SherryCherry wrote:

yo from my qe
LOL Monstata's triangle click
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00:00:661 (1,2) - a 1/2 slider instead since it fits the vocals and instruments a lot better I think it fits the vocals well.
00:03:451 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:41:649 (3,4,5,6,7) - cntrl+g ? It plays fine now imo.
00:47:230 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - floret :3
00:52:463 (1,5) - stack, you staсked earlier. 00:52:463 (1) - is stack to 00:50:893 (1) - , if you want me to stack 00:53:509 (5) - on the tail of that it will be an uneven hexagon.
01:42:695 (6,3) - bad overlap imo I think it is okay, might be wrong, need confirmation because imo it is ok.
02:15:835 (1,1,1,1,1,1,2) - Unnecessary NC I use the NCs for combo colour effect.
02:29:265 (1) - ^ I use the repeated NC's to emphasise the violin in the background.
03:50:893 (4) - nc Previously I NC'ed every bar, but for this part it is slow so I NC'ed every vocal line.
03:53:684 (4) - ^ ^
04:17:405 (2,3,4) - Illuminati:on :P

05:13:385 (3) - nc Oooo I missed this, NC'ed!
Good luck, lol. Lol thank you xd

iYiyo wrote:

Hey! here's the m4m we agreed in-game

*Before starting, I don't know what happened but maybe u updated or the NC swaped somehow, but there're some points I mention about NC that are just wrong, my bad, but i'm too lazy to recheck all of them and change them. Hmm it's okay I'll take note.

• 
  [General]

1. Not an issue but you could try to use another BG since it's the same from captin1 mapset. Yes, I'll let Del - the person who might SB my map decide on the BG, thanks for pointing that out :>.
2. The hitsounding from 00:28:567 - is a little bit crowded of claps. I highly suggest you to add claps in the 2 & 4 white ticks. Try it! I think it is already added?
3. nice piano hitsounds c: Thank you c:
   
   [Desire]
4. 00:01:881 (2,3) - blanket with the same distance u did 00:01:358 (1,2) - here. Fixed!
5. 00:06:242 (1,3) - blanket better. Fixed!
6. 00:07:637 (5) - Add NC there and del 00:08:335 (1) - this? also for the next sections. I think my NCs are fine like these. They change when the melody change. No fix for now.
7. 00:07:637 (5,6) - For this part you could make this into a mini jump to emphasize de music and this beat 00:07:812 - It plays fine for now imo, no fix.
8. 00:13:393 (6) - From the previous but you weren't doing a slider for this, so I recommend you to make this a circle or make the previous sections also a sliders. This also repeat a few more times. I think it is better to have a variety of rhythm because it might be very boring with just circles. No fix.
9. 00:22:899 (4,1) - blanket better. Should be better.
10. 00:39:033 (1,2,3) - maybe try to do this a a reverse arrow just like the previous ones. I kinda feel this section 00:39:294 (2,3) - a bit weird since I don't hear a triplet here. I think it is fine. It follows a sound - maybe piano? - and I think it is fine.
11. 00:49:498 (1,1,1,1) - This part is a bit weird imo, because the SV change is too slow, you're going from 0,7 to 0,8 then 0,9 to 1,0. In-game you cannot see a clearly difference, so I suggest you 1) to increase it in x0,2 per change 2) 00:49:498 (1,1) - make those & 00:50:195 (1,1) - those have the same SV but with more difference between them or 3) not change the SV for any slider since the music is not that strong and the vocals are more intuitive to follow. Isn't that how the music is getting more intensed? I feel that it is the right speed for all 4 sliders as the music get more to the climax.
12. 00:52:463 (1,5) - stack? I didn't stack it because if I do 00:52:463 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - will be a distorted hexagon.
13. 01:00:661 (1,2,3) - since here you're using the same distance, I recommend you to do the same for 01:01:183 (4,5,6,7) - this and therefore stack 5 where the 2 is. I like the flow now + I don't understand why stack 5 to 2, it breaks the flow and gives an unnecessary jump.
14. 01:07:637 (1,2,3) - here you use some big DS but then you suddenly make 01:09:033 (1,2) - this low spaced transition, so i recommend you to add more distance between those. Stuck between a rock and a hard place. I have no idea how I can change this pattern, I will reconsider it when someone gives me a more suitable pattern.
15. 01:11:823 (1) - Just my opinion, but you could make a slow slider from 01:11:823 - to 01:12:434 - & then add a new slider with x1,2 or so 01:12:521 - here. Would fit better imo. I like slider arts D:
16. 01:13:219 - for the next 2 kiais you don't use green in the combo colours, so I suggest you to not use it here either. I did.
17. 01:20:719 (4,5) - maybe rearrange the pattern a bit and make this a triplet? Sorry, I don't hear a triplet here.
18. 01:26:126 (2) - if you start this with a circle and then a slider would fit better imo. Well, actually I'm following the melody in the background instead of the vocal. Sorry :p
19. 01:51:416 (3,4) - maybe try this with a slider? just like what you did 01:48:626 (3) - here. 01:48:626 (3) - For this slider there is a sound in the song to follow but for these two notes 01:51:416 (3,4) - it isn't the same sound, hence I'd prefer using circles here.
20. 01:55:777 (3) - why NC? Aesthetic purposes. If it's unrankable I'll change it. If not, keep.
21. Since the previous stream was purple, maybe swap 01:58:219 (1,1) - the NC from those, so it's not confusing going from light purple to light blue~ Probably the NC issue you were talking about earlier? No fix.
22. 02:09:033 (1) - make into 1/2 slider + circle? 02:09:207 - There really isn't a sound here for me to follow, so if I do that I might be overmapping.
23. 02:11:649 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - All this section seem to have inconsistence in NC, since it goes from dark grey to red and then suddenly purple? Maybe try to alternate dark grey & red, or just pure dark grey. I already fixed this earlier. Well not fixed but it is already this from the start :p
24. 02:20:195 (1) - why green NC for this section? Do the same NC colours you did 00:28:567 - here instead. -
25. 03:08:684 (4,5) - stack? If I stacked those notes, the hexagon will be distorted.
26. 03:38:161 (1) - maybe it would fit better if you make this to start with a circle and then a slider/sliderreverse or whatever. the same goes for the next ones~ No change for now, this part of the song is super calm - and sad - and it serves as a 'break' to the players, so sliders are easier as it doersn't ruin their accuracy or combo.
27. 04:26:126 (1) - make this SV change higher? I mean it would give a lot more emphasis. maybe try with x1,4~x1,5. it would fit great imo. This part of the song is reaching it's climax, and to put the SV at 1.5 is overkill.
28. 04:53:684 (1,1) - why single circles? maybe making them 1/2 slider would be better. I'm emphasising the climax of the song.
29. 05:10:642 (2) - since you're changing the bpm u should add a NC here too. I think it is fine, it really isn't a huge NC change and no point repeating NCs there. :p

