I agreed with alot of the things you mentioned. didnt reply to the mod because i didnt want to spend 10 min on writing fixed on every single pointParachute wrote:
Hey heres mod from m4mSPOILERGeneral
Im pretty sure the offset is a bit wrong. It should be about 60 but im not 100% sure about the correct number and maybe you should ask someone whos really good at timing.
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Imo i think you should make the hitsounds a bit louder (~10%) because you used custom hitsounds that are already kinda silent id say and then you only use 60% for the most part which, for me, is too low, and the chorus has 70% .. idk i would like it more if it was a bit louder
00:13:325 (9,1) - Maybe nc 9 instead of 1 or rework this beginning section. nc here is kinda weird imo. 00:12:611 (4,1) - also maybe nc at 4 instead of 1 since music here is like that.
00:18:325 (1) - Here til 00:21:754 (7) - you should make nc like you did after the stream that follows for better consistency
00:31:468 (1) - Remove nc
00:31:611 (2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe put this a bit more up left so it has the same spacing from 1 to 2 as it has in the jump at 00:31:325 (4,1) - and it also lowers the 1/4 jump which is.. kinda weird here imo.
00:36:611 (1,2) - Stack this under 00:35:753 (9) - correctly :c
00:39:182 (1) - Imo flow can be improved here with ctrl+g on that slider. You prob did that because of the jumps you wanted here because of the guitar sound but.. if you want that i think you should increas the jump between 00:39:468 (2,3) - by dragging 2 more to the right and as i said ctrl+g the 1.. i think it would be better
00:41:182 (1) - At this section the ncs dont make sense to me. i would do them at: 00:42:468 (2) - , and then at either of 00:43:325 (4,5) -
00:53:468 (1) - Remove nc
00:59:468 (1,2,3) - I would just stack these or just improve the visuals here because this slowdown looks kinda awkward with the angle you changed the direction in..
01:14:325 (1) - Oh here you stacked it correctly so i assume the first one at 00:36:611 (1,2) - wasnt intentional.
01:22:897 (1) - Remove nc
01:30:754 (2) - I think this should be a bit of a jump, maybe like x2 ds so it would be better to play from the big jump before this.
01:42:897 (1) - Didnt nc these parts previously so this shouldnt be a nc too
01:45:182 (1) - ^
01:46:040 (6) - Stack this under the slider
01:57:754 (7) - Id rather see the nc here for consistency but.. this one is fine too
02:02:325 (1) - Here i dont understand the nc again until the vocal starts. I would redo them at this part like you did all the other times.
02:17:897 (5,6) - Maybe ctrl+g the slider and put 5 on the beginning again? Or ctrl+g 02:17:611 (4) - . both would have better flow imo.
02:40:611 (1) - Remove nc
02:44:325 (1,3) - Remove nc at 1 and add it at 3. thats how you did it at the same section before.
02:52:611 (1,2) - and 02:57:182 (1,2) - after these 2 sections you always did nc at the "2" so change these ncs too.
02:57:325 (2) - Ctrl+g has better flow again imo and the jump wouldnt be bad too.
03:45:040 (1) - This nc seems kinda random imo.
04:22:326 (3) - Ctrl+g here too
04:32:040 (1) - Remove nc. after this you did it every 2 big white ticks so do it here too.
04:45:182 (3) - Ctrl+g.. i dont really think these stacking notes fit much for the singing part and i think you could do something else here.. just my opinion though
05:12:611 (3) - etc. etc. not gonna point them out anymore change them if you want to, your choice anyways and its not really a problem ^^
So, overall this map is pretty and the flow is really good already so gl with it! :3
- Changed ms (+20)
- Polished NC
- Fixed a few flow stuff
Thanks alot mate!