MY FIRST STORY - Second Limit · forum

HabiHolic

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Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2017-03-04T15:36:22+00:00

Thanks for modding! almost fixed!

edit : kisses diff update !

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-03-05T03:31:42+00:00

As requested.
시간관계상 많이는 못보는...ㅈㅅ

[Easy]
00:00:858 (2) - 1/2가 굳이 필요해보이지는 않네요
00:09:543 (3) - ctrl hj, 흐름.
00:15:227 (4) - ^
크 갓맵

[Hard]
00:55:174 (1,2) - 컨트롤지로 안티점프 느낌 재는건 어떤가요
01:05:595 (2,3) - 언스택이 나아보이네요, 개인적으로
ㅁㅊ 갓맵

[Insane]
00:02:279 (2,3) - 여기가 00:01:964 (1,2) - 보다 디스턴스가 커야 한다고 생각됩니당.
01:02:753 (2,3) - 얘 컨쥐하면 흐름이 재밌을듯
와 갓맵

[Extra]
00:20:753 (1,2,3,4,5) - 별모양 만들면 예쁠것 같아여
00:42:385 (1,4) - 블랭킷?
그냥 갓맵

와 갓매퍼님....

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2017-03-05T03:41:01+00:00

^ 고쳤어요! 모딩 ㄳ!

RyoKazuka

Elite Mapper

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RyoKazuka 2017-03-06T12:04:37+00:00

ay ay

General:

kindly untick Widescreen Support and Enable countdown in all diffs

EZ

OD 3 suits better since the rhythm used here is dense (hence the Sr being 1.78)

00:29:753 (1) - remove NC due to inconsistency
00:33:543 (1) - blanket
01:07:648 (3) - maybe straighten the slider so that it flows well https://puu.sh/uwrQJ.jpg
01:13:490 (5,1) - stacks should be presented consistently in an Easy or it'll cause problems in readability (especially for new players)
I suggest readjusting the pattern like this? https://puu.sh/uws1w.jpg

Kisses' NM

the rhythm you used here is quite complex, maybe set the OD to 5? (or 4.5 at least)

00:22:964 (7) - 00:28:016 (7) - i really suggest you turn them to 1/2 sliders to fit the drums, the current one feels oddly unsatisfying
00:44:279 (2) - whistle instead of clap
01:15:227 (1,2) - the polarity here seems pretty unbalanced as you used 1/1 and 1/2 gaps in kiai, and then a shocking 3/2 gap out of nowhere. I suggest you do the same thing in Easy to avoid such mistake (a reverse 2/1 slider to avoid misreading in patterns)

neat

HD

00:20:595 (2,1) - try to make some space here for emphasization, it'll look pleasant
00:28:332 (4) - maybe put NC here like how you used it 00:25:806 (1) - 00:23:279 (1) - here, and also remove NC here 00:28:806 (1) -
00:47:911 (2) - blanket can be improved

MX

OD 7 since its intense enough

01:13:806 (4) - balnket

not much to say honestly, only this bothers me 01:03:543 (5) - because it doesnt flow that well

SC

HP 7 tho-
and OD can be increased up to 7.5 - 8 (due to spaced stream)

00:25:648 (7,1) - try to space them up for emphasis?
00:45:858 (4,1) - i dont really fond this kind of flow, try to rotate 1 a bit more like this https://puu.sh/uwtoF.jpg
01:04:174 (2) - blanket

it plays nice wow

neat set ! keep up the good work
Good luck on ranking

Kyouren

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Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2017-03-06T12:55:38+00:00

Maybe you can remove MY FIRST STORY from tags since it's already used as artist

_handholding

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Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-03-06T14:11:45+00:00

RyoKazuka wrote:
00:22:964 (7) - 00:28:016 (7) - i really suggest you turn them to 1/2 sliders to fit the drums, the current one feels oddly unsatisfying

Imho it doesn''t flow as well rhythmically and doesn't reflect what I'm going for, everything else fixed including general. Thnx for modding

update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55079
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 10648,30858,40964
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Second Limit
TitleUnicode:Second Limit
Artist:MY FIRST STORY
ArtistUnicode:MY FIRST STORY
Creator:HabiHolic
Version:Kisses' Normal
Source:
Tags:MY FIRST STORY 最終回STORY Kisses
BeatmapID:1215385
BeatmapSetID:566406

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4.5
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2017-03-06T16:47:09+00:00

KittyAdventure wrote:
Maybe you can remove MY FIRST STORY from tags since it's already used as artist

This one is album name..

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2017-03-06T19:53:16+00:00

Hi, Kisses requested.

General:

I agree with KittyAdventure, you can remove “MY FIRST STORY” from tags since already in artist.
The preview point isn’t snapped. Not an unrankable issue, but is it intentional or not?

