1. Cold (5,63 stars, 388 notes)
2. Insane (4,82 stars, 357 notes)
3. Loki's Hard (3,7 stars, 241 notes)
4. Normal (2,14 stars, 150 notes)
5. Phyloukz' Easy (1,08 stars, 72 notes)
6. test (5,63 stars, 388 notes)

Quinten wrote:

Hey friend! You need a preview point too! Thanks for that ^^

Insane

00:02:591 (1,1) - Make this look smoother the overlap is really ugly.done with blanket
00:04:643 (1,2,3) - Maybe blanket this? Like : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6916878 looks definitely better
00:08:591 (1,2,3,4) - These overlaps look like a mess imo. It's annoying to read, and it doesn't look that nice. fixed
00:11:275 (4) - This note right behind the slider? fixed a bit but it should stand out a bit from the rest
00:15:380 (2,3) - Remove these two, and remove NC so the lyrics matches up with the notes? i also wanted to that but as it is now it fits the music itself much better so i'll leave it for now
00:22:801 (1,2,3) - While I don't dislike this patern, it's hard for 4.81 stars and players who play a difficulty like this won't expect this trough the whole map. Maybe less of this from here onwards? You have a lot of this patern. dont know about this one. i'll let this as it it. will need more mods for this
00:27:065 (8) - Start slider on the white tick and put a note in front of this slider? ye fits music+ fits pattern
00:48:380 (3) - Open up aiMod, you have some unsnapped sliders here!fixed
00:59:117 (5,6) - Doesn't look good, more blanket! fixed
01:09:380 (2,3,4) - This looks really messy and doesn't flow nice. fixed

Cold

00:01:407 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Streams looks messy. Maybe convert a slider to a stream for better flow? i think the stream looks ok (will need more opinions)
00:04:012 (4,5,1,2) - Movements like these don't flow nice. It's to rectengular and not nice to play imo.fixed
00:04:959 (3,4) - Consider not making these akward overlaps.
00:06:538 (4,5) - ^ fixed all
00:11:275 (4) - I would move this one after the slider again, but it's up to you. mhhh
00:13:328 (1) - You could match the lyrics up to the combo again? ^
00:24:065 (1,2,3) - These jump are pretty hard and don't look so nice? Maybe more like : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6916979 fixed
00:26:907 (2,3,4) - Doesn't look nice, more blanket! this pattern had a intention but the new one looks better
00:31:801 (8,9) - ^, the slider also doesn't look that nice xD ^
00:33:222 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - These jumps are so big? But why? The music isn't that intense yet right? This looks more for the end of the map. +
00:43:012 (1,2,3,4,1) - The streams play nice imo! thanks ^^
00:52:407 (8,9,1) - Blanket. Maybe make the slider just circular and not a wierd shape? I think it would look great. fixed
01:07:959 (1,2) - Blanket. fixed

Wuab wrote:

i suck at modding normals -No problem^^

Cold

Timing
00:43:012 (1) - i would put this in normal sample set like you did at the start
00:45:538 (1) - same ^
00:44:591 (1) - this is a build up part of the song i would have this in normal sample set
00:47:117 (1) - same ^
01:03:065 (1) - i think the whole kiai should be in normal sample set as this is the main kiai, so not having it would make it feel less intense, which it is not.
-all done, u r write there
Placement
00:40:722 (1) - remove this, the vocals are on the white and red ticks not the blue ticks think plays smoother without too
01:11:749 (3,4) - i would make this into 1 slider on the white ticks as there is no mapable sound on the blue in this part the last note should be prioritized and a slider end there would be too weak
00:27:538 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i would make this into somthig like this http://imgur.com/ubmR35z you seem to be mapping to the drums but they are very quiet and complex, doing what i did simlifys the drum beat, still follows your idea and still follows the vocals.ye this works quite well
00:32:117 (10) - the vocal here is held longer than you have mapped it, i would end it on the white tick and remove the 1 to give it a proper ending
00:37:643 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - alot of unclean overlap, all the slider tails and some circles all cover a small area inconsistently, you change the positions so that all the tails fully overlap at the same position. i fixed it but still arent satisfied
01:23:433 (3) - cool 9 ^^

Nice buildup sections, need lots of overlap fixing and a few spacing check but it's a pretty good diff.

