>w< nice~

This is a good map

Star ;o

nice map <3

!!!Message!!!

star~

Мапа сделана хорошо, но блин, задолбали аниме осты...
Мочи еще, желательно в другом жанре :Р
별~

[Normal]
00:16:248 (2) - new combo?
00:53:255 (1,2,3) - = как-то фигово что на том же месте что и позапрошлое комбо
01:03:547 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:204 (2) - add new combo
01:10:773 (8) - ^
01:11:649 (1) - remove new combo
01:27:854 (1,1) - кнопки слишком рано после спиннера для нормала

[Hard]
00:52:160 (2) - stack
01:18:219 (3) - snap to grid
01:22:598 (6,7) - предлагаю поменять их местами
00:28:511 - слишком большая громкость хитсаундов в этой тайминг секции

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Nice

ЗвездыПёзды

nice map
Star~

Done

Download: Fukuhara Kaori - Miracle Guy ~TV size~ (Zorlok_) [Famfrit].osu

star first~

★star★

По просьбе~

[Famfrit]

1. 00:01:138 (2) - Убери НК
2. 00:02:014 (2) - Убери НК
3. 00:03:328 (7) - НК
4. 00:04:204 (11) - НК
5. 00:06:503 (1) - Убери НК
6. 00:10:555 (1) - Убери НК
7. 00:11:211 (3) - НК
8. 00:12:963 (1) - Убери НК
9. 00:13:182 (2) - НК
10. 00:19:752 (1) - Убери НК
11. 00:20:190 (2) - НК
12. 00:28:511 (1) - Убери НК
13. 00:32:890 (8) - НК
14. 00:33:109 (1) - Убери НК
15. 00:35:299 (1,1) - Убери НК
16. 00:51:722 (1) - Убери НК
17. 00:54:350 (1,1) - Убери НК
18. 01:10:335 (1,1) - Убери НК
19. 01:14:058 (1,1) - Убери НК
20. 01:27:854 (1,1) - Убери НК

Немного по спейингу:

1. 00:05:299 (14) - Поставь лучше на внешнюю сторону слайдера. Примерно так.
2. 00:15:810 (1) - Поставь нормально, по принципу прошлой пары.
3. 00:53:583 (4) - Для удобства разверни его на 90 градусов, а то его не видно.
4. 01:27:854 (1,1) - Я конечно понимаю что тыкать ноты в глаза Кагами это весело, но поставь их всё же в центр.

 

Download: Fukuhara Kaori - Miracle Guy ~TV size~ (Zorlok_) [Famfrit].osu

Whiss wrote:

По просьбе~

[Famfrit]

1. 00:01:138 (2) - Убери НК сделал
2. 00:02:014 (2) - Убери НК сделал
3. 00:03:328 (7) - НК сделал
4. 00:04:204 (11) - НК сделал
5. 00:06:503 (1) - Убери НК сделал
6. 00:10:555 (1) - Убери НК сделал
7. 00:11:211 (3) - НК сделал
8. 00:12:963 (1) - Убери НК сделал
9. 00:13:182 (2) - НК сделал
10. 00:19:752 (1) - Убери НК сделал
11. 00:20:190 (2) - НК сделал
12. 00:28:511 (1) - Убери НК немогу, тут спейсинг другой
13. 00:32:890 (8) - НК сделал
14. 00:33:109 (1) - Убери НК сделал
15. 00:35:299 (1,1) - Убери НК немогу
16. 00:51:722 (1) - Убери НК сделал
17. 00:54:350 (1,1) - Убери НК сделал
18. 01:10:335 (1,1) - Убери НК сделал
19. 01:14:058 (1,1) - Убери НК сделал
20. 01:27:854 (1,1) - Убери НК сделал

Немного по спейингу:

1. 00:05:299 (14) - Поставь лучше на внешнюю сторону слайдера. Примерно так. сделал
2. 00:15:810 (1) - Поставь нормально, по принципу прошлой пары. сделал
3. 00:53:583 (4) - Для удобства разверни его на 90 градусов, а то его не видно. сделал
4. 01:27:854 (1,1) - Я конечно понимаю что тыкать ноты в глаза Кагами это весело, но поставь их всё же в центр. >:D ок

 

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Download: Fukuhara Kaori - Miracle Guy ~TV size~ (Zorlok_) [Famfrit].osu

Download: Fukuhara Kaori - Miracle Guy ~TV size~ (Zorlok_) [Famfrit].osu

Here

Add Famfrit and klubek to tags.

