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Yusuke - V (TV Size)

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Julie
1,416 posts
Joined March 2013
Julie
Mods~
[Extra]

00:06:053 (5,6,7,2) - This look like a really ugly overlap, look how it look in-game : http://puu.sh/sReKW/f16b2cfd5d.jpg . Plus the color are pretty similar.

00:07:703 (5) - So much straight plain slider =w=, how about this to match the main sound at 00:07:853 - : http://puu.sh/sReUW/d399ce30a6.jpg.

00:11:153 (5,2) - Pretty sure you can spread those jump : http://puu.sh/sReYq/ebea46bbfd.jpg. Try clicking here 00:09:803 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - , see how all note look nearly like in the middle, you could spread it more out, like top left, top right, etc.

00:12:203 (6,1) - For the lastest diff, stacking this look really boring, you could emphasize the loud drum at 00:12:353 - by making a big jump between 00:12:203 (6,1) - .

00:12:953 (4,5) - Honestly, seriously, really hate these thing and really not suggested, yes is right on snap, but for people that have perfectly snap note enable, look how it look in-game http://puu.sh/sRf7D/85f282987f.jpg. Where does the slider start?!?! At 4 or 5.

00:17:453 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:18:653 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the end should feel different judging from the song, also I'm not sure if there is any new sound at 00:17:978 - and 00:19:178 - . My suggestion in pattern and rhythm is this : http://puu.sh/sRfei/6badd1c210.jpg , so the end of both of them feel difference. Also for 00:19:103 (5,6) - , make a bigger jump to fit the song if you are applying my suggestion.

00:19:553 (1) - end the slider at 00:19:853 - , the pattern is cool but the end of the slider make a sound, while there no sound there 00:19:928 - but there is a huge sound at 00:19:853 - . Just like what you did here 00:29:153 (1) -

00:31:703 (1) - You mostly been matching the vocal and loud instrument, and this huge slider feel like is missing a lots for the last difficulty, there should be more rhythm, shorten it and add a note : http://puu.sh/sS0dA/16fe5ceaf7.jpg.

01:11:753 (2,3) - Same reason as 00:12:953 (4,5) - , try to avoid it : http://puu.sh/sS0qk/cf2cde4018.jpg.

01:19:103 (5,6,1) - Hmm? The rhythm is pretty much constant at 01:18:203 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - yet suddenly a huge jump on 01:19:103 (5,6) - ? If is because there an instrument sound, where here too 01:18:953 - there is with a higher pitch. So that huge jump is pretty random, like is also more big then this 01:19:403 (1,2) - , which shouldn't be the case.

01:20:303 (2,3,4) - Make them more spacing, the rhythm is still consistent and that random short distance make it look like some kind of triplet stream. While here 01:21:803 (1,2,3) - , it can be a bit acceptable since it does feel like some kind of new section and different feeling from 01:22:103 (3,4,5,6,7) - .

01:23:603 (1,2,3) - ^
Cheri
1,770 posts
Joined November 2014
Cheri

Gabe wrote:

hello there! #modreqs


DJ Lucky's Insane
I would like to start saying that your difficulty is really good. The rhythm is neat, your combos are well choosen, your objects are well placed. I'm just going to point you stuff that you can polish. However, you've done a nice work!
  1. 00:49:703 (1) - I am sure you can make a better blanket here!
  2. 00:54:503 (1) - Same as mentioned above.

    Attempted to apply the above
Here we go. If you have any question, feel free to let me know! :)
thanks for the mod


UPDATE
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 57728
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 38903
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:V
TitleUnicode:Ｖ
Artist:Yusuke
ArtistUnicode:遊助
Creator:DivineEnigma
Version:DJ Lucky's Insane
Source:ポケットモンスター ＸＹ
Tags:volt （ボルト） v / jikyuu 850 yen no santa claus pokemon xy o-moei dj_lucky syraxaxojaxco
BeatmapID:1028421
BeatmapSetID:470384

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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DivineEnigma
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Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma
Gabe

Gabe wrote:

hello there! #modreqs

General
The combo colors 3 and 4 are too alike. It would be better if you make 4 brighter. Fixed for every diff except Syrax's since it's up to him.