Insane

[box=]Timing
00:42:380 (9) - add kiai here just like the cold diff and end 00:52:486 (9) - here again like the cold diff
01:03:065 (1) - same thing ^ 01:23:433 (3) - ending ^ oups totally forgot it

the whole map is 100% volume i would reduce this in general like the cold diff, i would the hit sounds in the kiai louder as these are more intense parts of the song the thing is that i want to find some1 for hitsounding so ill let it like this until i found one

Same reasoning as cold diff
00:43:012 (1) - i would put this in normal sample set like you did at the start
00:45:538 (1) - same ^
00:44:591 (1) - this is a build up part of the song i would have this in normal sample set
00:47:117 (1) - same ^
01:03:065 (1) - i think the whole kiai should be in normal sample set as this is the main kiai, so not having it would make it feel less intense, which it is not.fixed all
01:10:643 (2,3,4) - don't understand the sv changes here me neither lol - fixed

Placement
00:03:854 (2,3,4) - make into a stack, right now it has improper spacing agreed
00:10:801 (3,4) - could make into just a 1/1 slider nah, i want to highlight the last not because it is very strong
00:23:117 (2,3) - ctrl + g for better spacing? looks like its on purpose but still doesn't space well
00:23:433 (1,2,3) - ^
00:22:801 (1,2,3) - ^^
00:24:696 (1,2,3) - ^^ im not sure myself if i let this part like it is now, i wait for other opinions on that
00:31:959 (8,9) - move 9 further away, spaced to close fixed
00:32:907 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - change the sliders to flow into the center, it would improve spacing and flow alot fixed
00:39:223 (3,3) - because of the increased slider velocity it becomes very hard to hit the circle after them, change the pattern or reduce the slider velocity changed pattern
00:40:722 (1) - remove note vocal is only heard on white tick fixed
00:42:222 (7) - change the direction of this slider the jump between this and 00:43:012 (1) - is large for now reason fixed
01:23:433 (1) - NINE!!

good repeated patterns and ideas, some become unreasonably hard due to increasing slider velocity.

Both diffs have good repetition that plays well, both also need work on overlaps.

Nice map-set

Gl and have fun mapping

1. 00:00:065 (1) - 00:00:696 (1) - 00:01:328 (1) - 00:01:959 (1) - NC'ing all these thing gives a better view. It also gives kinda "fun" effect, like every 'beep' = new color
2. 00:01:959 (1) - I don't understand to what this slider is mapped. So, first of all it should end on the white tick, not on the blue. Simply because vocal part lands on this tick. But this is still not ok... Another problem here is that you're missing really strong drum beat on this tick 00:02:591 - So I would suggest you this rhythmic line here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6936075 This solves two problems at once:
   
   1. you're not skipping downbeat on the big white tick
   2. (imo) it follows the vocal better
3. 00:04:643 (1) - remove NC and make it here instead 00:04:959 (3) . It separates 'musical phrases' ('bars of the music', no matter how it is called) in more correct way.
4. 00:05:907 (1) - 00:07:328 (1) - remove NC; 00:07:486 (2) - add NC. reason is just the same
5. 00:09:854 (1) - remove NC - 00:10:012 (2) - add nc
6. 00:11:275 (4) - too close. Make more space, to emphasize the strong beat on this note
7. 00:12:065 (5,1) - overlaps like this is not very good. Try to stack it, or spread
8. 00:12:065 (5) - NC this, because this part of vocal is sings "from the silence", and followpoints will ruin the effect of the music
9. 00:13:012 (1) - no reason to make the NC here, I would suggest you to remove it
10. 00:15:222 (5) - NC
11. 00:15:854 (1) - ...no NC.
12. NC design needs so much work. You're trying to make nice view, follow the vocal perfectly. But NC's shoud reflect music bars and general tune of the song
13. 00:25:328 (4,1) - swap NC's. (Doesn't matter where the vocal starts, downbeat is on the (4) )
14. 00:26:591 (6,1) - ^
15. 00:25:328 (4,3) - try to avoid overlaps like this at all
16. 00:25:959 (4,6,2) - ^ this is not very good too, but at leat it is consistent, so idk maybe it's fine
17. 00:27:538 (1,3) - really weird overlap. stack them or make something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6936217 I mean like... more equal or idk. I see you tried to make it consistent in future parts, and that has a problem too, I'll write about it above (you can try this aswell https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6936242 )
18. 00:28:170 (1,3) - ^
19. 00:27:696 (2,3) - overlap
20. 00:28:170 (1,3) - stuff like this isn't good and can be unrankable, because you're overlapping the reverse arrow (partially but anyway)
21. 00:28:801 (1,3) - 00:29:433 (1,3) - ^
22. 00:28:959 (2,3) - even if they are afar, try to avoid it. It's just a very good style. Or if you're making lost of overlaps in your map - make it consistent
23. 00:31:643 (7) - nc
24. 00:32:591 (1) - 00:33:222 (1) - no NC, 00:32:907 (3) - add NC
25. NC's are so broken in the part after this, check it out, I think you're already know what to do
26. Lots of bad overlaps aswell it ^
27. 00:40:328 (2,1) - weird gap in betwee. I know that you're mapping to the vocal, but skipping music like this is a bad idea. Add a slider or two 1/2 circles 00:40:486
28. Imo your Kiai doesn't reflect the really most intense parts of the song. Wanna suggest you to remove the first Kiai at all and start it here 00:53:117 the make a short pause in it here 01:12:065 and start again 01:13:328

