Oyatsu wrote:

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1. 01:19:321 (5) - i'd like to suggest two notes here due to double claps.
2. 04:06:687 (2,3) - the beat here is heard like this
   
   - remove the repeat of (2)
   - move (3) to 04:07:208 - , and remove the finish at end
   - add a note at 04:07:991 - with NC & finish
3. 04:49:157 (1,2) - reduce the volume of claps here, it's too loud after a quiet break
4. 09:50:218 - maybe you can add a note here?

Scorpiour wrote:

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red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[The World Guy Only Knows]

1. 01:19:321 (5) - i'd like to suggest two notes here due to double claps. - fixed
2. 04:06:687 (2,3) - the beat here is heard like this - fixed
   
   - remove the repeat of (2)
   - move (3) to 04:07:208 - , and remove the finish at end
   - add a note at 04:07:991 - with NC & finish
3. 04:49:157 (1,2) - reduce the volume of claps here, it's too loud after a quiet break - fixed
4. 09:50:218 - maybe you can add a note here? - hmm, i think that not fit note here. sorry no changed ><

That's all~~

1. 07:18:167 (1) - Should end at 07:18:604 to follow the music.
   
2. 07:25:254 (2) - Should be snapped to 07:25:302 and end at 07:25:448.
   
3. 07:28:361 (1) -^ Should end at 07:28:798.

1. 07:18:749 (2) - I hear drums at 07:18:895 in 1/2.
   
2. 07:19:623 (5) - Again drums in 1/2 at 07:19:769.
   
3. 07:21:371 (6) - Triplet at 07:21:516 is called for. Drum transition is clearly heard in 1/2.
   
4. 07:24:575 (5) - Only sound is music is at 07:24:720. The piano is in 1/2, so the 1/3 feels weird.
   
5. 07:28:069 (7) - Drums can be heard in 1/2 at 07:28:215.
   
6. 07:28:943 (2) - Music is heard clearly in 1/2 at 07:29:089.
   
7. 07:36:516 (6) - I'm hearing 1/2 at 07:36:662.
   
8. 07:37:972 (5) - Drums hitting in 1/2 07:38:118.
   
9. 07:39:720 (8) - Same
   
10. 07:44:671 (7) -
    
11. 07:51:370 (6) - Same

Frostmourne

00:29 UnitedWeSin: hey frost
00:33 Frostmourne: hey
00:34 UnitedWeSin: hey if you have time, can you look at this?
00:34 UnitedWeSin: plzplz ;w;
00:35 Frostmourne: oh sure
00:35 *UnitedWeSin is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/283252 Oratorio The World God Only Knows - God only knows -Secrets of the Goddess- [The World Guy Only Knows]]
00:36 Frostmourne: aha
00:37 UnitedWeSin: 07:18:167 - this part
00:37 UnitedWeSin: isn't some of thi 1/3 really overmapped?
00:38 UnitedWeSin: 07:18:167 (1) - shouldn't be snapped to 07:18:604 - ?
00:39 Frostmourne: em...
00:39 Frostmourne: this part is confusing
00:39 Frostmourne: to be honest
00:39 Frostmourne: I am not sure either
00:39 UnitedWeSin: 07:21:371 (6) - drums are clearly in 1/4 here
00:39 UnitedWeSin: 1/3 is confusing ><
00:40 Frostmourne: yea Dx
00:40 UnitedWeSin: 07:25:254 (2) - should be snapped at 07:25:302 (2) - ?
00:40 UnitedWeSin: 07:28:361 (1) - snapped at 07:28:798 -
00:41 Frostmourne: maybe
00:41 Frostmourne: orz..
00:41 Frostmourne: it's kinda
00:41 Frostmourne: my big mistake for this one
00:41 Frostmourne: em..
00:41 Frostmourne: it should be 1/4
00:41 Frostmourne: 1/2*
00:41 Frostmourne: nothing else
00:42 UnitedWeSin: well I think some 1/3 fits like 07:18:749 (2,3,4) -
00:42 Frostmourne: I should have mentioned this before
00:42 Frostmourne: if I hadn't missed them..
00:42 UnitedWeSin: it's confusing though
00:42 UnitedWeSin: like extending into 1/4 but it's 1/3
00:42 Frostmourne: it's vague imo
00:42 Frostmourne: yeaa
00:42 UnitedWeSin: :<