Insane:

No widescreen support is needed since no SB. This counts for all diffs.
You can also uncheck countdown since it has no purpose and doesn’t work. This also applies to all relevant diffs.
00:05:595 (1) –Since the beat on the head of this slider is so significant and sounds a bit different, I suggest unstacking it so that there can be more emphasis on the slider/beat.
00:05:595 (1,1) –Nazi, but for aesthetics rather make a perfect stack here.
00:07:016 (1,2,3) –Tbh, I don’t really understand this sudden change in spacing since the music still remains the same and there’s nothing different in the rhythm to suggest small jumps. I suggest keeping the spacings here similar to the previous spacings to ensure that you’re following the tempo of the music correctly.
00:08:122 (4) –This beat sounds more important than this beat: 00:08:279 (1) – on the head imo. There’s a guitar-like sound on (4) and that will justify a nice jump but on (1) there isn’t really anything special. I suggest swapping the two spacings: Make (4)’s jump a bit bigger and (1)’s jump smaller. That will follow the music correctly imo.
00:10:806 (2) –Again, there’s nothing in the music really that supports a jump like this. If it was smaller it would look fine, but right now it looks a tad bit too big for what the music has to offer (which is almost nothing)
00:11:595 (4) –This one bothers me a lot since there is almost no sound in the background. It’s a very passive beat so to support that, very small spacing would be suitable and not a jump at all.
00:18:701 (2) –I suggest adding a bit more spacing here to support that finish on the head. Just to make it stand out a bit more.
00:21:227 (2,3) –This is quite a large jump and imo the beat on (3) don’t support it at all. I suggest nerfing the spacing.
00:24:227 (4) –Rather not have a strong beat as a slider’s tail. To emphasize that beat correctly, it would be better to have it as a circle or the head of a slider. So you can try this:
Picture
00:24:701 (1,2) – The spacing here looks different from previous spacings (it’s much smaller) which don’t make sense imo since the music is still very intense. I suggest increasing the distance between them a bit more.
00:25:490 (6) – Same as 00:24:227 (4) – This applies to all similar situations.
00:22:174 (6) –Add NC here and remove NC here: 00:22:806 (1) – to be consistent with 00:27:227 (1) – Or you can do it the other way around, just so long the two patterns are similar in terms of new combo’s.
00:29:753 (1) –Since the beat on the tail of this slider is similar to the beat here: 00:30:069 (2) – it would be nice if you change it into a circle too for more emphasis and also so that it supports (2)
00:30:701 (5) –Increase the spacing here a bit more. Right now it’s rather small and the music/beat offers more.
00:37:332 (7) –I think NC has to be added here and removed here: 00:37:964 (1) – to be consistent with the previous NC’ing patterns. This one is a bit too long.

I stopped, because I didn’t want to repeat myself the entire time regarding spacings. Right now the spacings can still use some work imo. They are not following the music 100% and with that I mean, some strong beats aren’t being emphasized or not enough and soft beats are being emphasized a lot while they shouldn’t. The song can thus be interpreted a bit better in terms of spacing. Also, just go over the NC’s again because a few looks longer than others and they should be consistent.

Hard:

00:08:437 (2) –In a Hard I feel the beat should be very strong for a jump to be justified. In this case the beat isn’t really that strong imo so I suggest spacing it out normally. In this case: 00:05:279 (2,3) – I feel the jump is fine since there’s a significant/different beat that stands out on (3).
00:08:595 (3,4) –Please make a nice blanket here for aesthetic reasons.
00:18:543 (2,1) –Rather avoid this slight overlap. It’s unnecessary and easy to avoid.
00:26:279 (2,3) –Why did you decide to place a jump here, but not here: 00:25:806 (1) – I think the beat on the head of 00:25:806 (1) – is much stronger than the beat on the head of 00:26:595 (3) – and for a Hard it’s important to emphasize the obvious beats imo. Rather avoid random jumps and focus on placing jumps where the beats are stronger.
00:28:332 (4) –The NC should start here to be consistent with 00:23:279 (1) – so just doublecheck that and make sure the two patterns are consistent in terms of NC’s.
00:29:753 (4,5) –I suggest changing the tail of (4) into a circle and the head of (5) into a circle as well just for a bit of variety. Right now in this one combo you only have ½ sliders and it gets a bit monotonous. Also, the beats on the tail of (4) and on the head of (5) is quite strong and stands out so emphasizing them with circles would be best.
00:37:332 (5) –I think NC should be placed here to be consistent with previous NC’ing patterns. This combo gets long.
00:45:701 (3) –In terms of aesthetics I think you can find a better placement for this slider. Right now it’s overlapping 00:44:437 (3,4) – and looks rather uncomfortable. You can try lowering 00:45:385 (2) – and stacking 00:45:701 (3) – like this:
Picture
00:48:227 (3) –There’s no strong beat on this circle at all. Emphasis does not fit here. Normal spacing would be best.
00:48:701 (1) –Having a strong finish as a tail of a slider is not a good idea. Try using a different pattern to ensure the finish gets emphasized more. Either the head of a slider or a circle.
00:53:753 (1,1) –The recovery time is very short and it’s usually advised that there should be at least one beat between the spinner and the next object. Your BPM is also really high. Perhaps try creating a slider in place of the spinner. You can perhaps also try shortening the spinner but just make sure the spinner isn’t too short then.
01:14:595 (3,4) –Doublecheck the spacing here. I doubt the spacing here should be this small since the beats are strong and there’s a big difference between this spacing and the previous ones. Increase the spacing.