FlazeChuix wrote:

Hope you don't mind an amateur mod. Never!!!!!

Normal

00:03:854 (3,4,5) - I bit off sync with the vocals, I would suggest moving these notes to the red line in favor of the white to fit the vocals better. Patterns can stay the same as to me, the gameplay isn't really altered.
00:06:222 (3,4,5) - ^ fixed both, ur right there
00:09:696 (1,2) - Also a bit off sync with the vocals. I would shorten the slider by a fourth and move both these notes over a fourth to fit the vocals. (sorry, I don't know how to share screenshots, but the slider can stay the same shape, and pushed back to accommodate the interval change.) I know what you mean and yea its much better that way -you can post your own sceenshots with using puush (you need to download)/or ingame f12+shift (easiest method)
00:54:380 (3,4,5) - Same as the first. fixed

Insane

00:03:854 (2,3,4) - Same as the Normal, a bit late on the vocals. Suggest moving to the red tick before the white.fixed

Sorry, couldn't find anything else Nothing to be sad about

I couldn't find anything on Cold, it looks good from what I see.

Your map is looking great so far. I wish you luck with your map! I really appreciate that - Thanks^^

Dammond wrote:

Hi! Hello~
Request

I modded only the top diff, and just about a half. Sorry for that. Lots of general words. I believe it will help you to improve Everything is helping me out-and this is not a really short post lol

[Cold]

1. 00:00:065 (1) - 00:00:696 (1) - 00:01:328 (1) - 00:01:959 (1) - NC'ing all these thing gives a better view. It also gives kinda "fun" effect, like every 'beep' = new color Nice idea can only agree !
2. 00:01:959 (1) - I don't understand to what this slider is mapped. So, first of all it should end on the white tick, not on the blue. Simply because vocal part lands on this tick. But this is still not ok... Another problem here is that you're missing really strong drum beat on this tick 00:02:591 - So I would suggest you this rhythmic line here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6936075 This solves two problems at once:
   