Okay, that's all from me! Hope it helped Good luck! Thank you!

nanda2009 wrote:

Hi from M4M

Really good map lol, it's been so long that I saw 5 min map without being an expert diff

1. normal-sliderslide14 is not used at all. Deleted.
2. I'm not good at it, but I notice that some of this piano hitsounds are a bit delayed, from RC They don't feel delayed to me, but I'll ask someone good at hitsound to double check :3
   
   

   Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms, unless there's a special purpose. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.

   I'm sure normal-hitwhistle10.wav and normal-hitwhistle5.wav are delayed, but I'm not that sure, you should check other hitsounds as well!
3. 00:49:847 (1) - Slider end unsnapped Opps totally missed that, nice catch though!
4. 02:06:765 (4) - offscreen, maybe you can stack it to 2 and make it blanket towards 5? I shifted the whole section up - keeping the blanket as original - and fixed some placements thereafter.
5. 01:11:823 (1) - God that looks ugly, if you want to make a slider art, you can do something with wiggles on slider instead of this, you can do better like 03:03:451 (1) No, the point of this slider art is it changes flow when the vocal's pitch changes. Because it's nice and the primary aim is that, no change at all.
6. 01:13:567 (2,3,4) - Tbh it'll play better if this moves outwards the center like 1. So you can do this http://imgur.com/AFzbWx7 looks nice doesnt it? Nope. I can't really confirm, but personally I want to all to be 3 of those sliders to be facing towards the middle - because that was somehow my natural instinct to map that part. The flow is generally ok too, so no change.
7. 05:10:570 - after this section, the timing seems off, you might want to check again Good catch. That means the timing for the ranked version is wrong, because I stole the timing points there D: Personally I'm not blessed with timing abilities, so I'll ask a good timer to check it Thanks for pointing that out
8. 05:10:428 (1) - sliderend supposed to be at 05:10:570, in fact, maybe you can just change it to a circle at 05:10:570 instead. Nope, I playback'ed it a few times and it's suppose to end at the point it is now. However, I changed 05:11:817 (5) - to a 1/8 snap because it is the right snap but not sure if it affects playability - atleast it doesn't affect mine.

Sorry for the short mod, you can further improve the map of course but this pretty good, really fun to play. I'm a bit dissapointed that you only put piano hitsounds at refrain, there are some places that are good like 04:03:800 - 04:24:207. Actually I want to hitsound that part too, but I can't transcrip the whole song myself. And furthermore, nobody has uploaded the full version of this song on youtube or anywhere else. And yes, the chords in the kiai are all improvised by myself. I hope it sounds good now, I'm open to hitsound suggestions!

GL

General

1. Woah this is beautifully mapped.

Mod

1. 00:06:242 (1,3) - Blanket.
2. 00:22:637 (3,1) - Blanket.
3. 00:36:940 (3,1) - Blanket D:
4. 00:39:730 (1) - If you move this up a bit it would look better imo.
5. 01:18:451 (6) - Angle this upwards so it goes with the direction of 5 to 6.
6. 01:25:602 (5,2) - Fix the stack on those two, it's a little off.
7. 01:49:847 (3,5) - I think blanketing the three sliders would make it look nicer.
8. 02:14:440 - Are all of these NCs necessary?
9. 02:47:230 (4,1) - I feel that there's an opportunity for a blanket but I'm not sure how without messing up the next notes.
10. 02:50:893 (1) - Curve this upwards, I think it would look nice.
11. 02:53:335 (7) - Perhaps move the red point to the center?
12. 03:03:451 (1) - Should put the 3rd red point right on the tick.
13. 03:13:742 (4,7) - Blanket.
14. 03:17:754 (2,3) - Blanket pls.
15. 04:56:474 (1,4) - This one too, blanket.

