Surono wrote:

thanks ayy, yep and dont hurry... dont speedrank pls lul. wait me for a week if you want me nominate this map.. yeah np wait for 1 month thats good :"D because i did silly mistakes as BN before.... I need to becareful and try to understand how this system works for more. your map good tho <3

can you reduce all SVs to normal? ( reduce every SVs to -10 and add x0.90 in begining.. every normal SVs is slow part right? change to x0.90 ok)

hope 1 of your maps get ranked/graveyard so I can push forward this, good luck.

Surono wrote:

good, seems some of your maps will graveyard but instead you buy suptag? X"D

I will check this map again on wednesday.

Surono wrote:

A7X Bubbled, Good Luck.

#1

frukoyurdakul wrote:

I am not sure but when i play this map with OD = 8,4 (HR equvialent of OD = 6), after the last kiai I hit all the notes late, which means the notes are coming early. Specifically after 04:42:700 - this point. I can't tell the main reason of it, but when i play this map i came to that spot with 99.4% acc and dropped to 97 before the BPM change. I'd be glad if you check the BPM or offset. I forgot change the sv lol. For me the timing is fine

Plus, minor suggestions about the map. If you accept any of these, remember changing the other related sections too.

01:13:637 (49) - Just because of the guitar pitch change, I don't think this finisher works here because there is no crash cymbal sound or anything. I think you need to remove the finisher on it. I do not focus on crash climbal, also I usually use in the tone of the guitar and vocal. In this case both are present, therefore I will continue to maintain.

01:20:044 (91) - I believe this can be filled with a finisher, because 01:21:294 (102) - this, 01:25:044 (132) - this and 01:26:294 (143) - this note is filled with a finisher. To do that, i suggest removing the previous note (01:19:965 (90) - this one) to maintain consistency on the map. Because, the sounds are exactly the same. If you accept this, remember changing the other sections too. Sure. I thought about this, applied.

As you are following drums here, 01:38:794 (216,217) - these should be 1/3, 01:39:106 (218,219,220) - these should be in 1/4 due to the hi-hat sounds. You can deny the 2nd one because it can break the map's general structure, but if you can change first ones to 1/3, it'll change nothing since you used 1/3 sounds only at the beginning. I start 1/3 from here 01:39:106 - because I listen the hithat in 1/3 (as said Surono). Also I based in the STD version and it's 1/3 from here. This 01:38:794 (215,216) - is the guitar pitch, for consistence with 00:58:794 (214,215) -, so I keep

PS: No kudos.

Surono wrote:

my opinion about this map

the mapper tried applied style like to fill finisher on vocal, its something interesting to play imo. longstream at end spot are mostly rarely to fill finish bcus some cymbal are weaks/faded I guess? and yeah 01:21:294 - thats finish for emphasized guitar, have high impact. 1/3 are not start from there bcus the mapper wanted to follow the hithat from 01:39:106 - here and 01:38:950 - this note for guitar right? 01:39:028 - seems over for hithat if this added with that guitar 01:38:950 - *ddk* It's exactly what you said, you're right

the problem, 04:42:544 - 04:42:700 - . these alteration SVs.. seems overlap, I suggest to 04:42:544 - delete this sv and 04:42:700 - change this to normal sv. but idk its off or not but when I play it yes at accuracy not stable. I not good at timing but you can check that. I had forgotten to change the speed of that sv. I don't delete the sv 04:42:544 - because this cut the kiai like 02:20:044 - . Only I change the sv to x1.00

call me again to repair bubble when you have replied Fruko suggestion and have done to fix that problem.

Thanks for suggestions

Raiden wrote:

vengado sietedoblar

[caos]
00:48:950 (12) - mejor que esto sea un don, la estructura de triple kat la has usado cuando la guitarra hacía notas más altas antes. Aquí simplemente se queda estable
00:49:419 (18,19,20,21,22) - acabar esto en kkddk suena más natural, la guitarra hace un 1/3 raro pero no tienes por qué representarlo si estás siguiendo los drums
01:30:356 (172) - a partir de aquí, recomiendo encarecidamente que cambies el ritmo y sigas la guitarra para no hacer tan monótono el mapa. Es decir, focaliza el ritmo en los red ticks

02:53:247 - esta parte tiene el snap mal. Es por el timing, las notas caen algo así (snap divisor 1/12):

Te diría que por playability puedes retenerlo tal y como lo tienes, pero por desgracia se va demasiado del timing

03:45:044 - Esta es probablemente una de las secciones más monótonas que he jugado en mi vida, lo dejo a tu criterio, pero yo variaría los patterns. Se me ha hecho eterno jugar esto.