   1. you're not skipping downbeat on the big white tick
   2. (imo) it follows the vocal better
   This slider was more like a transition from the stream to the "beeps" and it worked just fine but your advice is a just a better option to mine and yea, the downbeat is very strong there I didnt noticed before
3. 00:04:643 (1) - remove NC and make it here instead 00:04:959 (3) . It separates 'musical phrases' ('bars of the music', no matter how it is called) in more correct way. I had like the wrong concepts with NCs in this map. For me Ncs were like a guide to make the map easier to read/follow (here vocals) but i will adapt your knowledge in this map becasue im not very experienced with NCs as you can see (i wont commentate your NC points I think you know why i put the NCs like the way i did
4. 00:05:907 (1) - 00:07:328 (1) - remove NC; 00:07:486 (2) - add NC. reason is just the same
5. 00:09:854 (1) - remove NC - 00:10:012 (2) - add nc
6. 00:11:275 (4) - too close. Make more space, to emphasize the strong beat on this note I agree but i wont leave too much space for smoother (not so rapidly) transition
7. 00:12:065 (5,1) - overlaps like this is not very good. Try to stack it, or spread I think you linked me sth wrong ^^, when not could you explain it to me?
8. 00:12:065 (5) - NC this, because this part of vocal is sings "from the silence", and followpoints will ruin the effect of the music Think I accedently erased that Nc. Dont know why its gone
9. 00:13:012 (1) - no reason to make the NC here, I would suggest you to remove it My reason of NCing this is that the counting of the vocal matches the combo (works only for the first few numbers) so i have a bit of gimmick in my map
10. 00:15:222 (5) - NC ^
11. 00:15:854 (1) - ...no NC. ^ If you think this is Nc there is stil bad i will leave it in mind for next modders and change it when they criticize it too
12. NC design needs so much work. You're trying to make nice view, follow the vocal perfectly. But NC's shoud reflect music bars and general tune of the song ^
13. 00:25:328 (4,1) - swap NC's. (Doesn't matter where the vocal starts, downbeat is on the (4) )
14. 00:26:591 (6,1) - ^
15. 00:25:328 (4,3) - try to avoid overlaps like this at all Fixed it Defently agreed that this overlap looks like **** but i had no really idea how to fix it- i think im satisfied with the new version
16. 00:25:959 (4,6,2) - ^ this is not very good too, but at leat it is consistent, so idk maybe it's fine ^
    
17. 00:27:538 (1,3) - really weird overlap. stack them or make something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6936217 I mean like... more equal or idk. I see you tried to make it consistent in future parts, and that has a problem too, I'll write about it above (you can try this aswell https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6936242 )
18. 00:28:170 (1,3) - ^
19. 00:27:696 (2,3) - overlap
20. 00:28:170 (1,3) - stuff like this isn't good and can be unrankable, because you're overlapping the reverse arrow (partially but anyway)
21. 00:28:801 (1,3) - 00:29:433 (1,3) - ^
22. 00:28:959 (2,3) - even if they are afar, try to avoid it. It's just a very good style. Or if you're making lost of overlaps in your map - make it consistent
    -I just realized how lazy i was in this pattrern/part - i just placed them somewhere without working on it much and didnt even make them consistent denfenetly fixed all / make them consistent(answer to the previous 6 points)
23. 00:31:643 (7) - nc
24. 00:32:591 (1) - 00:33:222 (1) - no NC, 00:32:907 (3) - add NC there i need to disagree because it destroys the pattern too much-pattern repetition is something very important in this map to me
25. NC's are so broken in the part after this, check it out, I think you're already know what to do Well i did my best
26. Lots of bad overlaps aswell it ^ - ill check them later - too tired right now~
27. 00:40:328 (2,1) - weird gap in betwee. I know that you're mapping to the vocal, but skipping music like this is a bad idea. Add a slider or two 1/2 circles 00:40:486 Thanks didnt even think about putting sth there but now it plays smoother
28. Imo your Kiai doesn't reflect the really most intense parts of the song. Wanna suggest you to remove the first Kiai at all and start it here 00:53:117 the make a short pause in it here 01:12:065 and start again 01:13:328 I need to disagree . Imo the beginning of the refrain isnt intense at all compared to the second half and the build up.Expecially the build up section such a big "hype"(dont really know how to describe it lol) b4 the refrain i dont want to erase that kiai section

Dammond wrote:

Addition to my post, obviously no Kudosu for this

about this thing 00:12:065 (1,1) - game is just broken and can't display correct elements in this case xD there's a screenshot https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6938196
May be they are kinda afar, but as I said it's a nice style to avoid overlaps like this, if they are not really necessary.
will change this
NCs are mapped to the vocal pretty fine and kinda cool, I just mean that this NC style will simlpy lose to Beatmap Nominators if you'll rank stuff
GL

-ill keep that in mind thank you very much ^^ and have a nice day

Neoskylove wrote:

Q Thanks for passing by~

[General]
make Hard diff.
The lowest diff in mapset should be lower than 2.00* stars.
searching a guy for hard diff atm and easy is in wip (gd too)