Byakugan249

00:52 UnitedWeSin: hey byakugan
00:57 Byakugan249: ahh hey~ o/
00:57 UnitedWeSin: hi how are you?
00:57 Byakugan249: i'm good ><
00:57 UnitedWeSin: cool
00:58 Byakugan249: well kind of--i left the team due to personal issues ><
00:58 UnitedWeSin: ah >< sorry to hear
00:58 Byakugan249: it's fine
00:58 Byakugan249: until i can solve everything, i'll be back
00:58 UnitedWeSin: cool hope to see you back^^
00:58 Byakugan249: yea i hope ><
00:59 UnitedWeSin: hey if you've got time now, do you mind taking a look at this map I'm modding?
00:59 UnitedWeSin: unsure about this thing
00:59 Byakugan249: ehh~ sure i can help o.o
00:59 UnitedWeSin: cool
00:59 *UnitedWeSin is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/283252 Oratorio The World God Only Knows - God only knows -Secrets of the Goddess- [The World Guy Only Knows]]
00:59 Byakugan249: what's the map?
01:00 Byakugan249: TWGOK o.o
01:00 UnitedWeSin:
01:00 UnitedWeSin: 07:18:167 - this part
01:00 UnitedWeSin: I feel like a lot of this 1/3 is totally overmaped
01:05 Byakugan249: from that part to...
01:06 UnitedWeSin: 07:58:652 -
01:06 UnitedWeSin: like 07:18:167 (1) - should be snapped to 07:18:604 -
01:06 UnitedWeSin: 07:19:623 (5) - i can't hear drums in 1/4
01:06 UnitedWeSin: 1/3 sounds weird
01:06 UnitedWeSin: 07:21:371 (6) - same
01:06 UnitedWeSin: 07:28:361 (1) - should be snapped later
01:07 UnitedWeSin: 07:25:254 (2) - should be snapped int 1/4 right?
01:07 Byakugan249: the 1st one, i agree...it should be snapped to the 1/2 tick
01:08 Byakugan249: actually a 1/4 repeat would fit here at 07:19:623 (4) - ...you can hear a short drumroll
01:09 UnitedWeSin: or triplet at 07:19:769 -
01:10 Byakugan249: ahh that works :3
01:10 Byakugan249: if that's the case...a circle should be added at 07:19:263 - to keep the flow steady since it's following the drums
01:11 UnitedWeSin: did you mean at 07:19:623 - ?
01:11 Byakugan249: the next one...a 4 note stream seems to fit since it follows the drums o.o
01:11 UnitedWeSin: oh
01:11 UnitedWeSin: wtf
01:12 Byakugan249: ahh yes
01:12 Byakugan249: add a circle there--you said a triplet right?
01:12 UnitedWeSin: ah yea and triplet at 07:19:769 -
01:12 UnitedWeSin: could be same at 07:21:371 -
01:13 Byakugan249: ahh for consistency
01:13 UnitedWeSin: but 4 note stream works also it seems
01:13 Byakugan249: ok then
01:13 Byakugan249: yea
01:13 Byakugan249: it's up to you, i'm just giving ideas
01:13 Byakugan249: 7:28--later as in by 1/4 or 1/2?
01:13 UnitedWeSin: do you think 1/3 like 07:18:749 (2,3) - is working?
01:14 UnitedWeSin: yea should be snapped to 07:28:798 - red tick
01:14 Byakugan249: yea it's fine since it follows the vocals nicely
01:14 Byakugan249: yea i agree with the 1/2 snap
01:15 Byakugan249: the next one--7:25...
01:15 Byakugan249: 1/2
01:15 Byakugan249: 1/4 plays a bit awkwardly IMO
01:15 UnitedWeSin: err 1/2
01:15 UnitedWeSin:
01:16 UnitedWeSin: I ment should be snapped at 07:25:302 -
01:16 UnitedWeSin: and ending 1/2 later
01:18 UnitedWeSin: I don't know what to suggest here ;w;
01:18 UnitedWeSin: because scorpior didn't say anything about it
01:20 Byakugan249: let's see o.o
01:21 Byakugan249: 07:37:098 (2) - i find the repeat unnecessary orz
01:22 UnitedWeSin: did same at 07:35:351 (2) -
01:24 Byakugan249: that can be easily replaced for a 1/1 slider and a 1/2 slider to follow the music properly
01:25 UnitedWeSin: totally ><
01:25 UnitedWeSin: I'm mostly concerned with the 1/3 here :<
01:30 Byakugan249: hmm...
01:31 Byakugan249: i'm re-snapping the notes back to 1/2 to see the difference atm
01:31 UnitedWeSin: I feel like all the 1/3 sliders that aren't following vocals, ie 07:28:069 (7) - , should be removed
01:31 UnitedWeSin: 07:21:371 (6) -
01:33 Byakugan249: that slider you mentioned at 7:28...listen carefully to the drums
01:34 Byakugan249: actually...that should be 1/2
01:34 UnitedWeSin: yea lots of sliders are like that here
01:34 UnitedWeSin: 07:36:516 (6) -
01:34 UnitedWeSin: 07:37:972 (5) -
01:34 UnitedWeSin: `07:39:720 (8) -
01:35 Byakugan249: yea i see it o.o
01:35 Byakugan249: i say pop it because of the 1/3 notes not being 1/2--1/3 doesn't seem to follow the song
01:35 Byakugan249: you may need more opinions about this however
01:36 UnitedWeSin: I feel like some of them do fit
01:36 UnitedWeSin: they seems to sound good when there is no hit in 1/2
01:36 UnitedWeSin: like for 07:19:041 (3,4) -
01:37 Byakugan249: ohh...if you say that fits, say it as a suggestion about the notes being 1/4 and 1/2, and see what the mapper says
01:46 Byakugan249: is that all for now? o.o
01:46 UnitedWeSin: ah yes thank you very much for the help
01:47 Byakugan249: np and GL