Easy
  1. 00:12:353 (4) - Even if this slider is not starting on a downbeat, I feel it should have a new combo. First, the current combo is quite long and the next combo looks very short. Second, there's a very strong noise in here, you can easily emphasize it with a new combo.
  2. 00:25:553 (2) - Might be minor, but I would suggest you to move it to x:410 y:102. By doing so, the spacing is going to be more consistent and the blanket will still look fine.
  3. 00:27:803 (2) - Move this circle to x:217 y:311 for a better spacing consistency.
  4. 00:31:103 (2) - Move this slider to x:153 y:171 for a better spacing consistency.
  5. 00:32:303 (2) - The spacing of this slider is very inconsistent with the previous and the next object. I'm suggesting you to move it to x:368 y:305. You'll need to move your next slider as well if you want to keep a decent blanking.
  6. 00:46:103 (1) - This slider has a plain shape, there's no actual curve in there, so it feels neutral. I would like to suggest you to change the form of this slider so it can have better curves. Here's my example:
  7. 00:54:503 (2) - This slider should have a better flow with the previous slider. To do this, you will have to move 00:52:703 (3,1) - a little bit higher so you can move the slider (2) without worrying to make it out of the screen. If you apply this, remember to move the next objects to keep the spacing consistent! You can move these three objects to:
    *(3): x:344 y:48
    *(1): x:188 y:64
    *(2): x:220 y:352
  8. 01:07:703 (1) - I'm suggesting you to move this slider a bit to keep the spacing consistent. Also, you might also consider moving your slider's node to have a decent blanking.
  9. 01:13:703 (2) - Inconsistent spacing in here. Move this slider to x:119 y:258
Light Insane
  1. 00:05:303 (1) - For this slider, I feel it should be moved somewhere further the previous slider. As the previous slider has a lower slider velocity, I feel you should move this one to make a better slowing effect. I am suggesting you to move this slider at around x:144 y:228 Ooh, nice, I like that.
  2. 00:20:303 (3,4,1,2) - I don't like the rhythm in here, it feels like there's missing a beat in the middle of the slider (1). I'm suggesting you to highlight both (1,2) and do a CTRL+G on them. The rhythm is going to be far better and also, the vocal will be more emphasized that way.
  3. 00:25:253 (1,2,3) - Same applies for this one. (Do a CTRL+G on these three objects)
  4. 00:37:853 (1,2) - These two circles shouldn't follow the same pattern as your previous objects. As it's doing some kind of jumping effect, you should move (2) further away. What about x:280 y:124 ?
  5. 00:47:003 (1) - If we are looking at the consistency of your new combos, there shouldn't be a new combo here. So delete the combo and add a new combo to the next object.
  6. 01:23:453 (1,2,1) - As for the rhythm, I would do something like this instead:
Extra
  1. 00:26:303 (1) - First, the new combo is not necessary. Second, it would be better if this circle was stacked with the beginning of 00:25:703 (1) - Removed the NC, however, I didn't move the circle because I like the flow there.
  2. 00:34:253 (1) - I would add a Normal Sampleset hitsound here to follow your consistency. I'll ask Syrax about this since he did the hitsounding for the set.
  3. 00:47:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I see you tried to make a star pattern in here. Unfortunately, this looks very bad, the shape is not that quite good.. If you need help doing a shape like this, there's always the function in the 'Compose' TAB which you can get by doing CTRL+SHIFT+D. It's going to open the 'Polygonal Circle Creation' tool and you can do whatever you want in there!
  4. 01:02:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - To be honest with you, these are really random. Even if you tried to spice it up a bit, they aren't following anything.. I would like you to do something else in here. Remapped these sections.
Here we go. If you have any question, feel free to let me know! :)

Julie

Julie wrote:

[Extra]

00:06:053 (5,6,7,2) - This look like a really ugly overlap, look how it look in-game : http://puu.sh/sReKW/f16b2cfd5d.jpg . Plus the color are pretty similar. Stacked 00:06:053 (5,6,7,2) -

00:07:703 (5) - So much straight plain slider =w=, how about this to match the main sound at 00:07:853 - : http://puu.sh/sReUW/d399ce30a6.jpg.

00:11:153 (5,2) - Pretty sure you can spread those jump : http://puu.sh/sReYq/ebea46bbfd.jpg. Try clicking here 00:09:803 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - , see how all note look nearly like in the middle, you could spread it more out, like top left, top right, etc.

00:12:203 (6,1) - For the lastest diff, stacking this look really boring, you could emphasize the loud drum at 00:12:353 - by making a big jump between 00:12:203 (6,1) - . Fixed slightly, 00:12:353 (1) - I ctrl+g'ed this and moved it away from (6) a bit to show emphasis on the drum there.

00:12:953 (4,5) - Honestly, seriously, really hate these thing and really not suggested, yes is right on snap, but for people that have perfectly snap note enable, look how it look in-game http://puu.sh/sRf7D/85f282987f.jpg. Where does the slider start?!?! At 4 or 5. Moved (5) away from (4) a bit.

00:17:453 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:18:653 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the end should feel different judging from the song, also I'm not sure if there is any new sound at 00:17:978 - and 00:19:178 - . My suggestion in pattern and rhythm is this : http://puu.sh/sRfei/6badd1c210.jpg , so the end of both of them feel difference. Also for 00:19:103 (5,6) - , make a bigger jump to fit the song if you are applying my suggestion.

00:19:553 (1) - end the slider at 00:19:853 - , the pattern is cool but the end of the slider make a sound, while there no sound there 00:19:928 - but there is a huge sound at 00:19:853 - . Just like what you did here 00:29:153 (1) -

00:31:703 (1) - You mostly been matching the vocal and loud instrument, and this huge slider feel like is missing a lots for the last difficulty, there should be more rhythm, shorten it and add a note : http://puu.sh/sS0dA/16fe5ceaf7.jpg.

01:11:753 (2,3) - Same reason as 00:12:953 (4,5) - , try to avoid it : http://puu.sh/sS0qk/cf2cde4018.jpg.

01:19:103 (5,6,1) - Hmm? The rhythm is pretty much constant at 01:18:203 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - yet suddenly a huge jump on 01:19:103 (5,6) - ? If is because there an instrument sound, where here too 01:18:953 - there is with a higher pitch. So that huge jump is pretty random, like is also more big then this 01:19:403 (1,2) - , which shouldn't be the case.

01:20:303 (2,3,4) - Make them more spacing, the rhythm is still consistent and that random short distance make it look like some kind of triplet stream. While here 01:21:803 (1,2,3) - , it can be a bit acceptable since it does feel like some kind of new section and different feeling from 01:22:103 (3,4,5,6,7) - .

01:23:603 (1,2,3) - ^

Thank you for the mods! :)
SyraxAxoJaxco
190 posts
Joined March 2014
SyraxAxoJaxco

Gabe wrote:

hello there! #modreqs Hello~

SAJ's Hard
  1. 00:10:103 (1,2,3,4) - I was sure these four circles were going to be completely straight until I saw the last circle. I'm suggesting you to move these circles to make a perfect line, just like you've done to the next four circles.
    Eh, for that one, I intentionally don't want to make it straight.
  2. 00:12:803 (1,2,3) - Same as mentioned above.
    Okay, this one is acceptable.
  3. 00:21:203 (2,3) - You can do a really nice blanket here :(
    Um, okay...
Nice diff! #senpaiNoticedMeUYEY

Here we go. If you have any question, feel free to let me know! :) Someday, but not today. That's for sure. ;)
O-Moei
O-Moei
http://puu.sh/sUyxP/5ce48adc11.osu

Thx, fix all, lately iv been lazy replyin xd
sowwy for the delay xd
Ohwow
1,193 posts
Joined July 2013
Ohwow
Hi, doing my end of the M4M

Extra

00:00:503 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern could be made better, here's a suggestion:
Suggestion

Otherwise, at least flip 00:01:853 (2) - vertically, I'm not so sure why it's facing the other way while the other 3 is facing the same way.

