cute song
cute background
cuTE
maybe you should cut the mp3 at the end? since there is a sizable chunk there of just raw silence in the last 10 seconds
what a nice surprise, i enjoyed your spread of diffs + the song! one thing i noticed is that your extra lost a lot of structure that you had in your insane: maybe something to work towards in the future is having that great level of structure that was present in insane also be around with harder/more varied patterned like in extra. i'm just going to stop after your diffs because it is 4 am good luck with your set
cute background
cuTE
maybe you should cut the mp3 at the end? since there is a sizable chunk there of just raw silence in the last 10 seconds
Easy
- 00:15:662 (1,2) - by adjusting the curve of 2, it can blanket the corresponding curve of 1 a lot better
- 00:41:533 (2,4) - the player wont see but your blanket is kind of broken because of the curve of the sliders
- 00:50:616 (1,2) - this kind of flow is quite unclear for new player who are unsure of whether to click the slider end or slider head a lot of the time: since it's not crystal clear what the flow is meant to be, they may end up clicking the slider end here
- 01:13:185 (7,1) - if you placed this to blanket which it looks like you did, it's not blanketed properly
- 01:17:313 (5,6,7) - this is also pretty mind melting flow for the new player, with the confusing shape of 5 and the transition from 6 to 7
- 01:22:267 (3,4) - this could lead to be incredibly confusing as well
the other somewhat misleading flow i think is okay, but i pointed out every example that i think is simply too complex for this level of density/target audience
Normal
- 00:17:726 - i don't think there is enough spinner recovery time here between the end of the spinner and the first note
- 00:24:744 (2,3,4) - this is difficult, really difficult flow for a new player: this is like flow you'd find in a hard diff not a normal
- 01:04:102 (1) - DS
- 01:07:405 (1) - DS
- 01:19:789 (8,1,2,3,4) - uneven/straight line
- 01:21:441 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^^
clean diff! i like that one
Hard
- 00:10:983 (3,4) - blanket
- 00:19:240 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - both lines are uneven D: make sure they are straight when you fix them
- 00:27:772 (2,3,4) - uneven line
- 00:37:405 (1,2,3) - a pretty small nitpick, if you made the line of 2 - 3 the same angle as the slider and lined it up a bit better with the angle of the slider it'd look super nice
- 00:50:065 (3,4,1) - uneven line
- 00:52:818 (2,3,4) - uneven line
- 00:55:570 (1,2,3) - ^^
- go through this whole map and check literally every line for being uneven tbh, a lot of them are simply just oddly spaced and i'm 99% sure you meant to make them even as they are spaced as lines: it really messes with the aesthetic of an otherwise well structured map: i wont point out any more
- 00:57:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think this is super cute and a nice pattern
- 01:05:753 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
- 01:15:661 (6,8) - bbbbbblanket
- 01:18:138 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
super sorry for nazi: i really like this diff i'm just trying to help pls do not get spirits killed
Light Insane
- 00:06:854 (3,4) - 00:03:001 (4,5,6,7) - wouldn't it make more sense to make the first time sliders and the second time circles? since the second time has more emphasis with the higher notes and then it introduces the rhythm to the player in a non clickable way before testing them on it
- 00:17:038 (2,1,2,3,4) - bbbblanket could be massively improved
- 00:39:331 (2,3,4) - unevenly spaced line
- 00:40:983 (2,3,4) - same (cause copy paste :p)
- 00:44:561 (3,4) - blanket could be slightly improved
- 00:45:937 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
- 00:47:313 (1,2,3,4) - make these overlaps the same: it is pretty clear they aren't, to do this copy and paste 1 and 3, flip em and put them where 2 and 4 were
- 01:03:826 (7,8) - it is not very clear this is 1/1: it just looks like emphasized 1/2 spacing, maybe try putting it further down like this?
- 01:18:138 (4,1,2) - odd nitpick but based on your other structure i'm surprised this wasnt in line
Insane
- 00:06:854 (1,2) - 00:03:001 (3,4,5,6) - same complaint as last diff: also the line isn't evenly spaced
- 00:09:331 (3) - NC because all the other ones like this are NCd
- 00:34:377 (1,2,3,4) - unevenly spaced
- 00:39:331 (1,2,3) - unevenly spaced plus a little skewed to the side
- 00:45:937 (2,3,4) - not straight
- 00:51:717 (1,2) - be careful with flow like this: 45 degree angles have very icky flow and i don't think this is very well implemented here/the sound doesn't really call for it imo
- 01:26:120 (3,1) - blanket (left edge)
Extra
- 00:01:075 (1,2) - directly overlapping this or overlapping it a little less will end up looking a lot better
- 00:03:001 (1,2,3,4) - uneven spacing, same complaint as the other two diffs but this is just a subjective point since you did this so intentionally, just be sure if you change it to change it in all diffs
- 00:10:983 (3,5) - bbbbblanket
- 00:22:818 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
- 00:30:249 (6,1) - bbblanket
- 00:48:414 (1,2,3,4) - uneven spacing, since this one is a TINY bit zigzaggy which i can't tell if its on purpose or mistake, just make the zig zag more defined if you wanted it to be that
- 01:01:625 (5,7) - bbbbbbblanket
- 01:08:092 - ignoring this note is a little weird to me, if you don't want it to be clickable you could make 01:07:955 (5) - a slider but it seems like a pretty vital note to skip
- 01:22:267 (1,3,5,7) - if you're gonna do this, make this part a line since the bottom is a clear shape (a curve)
- 01:26:396 (1) - no big curve like the other diffs????? you have the ending consistent on every diff
what a nice surprise, i enjoyed your spread of diffs + the song! one thing i noticed is that your extra lost a lot of structure that you had in your insane: maybe something to work towards in the future is having that great level of structure that was present in insane also be around with harder/more varied patterned like in extra. i'm just going to stop after your diffs because it is 4 am good luck with your set