Andrea

01:40 UnitedWeSin: hey do you mind checking this?
01:40 Andrea: gogo!
01:40 *UnitedWeSin is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/283252 Oratorio The World God Only Knows - God only knows -Secrets of the Goddess- [The World Guy Only Knows]]
01:40 UnitedWeSin: ;w
01:40 UnitedWeSin: ;;
01:40 Andrea: Guy's map <3
01:40 Andrea: that loooong map XD
01:40 UnitedWeSin: lol I was going to rank it
01:40 Andrea: approve it already!
01:41 UnitedWeSin: but I feel the 1/3 in this part is way overmapped :<
01:41 Andrea: where? ><
01:41 Andrea: Byaku is checking it too
01:41 Andrea: I think
01:41 UnitedWeSin: I asked for byaku's opinion on it
01:41 UnitedWeSin: 07:18:167 -
01:41 Andrea: downloading
01:43 UnitedWeSin: things like this
01:43 UnitedWeSin: 07:18:167 (1) - should be snapped at 07:18:604 -
01:43 UnitedWeSin: 07:18:749 (2) - drums are in 1/2 here
01:44 UnitedWeSin: 1/3 doesn't fit
01:44 UnitedWeSin: 07:19:623 (5) - same
01:44 UnitedWeSin: 07:21:371 (6) - clearly hear drums in 1/2
01:44 Andrea: yeah I'm unsure about them too D:
01:44 UnitedWeSin: 07:28:069 (7) -
01:44 UnitedWeSin: same
01:44 UnitedWeSin: ;w;
01:44 Andrea: the map is awesome though
01:44 UnitedWeSin: it really is
01:45 UnitedWeSin: confused because scorp didn't mention them
01:45 Andrea: stupid weird snapping xD
01:45 Andrea: true
01:45 UnitedWeSin: I asked frost and he agreed that they are wrong
01:45 Andrea: I somehow agree too orz

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hi Guy. Really awesome map, just this that bothers me.

07:18:167 - Don't you think the 1/3 in this section is pretty overmapped? Some things aren't snapped correctly for example:

1. 07:18:167 (1) - Should end at 07:18:604 to follow the music.
   
2. 07:25:254 (2) - Should be snapped to 07:25:302 and end at 07:25:448.
   
3. 07:28:361 (1) -^ Should end at 07:28:798.