[Cold]
NC should be consistant. examples? - i would fix them myself if i know which one
Distance should be consistant.
00:03:696 (3,4,5,6) - for example, this pattern's DS is not consistent.
and 00:04:643 (6,7) - this could be hard to read because Its DS is sinilar with others. fixed both
00:13:012 (1,2,3,4) - ^ i dont see any problems there
00:15:222 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - and this has don't have consistency in rhythm. ?
00:18:380 (1) - Meaningless SV changing, This pattern has no reason that this part should be emphasized. there arent slider in the first place. If there would be they would have the same sv~ so I dont want to emphazise this part

practice more, and you can be good mapper, Good luck~

Lokidoki wrote:

GD

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384,184,22328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,152,22486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,152,22565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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60,20,24222,5,0,0:0:0:0:
60,20,24301,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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4,368,25170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,356,25328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,356,25407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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228,308,25801,5,0,0:0:0:0:
308,348,25959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,304,26117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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148,252,27696,5,0,0:0:0:0:
68,296,27854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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364,280,28486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,52,28959,5,0,0:0:0:0:
380,72,29117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,56,29591,5,0,0:0:0:0:
36,12,29749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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340,136,31486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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312,300,36538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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402,316,37486,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,228,37643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,168,37801,2,0,P|296:136|296:104,1,60
296,24,38117,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,52,38275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,28,38433,2,0,P|92:40|64:56,1,60
0,112,38749,5,0,0:0:0:0:
60,180,38907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,256,39065,2,0,P|8:292|20:324,1,60
96,276,39380,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,316,39538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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276,40,61643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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84,268,63065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,83591,12,0,88328,0:0:0:0:

Feel free to decline if you don't like it

zeb112 wrote:

good job dood having fun playing this

repladux wrote:

From modding queue

Normal

01:02:275 (4) - Positioning of slider end not really suitable for a normal difficulty


Suggestion:
fixed


01:07:959 (1) - Too far away from previous slider for a normal difficulty


Suggestion:
fixed

Since it's part of a triangle, the whole triangle should be adjusted


01:18:854 (2) - Too far away from previous slider end


Suggestion:
fixed


01:20:117 (5) - Also too far away from previous slider end


Suggestion:
fixed


01:20:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This whole section is just kind of iffy and not too suited for a normal remapped (and yeah, wasn't satisfied myself)


01:23:275 (9) - Too far away from slider end


Suggestion:
^remapped

Loki's Hard

00:44:590 (1,2,3) - This section should land on the white ticks


Suggestion:

1. if you're going to map to the drum beat at 00:02:591 (1) - then you might as well map a slider rather than a circle at 00:01:959 (1) - too for consistency. after that it's safe to follow the vocals
2. 00:05:591 (3) - i wouldn't use this extended slider (3/4 slider) since it's one of the only times you use it. if you wanted to make it a theme of the map that would be ok, though just having it once is unnecessary. and 00:05:907 (4) - is spaced really far due to the extended slider, and even with slider leniency, can be hard to hit correctly.
3. 00:16:643 - should be a circle or slider here since "seven" has two syllables
4. try to keep things consistent (e.g: 00:18:380 (1) - is a slider, but it is the same sound as 00:19:012 (1,2) - , 00:19:643 (1,2) - , etc. so it should be mapped the same. that doesn't mean that rhythms can only be mapped one way, but if you map a sound one way try to keep it consistent)
5. 00:17:749 (1,2) - i would keep the spacing between these 1-2 jumps consistent. while spacing "doesn't need to be consistent" in extra diffs, these sounds are all the exact same sounds, so i would make sure they have the same spacing. it just makes your map look more polished.
6. your rhythm choices also seem concerning. one example is 00:20:275 (1) - where there's clearly a drum roll in the background. you could map this drum roll while still emphasizing the vocal notes by doing stuff with 1/4 sliders and streams like:
   
   this

   
7. for another rhythm example: 01:00:538 - the strong sound is on this red tick here, yet there's a sliderend there. you will always want the player clicking the strongest sounds in the music. the general rule for sliders is that you want them to end on sounds of equal or less intensity. in this case, the head of 01:00:380 (2) - is definitely somewhat strong since there is a snare drum hit, though at 01:00:538 - it is significantly louder. there's a guitar, a crash, a vocal hit, everything.
8. another concept that you could try to work in places is intensity/emphasizing sounds. as music gets louder/as there are stronger sounds in the music, you should start to space more or use more uncomfortable flow. for example, starting at 00:48:065 (1) - the music gradually increases in intensity, so it would be cool if you started to gradually increase spacing based on the music. it all just makes the map represent the song more rather than staying at the same intensity, which the song doesn't do.
9. 01:18:380 (1) - i would map a stream with kicksliders here (how i said before) because it's the end of the song and really really intense, but it seems like with spacing and everything this map is at about the same intensity which doesn't represent the song.