S A V E R Y wrote:

I can't find any problem...
[ThE DiFF]
00:17:056 (3,4) - Ctrl + G (Not bad for play) I like the flow now, as there's a jump here 00:17:230 (4,1) - which emphasises the beat. Sorry but... no fix ;w;

Wishkey wrote:

Heyo!

small mod since I saw this on pending and its egoist Egoist :3

Desire

1. 00:07:288 (4) - 1.3ds I probably missed this as I blanket the previous slider, fixed now!
2. 00:16:881 (2,3) - whistles for the bass like 00:19:672 (2,3) - or just remove them from 00:19:672 (2,3) - since theyre weaker then the others? Actually, there is a certain sound in the background that I'm hitsounding this whistle too, not sure if you meant that 'bass'. But the ones here 00:19:672 (2,3) - are more distinct than the ones here 00:16:881 (2,3) , so I skipped that. Furthermore, as I'm mapping to the melody, I skipped this beat 00:16:533 , so whistling just 00:16:881 (2) - will make the whole hitsound seem very awkward.
3. 01:01:533 (6) - could stack this with the end of 00:59:788 (3) - and place it in your grid while keeping the flow similar, since its one of the few combos that isn't grid placed in the map I don't get your explanation, but I like the flow you suggests. There is a jump 01:01:533 (6,7) - to represent the high pitch melody. Thank you for pointing that out, and changed!
4. 01:20:370 (2,5) - would avoid this overlap since its kinda out of place with how clean the rest of the kiai is, maybe use 1.8 and 2.1 ds instead of 1.7/2.0 or something to avoid it This one is a hard one. I tried various ways to change this pattern, because I noticed the ugly overlap too. One notable one is making 01:20:370 (2,3,4,5) - a square flow, but it will look very awkward. No change for now, but I would need suggestions to fix it in the future.
5. 01:54:381 (1) - could NC this if you want for a bit better readability for the change in direction for this pattern Readability wise, I get your point, however suddenly shifting to NC in the middle of 2 crotchet beats would seem very weird and inconsistent. I'd prefer keeping the NCs consistent for now. No fix.
6. 01:57:870 (10) - finish (+whisle) Oh wow I totally missed that, fixed and thank you for pointing that out!
7. 03:08:335 (3,4) - ayy fck it nazi stack a bit off I'm not really sure what you meant. Assuming you meant this 03:09:905 (5) - , well I want to keep the hexagon pattern, and if I stack it to the slider end, it would be distorted.
8. 03:26:823 (3,4,1) -linear flow for that build down to (1) doesn't really make it stand out imo why not place it something like 108/356 so you have a sharper turn and it fits with the previous pattern True. I played around with the rotation function and I made a new pattern. Hope it's better. C:
9. 04:18:626 (5) - can put this bit more up left to make that V line for this combo I don't really see the 'V line', but I shifted it up as I find the jump suits the piano.
10. 04:38:335 (1,2,3,4) - bit weird to make (4) instead of (1) the different shape when 2,3,4 all have the same piano and 1 is the odd one out, but plays fine tho Didn't thought for the odd one out shape before, but I think it is fine like you said, so no change for now.

Really clean map, awesome piano tuning gl with ranked! Thank you for checking this map C:

_IxApplePie_ wrote:

M4M from ur queue!
Since your map is already so nice *_* these are just some suggestions to make it better!

