hey hey m4m
Ventures•00:47:964 (6) - I dont hear any sound here, but I guess it's fine to keep if you want it for build up
•00:48:317 (10,1) - personally I think this would look better and be more fun if it was spaced more, not by too much, but to actually have a space inbetween, like
this •00:59:523 (7,8) - Maybe these two could be more spaced than 00:59:346 (5,6) - these, since the sounds are stronger too
•01:04:640 (2,3,4,5,6) - same sounds as 00:53:346 (4,5,6) - should be mapped one way or the other, preferably the burst imo
•^ same for 01:08:523 (1,2,3) - and 01:01:287 (2,3,4,5) - but these dont differ too much so I guess it can be taken as variety
•01:21:228 (2,3,4) - the spacing doesnt really change a whole lot so I'd say put NCs here to indicate the 3/4 rhythm
•01:44:170 (1,2,3) - I think something like
this would fit better with that sound here , also you did something similar earlier here on the same sounds 00:51:934 (1,2,3) -
Insane•00:55:993 (4,5,6) - these two seem to be the same sounds just getting quieter gradually, I think making them the same spacing with each other would fit nice, some linear flow maybe, same goes for these 01:07:287 (4,5,6) -
•00:57:758 (5,6) - space this more compared to 00:57:581 (4,5) - cuz stronger sound
•maybe one of
those would fit better here to emphasize the vocal, if you're not using circles for an otherwise clickable sound
Hard•I think you could easily add add some triples or return sliders without bumping the SR, on the parts that stand out. Some examples: 00:59:346 - 01:10:640 - 01:27:846 - 01:32:876 - 01:38:523 -
Normal•00:26:523 (2) - These sliders make no sense really, white tick has no distinct sound you should focus on, while the red does. Putting a single circle on the red tick would solve that, as well as the long slider only sections it makes. Same goes for all of those doubles 00:29:346 (2,3) -
•00:48:405 (1) - Generally I think you should use more full beat circles on sounds like these, not just use them for 1/2s with sliders. Makes it easier for plebs, again with not having too long of a slider chain every time. Same goes for 00:51:228 (1) - 00:54:052 (1) - 00:59:699 (1) - 01:02:523 (1) - etc etc
•01:22:287 - For this section, try a rhythm like
this instead of the first 1/2 slider, fits the music better imo and makes the other two 1/2 sliders map the same thing
•01:32:876 (6,1) - Probably wanna avoid stacking on sliderends with normals, too confusing for plebs
•Also check aimod, got some DS errors
Easy•00:51:228 (4,5) - This angle might be too sharp imo, especially considering the sliders are palarell (or somewhat close to being lol) same goes for 00:54:052 (1,2) - 00:59:699 (1) - 01:01:817 (3) - , etc. What you could do is change the direction of the second slider to fix: something like you did here 01:32:876 (6,1) -
•00:48:405 (1,4) - Same as normal diff, these could be replaced with circles to make it easier and break long slider chains
Good song, hope to see this ranked soon! Good luck~