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Diasios
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Seibei4211
BPM: 139.75
Offset: 876

Easy
00:50:67 (2,3) - I think most, if not all, of the duplets like this should be 1 1/2 beats apart instead of 2. Having the 2nd note land on the stressed syllabe (1/2 beat to the left) sounds more natural. Also makes the map a little more interesting. Just to be thorough, I'll list the rest, too.
00:54:10 (2,3) - ^
00:57:54 (2,3) - ^
01:04:41 (2,3) - ^
01:07:84 (2,3) - ^
01:11:28 (2,3) - ^
01:39:61 (4) - This slider ends kind of awkwardly. I'd say ending it 1/2 beat earlier, and I think it sounds even better if you make it repeat once, too.
02:33:70 (1,2) - Same as 00:50:67
02:37:14 (1,2) - ^
02:40:57 (1,2) - ^
03:22:64 (4) - Same as 01:39:61.
I'm sure that last break could get mapped a bit. It's pretty long and it doesn't need to be.

Normal
01:39:62 (5) - Same suggestion as Easy.
02:07:30 (1,1) - I think this might be a little too ninja-y for Normal. I think it'd be a little more appropriate to just make it one spinner like the others.
That break's still kinda big. Same suggestion as Easy.

You should make a Hard difficulty. I loved your Hymn map and this song could easily be made into a Hard map. :]
Topic Starter
Diasios
Seibei4211
I don't think you understood what I meant about those duplets.

00:54:11 (2,3,4) - For all of the notes that you changed like this, delete the 2nd note (the 3, in this case) and move the 3rd now, (now 3) and move that note 1/2 beat to the left. Then respace them.

Anyway, I still think you should do a Hard for this. It's such a cool song. Oh, and I'm not sure about my offset. You'll want a 2nd opinion on that. The beats are so weird. So anyway, this map's close to bubble, but not quite. A star should put this baby on the map. Also, a star is appropriate if you're gonna do a Hard, which you totally should cause it'd be awesome. Hopefully.
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Diasios
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Diasios
I'm here!!!
If you have time, check this beatmap, please :)
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Diasios
I don't think that this beatmap is so "ugly"
Check it, trust me. It's nice and I would like you rank it. Please. I have worked so much on this beatmap
Seibei4211
So I have no real problems with Easy or Normal. I'm still wondering about that offset though. Also, at this point, I'm not just requesting a Hard difficulty, I'm strongly suggesting it.

Edit: I never said it was ugly. What?
Topic Starter
Diasios

Seibei4211 wrote:

Edit: I never said it was ugly. What?
I spoke in general :)
I have written that because writing in that way the other members of BAT would be decided to check this beatmap XD
Anyway... thank you :lol:
Seibei4211
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Diasios
FIXED
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Diasios
I don't know what I do...
I must:
1) to leave the HARD ROCK! difficuty as it is
2) fix the HARD ROCK! difficulty
3) delete the HARD ROCK! difficulty

I think that the second option it's the best...
What do you think of it?
Seibei4211
Either delete it or remap it completely. It's a lazy way to make a harder difficulty.
Topic Starter
Diasios

Seibei4211 wrote:

Either delete it or remap it completely. It's a lazy way to make a harder difficulty.
Well, you're right.
I have decided to delete the difficulty, because I don't want lose other time. Three difficulties are enough.
Now, this beatmap can be ranked?
Seibei4211
Not so fast. The beatmaps are good, but I'm not confident about the timing I gave you. BPM looks good, but I can't find a good offset. If I can find an offset I like, I can bubble it. Oh, and you used a lot of whistles. I would go back and get rid of a bunch for a smoother ranking.

Edit: Yeah, see, I was way off. Offset: 860. Just tweak the whistles a bit and I'll bubble this.
Topic Starter
Diasios
FIXED
Seibei4211
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Diasios
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Seibei4211
Hmm... Go into this song's folder, delete the skin pieces, then Full Submit.
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Diasios

Seibei4211 wrote:

Hmm... Go into this song's folder, delete the skin pieces, then Full Submit.
I have already done this.
Look:

See??
you can try to delete my beatmap from your song's folder, and later download this beatmap
P.S.= I have convert this image to jpg because the bpm format isn't good
Seibei4211
Oh. I guess that was my bad. Well, in that case, bubble.

Topic Starter
Diasios

Seibei4211 wrote:

Oh. I guess that was my bad. Well, in that case, bubble.
Ok, thanks :)
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Diasios
I'm waiting (I'm not in a hurry XD)
I'm joking...however, I wait for other opinions, and for other evaluations.
kingcobra52
Easy:

You might want to consider bringing down the slider velocity a bit. Might be a bit too fast for beginners.

01:30:59 (1,2,3) - Shift these a full beat forward on the timeline (to the next white tick). Distance snap them afterwards of course.
02:08:80 (1,1,1,1) - Delete the beats, shift the 2 spinners 1/2 beat back (where the beats were), and extend them by 1/2 beat.

Other than that, looks pretty good.

Normal:

No complaints.

Hard:

01:58:92 (1,1) - Just have 1 spinner here.
02:23:18 (4,5), 02:24:90 (4,5), and 02:26:62 (4,5) - Normally you're not suppose to have beats under sliders because you can't see whether it's really a beat or another slider. Since you had the same rhythm before though and I didn't mess up on it, you don't have to change it. Another BAT might ask that you do though, just to warn you.

Just some minor things. Fix and I'll rebubble. :)
Topic Starter
Diasios
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Seibei4211
While I did like how the beats were before, this new setup isn't bad either, so yeah, no complaints. Rebubble.
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Diasios
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Diasios
Can someone check this beatmap?
Can someone give me some suggestions? (if necessary)
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Diasios
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Diasios
:|
kingcobra52
No further issues.

Ranked. :)
Topic Starter
Diasios

kingcobra52 wrote:

No further issues.

Ranked. :)
Thanks :)
OnizukaEikichi
One of my first maps in osu. I very enjoyed playing it, thanks. Although i'd like more difficulties for this map .-.
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