Kisses’ Normal:

Uncheck widescreen and countdown. Both are not needed.
I’m a bit concerned with the gap between the AR of Normal and Hard. Hard’s AR is 8 and Normal is 4 which is a big difference. I suggest raising the AR of Normal to 5.
00:13:174 (1,7) –Perhaps try stacking here for aesthetic reasons. In the editor it looks better stacked and it’s not that difficult to fix. Like this:
Picture
Just move (6) a bit to the right.
00:22:174 (5) –Not the best looking shape tbh. It looks a bit squished in. Try to make the path of the slider as clear as possible. A straight slider will do fine.
00:23:122 –Are you sure it’s a good idea to leave this beat empty? It’s quite strong and screams for emphasis imo. Perhaps you can add a ½ slider there to catch that beat. Like this:
Picture
00:24:069 (3) –Same as 00:22:174 (5) – This applies to all similar cases.
00:28:174 –Same as 00:23:122 – This applies to all similar cases.
00:29:122 (3,4,5,6,7,1) –This is quite intense... three consecutive patterns with doubleclicks. It’s very close to being overdone imo. You probably disagree lol
01:02:753 (5) –Try finding a different placement for this slider. Right now it looks clustered because of 01:00:701 (5) – Also, the overlap of 01:00:701 (5,3) – is meh and there are better alternatives. You can perhaps try something like this:
Picture

Easy:

01:20:279 - 01:21:543 - 01:22:806 – Unnecessary green lines. You can remove them.
00:05:437 (4,2) –Be careful of stacks like this. The circle beneath should be fully faded in otherwise it’s not acceptable. Right now (2) takes too long to fully fade in so rather not stack here. It can confuse beginners since they can’t see (2) clearly.
00:07:016 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) –This is an extremely long string of ½ sliders and it gets very tedious. I know this is an Easy and patterns are limited, but try placing circles in between or even 1/1 sliders. That will give it more variety.
00:20:753 –Why is the intense part of the diff starting on the repeat of a slider? It’s very anti-climatic tbh. Rather try this to emphasize this beat: 00:20:753 – fully.
Picture
00:29:753 (1) –Hmm, I think you should rather remove NC here. Looks inconsistent with other patterns.
01:13:490 (5,1) –Rather unstack this. Stacks are never advised in Easy’s.

Good Luck~

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

3,089 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-03-06T21:35:38+00:00

hi

map looks really good lol, as always. some concerns/issues.

[general]
you should use your red line at -563 instead since kisses normal has a slider starting before the red line (which i think is unrankable..? not sure orz)

i think the AR on extra is a bit too high and the OD is a bit too low. imo OD 8 at least is better in this case.
similar reasoning i think insane should be OD 7 lol.
also i don't really see the purpose behind tick rate 2, there isn't really a constant background sound so in the slower parts the ticks sound very out of place.

[extra]
00:08:279 (1) - think the spacing to this note should be a bit smaller and 00:08:122 (4) - a bit bigger since 00:08:122 (4,2) - have the drum and hitsound emphasis.

00:25:648 (7,1) - i feel like 6>7 spacing is a big high compared to 7>1 since 1 is a strong guitar note.

00:29:910 (2,3) - ctrl g on this rhythm fits more imo, since you don't end up with 2 strong drums on the slider and instead they are both clickable.

01:03:701 (1,2) - eek plz fix blanket

01:05:279 (2,3) - same thing with ctrl g

[insane]
00:29:753 (1,2,3) - think ctrl g on this rhythm fits better with the drum and hitsound emphasis.

01:00:543 (2) - this is only time i see a 1/2 slider tail stack, other times are 3/4. i think it's better to space this away from 1 slightly.

01:05:279 (2,3) - same thing with ctrl g as extra.

[hard]
00:29:753 (4,5) - i think you should try to fit in 2 circles here on 00:29:911 - 00:30:069 - since it's stronger drum sounds.

00:53:753 - i don't think a spinner fits here at all. since spinning is a rather intense movement, and the song is nearly silent here. i suggest just using a circle and a break to display that the song is not doing anything.

[normal]
00:07:332 (14) - rip ds
just go through it with ai mod after removing all the ncs and fix those i guess theyre off by about .3 or so each time, so nothing major.

fine

[easy]

00:05:437 (4) - rip DS, please fix cuz this one is pretty far off.

00:20:279 (1) - i don't think this is a good rhythm, you have a very strong beat on the reverse, stronger than the head. i think a circle + slider rhythm is better.

00:45:701 (3,1) - plz fix blanket

01:13:490 (5,1) - only stack you ever use in this diff, i think you should remove it. (unless i missed some before..)

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HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2017-03-07T06:33:19+00:00

RyoKazuka wrote:

ay ay

General:

kindly untick Widescreen Support and Enable countdown in all diffs

EZ
OD 3 suits better since the rhythm used here is dense (hence the Sr being 1.78)

00:29:753 (1) - remove NC due to inconsistency
00:33:543 (1) - blanket
01:07:648 (3) - maybe straighten the slider so that it flows well https://puu.sh/uwrQJ.jpg
01:13:490 (5,1) - stacks should be presented consistently in an Easy or it'll cause problems in readability (especially for new players)
I suggest readjusting the pattern like this? https://puu.sh/uws1w.jpg

Kisses' NM
the rhythm you used here is quite complex, maybe set the OD to 5? (or 4.5 at least)

00:22:964 (7) - 00:28:016 (7) - i really suggest you turn them to 1/2 sliders to fit the drums, the current one feels oddly unsatisfying
00:44:279 (2) - whistle instead of clap
01:15:227 (1,2) - the polarity here seems pretty unbalanced as you used 1/1 and 1/2 gaps in kiai, and then a shocking 3/2 gap out of nowhere. I suggest you do the same thing in Easy to avoid such mistake (a reverse 2/1 slider to avoid misreading in patterns)

neat

HD
00:20:595 (2,1) - try to make some space here for emphasization, it'll look pleasant
00:28:332 (4) - maybe put NC here like how you used it 00:25:806 (1) - 00:23:279 (1) - here, and also remove NC here 00:28:806 (1) -
00:47:911 (2) - blanket can be improved

MX
OD 7 since its intense enough

01:13:806 (4) - balnket

not much to say honestly, only this bothers me 01:03:543 (5) - because it doesnt flow that well

SC
HP 7 tho-
and OD can be increased up to 7.5 - 8 (due to spaced stream)

00:25:648 (7,1) - try to space them up for emphasis?
00:45:858 (4,1) - i dont really fond this kind of flow, try to rotate 1 a bit more like this https://puu.sh/uwtoF.jpg
01:04:174 (2) - blanket

it plays nice wow

neat set ! keep up the good work
Good luck on ranking

Thx! Fixed almost! OD and HP all fixed!