1. 00:03:696 (4,5,6) - this rhythm may be hard to read with the stack
2. 00:11:275 (3) - this circle is spaced wayyyyy too far out considering there's only a 1/4 beat gap before it. if you see in the top right it says the distance is 6.69x distance snap which is very excessive even for an insane.
3. 01:00:380 (3,4,5) - there's no 1/4 sound here that would justify this burst, so i wouldn't map it. (some people would say it's ok for emphasis reasons, but my personal opinion is that if there's no sound there, it shouldn't be mapped.)
4. everything else can follow the points above, i don't want to just retype it all so i'll let you find the mistakes for yourself and fix them. this will make you learn from your mistakes and find problems easier.

1. 00:20:670 (9,10) - put these kicksliders on the white tick rather than the blue tick
2. 00:22:643 (7) - the strong sound is on the white tick, why would you have a reverse there rather than an actual circle? circles should be clicked on strong sounds.
3. 00:44:591 (1,2,3) - move these to the white tick right after
4. the only problem i have with this diff is rhythm really. just look at the point i made above about the cold diff "you will always want the player clicking the strongest sounds in the music. the general rule for sliders is that you want them to end on sounds of equal or less intensity."

1. 00:09:222 (7,8) - consistency: since you mapped all the other ones the same, i would map this one the same.
2. 00:43:643 (2) - try not to overlap things like this
3. typically on normals you use static distance snap, but i don't see you doing that. for normals the rule is typically still time-distance equality, meaning that distance changes will be the same as time changes (e.g: if there is a twice as big gap between rhythm, there should be twice as big spacing.)
4. 01:10:486 (1) - move this back onto the white tick, and if you want you can place a circle before where the slider originally was.

Bergy wrote:

~nm from my queue~

i hate to be direct, but i personally think this map isn't of high enough quality for a normal mod*kinda true lol, so i'll try to give some general points and try to improve your mapping for the future rather than cherrypicking examples like "FIX BLANKET THANKS"

Cold

1. if you're going to map to the drum beat at 00:02:591 (1) - then you might as well map a slider rather than a circle at 00:01:959 (1) - too for consistency. after that it's safe to follow the vocals your idea was my old setup which i changed until now like 3-4 times so I'll keep it for now because i will need probably more opinions on that
2. 00:05:591 (3) - i wouldn't use this extended slider (3/4 slider) since it's one of the only times you use it. if you wanted to make it a theme of the map that would be ok, though just having it once is unnecessary. and 00:05:907 (4) - is spaced really far due to the extended slider, and even with slider leniency, can be hard to hit correctly.
3. 00:16:643 - should be a circle or slider here since "seven" has two syllables fixed
4. try to keep things consistent (e.g: 00:18:380 (1) - is a slider, but it is the same sound as 00:19:012 (1,2) - , 00:19:643 (1,2) - , etc. so it should be mapped the same. that doesn't mean that rhythms can only be mapped one way, but if you map a sound one way try to keep it consistent) fixed- i thought like this sound was a bit stronger than the rest so i put a slider there but after the second mod i change it~
5. 00:17:749 (1,2) - i would keep the spacing between these 1-2 jumps consistent. while spacing "doesn't need to be consistent" in extra diffs, these sounds are all the exact same sounds, so i would make sure they have the same spacing. it just makes your map look more polished.
6. your rhythm choices also seem concerning. one example is 00:20:275 (1) - where there's clearly a drum roll in the background. you could map this drum roll while still emphasizing the vocal notes by doing stuff with 1/4 sliders and streams like:
   
