from #modreqs
The map plays fine, however aesthetics really need to be improved, a lot of the sliders just look kinda weird compared to the ones you see in ranked maps. Also, the hard difficulty should be remapped because it is a little too hard for its intended difficulty.
Easy
00:13:095 (1) - move to x:248 y:308 for better spacing
00:14:466 (3,4) - You should improve these two sliders (suggestion)
00:15:838 (1,2,3) - space these out a little more, they seem a bit too close
00:19:952 (3,4) - ^
00:21:323 (1,2) - these look kinda strange (suggestion)
00:25:438 (3) - move to x:244 y:344 for better spacing
00:46:009 (1,2) - sliders look kinda weird (suggestion)
00:14:466 (3,4) - You should improve these two sliders (suggestion)
00:15:838 (1,2,3) - space these out a little more, they seem a bit too close
00:19:952 (3,4) - ^
00:21:323 (1,2) - these look kinda strange (suggestion)
00:25:438 (3) - move to x:244 y:344 for better spacing
00:46:009 (1,2) - sliders look kinda weird (suggestion)
Normal
00:13:780 (3) - Make this a normal slider point, it looks better imo
00:20:809 (4) - Make this less curved
00:22:695 (3) - You should change the shape of this slider (suggestion)
00:25:952 (5) - This is kind of a weird slider, maybe add a slider point in the middle
00:34:181 (5) - ^ but maybe try a red slider point, since it's a bigger slider
00:38:809 (4) - for better looks, CTRL+J this, then move it back to where it was (if you used distance snap for this diff, then use that to put it back where it was)
00:39:666 (3) - I don't see how this follows the rhythm, you should change this
00:20:809 (4) - Make this less curved
00:22:695 (3) - You should change the shape of this slider (suggestion)
00:25:952 (5) - This is kind of a weird slider, maybe add a slider point in the middle
00:34:181 (5) - ^ but maybe try a red slider point, since it's a bigger slider
00:38:809 (4) - for better looks, CTRL+J this, then move it back to where it was (if you used distance snap for this diff, then use that to put it back where it was)
00:39:666 (3) - I don't see how this follows the rhythm, you should change this
Hard
00:09:838 (4) - You should make this paralell to the slider at 00:08:980 (1)
00:12:066 (2) - Curve this slider
00:14:123 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:781 (2) - Curve this slider
00:26:809 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I really think this could be improved a lot. You should remove the streams here, as it really pushes the boundaries for a hard difficulty, making it almost as much as an insane difficulty (3.78 iirc). You should also space out the repeat sliders a little more.
00:36:066 (1,2) - Move these a bit closer together, and curve the slider maybe
00:43:266 (1) - This is a weird looking slider, try something different
00:48:752 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing I said for 00:26:809 .
00:53:038 (1,2,3) - Second circle isn't centered with the first and third.
00:12:066 (2) - Curve this slider
00:14:123 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:781 (2) - Curve this slider
00:26:809 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I really think this could be improved a lot. You should remove the streams here, as it really pushes the boundaries for a hard difficulty, making it almost as much as an insane difficulty (3.78 iirc). You should also space out the repeat sliders a little more.
00:36:066 (1,2) - Move these a bit closer together, and curve the slider maybe
00:43:266 (1) - This is a weird looking slider, try something different
00:48:752 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing I said for 00:26:809 .
00:53:038 (1,2,3) - Second circle isn't centered with the first and third.
Insane
00:13:095 (1) - Even this out a little bit, it kinda looks weird the way the slider points are placed
00:17:552 (2) - This would be a good replacement for this slider
00:53:895 (5) - Move the red point to x:272 y:264 for a better looking slider
00:17:552 (2) - This would be a good replacement for this slider
00:53:895 (5) - Move the red point to x:272 y:264 for a better looking slider
The map plays fine, however aesthetics really need to be improved, a lot of the sliders just look kinda weird compared to the ones you see in ranked maps. Also, the hard difficulty should be remapped because it is a little too hard for its intended difficulty.