-Nya- wrote:
Hi, Kisses requested.

General:
I agree with KittyAdventure, you can remove “MY FIRST STORY” from tags since already in artist.
The preview point isn’t snapped. Not an unrankable issue, but is it intentional or not?

Insane:
No widescreen support is needed since no SB. This counts for all diffs.
You can also uncheck countdown since it has no purpose and doesn’t work. This also applies to all relevant diffs.
00:05:595 (1) –Since the beat on the head of this slider is so significant and sounds a bit different, I suggest unstacking it so that there can be more emphasis on the slider/beat.
00:05:595 (1,1) –Nazi, but for aesthetics rather make a perfect stack here.
00:07:016 (1,2,3) –Tbh, I don’t really understand this sudden change in spacing since the music still remains the same and there’s nothing different in the rhythm to suggest small jumps. I suggest keeping the spacings here similar to the previous spacings to ensure that you’re following the tempo of the music correctly.
00:08:122 (4) –This beat sounds more important than this beat: 00:08:279 (1) – on the head imo. There’s a guitar-like sound on (4) and that will justify a nice jump but on (1) there isn’t really anything special. I suggest swapping the two spacings: Make (4)’s jump a bit bigger and (1)’s jump smaller. That will follow the music correctly imo.
00:10:806 (2) –Again, there’s nothing in the music really that supports a jump like this. If it was smaller it would look fine, but right now it looks a tad bit too big for what the music has to offer (which is almost nothing)
00:11:595 (4) –This one bothers me a lot since there is almost no sound in the background. It’s a very passive beat so to support that, very small spacing would be suitable and not a jump at all.
00:18:701 (2) –I suggest adding a bit more spacing here to support that finish on the head. Just to make it stand out a bit more.
00:21:227 (2,3) –This is quite a large jump and imo the beat on (3) don’t support it at all. I suggest nerfing the spacing.
00:24:227 (4) –Rather not have a strong beat as a slider’s tail. To emphasize that beat correctly, it would be better to have it as a circle or the head of a slider. So you can try this:
Picture
00:24:701 (1,2) – The spacing here looks different from previous spacings (it’s much smaller) which don’t make sense imo since the music is still very intense. I suggest increasing the distance between them a bit more.
00:25:490 (6) – Same as 00:24:227 (4) – This applies to all similar situations.
00:22:174 (6) –Add NC here and remove NC here: 00:22:806 (1) – to be consistent with 00:27:227 (1) – Or you can do it the other way around, just so long the two patterns are similar in terms of new combo’s.
00:29:753 (1) –Since the beat on the tail of this slider is similar to the beat here: 00:30:069 (2) – it would be nice if you change it into a circle too for more emphasis and also so that it supports (2)
00:30:701 (5) –Increase the spacing here a bit more. Right now it’s rather small and the music/beat offers more.
00:37:332 (7) –I think NC has to be added here and removed here: 00:37:964 (1) – to be consistent with the previous NC’ing patterns. This one is a bit too long.

I stopped, because I didn’t want to repeat myself the entire time regarding spacings. Right now the spacings can still use some work imo. They are not following the music 100% and with that I mean, some strong beats aren’t being emphasized or not enough and soft beats are being emphasized a lot while they shouldn’t. The song can thus be interpreted a bit better in terms of spacing. Also, just go over the NC’s again because a few looks longer than others and they should be consistent.

Hard:
00:08:437 (2) –In a Hard I feel the beat should be very strong for a jump to be justified. In this case the beat isn’t really that strong imo so I suggest spacing it out normally. In this case: 00:05:279 (2,3) – I feel the jump is fine since there’s a significant/different beat that stands out on (3).
00:08:595 (3,4) –Please make a nice blanket here for aesthetic reasons.
00:18:543 (2,1) –Rather avoid this slight overlap. It’s unnecessary and easy to avoid.
00:26:279 (2,3) –Why did you decide to place a jump here, but not here: 00:25:806 (1) – I think the beat on the head of 00:25:806 (1) – is much stronger than the beat on the head of 00:26:595 (3) – and for a Hard it’s important to emphasize the obvious beats imo. Rather avoid random jumps and focus on placing jumps where the beats are stronger.
00:28:332 (4) –The NC should start here to be consistent with 00:23:279 (1) – so just doublecheck that and make sure the two patterns are consistent in terms of NC’s.
00:29:753 (4,5) –I suggest changing the tail of (4) into a circle and the head of (5) into a circle as well just for a bit of variety. Right now in this one combo you only have ½ sliders and it gets a bit monotonous. Also, the beats on the tail of (4) and on the head of (5) is quite strong and stands out so emphasizing them with circles would be best.
00:37:332 (5) –I think NC should be placed here to be consistent with previous NC’ing patterns. This combo gets long.
00:45:701 (3) –In terms of aesthetics I think you can find a better placement for this slider. Right now it’s overlapping 00:44:437 (3,4) – and looks rather uncomfortable. You can try lowering 00:45:385 (2) – and stacking 00:45:701 (3) – like this:
Picture
00:48:227 (3) –There’s no strong beat on this circle at all. Emphasis does not fit here. Normal spacing would be best.
00:48:701 (1) –Having a strong finish as a tail of a slider is not a good idea. Try using a different pattern to ensure the finish gets emphasized more. Either the head of a slider or a circle.
00:53:753 (1,1) –The recovery time is very short and it’s usually advised that there should be at least one beat between the spinner and the next object. Your BPM is also really high. Perhaps try creating a slider in place of the spinner. You can perhaps also try shortening the spinner but just make sure the spinner isn’t too short then.
01:14:595 (3,4) –Doublecheck the spacing here. I doubt the spacing here should be this small since the beats are strong and there’s a big difference between this spacing and the previous ones. Increase the spacing.

