Hi! o/ Mod requested from
queueI'm going under the assumption that this is going to go for rank, and with that I have a lot of things to say to make your map cleaner.. Let's get started.
[General]
Okay moving on to the actual mod
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I would suggest to have two more diffs (Maybe Normal and Hard) (Kindly read the ranking criteria: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria)
I would also suggest to change the HP and OD to 8.5 since it mostly uses singles notes and a few LNs.
Why not use a normal bpm of 180? I think it just fits right.
00:06:168 (6168|3,6168|2,6168|0) - why is there a sudden triple here? it has the same intensity as the other doubles. pattern suggestion: https://puu.sh/vcV5G/d0d89b8d5c.png could be applied to similar sections ahead.
00:10:001 (10001|5,10001|6,10168|6,10168|5,10335|5,10335|4,10501|4,10501|5) - lol the stack at [6]. pattern suggestion: 00:09:501 (9501|1) I suggest you move this first to [1] then apply the above mentioned suggestion and move 00:10:668 (10668|5) - to [7]. but still up to you to apply. Could also be applied to the similar sections ahead.
00:16:501 (16501|4,16501|5,16585|6,16668|4,16751|6) - I strongly advise against this kind of pattern wherein there is a LN in between single notes. pattern suggestion: https://puu.sh/vcVpT/da44c0ba47.png
00:26:335 (26335|2,26335|1,26501|2,26501|1) - would suggest to move this to [6][7], to be symmetrical
00:27:335 (27335|3,27335|5,27335|4,27501|4,27501|6,27501|3,27668|5,27668|6,27668|3) - I get that you're trying to emphasize the "syn the size" part but this is just overdoing it. doubles are enough for this part, especially because you're doing it with a LN.
00:28:335 (28335|3,28501|3,28668|3,28835|3,29001|3,29168|3,29335|3) - lol this stack tho, and this sudden quad in one hand 00:29:001 (29001|3,29001|0,29001|2,29001|1) pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/vcVHm/e772efe3c9.png
00:29:668 (29668|4,29668|6,29668|5) - yep, a sudden triple. will suggest to reduce it to a single note only since there's not much of a sound.
00:29:335 (29335|1,29335|0,29835|2,30001|1) - lmao these LN placements. pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/vcVQ6/02a3a0c5b4.png notice that I removed the second LN. up to you to apply.
00:31:168 (31168|3,31335|3,31335|1,31335|4,31501|1,31501|3,31668|0,31668|1,31668|2,31668|3,31835|0,31835|3) - pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/vcVZl/2d9974e4a5.png
im sorry for ruining the intended density of the map but yeah, if you want this ranked then you might have to fix a lot of things:
00:32:501 (32501|3,32668|3,32835|3,33001|3,33168|3,33335|3) - like this stack at [4]
00:38:835 (38835|3,39001|3,39168|3,39335|3,39501|3,39668|3,39835|3) - and this stack at [4]
00:37:835 (37835|6,37835|4,37835|0) - and these sudden triples
00:38:335 (38335|6,38335|5,38335|2,38335|1) - and these sudden quads
00:48:085 (48085|2,48251|2,48418|2,48585|2,48751|2,48918|2,49085|2,49251|2,49418|2) - and this neverending stack at [3]
00:49:585 (49585|2,49668|3,49751|2,49835|3,49918|2,50001|3,50085|2,50168|3,50251|2,50335|3,50418|2,50501|3,50585|2) - and this neverending [3][4] trill
01:06:001 (66001|2) - and how some of these LNs don't end on a white line
I'm going to end my mod there for now because as I have said a while ago, there are still too many things to fix. You can look at other ranked 7k mania songs for pattern references. I know what i'm saying now is a little bit disappointing but don't lose hope! My suggestion is to complete this mapset with two easier diffs and get mods from various people for this to be ranked. I liked the idea of stacking but it needs to be re-arranged in a way that some stacks represent the bass and stuff, you know what I'm getting at
I hope my mod helped in any way. Goodluck!!
I'll probably explain at a later time on how those stacks are bad and why chord consistency is important