Download: Fukuhara Kaori - Miracle Guy ~TV size~ (Zorlok_) [klubek's Easy].osu

Sound~

Download: Fukuhara Kaori - Miracle Guy ~TV size~ (Zorlok_) [klubek's Easy].osu

-Before modding-
The downloaded .osz pack contains totally different diff name from the scoring pages. Please full submit your map.

Difficulties Available:

Famfrit (5 stars, 320 notes)
Hard (4,92 stars, 230 notes)
Normal (4,36 stars, 156 notes)

This is different from the scoring page:

E klubek's Easy H Normal I Hard I Famfrit's Insane

[Insane]
0:09:679 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) should be symmetrical?
0:19:314 (5) up 1 grid
0:22:708 (6) down 1 grid
0:45:700 (5) down 1 grid

[hard]
0:37:051 (7) right 1 grid
1:10:116 (1) up 1 grid

good map, star~

answer for yourself, so you could see that corrected, and what is not

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
0:09:679 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) should be symmetrical? thanks
0:19:314 (5) up 1 grid no, this is DS
0:22:708 (6) down 1 grid ok
0:45:700 (5) down 1 grid no

Download: Fukuhara Kaori - Miracle Guy ~TV size~ (Zorlok_) [Famfrit].osu

звезда х)

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Have your star

nice map~

very good ~~

star

General
Your mp3 is 320kbps which is unrankable. Downrate it to 192 kbps. (I can do that for you but it'll take time. I'll give the new offset as well.)
There is no preview time. 00:56:102 - seems to fit. (go at that time, timing (next to "Web"), Set Current Position as Preview Point, save, open another diff and repeat)
Crop the background to make it have 4:3 ratio ? (I can do that for you as well, just ask)
You need to add Framfrit and klubek to the tags of all difficulties.

Normal
This is way too hard for a normal. The 1/2 streams and kick sliders (like 00:18:438 (1) - ) make it harder than it should be.
Reduce all the difficulty settings by at least 1 and use the biggest circles.
00:03:547 (7,8) - Unstack ?
00:21:065 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is too hard: you start the combo with a stack which are hard to play for new players (because they don't really know when to hit the notes), then use another stack with a different rhythm.
00:34:642 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - The kick slider is too hard to play, then the stream itself is too hard to play as well, overlaps itself, and his hidden by the hitburst of the slider. Delete this part and re-do it :/
01:27:854 (1,1) - Delete these two notes and make the spinner end where the second was.

Hard
Offset should be 701. Delete the two first timing sections.
AR-1.
Lots of added notes that make no sense according to the music...
00:14:058 (3,4,1) - Spacing issue. Nothing calls for a jump here, space (1) properly.
00:35:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Inconsistent spacing: all the beats aren't spaced the same way. Turn Grid snap off to fix it. It's playable, but it looks bad.
00:39:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:42:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:46:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:51:722 (1,2) - Stack them in a better way (use 0,00x distance snapping and hold alt to turn grid snap off)
01:06:613 (1) - Delete this note and make the spinner end here. This note is hardly playable: it's too soon after the spinner.
01:09:897 (7,1) - Nothing calls for a jump here, space them properly.
01:12:087 (8,9) - Nothing calls for a jump here again, and it doesn't play right. Reverse the slider, or modify its shape.
01:20:846 (10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Nothing in the song calls for these jumps.
01:27:854 (1,1) - Same as for Normal.