Desire

1. 00:06:242 (1,3) - blanket it so it looks nicer I think it is already blanket, but I shifted it and it should be better.
2. 00:07:288 (4,5,6) - how about making this into a triangle shape with the slider end? would look much better I had to shift the whole first portion to make this. It wasn't a triangle with the slider end because I had to blanket the first slider you told me to, but now it should be fixed.
3. 00:58:044 (1,2) - eee why these two smaller distance than 00:56:998 (4,5,6) - ? I originally wanted to stack 00:58:393 (2) - on 00:55:428 (3) , but now it is higher DS. C:
4. 01:10:777 (2) - maybe put this at x : 256 l y : 76 for more equal distance between 01:10:428 (1,1) - as you know, the beats are all 1/4? No reason to put it much further/nearer Okay!
5. 01:35:370 (6) - would be much better if these were clickable >_<!! Actually I think a kickslider works here, it was the first thing I thought of when mapping this part. No fix for now.
6. 01:47:579 (5,1,2,3) - using it on red tick is quite weird imo, as your white tick has the sounds (hs) and it's most encourage to be clickable on the sounding part... I understand your point of view, I felt it too, but I wanted to map to the melody in the background.
7. 02:11:649 (1) - idk why this is here... cause you didn't map the music here at the front of this kickslider from 02:10:777 till 02:11:474 so this is quite uncatch-able, and it's weirder since you used the kickslider a lot from this point onwards They were really soft drums from 02:10:777 , so I decided to skip them. However at 02:11:649 (1) , the drum sound was so distinct that I think a kickslider would work here. The repeated usage of kicksliders is to emphasise the effect of switching the combo colors from the 'black and white' theme back to color again. It is consistently only mapped to drums, and is red until 02:17:230 (1) - because they are all in the same bar.
8. 02:39:033 (3,4) - not going to make these clickable? The sound is really tempting to click on Well I wanted to now that I think of it, but I kinda stuck at how I can go about doing it. Oh well, I'll try to think about it - which will probably take me a few days - but for now I'll keep it.
9. 05:07:986 (2,1) - why are these two so close tgt? ._. It is a direct copy paste from the first 2 rebound sliders. Cx
10. Okay so now let's get on with the blankets (B) ok. Some are nazi so beware!
11. 00:12:347 (3,4) - B Fixed.
12. 00:29:963 (1,3) - B Fixed.
13. 00:31:881 (3,1) - B Fixed.
14. 00:37:637 (1) - B the reverse arrow there Fixed.
15. 00:45:486 (2,4) - B Fixed.
16. 01:25:427 (4,1) - B Fixed.
17. 01:36:591 (4,6) - B Fixed.
18. 01:39:905 (6,1) - B Fixed.
19. I'm just gonna stop here about the blankets xP Oh well, I must say I wasn't focusing so much on blanket, but thank you for pointing them out. I think it is enough like they are. I'm sure most are not 'perfected' blankets, but I'm satisfied with it.

Really reaaaly nice map!
Shooting a star onto this! SB was bae too!! <3 Thank you C:

Good luck! Looking forward for this.

O-Moei wrote:

Hello !, 💑 M4M from your Queue. I hope I'm helpful !



✨ = Suggestion
💧 = Uuhhh?
💥 = Warning !

General :
Can reduce the Filesize ? Not sure... there is a lot of hitsound files for piano and other files for SB...

Desire :
✨ 00:18:800 (5,6,1,2) - Won't you make (1,2) at least stacked with (5,6) ? Doesn't feels solid with patterns before imo I did the same for 00:08:335 (1,2,3,4) , so I think it is ok to do it here too.
✨ 00:32:579 (5) - NC, and remove NC here 00:32:754 (1) - (The rhythm changed there) It's not that obvious, and I prefer to NC at the big white tick.
✨ 00:57:695 (6) - NC, and remove NC here 00:58:044 (1) - ^ I like this suggestion, changed!
✨ 01:03:277 (5) - NC, and remove NC here 01:03:626 (1) - ^ then remove 01:04:672 (1) - NC and start NC 01:04:847 (3) - . Don't forget to arrange the combo colors Fixed too!
✨ 01:10:777 (2) - A little change, but how about position x:246 y:84 ? Actually I changed it from that position in the previous mod, and I like it when it is equal DS. So I'm gonna keep it
✨ 01:48:626 (3) - The slidertail has a sound. Better make it clickable Hmm I fixed it, but hope it is better.
✨ 02:17:230 (1,1,1) - Whoa, cool !. But I prefer making the slider like these before same as here now to create variety. If you agree, 02:14:440 (1) - is purple and 02:15:835 (1) - is green Previously I mentioned I made them all red at first because they all come after every bar. But I found that 02:14:440 (1,1) - is on the same bar, so I changed 02:15:835 (1) - to purple.
💧 03:56:474 (1) - Why NC this Clap Note ? meanwhile you didn't do the same as before here03:50:893 (4,4) - Opps, fixed.
✨ 05:06:067 (1) - Remove NC, and start NC here 05:06:242 (3) - Ok

Awesome map, Chocox ! XD/. Good luck ! Thank you C:

My ultra acc on first try lol

Hey lululu wrote:

Hello! I'm from my Modding Queues

Wow It's a amazing map,like monstrata style

I have not any question on snap

but you sure all jump you want make same DS?maybe kiaitime and strong part you can make biger jump. It is actually not same DS, just different slider velocity. In kiai SV is higher, so I make the DS lower, but still higher than normal spacing C:
why SB not finish
QAQ
shoot star!

HootOwlStar wrote:

m4m. sorry for really long delay though.
still prefer the everlasting guilty spice more tbh lolz

[desire]

