Creator:Deppyforce
Version:Rocket's Hard
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