smau5 wrote:

hey NM from my queue

Hegemony

1. dude why are you mapping 1/16 (it even says IS NOT RECOMMENDED FOR ANYONE TO USE EVER)
2. 00:09:237 (4) - this slider is out of place, i mean you should just do a normal slider then at 00:09:480 - start a different pattern, u should avoid changing thing at red ticks, always white
3. 00:14:115 (4) - wtf is this xd
4. 00:16:310 (1,1,1,1) - why new combo every slider
5. 00:18:750 (3) - why is this one too far
6. 00:19:236 (1) - from until here 00:34:846 (1) - it's 1/6 beat , every object isn't snapped correctly (everything else is 1/4)
7. 00:56:066 (4) - spacing xd (too close)

idk it feels pretty repetitive mapping (i know that's how the song is) ,every object feels random and you are not even using the correct beat thing? xd ( 1/4, 1/6 , etc.).
good luck and have fun

Danii wrote:

m4m

General

I think that if you cut a song it doesn't mean that you should add "TV Size" on Title. Adding "cut edited version tv size" on tags and deletion "TV Size" from Title would be better

Desperation

00:02:651 (1,2) - it looks weird that you used repeats one time for all map, maybe use these repeat somewhere else instead kicksliders?

00:09:846 (4,5,6,2) - not very good overlaps, move slider right-up to anstack (I think its fixed)

00:27:041 (4,5) - really weird rhythm, this would be better imo You are right.

00:31:188 (2,3,4,5,6) - delete these notes, because i think break should starts after 00:30:944 (1) - Seems miscellaneous but fixed

00:52:895 (5,1) - swap nc (put nc on (5) and delete nc on (1) Fixed

00:59:236 (9) - nc? Fixed

01:06:797 (4,1) - bad flow imo, rotate 01:07:041 (1,2,3,4) - by ~15-20 Fixed

01:25:090 (1) - delete nc and put nc on 01:25:578 (5) - Fixed

01:28:505 - idk why you don't put note here, you can do it, stack 01:28:749 (1,2,3) - with this note and swap nc between this note and 01:28:749 (1)
I dont really understand this one(LOL)

good luck

Enorin wrote:

Hi! #M4M ?
Normal:
- You could place a whistle in 00:06:066 (2,4) - and make this slider smaller.. Thus:
Http://imgur.com/a/iPBlR -> Placing a circle after
- I suggest a Claps sequence in the following notes:
00:44:602 (1) - 00:46:066 (2) - 00:46:554 (3) - 00:48:017 (4) - 00:48:993 (2) - 00:49:968 (4) - 00:50:456 (5) - 00:51:919 (6) -
(That way the map will be more rhythmic)
- Add a Finish to this slider and a clap at the end 00:56:310 (7) -
- Place the clap sequence again on the following notes:
01:00:700 (2) - 01:02:651 (4) - 01:03:627 (6) -
- Make this slider smaller and create a slider after it. Thus: http://imgur.com/a/nTUao (you decide how to fit it on the map)
Already with the previous fact follows with the sequence of claps in these notes: 01:04:115 (1) - 01:06:554 (4) - 01:07:529 (6) -
- Add a Finish in this notes: 01:04:115 (1) - 01:08:505 (1) -
- I Forget to mention that doing the above you should adjust the notes a little more. http://imgur.com/a/p0FrE
-> The "Kiai Time" is too short Imo
Hard:
00: 26: 554 (1,2,3,4) - lost the rhythm.
I Hope This Helps you, Good Luck

H0nney wrote:

Mod

Mazziv wrote:

hi m4m from my queue

my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/436388

[Normal]
this whole diff lacks in stucture and in patterns.
00:03:139 (2,3) - blanket pls
00:05:578 (1) - ugly overlap. you should try to make a pattern with 00:05:090 (4,1,2,3,4) - like a star or a pentagon or something that doesnt look random
00:10:456 (2,5) - the triangle is okay if u stack those
00:26:066 (2,1) - unnecessary overlap
00:32:651 (1,2) - look like 1/4 because the sv is super low
00:38:749 (4) - sliderend shouldnt overlap with the head
00:48:017 (4,1,2,3,4) - as mentioned before,use patterns
00:55:822 (6,7) - if 6 was stacked with the sliderend id be okay but it just looks not clean like that
01:02:163 (3,6) - stack em
01:02:651 (4,1) - ^
01:04:115 (1,4) - ifx blanket
01:08:017 - ignoring a strong beat for no reason
i wont mention overlaps anymore since u can look through the map urself and fix em
01:08:505 (1,4) - stack
01:13:871 (1,2,3,4) - you didnt use 1/1 stacks in this whole map why use it at the end?
01:15:822 (1,2) -
01:23:627 (2,3) -

this map lacks alot in quality. also check aimod for bg file error

[Hard]

00:26:879 (3) - is not snapped
00:01:676 (1,2) - are 1/2 tick apart and stiill more spaced than 00:02:895 (2,3) - who are also just 1/2 tick apart
00:02:895 - if u wanna follow the vocals,remove it
00:04:602 (3,4,5,6) - use ctrl+shift+d for squares
spacing is a big problem in this diff phew
00:04:115 (2,3,4) - look at the spacing and now look at the timeline.what do you see?
00:04:846 (4,1) - overlaps
00:07:529 (1,2) - are just there because you are lazy?
00:09:480 (1,2,3,4) - uhhm make it a square or idk do anything with it
00:17:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - do you think that anyone knows that this is supposed to be or how it should be played?
everything after this is just meeh

[DrSensei-Hugo's Insane]

00:02:163 (3) - replace this slider with 00:01:676 (1) - ?
copy 00:02:163 (3) - and put it 00:03:139 - here but mirrored
00:04:602 (1,2) - stack
00:05:578 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - spacing?!

i went through the whole diff and noticed the same mistakes over and over again so i recommend you remapping the diff with more focus on spacing. Feel free to call me for a re-check when you did remap it!


[last diff]

this diff is just freedom dive with less bpm no emphasize on anything so idk i recommend you remapping it and focus on vocals maybe?

I have improved what you said, The GD also got notified and we are working pretty intense rn, im kind of waiting with the update to bring something big