1. 00:49:498 (1,1,1,1) - it's unlike 02:41:126 (1,1,1,1) - that contains the electronic wubs behind. it basically should be mapped to vocal and strings here so 1/1 really don't work. maybe replace them with a circle for emphasizing the contrast in density or just map according to vocals Actually, they are meant to follow violin... I'm not really sure but I think it should be allowed (?) No change for now.
2. 02:16:184 (2) - suggest to make it into a 1/2 slider or ctrl+g 02:16:533 (1,2) - since the pattern is rather hard to catch here tbh I like the ctrl-g pattern. Since both 02:16:881 (3,1) - are low pitch notes and only 02:17:056 (4) - is high pitch. So the representation when I ctrl-g is much better. Fixed!
3. 03:25:428 (4,1) - flow here is kind of abrupt and disrupted. maybe flip vertically the stream afterwards to make a V- like shape flow instead Good point. I remapped the whole section.
4. 03:26:300 (1) - if my guess i s correct then the early start is influenced by vocals? it's rather unnecessary imo since you followed the percussion for the streams. and the clicking is kinda disturbed with the early reverses. maybe start your slider at 03:26:474 - and map two more circles b4? I feel that your rhythm is harder to play because of the vocal in the background. I think this suits more and easier to be able to interpret.
5. 03:27:172 (1) - why not put it in the centre of the grid template I remapped this section, so I guess it should be better.
6. 04:02:143 (1,1) - to me it is really sudden for the slider and the clicking isn't on the downbeats if you consider the bpm to be halved. either start the slider at 04:04:149 - and removin g the reverse, or end the spinner at 04:02:754 - and add a circle at 04:03:451 - both may do the trick well. i suggest the former though idk i can be dumb sometimes tbh Agreed. Given the fact that I ignored a lot of BGM and focus on the piano/vocal separately, I'll follow your advice - removing reverse and start slider later.
7. 05:10:428 (1) - 05:14:322 (3) - separating into two circles might give a better sense while clickingActually I would like to keep my style. First is playability wise: since the BPM has changed, any triplets can easily affect the accuracy, and players may hit 100s or even 50s by accident. Next is the mood of the song. It is very 'calm' and 'depressing' and the same time, and I want to avoid use of any circles here.

that's it. nice map. sb is quite large though. + should use a darker background instead since the current one is too light to fit the song I'll talk with Del about this. :3
good luck!

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Desire]
00:03:451 (1,2,3,4,1) - how about make similar pattern with 00:00:661 (1,2,3,4,1) - ? this part has same songs, Same rhythm doesn't always mean having the same flow/placement/patterns. This rule should only always apply for cymbal emphasis
00:03:974 (4,1) - this part's DS should be higher than 00:03:800 (3,4) - Previous DS suits because of the smooth flow and my structure. There is nothing to emphasize 00:04:149 (1) - here.
00:06:242 (1,3) - blanket? it's already blanket
00:33:626 (5,6,1) - weird flow Changed to a square, it should feel better now
00:39:294 (2,3) - Hard to read, its distance is bigger than 00:36:940 (3,1,1) - Closer now
00:48:102 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - hitsounds are in 00:48:102 - 00:48:451 - 00:48:800 - 00:49:149 - , but why NCs are 00:48:102 - 00:48:626 - 00:49:149 - ? looks really awkward to play, make similar pattern with hitsounds. The synthesizer sound (I think it's synthesizer?) shows otherwise. Also, the NC pattern if I follow your structure will look very ugly
00:50:195 (1) - 00:50:544 (1) - I suggest you changing dard combocolor for better expressinos. I will re-do combo colours
01:03:277 (1) - should be emphasized, but DS is smaller than 01:02:579 (3,4) - ? Emphasizing 01:03:277 (1) - will look very bad with the sudden jump without any instrumental support such as the cymbal.
01:14:614 (1) - ^, make similar pattern with 01:17:056 (4,1) - fixed
01:24:033 - 01:24:120 - Just my suggestioin for better music's express, disable kiai Good point! Fixed~
01:25:428 (4,5) - should be same rhythm with 01:14:265 (4) - Why? There is a vocal sound here 01:25:602 (5) -
01:48:277 (2,3,4) - weird flow since you use sharp angle, you don't use wide angle well. Am pretty sure I changed to this flow from a mod before, so I lost my placement and flow before ;w; , right now I don't have another better idea, so I'll leave it as it is for now until either I think of one or someone suggests a good one
01:49:498 (1) - 134,149 for 90 degree, 120degree angle is not so good, imo. Good, fixed~
01:57:172 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - avoid overlap for better see, you avoided overlap before, ok
02:15:835 (1) - red combocolor. It's intentional. Because this is suppose to compliment the storyboard (which I think will be removed). The idea is that the cymbal crash sounds will symbolise a new section approaching
02:21:591 (1,2) - make jump like 02:24:381 (1,2) - ok
02:41:823 (1,1) - ^00:50:195 (1) - 00:50:544 (1) - already explained above~
02:48:102 (1,2,3) - this part''s DS is much bigger than 02:42:521 (1,2) - ? I think similar music pattern.. I partially agree, but I need the note to be placed there for transition to 02:48:626 (3,4,1) - , so I doubt there's another alternative for a better flow yet with a smaller DS
02:53:684 (1,3,4) - 02:54:905 (1,2,3) - I know you used symmetry, why don't you make triangle at 02:55:602 (3) - ? Sorry I'm not really sure what you meant, but I guess it's either you want me to make a 120 degree sliders or a triangle formation. For 1.) Because I don't think a 3 x 120 degree slider formation will transition well to my next pattern , 2) it's already stacked in a triangle formation (oh well it might be slightly off so I fixed that)
03:22:986 (3,5,6) - set triangle ok
03:27:172 (5) - NC fixed~
04:02:143 (1) - end spinner at 04:03:277 - , and houw about add a beat in 04:03:451 - and 04:03:800 - ? sure
04:27:695 (4) - should be emphasized, not 04:27:521 (3) - . fixed
04:34:323 (2) - HP bar fixed
04:47:754 (6) - is, to. should be bigger than 04:47:579 (5) - 's DS I'll stack so it's same as 04:50:370 (3,4) -
05:07:637 (1,2,1,2) - Check DS, 05:07:986 (2,1) - should be similar with 05:08:335 (1,2) - 05:07:637 (1,2) - Symmetry looks much better here tbh