00:02:303 (1,2,1,2) - The (1)s of this pattern should be copied, pasted, then rotate 180 degrees so the (1)s are perfectly flipped like this (before & after so you can see the difference):
Suggestion
Before:

After:
00:09:803 (1,2,3,4) - The stream is slightly not aligned with the slider. Align it (tilt it a bit) better with the slider?
00:11:003 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - A lot of varied spacing here. I don't think there's any change in the music that supports this change in spacing. I think constant spacing is better here. I feel like there's a lot of questionable flow here. the part i highlighted as a lot of zigzags and all of the sudden 00:12:653 (2,3,4) - has a wide angle jump (and relative small spacing).
00:13:103 (5,6) - Try to make it symmetricall to one another. Tip: Just make 1 slider, then copy and paste and rotate 180 degrees.
00:13:103 (5) - I don't like how this is facing the the previous note as it provides no flow at all. You can break flow but only if the song supports it (at strong beats, usually occurs at big white ticks).
Kinda strange that 00:17:153 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - has smaller spacing than 00:11:303 (1,2,3,4) cause imo the former has stronger beats than the latter
00:20:603 (4,5) - This is a appropriate example of when to break flow. maybe NC the slider?
00:23:153 (6,7,1) - Make into a slider imo. be consistent on how you map things.
00:23:603 (3) - instead of this, make it a circle then a slider if you're mapping to the voice.
00:26:003 (2,3) - This overlap should be fixed (easy fix is stacking them).
00:26:903 (1,2,3,4) - try to make the squares perfect (copy+paste+rotate 90 degrees for each corner of the square. Good habit to use geometry to make shapes instead of eyeballing).
00:28:103 (1) - lower the slider so it can curve towards the next circle (right now, it's kinda off)
00:28:403 (2,3,4) - I think it should just be a note then a slider. Overmapping perhaps?
00:30:353 (1,2,3) - simple change to improve flow:
Suggestion
00:31:703 (1,3,4) - I think you can just make all these sliders into circles if you're mapping to the vocals.
00:32:753 (5) - slider should start here? sorry i'm just assuming that you are trying to map to the vocals, disregard all these suggestions if you're doing something else.
00:33:803 (6) - this slider is kinda off and poses a few problems imo. 1) There's no voice to support that slider 2)ur missing out on a beat here 00:33:953 - (you had to custom that slidertick hitsound XD) 3) very small spacing here between these two notes 00:33:803 (6,1) -

00:41:303 (1,2,3) - This triangle can be made more perfect (again, use that method i mentioned but rotate 60 degrees)
00:41:753 (1,2,3) - make into perfect triangle. triangles are great :D
00:43:553 (4,1) - spacing between these two notes should be bigger than 00:43:403 (3,4) -
00:45:953 (2,1) - stack like this:
Suggestion
00:47:453 (6,1) - the distance is too far relative to the rest in that section
00:48:203 (5,6,1) - should have bigger spacing than the previous circles.
00:49:703 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this pattern is kinda messy. I see some overlaps like 00:50:453 (3,1) - and objects that are so close to touching like 00:50:303 (2,1) . Umm here's a video of what I did LOL (lots of triangles. Although you may not be monstrata, triangles are an easy way to make patterns clean and easier to read.)
puush is down, searched up a random site where I could upload a video XD
https://vid.me/MMo2
00:53:303 (1,1) - is spearated by 1/1 beat while 00:53:603 (1,2) - is separated by 1/2, but they are both spaced the same
00:55:103 (3,1) - nothing wrong with these sliders, except the colors are so similar that i thought they were in the same combo. If you are going to colorhax (changing combo color manually) then it shouldn't be a problem. Otherwise, i don't know why you would have these gray combo colors.
00:55:703 (1,1,1,1) - Try to have some symmetry with these sliders. The pattern just kinda looks weird
01:00:353 (7,1) - 01:07:403 (1,2) - Not a big fan of these stacked notes, since you can just make a jump from them. imo just have
01:05:303 (1,2,3,4) - make these sliders parallel? It doesn't look parallel, and I think would look nicer if it does.
01:07:703 (1) - You can make this slider better:
Better slider
01:08:153 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this hexagonal shape can be made better by using ctrl+shift+D
01:09:803 (2) - should be 2 circles instead?
01:12:503 (1,2,3) - Make these sliders parallel (copy+pasta)
01:20:003 (4) - slider should start at the red tick here 01:20:153 -
01:21:803 (1,2,3) - People are going to read this as a 1/4 beat. You probably made this on purpose though. Just thought I mention it.

I hope you enjoyed my short mod
DivineEnigma
330 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

Ohwow wrote:

Hi, doing my end of the M4M

Extra

00:00:503 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern could be made better, here's a suggestion:
Suggestion

Otherwise, at least flip 00:01:853 (2) - vertically, I'm not so sure why it's facing the other way while the other 3 is facing the same way.