Kisses’ Normal:
Uncheck widescreen and countdown. Both are not needed.
I’m a bit concerned with the gap between the AR of Normal and Hard. Hard’s AR is 8 and Normal is 4 which is a big difference. I suggest raising the AR of Normal to 5.
00:13:174 (1,7) –Perhaps try stacking here for aesthetic reasons. In the editor it looks better stacked and it’s not that difficult to fix. Like this:
Picture
Just move (6) a bit to the right.
00:22:174 (5) –Not the best looking shape tbh. It looks a bit squished in. Try to make the path of the slider as clear as possible. A straight slider will do fine.
00:23:122 –Are you sure it’s a good idea to leave this beat empty? It’s quite strong and screams for emphasis imo. Perhaps you can add a ½ slider there to catch that beat. Like this:
Picture
00:24:069 (3) –Same as 00:22:174 (5) – This applies to all similar cases.
00:28:174 –Same as 00:23:122 – This applies to all similar cases.
00:29:122 (3,4,5,6,7,1) –This is quite intense... three consecutive patterns with doubleclicks. It’s very close to being overdone imo. You probably disagree lol
01:02:753 (5) –Try finding a different placement for this slider. Right now it looks clustered because of 01:00:701 (5) – Also, the overlap of 01:00:701 (5,3) – is meh and there are better alternatives. You can perhaps try something like this:
Picture

Easy:
01:20:279 - 01:21:543 - 01:22:806 – Unnecessary green lines. You can remove them.
00:05:437 (4,2) –Be careful of stacks like this. The circle beneath should be fully faded in otherwise it’s not acceptable. Right now (2) takes too long to fully fade in so rather not stack here. It can confuse beginners since they can’t see (2) clearly.
00:07:016 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) –This is an extremely long string of ½ sliders and it gets very tedious. I know this is an Easy and patterns are limited, but try placing circles in between or even 1/1 sliders. That will give it more variety.
00:20:753 –Why is the intense part of the diff starting on the repeat of a slider? It’s very anti-climatic tbh. Rather try this to emphasize this beat: 00:20:753 – fully.
Picture
00:29:753 (1) –Hmm, I think you should rather remove NC here. Looks inconsistent with other patterns.
01:13:490 (5,1) –Rather unstack this. Stacks are never advised in Easy’s.

Good Luck~

ohhhh Thanks Nya! General Fixed all! and mod is fixed almost!

Nao Tomori wrote:
hi

map looks really good lol, as always. some concerns/issues.

[general]
you should use your red line at -563 instead since kisses normal has a slider starting before the red line (which i think is unrankable..? not sure orz) // this ask for Karen.. he is ask not unranked :3

i think the AR on extra is a bit too high and the OD is a bit too low. imo OD 8 at least is better in this case.
similar reasoning i think insane should be OD 7 lol.
also i don't really see the purpose behind tick rate 2, there isn't really a constant background sound so in the slower parts the ticks sound very out of place.

[extra]
00:08:279 (1) - think the spacing to this note should be a bit smaller and 00:08:122 (4) - a bit bigger since 00:08:122 (4,2) - have the drum and hitsound emphasis.

00:25:648 (7,1) - i feel like 6>7 spacing is a big high compared to 7>1 since 1 is a strong guitar note.

00:29:910 (2,3) - ctrl g on this rhythm fits more imo, since you don't end up with 2 strong drums on the slider and instead they are both clickable. // Better for now sorry T.T

01:03:701 (1,2) - eek plz fix blanket

01:05:279 (2,3) - same thing with ctrl g // same 00:29:910 (2,3) -

[insane]
00:29:753 (1,2,3) - think ctrl g on this rhythm fits better with the drum and hitsound emphasis.

01:00:543 (2) - this is only time i see a 1/2 slider tail stack, other times are 3/4. i think it's better to space this away from 1 slightly. // Keep this..

01:05:279 (2,3) - same thing with ctrl g as extra. // Keep this..

[hard]
00:29:753 (4,5) - i think you should try to fit in 2 circles here on 00:29:911 - 00:30:069 - since it's stronger drum sounds.

00:53:753 - i don't think a spinner fits here at all. since spinning is a rather intense movement, and the song is nearly silent here. i suggest just using a circle and a break to display that the song is not doing anything.

[normal]
00:07:332 (14) - rip ds
just go through it with ai mod after removing all the ncs and fix those i guess theyre off by about .3 or so each time, so nothing major.

fine

[easy]

00:05:437 (4) - rip DS, please fix cuz this one is pretty far off.

00:20:279 (1) - i don't think this is a good rhythm, you have a very strong beat on the reverse, stronger than the head. i think a circle + slider rhythm is better. // not sure this.. maybe.. this is very hader i think..

00:45:701 (3,1) - plz fix blanket

01:13:490 (5,1) - only stack you ever use in this diff, i think you should remove it. (unless i missed some before..)