klubek's Easy
This is too hard for an Easy... Recude the HP drain rate by at least two ticks, the approach rate by one, and the overall difficulty by two. Sliders are too fast, too, reduce the speed ?
00:01:576 (2,4) - Move them both two grids left so that they stack with (1) and (3). Right now it's a spacing error.
00:06:832 (2) - Unstack ?
00:18:438 (1) - First of all, this one's too close to the previous note. Move it to the left. Second of all, this is extremely hard to play for new players: they can't expect the number of repeats to be so high and would confuse them. I suggest you place a spinner that starts at 00:18:219 - and finishes at 00:19:752 - with a Finish hitsound
00:21:722 (1,2) - Why did you suddenly halve the spacing ? It'd be fine for higher difficulties, but it's very confusing for new players.
00:33:109 (2,3) - Spacing error: they're spaced the same way as (1,2) and the time gap is different... Drag (3) closer to (2).
00:35:737 (1,2,3,4) - This is too hard for new players. Unstack them ?
00:38:365 (4,1,2) - Spacing error: they're spaced evenly and the time gap is different.
00:54:788 (4) - Too hard for new players (see above). Make a spinner ? (from 00:54:569 - to 00:56:102 - )
01:00:263 (1,2,3,4) - Don't change the spacing so suddenly in the easiest diff of the mapset...
01:14:277 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:18:219 (1) - Same as above.
01:19:752 (2,3,4,5) - These are too close to each other... Space them out a bit.
01:21:065 (5,1) - why is (1) so far away from (5) ?
Don't use slider speed changes in an Easy diff. It makes the spacing extremely confusing. The spacing in this diff was rather inconsistent too, switching from 0,4x to 0,8x seemingly randomly. :/

Famfrit's Insane
Offset should be 701. Delete the two first timing sections.
I'm sorry, but I fail to mod this... :/ The diff is clearly overmapped. The jumps hardly make sense, nor do the streams... And I'm not talking about self overlapping patterns or patterns that overlap under others, or silenced notes for the sake of adding notes to the diff.
I also question the rankability of this 00:49:970 (2,1,2) -
Well, if you want to keep this:
- don't silence beats like 00:26:978 (2,4,6,1) - and 00:33:985 (2,4,6) -
00:20:190 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this looks terrible ingame, unstack them ?
sliders in the middle of streams are hardly readable and don't play well
EDIT: lower stack leniency makes the diff look better

Starred~

How did I not see this earlier ? Be glad I had to time this.

00:28:511 - Hard and Insane have a ton of timing sections here, including one RED timing section that makes the timing afterwards wrong. Delete them all but one green and resnap the notes after.

Here are the new mp3 and background. New offset is 748. Remember to resnap all the notes, and to full submit the map.
http://www.mediafire.com/?7s61td963pnvv1d

Odaril wrote:

Famfrit's Insane
Offset should be 701. Delete the two first timing sections.
I'm sorry, but I fail to mod this... :/ The diff is clearly overmapped. The jumps hardly make sense, nor do the streams... And I'm not talking about self overlapping patterns or patterns that overlap under others, or silenced notes for the sake of adding notes to the diff.
I also question the rankability of this 00:49:970 (2,1,2) -
Well, if you want to keep this:
- don't silence beats like 00:26:978 (2,4,6,1) - and 00:33:985 (2,4,6) -
00:20:190 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this looks terrible ingame, unstack them ?
sliders in the middle of streams are hardly readable and don't play well
EDIT: lower stack leniency makes the diff look better

Done, thanks

Download: Fukuhara Kaori - Miracle Guy ~TV size~ (Zorlok_) [Famfrit's Insane].osu

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gl

star~

overall:
change title with "Miracle Guy (TV size)" and make sure all tags the same.
title change steps
offset @ 730ms is fine to me. Make sure all your difficulties have the same offset and remember to resnap all notes.
your background size must be 1024x768 or smaller, resize yours please.

IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIsane
So sorry I don't like the mapset, could I skip it?
well I should not said that in such position, but I just can't accept meaningless steamsssssssssssssssssssss and the hitsound.
sorry again.

Hard:
you should try to reduce the sample volume, it is toooooo loud(with your hitsound too) to cover the song. :
about the hitsound, well ,you have your reason I think. :
but I strongly suggest that lower the volume when you use finish, it really suck. :
and if you want to use green lines to change the sample set or volume, DO NOT put them right on the notes, move them 1/4 forward.

00:14:324 (4,1) - I missed here every time I played it..
00:38:850 (11) - remove this to follow the song?

Normal:
see the hitsound suggestion at hard.
try to reduce the approach rate(and/or overall difficulty) to make it reach 4 stars or less.

Easy:
try to reduce the HP drain rate?

well not a bad try, but it could be mapped better with this song...

Resurrected my map, please т.т

revived

only thing that jumped out at me was 00:47:781 (7) on Insane mode. I don't see how people are supposed to notice that slider when it looks exactly like part of an all-circle stream

Also I don't know if the green cursor is a good idea when the background and every other combo are also green