1. 00:30:845 (5,6) - why is it a 3/4 rhythm while 00:45:074 (7) - isn't?
2. 02:36:465 (3,4,5,1) - the stacking is kinda confusing, how about overlap or blanket them like this http://puu.sh/u8Qpv/f6d6b70388.jpg
3. 00:14:836 - feels empty, needs whistle or something else
4. 01:15:312 (1,3) - the slider heads are too closed
5. 01:27:318 - missing clap
6. 01:29:097 - ^ is this on purpose?
7. 01:50:219 (3,4) - something like this looks better http://puu.sh/u8QUs/139175f994.jpg
8. 02:06:894 - whistle like 02:10:452 - this?
9. 草

Hazu- wrote:

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1. 02:01:781 - 02:01:892 - Being the last diff, Would not be better to map these sounds? o: Yes, I prefer to take these sounds for last diff, but i thought many player will play with double time so i made simple rhythm at here.
2. 01:17:758 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 02:30:685 (5,6,7,8,9) - If you compare these parts, there are many differences even though they are the same sounds, for example, there is much difference between the jumps. fixed first part maybe
3. 02:12:898 (3,4) - Ctrl+G? Follow better the rhythm. fixed
   
   I'll try to re-mod this diff later ;w;

GL~ o3o/

N a s y a wrote:

こんち

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1. 00:36:625 (2) - 00:22:396 (2) - ここが重なってるからこっちも重ねたくない？ ここはちょっとうまぶりたい
2. 02:14:454 (2) - drum finish? fix
3. 02:34:242 (3) - x:184y:328とかどう？ fix
4. 01:02:861 (1) -02:15:788 (1) - スライダーにNormalのホイッスル鳴らしたくない？ ちょっと目立っちゃうのでこのままでいきます

Irreversible wrote:

hi!

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00:58:859 (4) - Slider-End: This hitsound sounds a bit too loud. I think it fits, but maybe you can lower volume a bit for this only? It will be a cute touch. set 30% volume!
00:59:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm.. what about adding some more hitsounds here? I mean, the sounds are pretty strong, imo. 01:00:415 (4) - added drum-whistle here
01:51:331 (3,4,5) - Why is this one pattern? I think it should be seperated, because vocals start 01:51:775 - .. know what I mean? follow the background sound by three sliders, like this pattern 01:49:107 (1,2) -
02:20:235 (3,4,5,6) - Tbh, I think this pattern doesn't fit.. you always used movement (except some antijumps, which fit reallllyy good), and here you stop weirdly.. maybe space them out? fixed
02:42:468 (1) - Just asking, is this finish intended? Keep, if it is. oh change to drum-whistle lol

Really cute map, not much to say. Good to go!

Cute set, alacat! I suggest finding 2 more mods, mainly for Delis' diff because I think it could be a bit cleaner, but generally, this is good to go! Please call me after you found some.

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

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1. 00:13:947 (6) - a hitsound here would be cool cool, added it
2. 01:50:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm doesnt fit imo because you didnt execute vocals like this anywhere else but in here the vocal is at 01:51:553 - which is executed at the slider end .it kinda breaks consistency and also emphasizes it less follow the background sound by three sliders, like this pattern 01:49:107 (1,2) -
3. 02:01:558 (1) - Feels really undermapped compared to what you have at 00:48:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - .Song is almost the same so ignoring those drums at 02:01:781 - feels weird same reason as above (reply on Hazu-'s mod)
4. 02:20:235 (3,4,5,6) - These anti jumps just dont fit here AT ALL . even tho u might have patterns like these in other places but they fit properly in those cases but in this case the song doesnt call for it. You should change these to jumps or have atleast a bit more movement. Would fit better fixed
5. 02:37:133 (1) - 01:24:206 (1) - Tbh these would be better if you change them to circle streams instead. The song is really intense at those parts and these sounds are also pretty strong imo so having streams would work better prefer to slider on this sound because these sound is not strong

gl

Pata-Mon wrote:

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1. lol 1pc hope i can fc after ranked
   
2. 01:15:312 (1,2) - move a bit closer for reading? maybe it's fine for playing
   
3. 02:14:343 - 02:16:121 - use lower volume? fixed
   
4. 02:20:235 (3,4,5,6) - you didn't use similar pattern in other place, so it's a bit weird. 02:20:457 (4,5) - ctrl+G or stack 02:20:235 (3,4) - and 02:20:679 (5,6) - directly? fixed!
   
5. nothing much to say. Nice map

GL

• [Special Blend]

1. 00:16:170 (4) - this probably deserves a bit more to differentiate it from 00:15:059 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7373376 . You could make it 1/4 if you think 1/6 is overkill for this section, but I'm quite sure the violin is 1/6 .
2. 00:34:624 (2) - spacing is a bit too unexpected for a red tick emphasis. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7373398 try this position (my placement is not perfect but I hope you get the idea)
3. 00:58:192 (2,3) - I think ctrl+g rhythm here catches the vocal better.
4. 01:25:984 (1,2,3) - fun flow but 01:27:763 (1,2,3) - can you make it flow like that here as well? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7373444 .
5. 02:01:558 (1) - vocal isn't that extended so I think you can make this a reverse 1/2 to utilise drum beats a bit more https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7373454
6. 02:38:022 (3) - this note seems odd because you want to use circles to emphasise vocals here. 02:37:577 (2) - this into a reverse slider?
   
   [Delis' Hard]
7. 00:12:168 (3) - reverse slider seems unfitting here. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7373489 how about this rhythm?
8. 00:16:837 (4) - this note is quite hard to read since the slider end of the 1/4 is on the downbeat. I think it's better to not map this note.
9. 00:30:845 (5,6) - extended slider seems left out, you could use more of these later on I think, 00:37:959 (6,7) - . Also 00:31:289 (6) - you prefer to use red tick at these places (00:38:626 (7), 00:42:184 (5) - ,...) , except for this one, a bit strange.
10. 01:32:654 (4,3) - just a small overlap I think you can fix.
11. 02:40:690 (1,2) - rhythm between this and 02:38:911 (1,2) - this is too different, not catching the vocal well enough.
12. 02:42:246 (1,2) - NC downbeat?
    
    [Pata-Mon's Normal]
13. 00:31:512 (5,6) - awkward gap because offbeat slider and vocal is still singing. I suggest changing it to this 00:27:954 (5,6) - . (01:40:881 (5,6) - this is ok though because less dense rhythm -> more time to read)

LMT wrote:

Hi! Just passing by.

• [Special Blend]

1. 00:16:170 (4) - this probably deserves a bit more to differentiate it from 00:15:059 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7373376 . You could make it 1/4 if you think 1/6 is overkill for this section, but I'm quite sure the violin is 1/6 . i don't want to take 1/4, 1/6 sound on here because that is clam part
2. 00:34:624 (2) - spacing is a bit too unexpected for a red tick emphasis. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7373398 try this position (my placement is not perfect but I hope you get the idea) made a little jump for guitar sound from here 00:34:624 -
3. 00:58:192 (2,3) - I think ctrl+g rhythm here catches the vocal better. fixed
4. 01:25:984 (1,2,3) - fun flow but 01:27:763 (1,2,3) - can you make it flow like that here as well? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7373444 . good flow! but i prefer to use current jump
5. 02:01:558 (1) - vocal isn't that extended so I think you can make this a reverse 1/2 to utilise drum beats a bit more https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7373454 It's enough to take 1/1 rhythm on here
6. 02:38:022 (3) - this note seems odd because you want to use circles to emphasise vocals here. 02:37:577 (2) - this into a reverse slider? this is fine to me

Karen wrote:

Cute mapper!