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https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/6120245Screenshothttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546406Replayhttps://puu.sh/wFfDh.osrNumber of tries1
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PatterningWell, patterning is awesome.
I can clearly what you're following in the map. And patterns not only fit the song, but it also plays smooth. That's why I have like 99.6% in my first play(still suck tho XD).
Also interesting patterns are used. Like triplets in 01:42:453 - this part. Not only can it fit the music, but the usage of doublets can also make this part less empty. Sometimes 1/1 break is kinda boring, and doublet can prevent it.
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Consistency+VariationIt's also good to me.
Take an example of 00:57:012 - and 02:04:777 - two similar melodies. You put more notes on the second kiai time, which can show the progress of the song. You also try to add more variation for the second kiai time, which works great too.
Moreover, the note density for the second kiai time imo suits the progress of the music perfectly. It has more notes than first kiai time but a bit fewer notes than the third kiai time, which is a sign for developing a good flow and also progression.
Variation and consistency are well balanced. It's so fun and not repetitive while I was playing. And at the same time you didn't forget consistency, patterns like kkkkddkkd can be found in the first two kiai times, which shows that you can keep consistency.
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Flowemm some parts can be improved.
The flow works great in most parts. However in some non-kiai time, I find the flow a little bit weird. I will give suggestion below on how to improve imo.
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Last kiai timeFor my first impression, it's a bit overmapped but it's fine to me.
The streams work good to me but some patterns can be improved. And also some notes can be deleted in order to emphasize the music in a better way. I will give suggestion below.
Suggestion01:18:983 - add a note here and remove 01:19:424 - this?
Can fit the vocal more on 01:18:894 (3,4,5,6,7) - these two timestamps and also better emphasize the finisher on 01:19:600 -
01:27:806 (79,80) - remove these two notes
Seems a little bit dense here. Deleting these two notes not only can give a break here, it can also ''separate''' two music parts. It can also emphasize the finisher on 01:28:071 -
01:38:041 - add note here
Consistent with 01:36:541 - this pattern
02:04:600 - remove this
same reason as 01:27:806 -
02:26:306 - I will change like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546559 (02:27:012 - is a finisher)
same reason as 01:27:806 - and also changing 02:27:012 - to finisher can better emphasize the music more imo.
04:28:512 (92,93) - remove these.
A little bit overmapped here imo as there's no musical element here.
04:31:424 - change to d?
Better emphasize 04:31:600 - this note
04:42:189 (6,7,8,9) - change to kkd K?
04:42:541 - since there's a heavy ''clap'' sound here. I suggest putting K here. Also putting kkd before can emphasize the finisher too.
Overall SummaryPatterning are great, but some flow can be improved. Also you may try to put more emphasize in some places to emphasize the music more too.
Rating for the map :
8/10Good Luck!