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no coment = Fixed!

Thanks for modding!

wait for kisses!

Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 2017-03-07T18:00:11+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
KittyAdventure wrote:
Maybe you can remove MY FIRST STORY from tags since it's already used as artist
This one is album name..

태그는 맵셋 검색하는 데 도움을 주는 거라서 아티스트 이름을 굳이 태그에 적지 않아도 검색이 되기 때문에 그러는 것 같네용

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2017-03-07T18:02:45+00:00

Enon wrote:
태그는 맵셋 검색하는 데 도움을 주는 거라서 아티스트 이름을 굳이 태그에 적지 않아도 검색이 되기 때문에 그러는 것 같네용

아... 처음알았어요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ 이게 앨범이름이랑 겹쳐서 둘다 써야하는줄알았음요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-03-07T23:44:12+00:00

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55095
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 10648,30858,40964
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Second Limit
TitleUnicode:Second Limit
Artist:MY FIRST STORY
ArtistUnicode:MY FIRST STORY
Creator:HabiHolic
Version:Kisses' Normal
Source:
Tags:最終回STORY Kisses
BeatmapID:1215385
BeatmapSetID:566406

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4.5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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19016,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
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sorry I'm really busy atm (have a lot of gds and university work) and don't have much time to type replies, I fixed the ones I think needed fixing.

@habiholic remove "story" from tags?

HabiHolic

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Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2017-03-08T06:22:15+00:00

Kisses wrote:

Update

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418,169,20753,6,0,B|379:191|379:191|310:176,1,110,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,194,21227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,93,21543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
158,105,21858,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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69,214,22806,1,2,0:0:0:0:
69,214,22964,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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197,74,23753,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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439,158,25016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
478,248,25332,1,8,0:3:0:0:
436,338,25648,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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292,349,26279,1,8,0:0:0:0:
230,271,26595,1,2,0:0:0:0:
301,202,26911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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302,81,27858,1,2,0:0:0:0:
302,81,28016,1,2,0:0:0:0:
213,35,28332,6,0,B|168:23|168:23|95:40,1,110,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
57,47,28806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
99,136,29122,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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25,202,29911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
25,202,30069,2,0,B|5:240|5:240|15:324,1,110,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,350,30701,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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255,285,33858,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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175,43,35437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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103,261,37016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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382,41,39227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
309,108,39543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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236,40,40332,1,2,0:0:0:0:
137,47,40648,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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506,282,57227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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14,169,64174,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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78,229,72385,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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137,18,73490,1,2,0:0:0:0:
234,3,73806,6,0,B|272:21|272:21|354:7,1,110,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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474,63,74595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
454,160,74911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,76648,12,0,84701,0:0:0:0:

sorry I'm really busy atm (have a lot of gds and university work) and don't have much time to type replies, I fixed the ones I think needed fixing.

@habiholic remove "story" from tags?

Update!

and this tag is "最終回STORY" lol

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

3,089 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-03-14T04:16:21+00:00

sry for really late xd

[general]
i still think od on insane extra is too low, 8 and 7 is better imo..
also i asked some other people and some said negative offset is needed for red line since there's a slider. so i suggest to do that to be safe.
[extra]
i think tick rate is too high, in slow part like 00:52:174 (2) - it is super loud and annoying imo

00:29:911 (2,3) - again, i think this rhythm has to be changed. the song has strong notes on 00:29:911 - and 00:30:069 - and nothing on 00:30:227 - , so you have to make the emphasis properly using clickable objects. a rhythm like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7561708 with proper spacing is much better.

additionally i think 00:30:385 (4,5) - ctrl g on these works better.

00:55:016 - maybe mute this with 5% volume?

01:05:279 (2,3) - same issue here. rhythm is wrong to me.

you did this on insane, and it works a lot better, so you should do it in extra too.

[insane]
just same thing about tick rate

01:03:069 (4,5) - blanket

01:05:279 (2,3) - same rhythm issue as above.

[hard]
00:19:490 (4) - blanket xd

some random unused green lines w/e

[kisses's nomal]
ask him if you can change it for him if you don't wanna wait, they're pretty minor anyway (and not actual stuff)
00:51:227 - i think add circle here before spinner

01:00:701 (5,6) - change to 1/1 slider works better imo

[easy]
01:07:016 (17) - ds is off

k call me back when you fixed this

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2017-03-14T10:07:51+00:00

Nao Tomori wrote:
sry for really late xd

[general]
i still think od on insane extra is too low, 8 and 7 is better imo..
also i asked some other people and some said negative offset is needed for red line since there's a slider. so i suggest to do that to be safe.
[extra]
i think tick rate is too high, in slow part like 00:52:174 (2) - it is super loud and annoying imo

00:29:911 (2,3) - again, i think this rhythm has to be changed. the song has strong notes on 00:29:911 - and 00:30:069 - and nothing on 00:30:227 - , so you have to make the emphasis properly using clickable objects. a rhythm like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7561708 with proper spacing is much better.

additionally i think 00:30:385 (4,5) - ctrl g on these works better.

00:55:016 - maybe mute this with 5% volume?

01:05:279 (2,3) - same issue here. rhythm is wrong to me.

you did this on insane, and it works a lot better, so you should do it in extra too.

[insane]
just same thing about tick rate

01:03:069 (4,5) - blanket

01:05:279 (2,3) - same rhythm issue as above.

