Astarte wrote:
#modreqs
Nice seeing a new vnmese mapper ;>
Some advice only here, not really a full modGeneral
- Would say offset is 725
- Avoid 100% hs level as it's really loud (and annoying)
- Set a preview point
- Lower mp3 bitrate
- Make sure bg is in 16:9 or 4:3 only
- Is metadata correct?
- 02:12:312 - make sure all your control points are snapped
Normal
- 00:19:358 (2) - 00:22:994 (2) - for easy normal, you should keep a constant distance snap
- 00:17:085 (1) - for easier diffs, try to nc every measure, consistently. every measure = every 1st and 3rd big white ticks
- 00:26:858 (1) - avoid repeating more than once as it's sudden
- 00:26:858 (1,2) - you're following vocals consistently, which is nice. But, I'd say following vocals in easier diffs isn't always good, especially with "random" vocals like this song (02:47:994 (1,2,3) - way too hard for a normal). I'd advise you to map white ticks, that is the basic rhythm of the song instead of vocals (unless vocal is extremely important then switch to it)
- 00:31:176 (3,1) - overlaps are allowed in normal but avoid ugly ones like these
- 00:54:358 (1) - spinner is way too short, try to aim at least half a measure in easy normal and a beat in harder diffs
Hard
Basically same stuff with normal
- 00:20:949 (6) - avoid curving short sliders too much cuz they're ugly
- 01:12:085 (1,2,3,4,5) - avoid hard streams like this in hard. I'd use ripple sliders instead
- 00:15:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try to keep some rhythm consistency. if music is the same, your rhythm should be the same (pattern can change however imo)
Overall, this song is quite hard to map, but not entirely bad for a new mapper. GjInsane
generally try to fix what i talked in N and H, also improve you flow and aesthetics too: t/86329
- 00:15:835 (3,4) - triplets shouldn't end on red ticks, but white ticks only to emphasize that white tick. Also, try not to overmap, especially at intro where it's not as intensive
- 02:05:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - for harder diffs i'd advise you to break away from ds a bit to emphasize strong notes. otherwise it's boring
I'd recommend you to contact this guy (forum or in-game pm) so he could invite you to oursmallvnmese mapping group where we could help you more with mapping ;>
GL
Thanks a lot, I will have a look at it