00:02:303 (1,2,1,2) - The (1)s of this pattern should be copied, pasted, then rotate 180 degrees so the (1)s are perfectly flipped like this (before & after so you can see the difference):
Suggestion
Before:

After:
00:09:803 (1,2,3,4) - The stream is slightly not aligned with the slider. Align it (tilt it a bit) better with the slider?
00:11:003 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - A lot of varied spacing here. I don't think there's any change in the music that supports this change in spacing. I think constant spacing is better here. I feel like there's a lot of questionable flow here. the part i highlighted as a lot of zigzags and all of the sudden 00:12:653 (2,3,4) - has a wide angle jump (and relative small spacing).
00:13:103 (5,6) - Try to make it symmetricall to one another. Tip: Just make 1 slider, then copy and paste and rotate 180 degrees.
00:13:103 (5) - I don't like how this is facing the the previous note as it provides no flow at all. You can break flow but only if the song supports it (at strong beats, usually occurs at big white ticks).
Kinda strange that 00:17:153 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - has smaller spacing than 00:11:303 (1,2,3,4) cause imo the former has stronger beats than the latter
00:20:603 (4,5) - This is a appropriate example of when to break flow. maybe NC the slider?
00:23:153 (6,7,1) - Make into a slider imo. be consistent on how you map things.
00:23:603 (3) - instead of this, make it a circle then a slider if you're mapping to the voice. ah no, I'm not mapping to the vocals here.
00:26:003 (2,3) - This overlap should be fixed (easy fix is stacking them).
00:26:903 (1,2,3,4) - try to make the squares perfect (copy+paste+rotate 90 degrees for each corner of the square. Good habit to use geometry to make shapes instead of eyeballing).
00:28:103 (1) - lower the slider so it can curve towards the next circle (right now, it's kinda off)
00:28:403 (2,3,4) - I think it should just be a note then a slider. Overmapping perhaps?
00:30:353 (1,2,3) - simple change to improve flow:
Suggestion
00:31:703 (1,3,4) - I think you can just make all these sliders into circles if you're mapping to the vocals. no thanks.
00:32:753 (5) - slider should start here? sorry i'm just assuming that you are trying to map to the vocals, disregard all these suggestions if you're doing something else.
00:33:803 (6) - this slider is kinda off and poses a few problems imo. 1) There's no voice to support that slider 2)ur missing out on a beat here 00:33:953 - (you had to custom that slidertick hitsound XD) 3) very small spacing here between these two notes 00:33:803 (6,1) -

00:41:303 (1,2,3) - This triangle can be made more perfect (again, use that method i mentioned but rotate 60 degrees)
00:41:753 (1,2,3) - make into perfect triangle. triangles are great :D
00:43:553 (4,1) - spacing between these two notes should be bigger than 00:43:403 (3,4) -
00:45:953 (2,1) - stack like this:
Suggestion
00:47:453 (6,1) - the distance is too far relative to the rest in that section
00:48:203 (5,6,1) - should have bigger spacing than the previous circles.
00:49:703 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this pattern is kinda messy. I see some overlaps like 00:50:453 (3,1) - and objects that are so close to touching like 00:50:303 (2,1) . Umm here's a video of what I did LOL (lots of triangles. Although you may not be monstrata, triangles are an easy way to make patterns clean and easier to read.)
puush is down, searched up a random site where I could upload a video XD
https://vid.me/MMo2
00:53:303 (1,1) - is spearated by 1/1 beat while 00:53:603 (1,2) - is separated by 1/2, but they are both spaced the same
00:55:103 (3,1) - nothing wrong with these sliders, except the colors are so similar that i thought they were in the same combo. If you are going to colorhax (changing combo color manually) then it shouldn't be a problem. Otherwise, i don't know why you would have these gray combo colors.
00:55:703 (1,1,1,1) - Try to have some symmetry with these sliders. The pattern just kinda looks weird
01:00:353 (7,1) - 01:07:403 (1,2) - Not a big fan of these stacked notes, since you can just make a jump from them. imo just have
01:05:303 (1,2,3,4) - make these sliders parallel? It doesn't look parallel, and I think would look nicer if it does.
01:07:703 (1) - You can make this slider better: I like the shape the way it is~
Better slider
01:08:153 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this hexagonal shape can be made better by using ctrl+shift+D wasn't trying to make a hexagonal shape here
01:09:803 (2) - should be 2 circles instead?
01:12:503 (1,2,3) - Make these sliders parallel (copy+pasta)
01:20:003 (4) - slider should start at the red tick here 01:20:153 -
01:21:803 (1,2,3) - People are going to read this as a 1/4 beat. You probably made this on purpose though. Just thought I mention it. I believe that at this kind of level, players won't misread it. However, I'll consider increasing the spacing of these notes if any more mods bring it up.

I hope you enjoyed my short mod
Thank you a lot for the mod!!! :)
DivineEnigma
330 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma
Replaced the old Extra with Hazu's Extra GD ^_^
Kujinn
1,382 posts
Joined December 2013
Kujinn
Gap between Hazu's diff and Insane is too large, I would suggest fit a 5* map inbetween those two.
DivineEnigma
330 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma
I believe that DJ Lucky's insane's star rating doesn't represent the difficulty as it feels more than 4.29* possibly a 4.4 - 4.5 or around there because of the single taps for a 200 bpm. Plus, I often see maps with a somewhat medium-huge gap between Insane and Extra but Extra is just added with jumps so of course the star rating would be huge.
JierYagtama
716 posts
Joined November 2015
JierYagtama
Yo nice song makes me wanna watch pokemon again XD (Also thanks for the pic uwu)
Light Insane
00:04:703 (1,1) - move these two a little bit
00:18:353 (1,2) - move this a bit closer to the slider
00:21:503 (3,4) - slighty move the circle to the slider end
00:27:653 (4,5) - move these two a bit
00:29:153 (1,2) - can be made into a blanket
00:36:503 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - slightly make these wider
00:38:903 (1,1) - I dont see any need for thses two to overlap you can snap these instead
00:41:753 (2,4) - hmm how about you increase these two's sv to 1?
00:48:803 (1,2,3,1,2) - these too
01:04:553 (4) - Curve it a little bit
01:22:103 (1) - ^
01:05:003 (5) - this one too
01:07:403 (4,5,1) - dont like these kinds of overlaps
Haru's Adventure
00:03:803 (3) - prefer this to be a straight slider like the others
00:06:953 (4) - slightly curve this a bit more
00:21:203 (2,3) - ^
00:23:753 (3) - ^
00:34:553 (4,5) - ^
00:41:003 (6) - ^
00:43:103 (3,4) - ^
00:44:903 (1,2) - ^
00:07:403 (6) - slightly curve this a bit
00:42:503 (1) - ^
01:20:153 (3) - ^
00:07:403 (6,1) - this should slighly be near to the slider here
00:30:353 (1) - a bit more wavy pls
Also lemme leave a fav. Goodluck ranking this eksdee
DivineEnigma
330 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