[hard]
00:19:490 (4) - blanket xd

some random unused green lines w/e

[kisses's nomal]
ask him if you can change it for him if you don't wanna wait, they're pretty minor anyway (and not actual stuff)
00:51:227 - i think add circle here before spinner

01:00:701 (5,6) - change to 1/1 slider works better imo

[easy]
01:07:016 (17) - ds is off

k call me back when you fixed this

Fixed my diff!

and offset is fine imo lol

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-03-14T11:22:38+00:00

Nao Tomori wrote:
[kisses's nomal]
ask him if you can change it for him if you don't wanna wait, they're pretty minor anyway (and not actual stuff)
00:51:227 - i think add circle here before spinner add circles on either the red or white tick don't flow that well rhythmically to me with the way the song is transitioning. Also in my experience it's better to omit a circle before the spinner in some cases (have it start on what you're mapping, in this case the downbeat) for lower difficulties

01:00:701 (5,6) - change to 1/1 slider works better imo 1/1 slider does work but I wanted to map all 3 beats, I did so in places such as 01:08:279 (5) . I added the circle for extra impact on the vocals since it's unlike the slider tail of 00:58:174 (5) there is unique vocal being sung here on 01:01:016

I wanted to go in a bit extra detail to why I rejected the changes because I didn't want to come across as the kind of mapper that didn't want to change because I thought my original version was a masterpiece or something like that, you know, the "all no change" meme :p

Thnx for looking though ~

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-03-14T14:14:05+00:00

looks fine, good luck!

HabiHolic

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Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2017-03-14T14:14:56+00:00

Nao Tomori wrote:
looks fine, good luck!

Thx Nao!

F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2017-03-17T08:29:09+00:00

let's go

[General]

metadata source can be provided?

irc log

14:51 F D Flourite: 00:40:648 (4,1) - are you following vocal here?
14:51 F D Flourite: 00:45:701 (3,1) - rhythm is similar to this
14:52 F D Flourite: but you use different pattern
14:52 F D Flourite: 00:45:701 (3,1) - I like this one more
14:53 F D Flourite: because it follows vocal correctly
14:54 HabiHolic: hmmm
14:54 HabiHolic: not sure this >_< sorry
14:54 HabiHolic: ah wait
14:54 HabiHolic: i can 00:40:964 - this add note
14:55 F D Flourite: I think you can make a 1/1 slider from 00:40:648 - and then start the next note on 00:41:437 - 
14:56 HabiHolic: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7584119
14:56 HabiHolic: here is fine?
14:57 F D Flourite: yes
14:57 HabiHolic: okok
14:57 HabiHolic: ><
14:57 HabiHolic: fixed!
14:59 *F D Flourite is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1215384 MY FIRST STORY - Second Limit [Hard]]
14:59 HabiHolic: open :3
15:00 F D Flourite: 00:07:490 (2,3) - why distance look bigger than 00:07:016 (1,2) - lol
15:01 HabiHolic: orz... mistake
15:01 F D Flourite: 00:17:595 (2) - same :P
15:02 HabiHolic: Fixed!
15:05 F D Flourite: 00:34:490 (3,1) - what are you following :/   00:34:648 - sounds like a circle
15:06 HabiHolic: this is bad?
15:06 HabiHolic: lol?
15:06 HabiHolic: this flow is drum lol
15:07 F D Flourite: 00:34:490 (3) - hmmm. I think this should be 2 circles?
15:08 HabiHolic: No...
15:08 HabiHolic: 2 circles is bad flow.. imo
15:09 F D Flourite: yeah I find it too lol
15:09 F D Flourite: but it sounds bad now
15:13 F D Flourite: I make rhythm like this: puu.sh/uMHws/6ce8d39264.jpg
15:13 F D Flourite: puu.sh/uMHws/6ce8d39264.jpg
15:13 F D Flourite: http://puu.sh/uMHws/6ce8d39264.jpg
15:13 F D Flourite: https://puu.sh/uMHws/6ce8d39264.jpg
15:13 F D Flourite: lol
15:13 HabiHolic: what is part?
15:14 F D Flourite: from 00:33:543 (1) - 
15:14 F D Flourite: 00:34:332 (2) - I delete this. and change rhythm on 00:34:490 (3,1,2) - 
15:14 F D Flourite: because a 1/1 slider will miss sounds
15:15 HabiHolic: sorry this is not accpet..
15:15 HabiHolic: accept*
15:17 F D Flourite: 00:34:806 (1,2) - or make them two 1/2 sliders?   
15:19 HabiHolic: sure
15:19 HabiHolic: fixed
15:20 F D Flourite: 00:59:753 (4,1) - fix blanket
15:22 *F D Flourite is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1200839 MY FIRST STORY - Second Limit [Insane]]
15:23 HabiHolic: ok
15:23 HabiHolic: blanket fixed
15:24 F D Flourite: 01:05:753 (1) - remove NC? 00:58:174 (3) - you don't NC on previous patterns
15:27 HabiHolic: ah ok
15:27 HabiHolic: fixed!
15:29 F D Flourite:  /np
15:29 *F D Flourite is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1199852 MY FIRST STORY - Second Limit [Extra]]
15:29 F D Flourite: 00:30:701 (6) - move to 392,28 to create a jump?
15:30 HabiHolic: ok!
15:31 F D Flourite: 00:57:069 (4,5) - hmm. rhythm ctrl+G? flow should be changed if accept though
15:33 HabiHolic: hmm... keep
15:34 F D Flourite: the clap at slidertail will sound weird :P
15:35 HabiHolic: hmm
15:35 HabiHolic: nono this keep.. ><
15:35 F D Flourite: ok

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2017-03-17T08:32:16+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:

let's go

[General]

metadata source can be provided?

