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00:14:477 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - During this small part there are beats on all white and red tick which you decided to ignore with the sliders by following the melody. Which is good but I think it would be nice to follow the drums as well. I made this but you might have a better idea.
01:41:087 (3) - Ugh, don't leave that strong beat empty. Make the slider start 1/4 later and add a circle to the blue tick instead.
03:14:646 (4) - Hey look what I found. End it on 03:15:155 and add a circle to 03:15:324.
04:21:257 (1,3,6,8) - It would be nice to place those jumps to these as they are the most prominent ones here.
Well, the map itself is well made but at the same time its really boring. Someone before already mentioned the problem with the kiai and I can only say the same once again. There are many potential dash or Hyper during both kiai, you should use them to make difference. Even if you want to make this easy, you can use 01:54:477 (7,1) - , 01:57:189 (7,1) - , 01:59:901 (6,1) - , 02:02:613 (8,1) - 02:05:324 (7,1) - , etc, to make it interesting. Playing the same structures for ~6min is not really enjoyable.
00:14:477 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - During this small part there are beats on all white and red tick which you decided to ignore with the sliders by following the melody. Which is good but I think it would be nice to follow the drums as well. I made this but you might have a better idea.
01:41:087 (3) - Ugh, don't leave that strong beat empty. Make the slider start 1/4 later and add a circle to the blue tick instead.
03:14:646 (4) - Hey look what I found. End it on 03:15:155 and add a circle to 03:15:324.
04:21:257 (1,3,6,8) - It would be nice to place those jumps to these as they are the most prominent ones here.
Well, the map itself is well made but at the same time its really boring. Someone before already mentioned the problem with the kiai and I can only say the same once again. There are many potential dash or Hyper during both kiai, you should use them to make difference. Even if you want to make this easy, you can use 01:54:477 (7,1) - , 01:57:189 (7,1) - , 01:59:901 (6,1) - , 02:02:613 (8,1) - 02:05:324 (7,1) - , etc, to make it interesting. Playing the same structures for ~6min is not really enjoyable.