JeirYagtama wrote:

Yo nice song makes me wanna watch pokemon again XD (Also thanks for the pic uwu)
Light Insane
00:04:703 (1,1) - move these two a little bit
00:18:353 (1,2) - move this a bit closer to the slider did something else; fixed blanket
00:21:503 (3,4) - slighty move the circle to the slider end
00:27:653 (4,5) - move these two a bit it's fine ?!
00:29:153 (1,2) - can be made into a blanket aiming for it to be linear
00:36:503 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - slightly make these wider i like it the way it is tbh
00:38:903 (1,1) - I dont see any need for thses two to overlap you can snap these instead moved the note a bit away from the slider
00:41:753 (2,4) - hmm how about you increase these two's sv to 1? nah, I'll keep this whole section 0.75x, i don't want any surprises in a light insane diff anyways
00:48:803 (1,2,3,1,2) - these too ^
01:04:553 (4) - Curve it a little bit
01:22:103 (1) - ^
01:05:003 (5) - this one too
01:07:403 (4,5,1) - dont like these kinds of overlaps
thank you for the mod and fav : ) !
Harmango
129 posts
Joined August 2015
Harmango
Hey! NM from queue - osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5906201

[Light Insane]
  1. 00:01:403 (1) - Move this note elsewhere because it overlaps the one before it, which kinda looks ugly imo. Heres an idea - http://i.imgur.com/dLqWmSX.jpg
  2. 00:08:153 (2) - Stack this on the beginning of this slider: 00:08:453 (1). Stack 00:08:303 (3) - this on the beginning of 00:08:753 (2) - This slider, ignore the distance spacing gap, but it will give u a nice jump and will also look good imo
  3. 00:20:453 (4) - Stack this on the beginning of this slider: 00:21:203 (2)
  4. 00:27:653 (4) - Stack on the end of 00:27:803 (5) - this slider
  5. 00:44:603 (1,1,1,1) - I like this pattern you have :D
  6. 00:54:653 (6,1) - This overlap looks ugly, and also may confuse players because you didnt use these kinds of overlaps before in this difficulty
  7. 01:05:303 (1,4) - This overlap also looks ugly
  8. 01:13:103 (3) - Move this slider up a little?

Hope I helped! Good luck with your map :)
DivineEnigma
330 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

harmanjit102 wrote:

Hey! NM from queue - osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5906201

[Light Insane]
  1. 00:01:403 (1) - Move this note elsewhere because it overlaps the one before it, which kinda looks ugly imo. Heres an idea - http://i.imgur.com/dLqWmSX.jpg
  2. 00:08:153 (2) - Stack this on the beginning of this slider: 00:08:453 (1). Stack 00:08:303 (3) - this on the beginning of 00:08:753 (2) - This slider, ignore the distance spacing gap, but it will give u a nice jump and will also look good imo I like the current one imo
  3. 00:20:453 (4) - Stack this on the beginning of this slider: 00:21:203 (2) hmm i don't want to increase ds here
  4. 00:27:653 (4) - Stack on the end of 00:27:803 (5) - this slider ^
  5. 00:44:603 (1,1,1,1) - I like this pattern you have :D ty!
  6. 00:54:653 (6,1) - This overlap looks ugly, and also may confuse players because you didnt use these kinds of overlaps before in this difficulty at this kind of level, it should be fine
  7. 01:05:303 (1,4) - This overlap also looks ugly
  8. 01:13:103 (3) - Move this slider up a little?

Hope I helped! Good luck with your map :)
no reply = fixed;

thank you for the mod!!! : )
Cheri
1,770 posts
Joined November 2014
Cheri
I raised the SR from 4.29* to 4.42* by rearranging the circles in the map and patterns that I felt was awkward and looked weird

I also got rid of the stream u ask and change that part up a bit

UPDATE
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 57728
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 38903
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:V
TitleUnicode:Ｖ
Artist:Yusuke
ArtistUnicode:遊助
Creator:DivineEnigma
Version:DJ Lucky's Insane
Source:ポケットモンスター ＸＹ
Tags:volt （ボルト） v / jikyuu 850 yen no santa claus pokemon xy o-moei dj_lucky syraxaxojaxco hazu-
BeatmapID:1028421
BeatmapSetID:470384

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/dj.png",320,240
 S,0,0,,0.4
 F,1,0,803,0,1
 M,0,803,,300,435
 F,1,4853,5228,1,0
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87503,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
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88103,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 192,192,192
Combo2 : 200,0,0
Combo3 : 255,40,40
Combo4 : 0,0,200
Combo5 : 40,40,255
Combo6 : 255,255,128

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LimePixel
184 posts
Joined March 2015
LimePixel
Hi :)
NM request from queue.

SAJ's Hard
01:19:403 (4,1) - Spacing is too big between these 2 objects. There's only a 1/4th gap.