irc log

14:51 F D Flourite: 00:40:648 (4,1) - are you following vocal here?
14:51 F D Flourite: 00:45:701 (3,1) - rhythm is similar to this
14:52 F D Flourite: but you use different pattern
14:52 F D Flourite: 00:45:701 (3,1) - I like this one more
14:53 F D Flourite: because it follows vocal correctly
14:54 HabiHolic: hmmm
14:54 HabiHolic: not sure this >_< sorry
14:54 HabiHolic: ah wait
14:54 HabiHolic: i can 00:40:964 - this add note
14:55 F D Flourite: I think you can make a 1/1 slider from 00:40:648 - and then start the next note on 00:41:437 - 
14:56 HabiHolic: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7584119
14:56 HabiHolic: here is fine?
14:57 F D Flourite: yes
14:57 HabiHolic: okok
14:57 HabiHolic: ><
14:57 HabiHolic: fixed!
14:59 *F D Flourite is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1215384 MY FIRST STORY - Second Limit [Hard]]
14:59 HabiHolic: open :3
15:00 F D Flourite: 00:07:490 (2,3) - why distance look bigger than 00:07:016 (1,2) - lol
15:01 HabiHolic: orz... mistake
15:01 F D Flourite: 00:17:595 (2) - same :P
15:02 HabiHolic: Fixed!
15:05 F D Flourite: 00:34:490 (3,1) - what are you following :/   00:34:648 - sounds like a circle
15:06 HabiHolic: this is bad?
15:06 HabiHolic: lol?
15:06 HabiHolic: this flow is drum lol
15:07 F D Flourite: 00:34:490 (3) - hmmm. I think this should be 2 circles?
15:08 HabiHolic: No...
15:08 HabiHolic: 2 circles is bad flow.. imo
15:09 F D Flourite: yeah I find it too lol
15:09 F D Flourite: but it sounds bad now
15:13 F D Flourite: I make rhythm like this: puu.sh/uMHws/6ce8d39264.jpg
15:13 F D Flourite: puu.sh/uMHws/6ce8d39264.jpg
15:13 F D Flourite: http://puu.sh/uMHws/6ce8d39264.jpg
15:13 F D Flourite: https://puu.sh/uMHws/6ce8d39264.jpg
15:13 F D Flourite: lol
15:13 HabiHolic: what is part?
15:14 F D Flourite: from 00:33:543 (1) - 
15:14 F D Flourite: 00:34:332 (2) - I delete this. and change rhythm on 00:34:490 (3,1,2) - 
15:14 F D Flourite: because a 1/1 slider will miss sounds
15:15 HabiHolic: sorry this is not accpet..
15:15 HabiHolic: accept*
15:17 F D Flourite: 00:34:806 (1,2) - or make them two 1/2 sliders?   
15:19 HabiHolic: sure
15:19 HabiHolic: fixed
15:20 F D Flourite: 00:59:753 (4,1) - fix blanket
15:22 *F D Flourite is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1200839 MY FIRST STORY - Second Limit [Insane]]
15:23 HabiHolic: ok
15:23 HabiHolic: blanket fixed
15:24 F D Flourite: 01:05:753 (1) - remove NC? 00:58:174 (3) - you don't NC on previous patterns
15:27 HabiHolic: ah ok
15:27 HabiHolic: fixed!
15:29 F D Flourite:  /np
15:29 *F D Flourite is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1199852 MY FIRST STORY - Second Limit [Extra]]
15:29 F D Flourite: 00:30:701 (6) - move to 392,28 to create a jump?
15:30 HabiHolic: ok!
15:31 F D Flourite: 00:57:069 (4,5) - hmm. rhythm ctrl+G? flow should be changed if accept though
15:33 HabiHolic: hmm... keep
15:34 F D Flourite: the clap at slidertail will sound weird :P
15:35 HabiHolic: hmm
15:35 HabiHolic: nono this keep.. ><
15:35 F D Flourite: ok

thx!
you can check here! http://myfirststory.net/discography/

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-03-17T17:58:45+00:00

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everything should be fixed

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2017-03-18T03:32:06+00:00

Kisses wrote:

update

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256,192,76648,12,0,84701,0:0:0:0:

everything should be fixed

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F D Flourite

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F D Flourite 2017-03-18T05:26:53+00:00

so nice!

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2017-03-18T06:36:05+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
so nice!

Really thanks! Flourite!!

Gaia

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Gaia 2017-03-18T06:38:51+00:00

uwaaa grats habi! ^^

Sieg

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Sieg 2017-03-18T07:58:38+00:00

grats :3

_handholding

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_handholding 2017-03-18T08:57:30+00:00

Yay ~ congratz habi! \ ( > w<)/

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2017-03-18T13:35:44+00:00

Ayyy, Gratzz! >w<

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2017-03-19T04:00:11+00:00

all thanks!

Enon

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Enon 2017-03-19T15:49:31+00:00

축하드려요~!

RyoKazuka

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RyoKazuka 2017-03-23T07:25:15+00:00

a gratz habi C:

M3lf

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M3lf 2017-03-25T13:13:06+00:00

so how much rpm on the last spinner do you need on HD+HR (3.34 Stars) to actually make it? i S'd it right until the spinner pops up, and i spin at about 320-350ish and still cant make it through? Great Job on the map doe, rlly like it

Natsu

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Natsu 2017-03-26T17:36:38+00:00

wew gratz

EnCrypTion

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EnCrypTion 2017-03-30T10:05:11+00:00

Can't do the spinners when using HDHR keeps failing even tho no miss

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