   this

   
   i dont know about this one. I'll change it but dont know really yet
7. for another rhythm example: 01:00:538 - the strong sound is on this red tick here, yet there's a sliderend there. you will always want the player clicking the strongest sounds in the music. the general rule for sliders is that you want them to end on sounds of equal or less intensity. in this case, the head of 01:00:380 (2) - is definitely somewhat strong since there is a snare drum hit, though at 01:00:538 - it is significantly louder. there's a guitar, a crash, a vocal hit, everything. defently fixed, remapped the part a bit
8. another concept that you could try to work in places is intensity/emphasizing sounds. as music gets louder/as there are stronger sounds in the music, you should start to space more or use more uncomfortable flow. for example, starting at 00:48:065 (1) - the music gradually increases in intensity, so it would be cool if you started to gradually increase spacing based on the music. it all just makes the map represent the song more rather than staying at the same intensity, which the song doesn't do. well i tried to emphasis the song with SV and a DS which stays constantly relatively high DS. I dont want to have across the sceen jumps in my map when the song is a tv-size map which has it highest intenity in the end- where i uesed imo huge jumps to represent it enought - its not like i dont understand you but i think i dont want to overuse huge jumps in maps- just not my style sorry~
9. 01:18:380 (1) - i would map a stream with kicksliders here (how i said before) because it's the end of the song and really really intense, but it seems like with spacing and everything this map is at about the same intensity which doesn't represent the song.I dont think kickslider represent the part well. They just dont fit imo~[/color]

Insane

1. 00:03:696 (4,5,6) - this rhythm may be hard to read with the stack agreed - changed to a triangle
2. 00:11:275 (3) - this circle is spaced wayyyyy too far out considering there's only a 1/4 beat gap before it. if you see in the top right it says the distance is 6.69x distance snap which is very excessive even for an insane.spaced more after a request but i think i overdid it lmao - didnt realized it was 6,69~
3. 01:00:380 (3,4,5) - there's no 1/4 sound here that would justify this burst, so i wouldn't map it. (some people would say it's ok for emphasis reasons, but my personal opinion is that if there's no sound there, it shouldn't be mapped.) agreed- expecially because i didnt use triples at all lol
4. everything else can follow the points above, i don't want to just retype it all so i'll let you find the mistakes for yourself and fix them. this will make you learn from your mistakes and find problems easier.

fixing it later


Loki's Hard

1. 00:20:670 (9,10) - put these kicksliders on the white tick rather than the blue tick
2. 00:22:643 (7) - the strong sound is on the white tick, why would you have a reverse there rather than an actual circle? circles should be clicked on strong sounds.
3. 00:44:591 (1,2,3) - move these to the white tick right after
4. the only problem i have with this diff is rhythm really. just look at the point i made above about the cold diff "you will always want the player clicking the strongest sounds in the music. the general rule for sliders is that you want them to end on sounds of equal or less intensity."

Normal

1. 00:09:222 (7,8) - consistency: since you mapped all the other ones the same, i would map this one the same. ill keep that in mind but im not sure if i'll change this
2. 00:43:643 (2) - try not to overlap things like this fixed
3. typically on normals you use static distance snap, but i don't see you doing that. for normals the rule is typically still time-distance equality, meaning that distance changes will be the same as time changes (e.g: if there is a twice as big gap between rhythm, there should be twice as big spacing.) Idk but i use static DS in every part of the map~
4. 01:10:486 (1) - move this back onto the white tick, and if you want you can place a circle before where the slider originally was.Maybe its just me but sont see why~

i mean the easy diff looks pretty good he appreciate it^^

don't be afraid to pm me and ask any questions, i don't know how good your english/mapping term knowledge is, so just pm me on osu with any questions

