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cheesecake's Easy
You know yesterday i had a bitchin cheesecake it has fuckin lemon in it but DAMN it was good okay mod
00:14:980 (5,1) - blanket is off, move the tail up a bit
00:31:780 (3) - I think a slidershape like 00:22:180 (3) - would be more appropriate here than this one.
01:12:580 (1) - LOL THAT SLIDER AGS\JGDJAKDKA
01:22:180 (1) - finish here but none here 01:02:980 (1) - ? I think removing the finish from 01:22:180 (1) - is the best course of action as the BOOM sound isnt there
00:14:980 (5,1) - blanket is off, move the tail up a bit
00:31:780 (3) - I think a slidershape like 00:22:180 (3) - would be more appropriate here than this one.
01:12:580 (1) - LOL THAT SLIDER AGS\JGDJAKDKA
01:22:180 (1) - finish here but none here 01:02:980 (1) - ? I think removing the finish from 01:22:180 (1) - is the best course of action as the BOOM sound isnt there
hard
00:05:980 (3,4) - blanket is off
00:07:780 (4) - In all the other places you make the "Ly" of the "Family" a circle. Suggest you do the same here
00:34:180 (1,2,3) - not a perfect triangle
00:40:780 (5,6,7) - same
^There are a couple of places where the structure could be improved and the spacing made more consistent; aesthetics are very important in a set like this imo
00:07:780 (4) - In all the other places you make the "Ly" of the "Family" a circle. Suggest you do the same here
00:34:180 (1,2,3) - not a perfect triangle
00:40:780 (5,6,7) - same
^There are a couple of places where the structure could be improved and the spacing made more consistent; aesthetics are very important in a set like this imo
GL on rank