hi, quick mod from #modreqs :3
[General]
Is there a reason why the music ends so abruptly? :/ if there is an outro that you aren't going to map, it should be okay to just leave it unless it's really long (20% of the whole map according to the criteria I think).
[Normal]
00:06:798 (4) - no significant sound at the beginning of this slider (compared to sounds in the middle of the slider). you should try a different rhythm here to express more appropriate sounds.
00:11:298 (2) - shorten this slider by a half beat and add a circle at the end to give the finish more emphasis?
00:13:844 (4) - out of screen?
01:19:838 (2) - ^
01:18:124 (2,1) - the map has been following the vocals throughout the kiai quite clearly, but these sliders don't really fit them imo. should be a better way to express the vocals.
01:27:339 (4) - maybe replace it with a circle? i think it's a good idea to reduce the number of 1/2 sliders in these parts because they can be quite monotonous to play.
[Hard]
00:01:012 (3,4) - if there is a stop at 00:02:512 (3,4), shouldn't this be a stop too?
00:09:584 (4) - sounds awkward considering the vocals. i think this should be clear to you as well when heard at slower playrate.
00:15:129 (5) - the sound at the end of this slider deserves emphasis through a circle (like 00:17:058 (5)) rather than a slider end. maybe you can map 00:14:915 (3,4,5) with a 1/4 repeating slider and a circle at 00:15:344.
00:18:344 (3,4,5) - ^
00:21:772 (3,4,5) - ^
00:26:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
from 00:27:786 to 00:55:214 - this part has a really inconsistent rhythm imo. objects like 00:32:928 (1) and 00:39:785 (1), and maybe even 00:47:714 (3,4,1,2) seem to be expressing the guitars while other objects like 00:29:500 (1,2) and 00:33:571 (3,4), 00:49:214 (5) seem to be following the vocals. since it can be confusing for players if there is no clear rhythm being followed, some circles have to be changed into sliders vice versa etc.
00:40:214 (2) - slightly out of screen?
00:57:767 (3) - ^
[Insane]
00:05:084 (6) - this one is emphasized through a big jump while a much more important sound like 00:11:941 (3) is left behind :/
00:18:236 - this drum beat should be mapped as well if you mapped the same beat 00:14:701 (3) here :/
from 00:27:786 - again, this 00:27:772 (1) is following the guitars (which i guess is ok considering there are no vocals there), 00:29:500 (4,5) is following the vocals (guitars in the background), 00:32:714 (1,2,3,4,5) is following the guitars (vocals in the background), 00:46:643 (10) this guitar sound is mapped and 00:48:357 this one is not... consider rhythm changes?
00:36:786 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - not sure which part of the music this is expressing o.o i don't think the music suggests jumps. it's also not consistent with the way you've mapped similar parts before in this difficulty.
00:55:196 (1,2,3) - considering the music is exactly the same as 00:56:910 (1,2), the way they are mapped shouldn't be that different. i think 00:56:910 (1,2) with jumps is the best way to map that part.
00:58:624 (1,2,3,4) - waaait so this part is clearly following the vocals, but 00:56:910 (1,2) was ignoring the vocals. the guitar sounds here are more prominent than the vocals and i think they, rather than the vocals, have to be expressed here. it's more unexpected and confusing because you're switching between the two.
01:02:053 (1,2,3) - similar issues
01:03:767 (1,2) - ^
01:05:481 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:18:767 (8) - since there is no sound at the sliderend here i think it's better to replace it with a circle.
that's it from me
good luck with your map!