GL

2017-03-11 14:00 Xinying: u said u mod my map xd
2017-03-11 14:00 walaowey: oh ya
2017-03-11 14:01 walaowey: come again xd
2017-03-11 14:05 Xinying: s t o p        s t o p          w i n n y           u p l o a d
2017-03-11 14:08 walaowey: come on
2017-03-11 14:09 walaowey: lets mod xd
2017-03-11 14:15 Xinying: xd
2017-03-11 14:15 Xinying: maybe anight xd
2017-03-11 14:15 Xinying: busy now xd
2017-03-11 14:15 walaowey: LUL
2017-03-11 14:15 walaowey: ok
2017-03-11 14:16 walaowey: tonight maybe go out dinner, so will at midnight then xd
2017-03-11 14:16 Xinying: nvm
2017-03-11 14:16 Xinying: 1 sec
2017-03-11 14:16 Xinying: ill be back ard 5 minutes
2017-03-11 14:17 walaowey: kk
2017-03-11 14:17 Xinying: ok
2017-03-11 14:17 Xinying: just ignore combo colours
2017-03-11 14:17 Xinying: im probably gonna change
2017-03-11 14:17 walaowey: ok
2017-03-11 14:18 Xinying: old mapping style FeelsGoodMan
2017-03-11 14:18 walaowey: lol
2017-03-11 14:18 walaowey: 5 min ady?
2017-03-11 14:18 Xinying: ye
2017-03-11 14:18 walaowey: kek
2017-03-11 14:19 walaowey: so you're ready now?
2017-03-11 14:19 Xinying: ht
2017-03-11 14:19 Xinying: yea
2017-03-11 14:19 walaowey: btw no add 'guilty crown' in tag?
2017-03-11 14:19 walaowey: the english name
2017-03-11 14:19 Xinying: idk
2017-03-11 14:20 Xinying: the song already has guilty crown in the name
2017-03-11 14:20 Xinying: i dont think need to
2017-03-11 14:20 walaowey: LUL
2017-03-11 14:20 walaowey: ikr
2017-03-11 14:20 Xinying: let me check captin set
2017-03-11 14:20 walaowey: 03:24:381 (1,2,3,4) - 
2017-03-11 14:20 Xinying: a lot rip off from him actually
2017-03-11 14:20 Xinying: if this actually gets to be pushed forward ill forum pm him
2017-03-11 14:20 walaowey: this part if u do 1/4 will be nice
2017-03-11 14:20 Xinying: see if its comfortable
2017-03-11 14:21 walaowey: a 1/4 reverse slider i mean
2017-03-11 14:21 Xinying: yea captin set no guilty crown in tags
2017-03-11 14:21 walaowey: then slowly build up to stream
2017-03-11 14:21 walaowey: 03:38:161 - this part no keysound? kek
2017-03-11 14:22 Xinying: i feel like the 1/2 slider transition to stream is better
2017-03-11 14:22 Xinying: 03:26:300 (1,2,3,4) - only here has 1/4 rebound for the vocal
2017-03-11 14:22 Xinying: so it will play very nicely
2017-03-11 14:23 walaowey: kk
2017-03-11 14:23 Xinying: LOL the keysound there
2017-03-11 14:23 Xinying: I was too noob to transcript it by myself last time
2017-03-11 14:23 Xinying: and I can't find any script online
2017-03-11 14:23 Xinying: I will try again maybe
2017-03-11 14:23 walaowey: now can do ady xD
2017-03-11 14:23 Xinying: idk if del wants to continue with the SB
2017-03-11 14:23 Xinying: since hes busy and stuff
2017-03-11 14:23 Xinying: so I just delete everything
2017-03-11 14:23 walaowey: he seems bz tho haha
2017-03-11 14:23 walaowey: yea
2017-03-11 14:24 walaowey: 04:00:748 (1,1) - 
2017-03-11 14:24 walaowey: this part if got some slider will be nice
2017-03-11 14:24 Xinying: now should be able
2017-03-11 14:24 Xinying: i might remap from here tho 04:03:451 (1) -
2017-03-11 14:24 walaowey: slow slider 
2017-03-11 14:24 walaowey: slider arts maybe
2017-03-11 14:24 Xinying: u mean something like this
2017-03-11 14:24 Xinying: 03:03:451 (1) -
2017-03-11 14:24 Xinying: 01:11:823 (1) - i ripped this off from captin
2017-03-11 14:25 Xinying: i cant think of any good arts
2017-03-11 14:25 walaowey: 04:26:126 (1) - LUL
2017-03-11 14:25 walaowey: shiet wrong comment
2017-03-11 14:25 walaowey: 04:26:126 (1) - can extend to blue ticks
2017-03-11 14:25 walaowey: some slow sv works nice there
2017-03-11 14:26 Xinying: ehh idk
2017-03-11 14:26 Xinying: i hear the vocal ends on the red tick
2017-03-11 14:26 walaowey: 04:25:777 (1) - this one too actually
2017-03-11 14:26 Xinying: 03:05:195 (2) - , 01:13:567 (2) -
2017-03-11 14:26 walaowey: but the rhythm is cool with extension