Light Insane
00:14:303 (3) - Ctrl+H and rotate by -15 degrees to improve flow. Position of the sliderhead is the same

DJ Lucky's Insane
01:10:103 (1,2) - Ctrl+G on each of them? More of a suggestion.
01:17:303 (1) - Remove NC

Sorry for the short mod. Looks like everything is taken care of and fixed.
If this mod is unhelpful, ignore it. Hope it helps though, good luck! :)
Fursum
523 posts
Joined August 2014
Fursum
Hello from my queue.

Here are my terrible first tries. I disabled custom combo colors after my first play on Light Insane.

Sorry for the short mod. Hope these replays help, although its mostly my retarded hand failing at jumps :p

[General]

Dark combo colors made it hard to read.

[Easy]

00:41:303 (4,1) - Maybe blanket this.

[SAJ's Hard]

00:20:453 (4,1,2) - Blanket one of these?

00:22:853 (3,1) - Blanket?

00:32:453 (3,1) - ^

[Light Insane]

01:23:003 (4,1,2,3) - You could fit some blankets here.

[DJ Lucky's Insane]

00:49:403 (4,1) - The curve of 1 is a bit too deep for a perfect blanket.
Cheri
1,770 posts
Joined November 2014
Cheri
My map hasn't gotten update like it should - its not 4.29 - its 4.42 and I gave the update version already above ^

I am not changing nothing until its updated since these change the mods said could be invalid

EDIT: Ok I take that back when I said I wasn't changing nothing - fix some blankets but I didn't do no change with @Lime Pixel mod (sorry :c )

So since I did change something - here is an newer version from the previous 1 I gave

UPDATE
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 57728
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 38903
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:V
TitleUnicode:Ｖ
Artist:Yusuke
ArtistUnicode:遊助
Creator:DivineEnigma
Version:DJ Lucky's Insane
Source:ポケットモンスター ＸＹ
Tags:volt （ボルト） v / jikyuu 850 yen no santa claus pokemon xy o-moei dj_lucky syraxaxojaxco hazu-
BeatmapID:1028421
BeatmapSetID:470384

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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DivineEnigma
330 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

Fursum012 wrote:

Hello from my queue.

Here are my terrible first tries. I disabled custom combo colors after my first play on Light Insane.

Sorry for the short mod. Hope these replays help, although its mostly my retarded hand failing at jumps :p

[General]

Dark combo colors made it hard to read. I'll leave it to SAJ with the combo colors.

[Easy]

00:41:303 (4,1) - Maybe blanket this. I can't, if I tried to blanket it, the DS would be inconsistent. However, I noticed something that was suppose to be blanketed that was after that so thanks xD

[Light Insane]

01:23:003 (4,1,2,3) - You could fit some blankets here. It's fine, I like the current one.
Thank you, and same for the testplay haha : )

LimePixel wrote:

Hi :)
NM request from queue.

Light Insane
00:14:303 (3) - Ctrl+H and rotate by -15 degrees to improve flow. Position of the sliderhead is the same Done!

Sorry for the short mod. Looks like everything is taken care of and fixed.
If this mod is unhelpful, ignore it. Hope it helps though, good luck! :)
Thank you!! Even if it was short, it was still helpful~

Also Updated DJ Lucky's difficulty so his * rating is up to date now.
SyraxAxoJaxco
190 posts
Joined March 2014
SyraxAxoJaxco

LimePixel wrote:

Hi :)
NM request from queue. Thank you for mod~

SAJ's Hard
01:19:403 (4,1) - Spacing is too big between these 2 objects. There's only a 1/4th gap.
Hm... I guess I won't change it for now. But, if I get another mod like this, I will change that one and 00:12:203 (4,1) - , alright.

Sorry for the short mod. Looks like everything is taken care of and fixed. Well... :v
If this mod is unhelpful, ignore it. Hope it helps though, good luck! :) Y'know, every mod, even the little ones, is helpful so thank you~

Fursum012 wrote:

Hello from my queue. Hello, from the other side, :3

[General]

Dark combo colors made it hard to read.
Huh? How come? Explain it more so I can decide. I don't understand this one. Sorry...

[SAJ's Hard]

00:20:453 (4,1,2) - Blanket one of these?

00:22:853 (3,1) - Blanket?

00:32:453 (3,1) - ^

Ehh, I love overlapping things more than blanketing things so I guess, I'm sorry but I won't change these because it's my style. It's still rankable anyway, right? :?

Thank you for the concern though~
davidminh0111
1,335 posts
Joined January 2017
davidminh0111
Hello from my queue
Sorry for late:

[General]
Is the metadata correct. You must careful the main Title or Artist.

[Easy]
00:49:703: I think this slider too curve, can you fix it?
That's all :|

[Moei's Normal]
Why at the start leave blank, add something like Easy mode.
01:00:803: Why reverse here? Do the slider like this 01:01:703 to flow better
01:15:803: This slider curve too much, fix it please.

[SAJ's Hard]
00:06:803 (2, 3): I think this is an unrankable overlap, fix it.
00:49:103: The curve here is not good, fix it same as 00:48:503 to flow better
00:59:753 (2, 4): Overlap? I think.
01:00:803 (2, 4): ^
01:14:903: Why new NC a lot?
00:55:703: ^

That's all for me, I'm bad at std please don't get mad if this mod is suck
Thank you
SyraxAxoJaxco
190 posts
Joined March 2014
SyraxAxoJaxco

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello from my queue Nyee there~
Sorry for late:

[SAJ's Hard]
00:06:803 (2, 3): I think this is an unrankable overlap, fix it
Huh? Why? It's still readable at the most...
00:49:103: The curve here is not good, fix it same as 00:48:503 to flow better
I...intended to make a sharp curve there so no. Sorry...
00:59:753 (2, 4): Overlap? I think.
01:00:803 (2, 4): ^
...I can't see the flaw in clean-overlapping things like that. Anyway, I really want to punctuate the on-going lyrics so
unless you can give me the better solution while at the same pertaining the whole DS-es, I'm really sorry but no.
01:14:903: Why new NC a lot?
00:55:703: ^
*funky DS-es intensifies

That's all for me, I'm bad at std please don't get mad if this mod is suck Aw, don't say things like that. Remember 'practice makes perfect'? ;)
Thank you
DivineEnigma
330 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello from my queue
Sorry for late:

[General]
Is the metadata correct. You must careful the main Title or Artist. taken from Gero's ranked mapset

[Easy]
00:49:703: I think this slider too curve, can you fix it? i wanted to use weird slider shapes in the Easy difficulty also it was intended to be curvy to also create a blanket.