I feel that a lot of the sliders would be better off snapped in 1/2, maybe all of them. For example:

1. 07:18:749 (2) - I hear drums at 07:18:895 in 1/2.
   
2. 07:19:623 (5) - Again drums in 1/2 at 07:19:769.
   
3. 07:21:371 (6) - Triplet at 07:21:516 is called for. Drum transition is clearly heard in 1/2.
   
4. 07:24:575 (5) - Only sound is music is at 07:24:720. The piano is in 1/2, so the 1/3 feels weird.
   
5. 07:28:069 (7) - Drums can be heard in 1/2 at 07:28:215.
   
6. 07:28:943 (2) - Music is heard clearly in 1/2 at 07:29:089.
   
7. 07:36:516 (6) - I'm hearing 1/2 at 07:36:662.
   
8. 07:37:972 (5) - Drums hitting in 1/2 07:38:118.
   
9. 07:39:720 (8) - Same
   
10. 07:44:671 (7) -
    
11. 07:51:370 (6) - Same

Basically the only 1/3 sliders that kind of fit are ones like 07:19:041 (2,3) where there are no hits in 1/2 in the song. But then again I don't really see a reason for the 1/3.

I talked with a few other BATs to get opinions.

Frostmourne

00:29 UnitedWeSin: hey frost
00:33 Frostmourne: hey
00:34 UnitedWeSin: hey if you have time, can you look at this?
00:34 UnitedWeSin: plzplz ;w;
00:35 Frostmourne: oh sure
00:35 *UnitedWeSin is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/283252 Oratorio The World God Only Knows - God only knows -Secrets of the Goddess- [The World Guy Only Knows]]
00:36 Frostmourne: aha
00:37 UnitedWeSin: 07:18:167 - this part
00:37 UnitedWeSin: isn't some of thi 1/3 really overmapped?
00:38 UnitedWeSin: 07:18:167 (1) - shouldn't be snapped to 07:18:604 - ?
00:39 Frostmourne: em...
00:39 Frostmourne: this part is confusing
00:39 Frostmourne: to be honest
00:39 Frostmourne: I am not sure either
00:39 UnitedWeSin: 07:21:371 (6) - drums are clearly in 1/4 here
00:39 UnitedWeSin: 1/3 is confusing ><
00:40 Frostmourne: yea Dx
00:40 UnitedWeSin: 07:25:254 (2) - should be snapped at 07:25:302 (2) - ?
00:40 UnitedWeSin: 07:28:361 (1) - snapped at 07:28:798 -
00:41 Frostmourne: maybe
00:41 Frostmourne: orz..
00:41 Frostmourne: it's kinda
00:41 Frostmourne: my big mistake for this one
00:41 Frostmourne: em..
00:41 Frostmourne: it should be 1/4
00:41 Frostmourne: 1/2*
00:41 Frostmourne: nothing else
00:42 UnitedWeSin: well I think some 1/3 fits like 07:18:749 (2,3,4) -
00:42 Frostmourne: I should have mentioned this before
00:42 Frostmourne: if I hadn't missed them..
00:42 UnitedWeSin: it's confusing though
00:42 UnitedWeSin: like extending into 1/4 but it's 1/3
00:42 Frostmourne: it's vague imo
00:42 Frostmourne: yeaa
00:42 UnitedWeSin: :<