2017-03-11 14:27 walaowey: like a sudden slow down, then move to the fast part in kiai
2017-03-11 14:27 walaowey: can emphasize the kiai better imo
2017-03-11 14:27 Xinying: so u mean decrease sv here
2017-03-11 14:27 Xinying: 04:26:126 (1) -
2017-03-11 14:28 walaowey: wait let me try
2017-03-11 14:28 Xinying: i was thinking of increasing
2017-03-11 14:29 Xinying: rip del ;w;
2017-03-11 14:29 Xinying: this would be so much cooler with sb
2017-03-11 14:29 walaowey: ya increase will be better
2017-03-11 14:29 walaowey: ikr, with sb will be better xd
2017-03-11 14:30 walaowey: 04:25:777 (1) - this one extend will be nice too
2017-03-11 14:30 walaowey: keep this sv nice ady for the above one
2017-03-11 14:30 Xinying: but if extend
2017-03-11 14:30 Xinying: so easy to slider break
2017-03-11 14:30 walaowey: but feels more suitable to the song :D
2017-03-11 14:30 walaowey: depends on u anywy
2017-03-11 14:31 walaowey: suggestion only
2017-03-11 14:32 Xinying: actually i tried this
2017-03-11 14:32 Xinying: https://puu.sh/uDJEw/567c97bdd2.jpg
2017-03-11 14:32 Xinying: but confirm someone will say oh this is the first time you used this pattern
2017-03-11 14:32 Xinying: i dont think i used any bezier in this song
2017-03-11 14:34 walaowey: should be ok lol
2017-03-11 14:34 walaowey: that spacing will be nice to emphasize that part
2017-03-11 14:35 Xinying: ill keep first
2017-03-11 14:36 walaowey: 02:32:928 (2) - 
2017-03-11 14:36 Xinying: i feel like my drum hitsounds suck
2017-03-11 14:36 walaowey: this one quite close to hp bar
2017-03-11 14:36 walaowey: but its hard to fix xd
2017-03-11 14:36 Xinying: yea
2017-03-11 14:37 Xinying: i cant change it
2017-03-11 14:37 walaowey: nvm
2017-03-11 14:37 Xinying: for the structure
2017-03-11 14:37 walaowey: as long as no touch hp bar, should be ok
2017-03-11 14:39 Xinying: i changed a few note placements to emphasize jumps
2017-03-11 14:39 Xinying: while we're speaking
2017-03-11 14:39 Xinying: LUL
2017-03-11 14:39 walaowey: nice
2017-03-11 14:39 walaowey: 04:48:102 (1) - 
2017-03-11 14:39 walaowey: this one, need more spacing imo
2017-03-11 14:39 walaowey: 04:42:521 (1) - this one has more spacing, but if consider rhythm, they're quite similar, but if vocal the previous one was stronger
2017-03-11 14:40 Xinying: why does my puush no longer auto upload image
2017-03-11 14:40 walaowey: you're using puush?
2017-03-11 14:40 Xinying: i changed to https://puu.sh/uDKpC/47456b44b1.jpg
2017-03-11 14:40 Xinying: yre
2017-03-11 14:40 walaowey: or is it sharex
2017-03-11 14:40 walaowey: kk
2017-03-11 14:40 Xinying: sharex
2017-03-11 14:40 Xinying: LUL
2017-03-11 14:40 Xinying: 04:41:823 (3,4,5,6,1) -
2017-03-11 14:40 Xinying: this one so bad tbh
2017-03-11 14:40 Xinying: but idk how to fix it
2017-03-11 14:41 walaowey: yea lol
2017-03-11 14:41 walaowey: it feels weird to play
2017-03-11 14:41 Xinying: someone told me
2017-03-11 14:41 walaowey: btw, u can just use shift+f12
2017-03-11 14:41 walaowey: can straight upload
2017-03-11 14:41 Xinying: to change my old pattern to that
2017-03-11 14:41 Xinying: i remember
2017-03-11 14:41 Xinying: oh
2017-03-11 14:41 Xinying: yea
2017-03-11 14:41 Xinying: LUL
2017-03-11 14:41 Xinying: can i do that while modding also
2017-03-11 14:41 walaowey: yea as long as its in osu
2017-03-11 14:41 walaowey: it can auto upload xD
2017-03-11 14:42 Xinying: wait ill try another rhythm and pattern
2017-03-11 14:42 Xinying: the jump is big tho
2017-03-11 14:42 Xinying: oh well i guess with the build up its ok
2017-03-11 14:44 Xinying: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7535113
2017-03-11 14:44 Xinying: idk about breaking flow just for the transition
2017-03-11 14:45 Xinying: but this rhythm sounds way better imo
2017-03-11 14:45 walaowey: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7535114