That's all :|

That's all for me, I'm bad at std please don't get mad if this mod is suck
Thank you
thank you! : )
SyraxAxoJaxco
190 posts
Joined March 2014
SyraxAxoJaxco
Perhaps I need to give Moei's GD a lil' boost of mod...

Moei's Normal
00:26:903 (1,2) - I understand you want to punctuate the ongoing lyrics. But I think these are just too dense for Normal.
I suggest changing it like this. At least the feeling isn't really gone with that suggestion.

00:30:203 (3) - Not right yet. x122|y32 seems more fitting.

00:31:703 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, I understand what are trying to achieve here. But for Normal, (sadly) I guess you can't heavily change the consistency.
Please make something like 00:22:103 (1,2,3,4) - again, for the sake of consistency.

00:50:303 (4) - x152|y241, or tidy one of them because the blanket isn't on point.

00:56:603 (2) - This will be even better if you can make it into a slider and a circle to emphasize the beat. Maybe this?
If you go this way, you need to also change 00:58:103 (1,2) - Hint: Like this.

00:59:903 (5) - Whoops, see the DS.

01:13:703 (3) - I think x487|y158 is tidier though if you can reshape it, it could be nicer.

01:15:803 (2,3) - I think everyone will feel the same way: Something is missing. Add something at 01:16:703 -
My suggestions: -1- -2-

01:19:403 (5,1) - You're going to surprise newbie players this way. For me, I would change 01:19:103 (4,5) - into one slider.

01:20:603 (3) - Whoah, that's not a nice blanket. Fix the slidertail to x53|y260. Better, right?

There, 10 'injections' should be enough for now. :D
Wishkey
774 posts
Joined September 2011
Wishkey
yow! From queue easy and extra it is :D

light insane diff: check timing lines at these points all duplicates
00:04:853
00:19:703
00:43:253
01:07:853
01:09:053
01:12:653



Easy
  1. 00:05:303 (1) - why not just mirror 00:06:503 (3) - here? Its better to have your first combo on the easiest diff flow as straightforward as possible since newbies don't know how fast the sliders are yet so having that 'tricky' flow aswell is a bit too much
  2. 00:13:703 (3) - control+h the shape here and rotate it a bit so it fits the ds would be nice so you have a better leadin towards 00:14:903 (1) -
  3. 00:34:103 (1,2) - can adjust this a bit so the tails of 00:33:203 (3,2) - will be stacked
  4. 00:31:103 (2) - feels a bit out of place here, since its still part of those different vocals you followed with the long slider, maybe delete this and extend that slider further so you have your slider following all of those different vocals for these 2 stanzas
  5. 00:41:303 (4,1) - could blanket these aswell by changing the knick of the slider a bit since these are close to being blanketed right now anyway makes it look a bit more connected, also NC on 4 instead for the 2 downbeat/nc pattern
  6. 00:49:703 (3,2) - make the sliderpaths here a bit more clear for an easy you want all the borders visible
  7. 00:53:303 (1,2) - increase ds a bit, bit noticable bc of the borders touching
  8. 00:55:703 (1,2) - first return then slider would fit better here with the music since its 123-12 in terms of pitches intensity
  9. 00:59:903 (1,2) - control+g the rythm here, makes the downbeat clickable since its pretty strong with a new vocal sentence starting on it
  10. 01:01:703 (1,2,3) - only time in the diff where there are 2 circles after eachother so I'd extend the slider of 1 or make it a return so its more in line with the rest of the map
  11. 01:05:003 - pretty strong note here would definitly map this like you did for the similar one at 01:02:603 (2) -
  12. 01:07:703 (1,2,3,1) - pretty huge note density here all of the sudden while this is pretty strong since its the second start of the kiai here I'd definitly map this out a bit more, something like this rythm wise for instance
Extra
  1. 00:26:903 (1,2,3,4,5) - could move 1 closer to 3 so your star pattern here is symmetrical
  2. 00:34:103 (1,2,3,4,5) - bit weird rhythm here starting (4) on the weakest beat in the section, if your following the vocal control+g 2-3-4 so every sylabble is clickable would nice or just the drum then control+g 3-4 could also work
  3. 00:47:753 (2,3,4,5,6) - star pattern is a bit off, I'd just redo it with control+shift+d
  4. 01:00:203 (4,1,2) - and 01:09:803 (4,1,2) - control+g rhythm here? having these 01:00:503 (1,2,3,4,5) - as 4 sliders patterns fits those vocals a lot better imo since it differentiates the section before this better too
  5. 01:07:553 (2,1) - a kiai reset would be nice here for that extra impact and fits with the storyboard too
gl man!
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Hazu-
All fixed from Wishkey's mod, about JeirYagtama's mod idk why of each thing.
Thanks~
Poi
osu file format v14

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DivineEnigma
330 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

Wishkey wrote:

yow! From queue easy and extra it is :D

light insane diff: check timing lines at these points all duplicates
00:04:853
00:19:703
00:43:253
01:07:853
01:09:053
01:12:653