Byakugan249

00:52 UnitedWeSin: hey byakugan
00:57 Byakugan249: ahh hey~ o/
00:57 UnitedWeSin: hi how are you?
00:57 Byakugan249: i'm good ><
00:57 UnitedWeSin: cool
00:58 Byakugan249: well kind of--i left the team due to personal issues ><
00:58 UnitedWeSin: ah >< sorry to hear
00:58 Byakugan249: it's fine
00:58 Byakugan249: until i can solve everything, i'll be back
00:58 UnitedWeSin: cool hope to see you back^^
00:58 Byakugan249: yea i hope ><
00:59 UnitedWeSin: hey if you've got time now, do you mind taking a look at this map I'm modding?
00:59 UnitedWeSin: unsure about this thing
00:59 Byakugan249: ehh~ sure i can help o.o
00:59 UnitedWeSin: cool
00:59 *UnitedWeSin is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/283252 Oratorio The World God Only Knows - God only knows -Secrets of the Goddess- [The World Guy Only Knows]]
00:59 Byakugan249: what's the map?
01:00 Byakugan249: TWGOK o.o
01:00 UnitedWeSin:
01:00 UnitedWeSin: 07:18:167 - this part
01:00 UnitedWeSin: I feel like a lot of this 1/3 is totally overmaped
01:05 Byakugan249: from that part to...
01:06 UnitedWeSin: 07:58:652 -
01:06 UnitedWeSin: like 07:18:167 (1) - should be snapped to 07:18:604 -
01:06 UnitedWeSin: 07:19:623 (5) - i can't hear drums in 1/4
01:06 UnitedWeSin: 1/3 sounds weird
01:06 UnitedWeSin: 07:21:371 (6) - same
01:06 UnitedWeSin: 07:28:361 (1) - should be snapped later
01:07 UnitedWeSin: 07:25:254 (2) - should be snapped int 1/4 right?
01:07 Byakugan249: the 1st one, i agree...it should be snapped to the 1/2 tick
01:08 Byakugan249: actually a 1/4 repeat would fit here at 07:19:623 (4) - ...you can hear a short drumroll
01:09 UnitedWeSin: or triplet at 07:19:769 -
01:10 Byakugan249: ahh that works :3
01:10 Byakugan249: if that's the case...a circle should be added at 07:19:263 - to keep the flow steady since it's following the drums
01:11 UnitedWeSin: did you mean at 07:19:623 - ?
01:11 Byakugan249: the next one...a 4 note stream seems to fit since it follows the drums o.o
01:11 UnitedWeSin: oh
01:11 UnitedWeSin: wtf
01:12 Byakugan249: ahh yes
01:12 Byakugan249: add a circle there--you said a triplet right?
01:12 UnitedWeSin: ah yea and triplet at 07:19:769 -
01:12 UnitedWeSin: could be same at 07:21:371 -
01:13 Byakugan249: ahh for consistency
01:13 UnitedWeSin: but 4 note stream works also it seems
01:13 Byakugan249: ok then
01:13 Byakugan249: yea
01:13 Byakugan249: it's up to you, i'm just giving ideas
01:13 Byakugan249: 7:28--later as in by 1/4 or 1/2?
01:13 UnitedWeSin: do you think 1/3 like 07:18:749 (2,3) - is working?
01:14 UnitedWeSin: yea should be snapped to 07:28:798 - red tick
01:14 Byakugan249: yea it's fine since it follows the vocals nicely
01:14 Byakugan249: yea i agree with the 1/2 snap
01:15 Byakugan249: the next one--7:25...
01:15 Byakugan249: 1/2
01:15 Byakugan249: 1/4 plays a bit awkwardly IMO
01:15 UnitedWeSin: err 1/2
01:15 UnitedWeSin:
01:16 UnitedWeSin: I ment should be snapped at 07:25:302 -
01:16 UnitedWeSin: and ending 1/2 later
01:18 UnitedWeSin: I don't know what to suggest here ;w;
01:18 UnitedWeSin: because scorpior didn't say anything about it
01:20 Byakugan249: let's see o.o
01:21 Byakugan249: 07:37:098 (2) - i find the repeat unnecessary orz
01:22 UnitedWeSin: did same at 07:35:351 (2) -
01:24 Byakugan249: that can be easily replaced for a 1/1 slider and a 1/2 slider to follow the music properly
01:25 UnitedWeSin: totally ><
01:25 UnitedWeSin: I'm mostly concerned with the 1/3 here :<
01:30 Byakugan249: hmm...
01:31 Byakugan249: i'm re-snapping the notes back to 1/2 to see the difference atm
01:31 UnitedWeSin: I feel like all the 1/3 sliders that aren't following vocals, ie 07:28:069 (7) - , should be removed
01:31 UnitedWeSin: 07:21:371 (6) -
01:33 Byakugan249: that slider you mentioned at 7:28...listen carefully to the drums
01:34 Byakugan249: actually...that should be 1/2
01:34 UnitedWeSin: yea lots of sliders are like that here
01:34 UnitedWeSin: 07:36:516 (6) -
01:34 UnitedWeSin: 07:37:972 (5) -
01:34 UnitedWeSin: `07:39:720 (8) -
01:35 Byakugan249: yea i see it o.o
01:35 Byakugan249: i say pop it because of the 1/3 notes not being 1/2--1/3 doesn't seem to follow the song
01:35 Byakugan249: you may need more opinions about this however
01:36 UnitedWeSin: I feel like some of them do fit
01:36 UnitedWeSin: they seems to sound good when there is no hit in 1/2
01:36 UnitedWeSin: like for 07:19:041 (3,4) -
01:37 Byakugan249: ohh...if you say that fits, say it as a suggestion about the notes being 1/4 and 1/2, and see what the mapper says
01:46 Byakugan249: is that all for now? o.o
01:46 UnitedWeSin: ah yes thank you very much for the help
01:47 Byakugan249: np and GL

