yongtw123 wrote:

Hi hi~

Overall:
I think offset 1217 could be better, but you may need to ask pro like kioukiou. Ok thx helping xD
Some sections' hitsounds are too quiet, volume up! D: I feel ok because my Osu! volume maybe? Hold on provisional
Note placement is more or less random. If you can make the patterns better, that'll be great. I put notes in N/H without grid I think it's well now Hold on provisional

[Easy]
Use consistent spacing. I see spacing fluctuating a lot. OMG some parts use a wrong DS
I don't really "feel" any rhythm in this diff. But describing what rhythm I'd have placed will be too much. It's hard to map easier diffs
I recommend you to improvise and find better a more intuitive rhythm. For start, use more white ticks if possible.
Limited modding...

00:53:108 (3,4) - doesn't sound very nice, find a better rhythm? fix
02:07:095 (3) - hmmm, maybe you can make it not repeating that many times? fix

[Normal]
01:51:686 (3) - too close? fix
03:16:011 (5) - shorten to previous white tick may be better? Following vocal

If you can improve some slider placements, good diff!

[Hard]
Suggest Circle Size +1 But i like original size Hold on provisional
02:11:757 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - make these streamline I like make stream placement "randomly" xD
02:24:527 (5) - bad placement... don't hide it lol It's readable imo o.o Hold on provisional

If you can improve some slider placements, another good diff!


Overall is okay, but I'd like to see a better [Easy]. Harrrrrrd to map Easy
I hold back my star, but I will recheck later when you update. Thx advices!

wmfchris wrote:

[Hard]
3:33:443 (3) x:360 y:224 => (2,3,4) equiliateral triangle fix

不用grid snap我也沒啥可以看，嗯 (逃

star~ thx~

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. 这个很早就想找个时间看的, 现在正好
2. BG锯齿感明显 从高像素到低像素的话 最好用PS之类 我太懒了233

[Hard]:

1. OD6/7 AR7 用AR8太鬼畜了吧 +_+ AR8是刚改的 个人觉得不错 先保留
2. 00:03:065 (T) - 这条无音量的绿线意义不明... 不是silence slider咩……
3. 00:35:876 (5) - 不如在00:35:673和00:36:078 后面出现的情况是压钢琴可以理解 这里不太懂 听着音乐就想到这样下了 我也不太懂
4. 00:53:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这种spacing不太适合(而且目前OD6AR8的配置很不好读) 可以考虑四角跳之类 同上 Hard里这样的还好吧(我觉得)
5. 01:53:105 (T) - 这里开始可以切Normal了 以及, soft的clap不适合这歌 fix
6. 02:05:065 (2) - 同00:35:876 (5) 同
7. 02:45:504 (5) - 不适合...考虑删掉 fix
8. 03:17:430 (T) - 切Normal fix
9. 03:54:727 (1,2,3,4) - 很堵 同00:53:714 (1,2,3,4,5)
10. 04:16:619 (8) - 提前到04:16:416 末尾clap取消 然后04:17:024加note(with clap) 不错 fix

[Normal]:

1. soft-clap最好不要加 效果不好 soft~normal的转换参考Hard的 fix
2. 02:12:768 (2,3) - spacing fix
3. 03:46:822 (T) - 这个break没必要 (别偷懒 lol) 被发现了 fix

[Easy]:

1. soft~normal, clap什么的... fix
2. 02:53:105 (1) - 到02:57:565好了 fix

以上全部只是建议 真心不会音效

果断星 thx~

jyjdia wrote:

kiddly wrote:

[General]
副歌部分的clap用这个我觉得不错:
[attachment=2:b9345]normal-hitclap.rar[/attachment:b9345] thx!

[Easy]
00:48:345 - 01:27:466: 音量拉到5 √
后面一段副歌一样. √
00:55:338 (5) - 建议改成这样:
[attachment=0:b9345]1.png[/attachment:b9345] √
至于slider和note的比例自行定夺.
01:49:865 (3,4) - 新手是看不懂这节奏的,建议换成slider. √
01:57:771 (1) - 在整拍01:57:973开始,听上去更好. √
还有就是一个小建议:像easy这种节奏很散的,尽量从白线开始比较好. 真心不会作E

[Normal]
和easy一样的,副歌音量拉到5比较好. √
00:48:220 - 00:48:260: 这么放的话很容易因为打不准出现奇怪的声音,拉开点对到时间轴上就好了. √

[Hard]
我一次就SS了所以没什么要mod的 队长威武
03:44:595 - 在这个地方我真的很想点一下:3 √
03:56:149 - 同上. √
04:22:399 (1) - 其实好像没有这个spinner一定要存在的原因.. 送分手段
thx~

abalee wrote:

use a silenced sliderslide.wav and custom sample set instead of 0% volume timing part please :/ √ thanks!!

Hard:
Do not use more that 3 slider speeds in the map. √ stupid mistake
add 1 second audio lead-in. √

00:13:987 (4,5) - spacing? √
00:20:473 (1,2) - this spacing make me missed :/ √
02:10:541 (2,3) - If this is a jump, it doesn't fit at all.
02:55:541 (2) - hidden note? I think it should not covered under the slider. √

normal:
add 1 second audio lead-in. √
02:11:757 (1) - IMO it should not stack under the previous slider :/ √
03:17:027 (6) - add new combo √
03:18:446 (1) - remove new combo √

Easy:
Err.. check your combo please...I suggest that set them alongside musical phrases. √ Err..
and I am not sure should this difficulty set the same audio lead-in like others'...IMO it should not...

还有就是请稍微等一下，十天的话稍微有点急 :/ hmmm.. 十天是神马?

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Remove countdown in all diff? oops √
  
  Remove all lead-in? The song already has 1 sec blank... 1 sec Normal&Hard
  
  Same stacking leniency?
  
  02:15:912~02:53:108 - Volume 50%? Some parts seem too quiet for me... √

Just some suggestions

[Easy]

• 01:04:460 (1) - Clap end? √
  01:18:244 (2,4) - Soft whistle? ×

[Normal]

• 00:42:162 (6,1,2) - Too hard for me >_< √ change 1/2 slider
  01:06:689 (1) - Remove new combo? √
  01:57:771 (7) - New combo here instead of 01:57:973 (1) ? √

[Hard]

>_>

Nice map =w=
Have my star~ thx!