Easy
  1. 00:05:303 (1) - why not just mirror 00:06:503 (3) - here? Its better to have your first combo on the easiest diff flow as straightforward as possible since newbies don't know how fast the sliders are yet so having that 'tricky' flow aswell is a bit too much
  2. 00:13:703 (3) - control+h the shape here and rotate it a bit so it fits the ds would be nice so you have a better leadin towards 00:14:903 (1) -
  3. 00:34:103 (1,2) - can adjust this a bit so the tails of 00:33:203 (3,2) - will be stacked It's not a big deal so I think it's fine.
  4. 00:31:103 (2) - feels a bit out of place here, since its still part of those different vocals you followed with the long slider, maybe delete this and extend that slider further so you have your slider following all of those different vocals for these 2 stanzas
  5. 00:41:303 (4,1) - could blanket these aswell by changing the knick of the slider a bit since these are close to being blanketed right now anyway makes it look a bit more connected, also NC on 4 instead for the 2 downbeat/nc pattern NC'ed but changed the shape of the long slider
  6. 00:49:703 (3,2) - make the sliderpaths here a bit more clear for an easy you want all the borders visible
  7. 00:53:303 (1,2) - increase ds a bit, bit noticable bc of the borders touching
  8. 00:55:703 (1,2) - first return then slider would fit better here with the music since its 123-12 in terms of pitches intensity
  9. 00:59:903 (1,2) - control+g the rythm here, makes the downbeat clickable since its pretty strong with a new vocal sentence starting on it
  10. 01:01:703 (1,2,3) - only time in the diff where there are 2 circles after eachother so I'd extend the slider of 1 or make it a return so its more in line with the rest of the map
  11. 01:05:003 - pretty strong note here would definitly map this like you did for the similar one at 01:02:603 (2) -
  12. 01:07:703 (1,2,3,1) - pretty huge note density here all of the sudden while this is pretty strong since its the second start of the kiai here I'd definitly map this out a bit more, something like this rythm wise for instance
gl man!
Fixed! Thank you!
Affirmation
2,543 posts
Joined March 2015
Affirmation
Q

[light Insane]
00:05:453 - add a beat
00:36:503 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this overlap pattern looks messy, I suggest increasing DS
00:38:903 (1,2) - looks hard to read
00:44:603 (1,1,1) - you don't need to increase SV in this part
01:07:403 (4,5,1) - loooks hard to read, too, it can be read as 1/4

GL
DivineEnigma
330 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[light Insane]
00:05:453 - add a beat
00:36:503 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this overlap pattern looks messy, I suggest increasing DS personally I like that pattern and wanted to emphasize the vocals here
00:38:903 (1,2) - looks hard to read
00:44:603 (1,1,1) - you don't need to increase SV in this part wanted some kind of effect with the repeating vocals, it does get reset back to 1.00x SV to build the momentum going then calms the SV down at 00:48:803 (2) - since by then the momentum would be broken with the 1/1 gap
01:07:403 (4,5,1) - loooks hard to read, too, it can be read as 1/4 1/4s are rarely used in this difficulty anyways so I doubt it would be read as 1/4

GL
thank you!
Raiyn
151 posts
Joined October 2015
Raiyn
From my modding queue!

So here i go~

Easy

I'm sorry to say but
SPOILER
This difficulty is already perfect with the hitsounds and all!
I literally found no problem, even the aesthetics are great for an easy difficulty!

Light Insane

SPOILER
00:07:553 (3) - this has no presence even when my music was all the way down to 20% try increasing volume a bit?
00:22:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this seems a little bit too simple for a light insane wouldn't you say so?
00:36:503 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - nothing i just like this while playing through it



Hmmm that's all i saw within those two difficulties, there isnt that much to correct anymore, easy is already perfect btw

Also dragon type is life, and i like them lyrcs on that storyboard

Good luck! :)
DivineEnigma
330 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

Zxozmo wrote:

From my modding queue!

So here i go~

Easy

I'm sorry to say but
SPOILER
This difficulty is already perfect with the hitsounds and all!
I literally found no problem, even the aesthetics are great for an easy difficulty!

Light Insane

SPOILER
00:07:553 (3) - this has no presence even when my music was all the way down to 20% try increasing volume a bit? i'll message Syrax to see about this since I'm not sure if it's fine to make this 5% volume since it'd be consider inaudible, giving no feedback while playing
00:22:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this seems a little bit too simple for a light insane wouldn't you say so? it's fine imo
00:36:503 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - nothing i just like this while playing through it :)



Hmmm that's all i saw within those two difficulties, there isnt that much to correct anymore, easy is already perfect btw

Also dragon type is life, and i like them lyrcs on that storyboard

Good luck! :)
thank you for the mod!~
Cheri
1,770 posts
Joined November 2014
Cheri
Oh dear my gd still exist! I literally forgot this and I never get notifications emails when there is a post

lucky there isn't any mods for me yet haha

I haven't change anything at least yet - just letting ya know that I will remember this and will do some polishing

WIP - I am going to update this post with the a refresh version of my gd!

Edit: Here is the updated GD with minor changes

I notice for some reason that there was 2 blues of the exact same color (or was really close to being the same color) so I had to change it

UPDATE
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 57728
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 38903
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:V
TitleUnicode:Ｖ
Artist:Yusuke
ArtistUnicode:遊助
Creator:DivineEnigma
Version:DJ Lucky's Insane
Source:ポケットモンスター ＸＹ
Tags:volt （ボルト） v / jikyuu 850 yen no santa claus pokemon xy o-moei dj_lucky syraxaxojaxco hazu-
BeatmapID:1028421
BeatmapSetID:470384

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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 F,1,0,803,0,1
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[Colours]
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Combo2 : 200,0,0
Combo3 : 255,40,40
Combo4 : 0,0,200
Combo5 : 130,130,255
Combo6 : 255,255,128

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