Andrea

01:40 UnitedWeSin: hey do you mind checking this?
01:40 Andrea: gogo!
01:40 *UnitedWeSin is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/283252 Oratorio The World God Only Knows - God only knows -Secrets of the Goddess- [The World Guy Only Knows]]
01:40 UnitedWeSin: ;w
01:40 UnitedWeSin: ;;
01:40 Andrea: Guy's map <3
01:40 Andrea: that loooong map XD
01:40 UnitedWeSin: lol I was going to rank it
01:40 Andrea: approve it already!
01:41 UnitedWeSin: but I feel the 1/3 in this part is way overmapped :<
01:41 Andrea: where? ><
01:41 Andrea: Byaku is checking it too
01:41 Andrea: I think
01:41 UnitedWeSin: I asked for byaku's opinion on it
01:41 UnitedWeSin: 07:18:167 -
01:41 Andrea: downloading
01:43 UnitedWeSin: things like this
01:43 UnitedWeSin: 07:18:167 (1) - should be snapped at 07:18:604 -
01:43 UnitedWeSin: 07:18:749 (2) - drums are in 1/2 here
01:44 UnitedWeSin: 1/3 doesn't fit
01:44 UnitedWeSin: 07:19:623 (5) - same
01:44 UnitedWeSin: 07:21:371 (6) - clearly hear drums in 1/2
01:44 Andrea: yeah I'm unsure about them too D:
01:44 UnitedWeSin: 07:28:069 (7) -
01:44 UnitedWeSin: same
01:44 UnitedWeSin: ;w;
01:44 Andrea: the map is awesome though
01:44 UnitedWeSin: it really is
01:45 UnitedWeSin: confused because scorp didn't mention them
01:45 Andrea: stupid weird snapping xD
01:45 Andrea: true
01:45 UnitedWeSin: I asked frost and he agreed that they are wrong
01:45 Andrea: I somehow agree too orz

Please tell me why you've used 1/3 in this section. ><

Let me know and I will do a mod on the whole map later.

1. 00:01:742 (1) - How about a whistle on the head instead of finish? Finish is pretty loud here imo.
   
2. 00:53:259 (2) - Missing NC I suppose considering 00:43:328 (1).
   
3. 01:01:322 (1) - Highly suggest to end the spinner at 01:04:145 with the loud crash and change in music.
   
4. 01:50:380 (2) - NC? Follows your patterns like 01:56:027 (1).
   
5. 02:09:439 (1,2) - Just suggestion feel free to ignore. How about remove NC from 1 and add to 2, then place in blanket with 02:08:380 (6)?
   
   Example

   
   I'd prefer NC at 02:09:792 because of volume/music change.
6. 02:50:027 (7) - Remove whistle from the head and just have clap maybe follow music more nicely. Four whistles in a row is loud here.
   
7. 03:26:380 (1) - You need to resnap the end of the spinner to 03:28:861 so that the end is 20% volume instead of 60%. To do that, go past the red line in the timeline, extend the spinner over the red line, then back onto it.
   
8. 05:24:407 (5,1,2,3) - Rhythm a bit weird here. Music calls for more like this:
   
   Example

   
   Replaced 05:24:407 (5) with single circle.
9. 05:28:345 (9,1) - Seems a bit weird the placement. It makes the player think that 9 has another repeat. I suggest move the 1 more right. Here's what I mean:
   
   Example

   
10. 05:48:970 (9) - I'd suggest to shorten this by 1/4 to end at 05:49:157 since the drums have a clear hit there. With the slider extended like this, it's awkward to read the rhythm on the stream 05:49:345 (10,11,12,13).
    