2017-03-11 14:45 Xinying: wat u think
2017-03-11 14:45 walaowey: ohh u changed it, ok
2017-03-11 14:45 walaowey: i do some palcement only, no change rhythm haha
2017-03-11 14:45 Xinying: break flow tho
2017-03-11 14:46 Xinying: or this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7535120
2017-03-11 14:46 Xinying: for the jumps
2017-03-11 14:46 walaowey: 2nd one better
2017-03-11 14:46 Xinying: ok changed
2017-03-11 14:47 Xinying: finally fixed that pattern feelsgoodman
2017-03-11 14:47 walaowey: 05:04:149 (3,4,5) - 
2017-03-11 14:47 walaowey: this pattern was not that comfortable for me when i tested it
2017-03-11 14:48 walaowey: for some reason, my cursor have to stop completely at (4) to aim at (5)
2017-03-11 14:48 walaowey: xd
2017-03-11 14:48 Xinying: this one reminds me of
2017-03-11 14:48 Xinying: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7535132
2017-03-11 14:49 walaowey: but that one is still linking
2017-03-11 14:49 Xinying: it looks nice though FeelsBadMan
2017-03-11 14:49 walaowey: LOL
2017-03-11 14:49 walaowey: depends on u lo want change it or not xd
2017-03-11 14:49 walaowey: you're the mapper, its your style :^)
2017-03-11 14:49 Xinying: not now
2017-03-11 14:50 walaowey: did u copy captin timing in the end?
2017-03-11 14:50 Xinying: i think so
2017-03-11 14:50 Xinying: not sure
2017-03-11 14:51 walaowey: 05:11:817 (5) - 
2017-03-11 14:51 walaowey: this one
2017-03-11 14:51 walaowey: captin didnt time this 
2017-03-11 14:51 walaowey: seems like he map it on the red line
2017-03-11 14:51 Xinying: maybe simplify rhythm
2017-03-11 14:52 Xinying: it doesn't sound too obvious
2017-03-11 14:52 Xinying: actually I'll change the ending
2017-03-11 14:52 Xinying: so everything is slider only
2017-03-11 14:52 walaowey: map it on red line gua
2017-03-11 14:52 walaowey: bcoz suddenly different snap feels hard, or maybe just time it
2017-03-11 14:53 walaowey: 02:53:335 (7) - this one anchor lol, iirc other parts dun have 1/2 slider with anchor
2017-03-11 14:54 Xinying: actually ill skip 1/6 snaps
2017-03-11 14:54 Xinying: wait ill remap first
2017-03-11 14:54 walaowey: 02:01:184 (3,4) - 
2017-03-11 14:54 walaowey: blanket a bit off xd
2017-03-11 14:55 walaowey: 02:08:684 (3) - this one dun need that big spacing imo
2017-03-11 14:55 walaowey: 02:09:033 (1) -  this one should be bigger instead
2017-03-11 14:55 Xinying: ok done
2017-03-11 14:55 Xinying: slow down fag
2017-03-11 14:56 walaowey: lul
2017-03-11 14:56 walaowey: faggit
2017-03-11 14:56 Xinying: actually sounds weird if i skip 1/6
2017-03-11 14:56 Xinying: screw it ill still skip it first
2017-03-11 14:56 walaowey: u skip which 1/6 lol
2017-03-11 14:56 Xinying: 05:11:761 (4) -
2017-03-11 14:57 Xinying: after this slider
2017-03-11 14:57 Xinying: i mapped it at ur version
2017-03-11 14:57 Xinying: the rebound
2017-03-11 14:57 Xinying: i left that out
2017-03-11 14:58 walaowey: yeah need map 1/6 at that art
2017-03-11 14:58 walaowey: maybe try like captin?
2017-03-11 14:58 walaowey: 05:14:598 (1) - place all circles following the piano
2017-03-11 14:58 walaowey: jk
2017-03-11 14:59 walaowey: acc killer xDD
2017-03-11 14:59 Xinying: i think someone told me to do that
2017-03-11 14:59 Xinying: yea
2017-03-11 14:59 Xinying: acc killer
2017-03-11 15:00 Xinying: if i add that 1/6
2017-03-11 15:00 Xinying: its so weird
2017-03-11 15:01 walaowey: but that 1/6 sounds better hha
2017-03-11 15:01 walaowey: anyway, thats all from me
2017-03-11 15:01 Xinying: the spacing i fixed
2017-03-11 15:01 walaowey: others should be ok :3
2017-03-11 15:02 Xinying: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7535180
2017-03-11 15:02 Xinying: like wtf
2017-03-11 15:02 Xinying: actually ill space it
2017-03-11 15:03 walaowey: LOL
2017-03-11 15:03 walaowey: yea space it, overlap looks weird
2017-03-11 15:03 walaowey: good luck fixing that last part LOL