I hate modding this song because it makes me want to cry
Life- 00:07:445 (1,2,3) - I don't think stack works well in theis section. It's pretty counter-intuitive with the piano sound in the background. Try this
http://puu.sh/u89hB/dedd38c847.jpg It give nicer feeling and a sense of flow to the song
- 00:10:645 (1,2,3) - same here
- 00:22:245 (3) - How about change this into a long slider up to 00:23:445 - ? That will cover up the background instument better. It feels "off" if it only have a lone circle while the background has those atmospheric music
- 00:28:545 - end the spinner here? (1/8 snapping) Also, consider silencing the spinner end (5%)
- 00:29:445 - umm, unused green line?
- 00:52:245 (5) - Change to 1/4 slider? Vocal has that "swing" feelings between lower and higher notes that suited slider perfectly
- 01:14:645 (6) - How about putting it on 328|156? Your current placement makes it quite unnatural to move towards the next slider (and also spaced too far)
- 01:19:045 (2) - Change to 1/2 slider? This section has the same property of the previous notes 01:18:245 (1) - so it would be better if you make them the same
- 01:32:645 (1,2,3) - Now this is confusing. Usually timing is based on the drums or piano if there're no drum sound. Generally because they're more consistent and easier to follow. I suggest you to consult to other modder about this section. I personally prefer to follow the drum sound because it feels really trippy that the notes that I'm hitting doesn't matched up to the drums (Mainly because the drum is really prominent here and the fact that you're following the drums afterwards).
- 01:59:845 (1) - Shorten it by 1/6 match more to the music
http://puu.sh/u8aYb/81b71e9fdd.jpg- 03:25:845 (7,1) - No, it's too far and you only use this kind of spacing once troughout the map. Make the spacing between them more subtle like
http://puu.sh/u8bdX/b47cba5769.jpg or so
- 03:27:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This sound way too late. You will need another timing section to put here
- 03:31:045 (5) -, 03:34:245 (5) -, etc Actually there're sound in the blue tick (1/4) and the sound is louder here compared to the first kiai. I'll point this one out in case you missed it and want to do something to complement the drum sound. (maybe 3 notes or 1/4 slider + 1 note)
- 03:53:845 (2) - missing whistle on 3rd and 4th reverse
- 04:01:445 (1,2,3,4) - Why not mirror it to have cleaner looks & more consistent movement/flow?
http://puu.sh/u8bWK/7bb7b0483b.jpg- 04:05:845 (3,4,5) - I personally think 3 notes are too much for this because the music is quite soft. 1/4 repeater would do the trick
- 04:10:245 - U sure to missed out this drum sound?
- 04:12:645 (5) - change this into 1/2 slider and remove 04:13:245 (6) - . Just like what you did on 04:09:445 (6,7) -
- 04:17:445 (1,2,1,2) - This may cause polarity problem. The next prominent sound on the music after 04:18:245 (2) - are the vocal which is snapped to 1/6, while you're following the drum on the 1/2. In addition, the NC and the placement of the 04:18:645 (1) - makes it harder for player to get hold of the notes that you'll be following next. I hope you get what I mean by that, to solve this simply change 04:18:245 (2) - into 1/2 slider and we're good to go
http://puu.sh/u8cHM/f1dc1f1cb0.jpg- 05:09:845 (4,5) - Whoops, you spaced them a little bit too far
- 05:43:845 (1) - Shorten it by 1/6 match more to the music. just like 01:59:845 (1) -
I never think it's possible to map this song before haha
Probably not kinds of mod that you want to see, but I hope this helps lol
Best of Luck!