04:48:012 (248,249,250) - Estas notas no caen al tempo, necesitan reset.
04:48:794 (251) - Esta nota cae en 04:48:833 -

para arreglar eso ^
04:48:064 - línea roja con 240 bpm y línea verde SVx0,8

entonces los 3 dons caerán en 04:48:064 - 04:48:126 - 04:48:189 - y el big K en 04:48:814 -

El pop es por el timing de esas 4 notas del final y por el 1/12. Pediré más opiniones a expertos en timing.

Raiden wrote:

vengado sietedoblar

[caos]
00:48:950 (12) - mejor que esto sea un don, la estructura de triple kat la has usado cuando la guitarra hacía notas más altas antes. Aquí simplemente se queda estable Me di cuenta de esto al escuchar varias veces y me di cuenta que es lo mismo que el primero sólo con un tono un poco más alto, modificado
00:49:419 (18,19,20,21,22) - acabar esto en kkddk suena más natural, la guitarra hace un 1/3 raro pero no tienes por qué representarlo si estás siguiendo los drums Claro, lo sentía algo inconsistente comparado a lo anterior, modificado
01:30:356 (172) - a partir de aquí, recomiendo encarecidamente que cambies el ritmo y sigas la guitarra para no hacer tan monótono el mapa. Es decir, focaliza el ritmo en los red ticks Hice un cambio aquí y en 00:50:044 - para poder seguir la guitarra y que tengan consistencia entre sí. Agregué triples don en esta parte 00:50:512 - y similar ya que es lo que más enfatiza de la guitarra a comparación de 00:50:825 (31) -. 00:51:762 (38,39,40,41,42,43) - Esto lo cambié ya que es lo mismo que hay en 00:36:606 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - pero con un tono más bajo. La única cosa como para variar las dos secciones es en 00:57:856 - y 01:37:856 - al invertir dkd y kdd, que lo hago para seguir la voz.

02:53:247 - esta parte tiene el snap mal. Es por el timing, las notas caen algo así (snap divisor 1/12):

Te diría que por playability puedes retenerlo tal y como lo tienes, pero por desgracia se va demasiado del timing Apliqué el cambio de timing de Bonsai

03:45:044 - Esta es probablemente una de las secciones más monótonas que he jugado en mi vida, lo dejo a tu criterio, pero yo variaría los patterns. Se me ha hecho eterno jugar esto. Traté de no overmappear mucho esa parte. Aunque si sigo el vocal no creo que se note, agregué algunos patrones para eso

04:48:012 (248,249,250) - Estas notas no caen al tempo, necesitan reset.
04:48:794 (251) - Esta nota cae en 04:48:833 -

para arreglar eso ^
04:48:064 - línea roja con 240 bpm y línea verde SVx0,8 Arreglado con el timing sugerido por Bonsai

entonces los 3 dons caerán en 04:48:064 - 04:48:126 - 04:48:189 - y el big K en 04:48:814 -

El pop es por el timing de esas 4 notas del final y por el 1/12. Pediré más opiniones a expertos en timing.

Raiden wrote:

baja el bg para que no se vean las letras y sólo se vea el logo de A7X

03:50:356 (412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421) - cadena de 1/2 demasiado larga, dale algo de vidilla
04:05:356 (551,552,553,554,555,556,557,558) - ^

eso es todo, mucho mejores las partes que eran monótonas

Surono wrote:

* 02:50:044 - change the sv to x0,95 ? to neat at reducing SVs I added SVs from here 02:49:419 - to decrease the velocity
* 02:53:467 - 02:53:774 - 02:54:091 - would kat this as alteration between 3plet and single notes, like you 05:04:007 - did for this part
* might you want 02:54:461 - 02:54:779 - add there kat since you applied with 3plet 1/6
* 05:22:807 - 05:23:007 - swap these and 05:23:307 - 05:23:707 - kat these, to emphasized snare and flow. 05:23:807 - the drum is stop here and 05:23:907 - this sounds are weak/faded 05:23:907 - you can delete this to be safe it with the finisher.

Raiden wrote:

0,0,"BG Chaos.jpg",0,-83 mejor

Raiden wrote:

04:48:992 (1) - snapea el final en 05:01:407 -
eso es todo

IamKwaN wrote:

Can you link me your source of metadata, please?

I could only find BLINDED IN CHAINS or Blind In Chains.
http://avengedsevenfold.com/albums/
http://store.warnermusic.com/warner-bro ... il-cd.html
https://images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com ... bRRuiL.jpg

IamKwaN wrote:

Can you link me your source of metadata, please?

I could only find BLINDED IN CHAINS or Blind In Chains.
http://avengedsevenfold.com/albums/
http://store.warnermusic.com/warner-bro ... il-cd.html
https://images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com ... bRRuiL.jpg