1. 00:00:065 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Don't use Normal sampleset with 1/4 rhythms lol it's jarring to ears.
2. 00:03:696 (4,5,6) - 00:06:222 (7,8) - Could use a same rhythm here.
3. 00:21:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - So the vocals occur consistently every 1/2 beats. If the vocal is consistent, then your pattern should be as well. Right now your pattern isn't reflect the vocal well as it should be cuz you're inconsistently overlapping some circles. My point is you should overlap every single one of them or not at all to make your pattern more consistent which will fit better with the vocals.
4. 00:32:275 (4) - Artistic shapes don't really work well with short sliders so try to refrain from doing that, this one looks kind of cluttered imo.
5. 00:37:643 (5,6) - Should be spaced the same as 00:38:275 (2,3) - 00:38:907 (2,3) - etc. DS will be scaled differently depends on SV from green lines, 00:37:328 has a different SV from 00:37:959 so the objects will be spaced differently despite having the same DS.
6. 00:40:328 (3,1) - Was expecting a jump here according to what you do with vocals earlier.
7. 00:59:117 (5,6) - 00:59:749 (1,2) - Not sure why these are patterned differently.
8. 01:09:854 (3,4) - Why aren't these stacked like 01:09:222 (1,2) lol
9. 01:13:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Come on vocals are repeating here where's your usual rhythm and patterning concept zz
10. To me this map gives an impression like you're kind of lost whenever the vocals or rhythms aren't obvious, and then whatever you do on those parts are kind of like all over the place, like this part 00:53:117 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) for instance where the rhythms are unclear on what they're following, try focusing on mapping on strong instruments instead of vocals in those parts instead.
11. The major problem here is that some sections in the song has different intensities, for example this part 00:02:591 is probably the least intense and the chorus is more intense than other parts. So your mapping should reflect that. For instance, 01:11:907 (4,5) - is probably the most intense part of the song so using jumps with 3 circles would be a better idea. You need to reflect the intensity of the song in each part with your mapping. You could use less spaced objects/less dense rhythms in calmer parts, vice versa in more intense parts, etc.

Electoz wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:00:065 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Don't use Normal sampleset with 1/4 rhythms lol it's jarring to ears. ouups~ didnt realize it until now, i#ll change it immediatly
2. 00:03:696 (4,5,6) - 00:06:222 (7,8) - Could use a same rhythm here.Ye i thinks this fits very well there
3. 00:21:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - So the vocals occur consistently every 1/2 beats. If the vocal is consistent, then your pattern should be as well. Right now your pattern isn't reflect the vocal well as it should be cuz you're inconsistently overlapping some circles. My point is you should overlap every single one of them or not at all to make your pattern more consistent which will fit better with the vocals. fixed, totally agreed
4. 00:32:275 (4) - Artistic shapes don't really work well with short sliders so try to refrain from doing that, this one looks kind of cluttered imo. changed it a bit but i want that slider to be sticking out of the rest because the vocal is going very deep with her voice + change in the sv
5. 00:37:643 (5,6) - Should be spaced the same as 00:38:275 (2,3) - 00:38:907 (2,3) - etc. DS will be scaled differently depends on SV from green lines, 00:37:328 has a different SV from 00:37:959 so the objects will be spaced differently despite having the same DS.this was my intention (lol) because i wanted to be the jumps bigger because of sv changes - I use this apttern often in this map(set) so i`ll let it be
6. 00:40:328 (3,1) - Was expecting a jump here according to what you do with vocals earlier.fixed
7. 00:59:117 (5,6) - 00:59:749 (1,2) - Not sure why these are patterned differently.fixed
8. 01:09:854 (3,4) - Why aren't these stacked like 01:09:222 (1,2) lol didnt thought about that
9. 01:13:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Come on vocals are repeating here where's your usual rhythm and patterning concept zz i brought structure in that section with remapping
10. To me this map gives an impression like you're kind of lost whenever the vocals or rhythms aren't obvious, and then whatever you do on those parts are kind of like all over the place, like this part 00:53:117 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) for instance where the rhythms are unclear on what they're following, try focusing on mapping on strong instruments instead of vocals in those parts instead.this part wasnt easy for me becasue i was an very unerperienced mapper who was a bit lost~ will look over this section very closely in the next days
11. The major problem here is that some sections in the song has different intensities, for example this part 00:02:591 is probably the least intense and the chorus is more intense than other parts. So your mapping should reflect that. For instance, 01:11:907 (4,5) - is probably the most intense part of the song so using jumps with 3 circles would be a better idea. You need to reflect the intensity of the song in each part with your mapping. You could use less spaced objects/less dense rhythms in calmer parts, vice versa in more intense parts, etc. will remember your words for improving my map more and more

Hitsounding can be improved a lot more imo, good luck~ first a guy wanted to do it for first- but now he cant be at the comp atm so i need to experiment myself, have a test diff atm and ill waiting until i upload my fully hitsounded version~