    Example

    
11. 06:27:972 (8) - Remove clap from the end? Seems pretty loud to me here.
    
12. 06:31:829 to 06:38:472 - How about start lower volume and gradually increase volume through this part. I will fit music well. Something like this:
    06:31:829 - 35%
    06:33:543 - 40%
    06:35:257 - 45%
    06:36:972 - 50%
    Just example volumes. You can experiment with it.
    
13. 06:38:472 (1,2,1) - A bit difficult to read. Try to make more spacing between 06:38:472 (1,2) to make the rhythm more obvious. I tried pointing the 06:38:472 (1) upwards and it seems to be better, maybe you could experiment. Maybe a NC on 06:38:900 (2) is appropriate. Here's what I tried:
    
    Example

    
14. 09:16:656 - Same as 03:26:380 (1). Snap the end of the spinner to here so that the end is 40% volume. Right now it's 80%.
    
15. 10:07:281 (4) - Try removing the whistle from the head to just follow vocals here. See if you like it.

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Cool, here's mod on the rest.
No KD

[The World Guy Only Knows]

1. 00:01:742 (1) - How about a whistle on the head instead of finish? Finish is pretty loud here imo. - fixed
   
2. 00:53:259 (2) - Missing NC I suppose considering 00:43:328 (1). - fixed
   
3. 01:01:322 (1) - Highly suggest to end the spinner at 01:04:145 with the loud crash and change in music. - fixed
   
4. 01:50:380 (2) - NC? Follows your patterns like 01:56:027 (1). - fixed
   
5. 02:09:439 (1,2) - Just suggestion feel free to ignore. How about remove NC from 1 and add to 2, then place in blanket with 02:08:380 (6)?
   
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   I'd prefer NC at 02:09:792 because of volume/music change. - nice!
6. 02:50:027 (7) - Remove whistle from the head and just have clap maybe follow music more nicely. Four whistles in a row is loud here. - fixed
   
7. 03:26:380 (1) - You need to resnap the end of the spinner to 03:28:861 so that the end is 20% volume instead of 60%. To do that, go past the red line in the timeline, extend the spinner over the red line, then back onto it. - oops fixed
   
8. 05:24:407 (5,1,2,3) - Rhythm a bit weird here. Music calls for more like this:
   
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   Replaced 05:24:407 (5) with single circle. - fixed
9. 05:28:345 (9,1) - Seems a bit weird the placement. It makes the player think that 9 has another repeat. I suggest move the 1 more right. Here's what I mean: - fixed
   
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10. 05:48:970 (9) - I'd suggest to shorten this by 1/4 to end at 05:49:157 since the drums have a clear hit there. With the slider extended like this, it's awkward to read the rhythm on the stream 05:49:345 (10,11,12,13). - good, fixed
    
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11. 06:27:972 (8) - Remove clap from the end? Seems pretty loud to me here. - fixed
    
12. 06:31:829 to 06:38:472 - How about start lower volume and gradually increase volume through this part. I will fit music well. Something like this:
    06:31:829 - 35%
    06:33:543 - 40%
    06:35:257 - 45%
    06:36:972 - 50%
    Just example volumes. You can experiment with it. - really nice your suggest xD
    
13. 06:38:472 (1,2,1) - A bit difficult to read. Try to make more spacing between 06:38:472 (1,2) to make the rhythm more obvious. I tried pointing the 06:38:472 (1) upwards and it seems to be better, maybe you could experiment. Maybe a NC on 06:38:900 (2) is appropriate. Here's what I tried: - fixed
    
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14. 09:16:656 - Same as 03:26:380 (1). Snap the end of the spinner to here so that the end is 40% volume. Right now it's 80%. - fixed
    
15. 10:07:281 (4) - Try removing the whistle from the head to just follow vocals here. See if you like it. - fixed

Wonderful map!

Scorpiour wrote:

A minor stuff:

Please uncheck the Letterbox during break

no kds to this post

i'll recheck it after you fix that